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Next day:

 

It's 6:00 o'clock, they left hotel and did taxi for three days and had visited to the following devis

chintpurni devi, chamunda devi, mansa devi, jawala devi, vajreshwari devi, shakambhari devi, kalika devi, Naina devi, thanked them with one wish in heart i.e.  there long lasting relation nothing else they want, took many photographs, enjoyed a lot…

 

this was their first trip together which was just superb, for both of them it was just out of the world, it was full of  love, masti, understanding, passion, enjoyed every bit of it,they celebrated every moment of togetherness

 

naitik had never been interested to visit such kind of places par wo kehte hai na pyar sabko badal deta hai…. This trip added more sweetness in their relation,

 

finally on forth day they were on airport…

 

N: to akshara kaisa laga aapko yahan aakar???

 

A: jaise jannat mai ghum rahi hu, waise jahan bhi aap honge hamare saath wo jagah khud hi jannat ban jayegi, (saying this she put her hand in his arms)

 

N: (smiles) I luv u akshara..

 

A: I luv u too… (announcement for their flight)

 

In evening they reached udaypur, mohit,nandani  and rashmi were already waiting for them

 M: heyy naitik kaisa hai??? Kaisa raha tumhara honeymoon (hugged him)

 

N: bahut badiya…

 M: aur BHABHI ap kaisi hain??? Jayda pareshan to nahi kiya naitik ne

 

R: (hugging akshara) waise chehre ka noor dekhkar lagta hai ki aapka honeymoon bahut acha gaya, phir bhi aap bata sakti hai agar aapko naitik ne pareshan kiya ho to…

 

akshara smiled and shakes her head to say no…

 

NANDANI: dekha maine pehle hi kaha tha,  ke chehre ki rounak hi bata rahi hai, waise akshara naitik ne tumhe mata ke darshan to karwa diye the na… (she naughtily asked that)

 

N: didi ap bhi…

 

R: oooo ohhh…. (teasing him)akshara ko kuch kehne ki der hai aur dada ka baaja bajna shuru ho jata hai (all start laughing)

 

N:  hum airport par khade hai, sab dekh rahe hain,,chalen ab....

 

 

A: han rashmi….. plzzz ghar chalein hum thak gaye hai,

 

Finally they went home… when entering in to house, akshara's feet slightly clashed with the stairs due to which she lost her balance and bumps into naitik's back…

 

N: (turning back) akshara ap theek to hain??

 

A: haan bas wo(rashmi cuts in between) 

 

R: kahi chakkar to nahi aa gaya tha??

 

A: (understanding what she wanna say) nahi rashmi bilkul nahi, mera pair mud gaya tha isliye….

 

R: (she whispered in her ears)  bhabhi waise mujhe laga kahi koi gud wali news na ho..

 

A: batane ki jarurat nahi hai, mai pehle hi samajh gai ki tum yehi kahogi…

 

R: (sitting on sofa) are wah pehli baar kissi nanad aur bhabhi mai itni achi understanding

Dekhi hai…

 

A: haan aur pehli baar maine aisi nanand dekhi hai jo har waqt apni bhabhi ki tang khinchti rehti hai…

 

R: waise ap logon ko  switzerland, mauritius jaisi jagah jana chahiye tha apne honeymoon ke liye… ya kahin aur jo achi si dekhne ki cheez ho…

 

A: nahi rashmi vaishno devi jakar bahut maaja aaya, aur tujhe pata hai wahan mata ne scheme nikali hui thi….

 

all together: kya matlab????

 

N: mai samjhata hun, mata ne scheme ye nikali hui thi ki mere darshan karo aur muft (free) mai pao jharne (waterfalls)

 

A: side scenes jo kabhi na dekhe ho…

 

N: water kingdom where we can play with water (banganga remember)

 

A: snow where we played with lot of ice…

 

N: snowfall bhi hui thi, aur sabse badi baat hum logon ko free mai mila ek dusre ka saath, 48 hours haath pakadkar masti mai chalna

 

A: aur uske baad mata ke darshan.. ahh haaa… aakhein khuli reh gai thi maa ka bhawan dekhkar….

 

N: ab tum batao rashmi itni achi aur sasti scheme kahin aur milegi??? Sab kuch to dekh liya.. aur mata ke darshan bhi ho gaye

 

N: ohh to ye baat hai naitik……par abhi tum mata ki chadhai nahi kar rahe ho, ab ap apne ghar par ho, phir tmne akshara ka haath kyu pakad rakha hai…

 Akshara gave her a frustrated look..

 

N: apni biwi ka hi haath pakad rakha hai…

 

M: ab bas karo yaar bahut bhook lagi hai, kuch khane ko milega???

 

N:haan khana ready hai,,didi hum kal ghar pe sb se milne ayen ge...thek hai

after eating:::::::::
 
akshara stretched on sofa..

