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jaane tu ya jaane na mayur ff n mjht gang....

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Posted: 09 March 2010 at 1:09am | IP Logged

part 1:

the story starts when all the gang of mjht are gone for picnic except mayur (because they are gone on their honeymoon so dia is the new girl in college n was excited to know about mayur story n was saying yaar yeh sab choro pehle mujhe mayur ki love story ke baare mein bataao then sajan starts the story with adhaani benji n dodoSmile

so the story starts

both mayur are in college nupur is wearing the beutiful shalwar kameez of black colour

n mayank is wearing blue jeans n red shirt

both of them are in search of each other n then ek doosre se takraa jaate hain n then nupur falls on him n both of them had an eye-lock

n after few minutes when both comes to their senses both gets up n after thinking something nupur starting crying loudlyCry mayank says kya huwa nupur plz plz plz mat ro mujhe bolo kisi ne tumse kuch kaha kya dekho tumhe meri kassam hai rona band karo plz nupur (actually mayank cant see nupur sad or crying n it he sees it so he goes mad) then nups says mayank tu bhul gaya na ke aaj hamaare college ka last day hai uhumhum (she's crying)

mayank says: nupur to kya huwa aaj raat ko tumhaare ghar pe farewell party bhi to haina or wese bhi college hi to khatam ho raha hai mein to har pal tumhaare saath rehne ko tayyaar hoon agar tum kaho to n mayur tune started n then episode ends on nupur's smiling face.

precap : mayank n all the friends are in nupur's home n the party started with the song.


hey friends i m really really sorry because of small part but i dont have time that's y i wrote so small part n i think ya utna dhamaake daar part nahi tha but u just dont worry next part will be full of masti n enjoyement plz post your comments thank uSmile


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Posted: 09 March 2010 at 1:13am | IP Logged
love it......

awesome.......

but so short........

do continue soon
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Posted: 09 March 2010 at 1:16am | IP Logged
thanks for your comments
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Posted: 09 March 2010 at 1:23am | IP Logged
hey sweeety
awesome part yr
loved it a lot
cont soon with a longer part
 
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Posted: 09 March 2010 at 1:27am | IP Logged
Gr8 part,

waiting eagerly for the song,

do continue soon...
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Posted: 09 March 2010 at 1:45am | IP Logged
Hi neha
very good start.
it was lovely
so sweet.
keep updating.
and plz try make a longer part next time.
take care
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Posted: 09 March 2010 at 2:07am | IP Logged
aree bahut chta tha

par bahut cute tha

do cont soon

with long update

love pebo

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Posted: 09 March 2010 at 3:08am | IP Logged
it was very short and cute......continue writing.....Big smile

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