 

N: akshara upper apne room mai challiye, wahi par soye ga, challein jaldi se..

 

A: naitikkkkkkk (she said it sooooo sweetly)

 

N: (turned back) haan..

 

A: (stretched her arms)   naitik goddi.. (said like a baby, then make a puppy face)

 

N: ohh my sweetu..

 

he lifts her up, akshara put her arms tightly around his neck, looking him continuously, then start playing with his hair, finally they were in their room, naitik put her on bed, but she was still holding him from his neck…

 

N: akshara ap apne room maa agai ho, (he thought that she slept, but akshara was awake

 akshara shook her head to say no...

 

N:aapke iraade hume jara nek nahi lag rahe…

 

 A:irade bhinek hai, aur hum bhi nek hai, bas aapko chodne ka mann nahi kar raha

 

naitik smiled… naitik kissed her on her forehead

 

Next day it was Sunday, they slept till 11:00 o'clock, in evening went to meet all,firstly to naitik home then akshaara home....

 
That's how their Sunday was spent…..

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hey....
ur ff is so gud n cute..
jst kuved it.....
plz cont....soon
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both the parts were gr8888ClapClapClapClap

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very well written ClapClap
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hey maheen.....
ur ff is so gud...awesum...
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It's 7:00 o'clock in morning, both akshara and naitik were awake, naitik was doing shave and akshara standing in front of allmirah wondering what shud she wear today whether suit or saree, both were very excited….

 

naitik came from behind and holds her from waist, putting his chin on her shoulder..

 

N: kya hua akshara itni confused kyu ho????

 

A: naitik mai soch rahi thi ki suit dalun ya saree???? ap hi bataiye na???

 

N: jeans…. Waooo..

 

A: naitik..

 

N: okk serious now, akshara ap hamesha to suit dalti hain, aaj saree daliye, pata to chalna chahiye ki apki shaadi hui hai nai nai….

 

A: okkkk my dear husband (very lovingly and started looking for saree)

 

N: wo wali (points to saree, Akshara took out saree) haan ye color bahut acha lagega…

 

A: (looking at him lovingly) okkk… acha ab mai naha kar aati hu..

 

N: oohh plzzz, ap nahane nahi ja rahi hain, pehle mai jaunga, mai 5 min mai aa jaunga aur ap 1 ghante mai bhi bahar nahi aati, pata nahi kya karti hain bathroom mai????

 

A: naitik mai der nahi lagaungi..

 

N: nahi pehle mai jaunga..

 
A: nahi pehle mai…

 

N: pehle mai..  

 

A: (mumbles) dekhti hu kaise jate hain ap pehle…

 

N: kya kaha???

 

A: kuch nahi, meri kahan itni himmat ki mai APKO kuch keh saku,naitik acha pehle ap naha lena, par meri jewellery to match karwa dein iss saree ke saath…

 

N: okk no problem … naitik open the drawer, looking for jewellery,)

 

akshara hurriedly ran towards the bathroom and locked it from inside and show her thumb to naitik in way of teasing him…..

 

N: (banging at door) akshara open the bathroom… (then suddenly remembered sumthing, he mumbles: are mai kyu unhe bahar bula raha hun, khud hi andar chala jata hun, ye darwaja to lock ho hi nahi sakta, he laughed naughtily…)

 

He opened the door quietly, but but but…..

 

N: shitt, I wish I cud do this. (again close the door) better luck next time…

 

It's almost half hour, but still akshara hadn't come..

 

N: akshara (again banging at door) akshara jaldi aajaen meri maa, late ho rahe hain hum…

 

naitik was knocking at door, looking here and there, suddenly he heards a voice..

 

A: aauuuchhhh…. NAITIK kya kar rahe hain???? (holding her forehead)

 

N: sorry lagi to nahi ( worried, then memorize that he was though fake yet angry with her) oe ap itni (he stopped)

 

akshara was drying her hair with towel, then she pushed her hair back, she was wearing blouse and underskirt of saree, naitik was looking her fondly, she was looking very beautiful, drops of water was coming on her neck, armaan forgot  everything…

 

A: aage bolein??? (looked at him and blushed with those killing eyes which was continuously staring her, she start looking down)

 

naitik start moving towards her, and akshara moving back, now touching the wall, she cud not run anymore, naitik came very near to her, her heart rate increased, naitik put her hands on wall, making a wall around akshara, so that she cud not escape…..

 

akshara looked above in his eyes, she felt a little madness  in his eyes as if he won't stop today,

 

A: naitiiiiiiik wo sanj…

 

She won't able to speak anymore, her words tucked in her mouth, as naitik little bent down and moved towards her neck, sucked the water droplets on her neck and was moving on other side par haye iss kabakhat phone ka kya karein, hamesha galat time..

 

akshara little relaxed and almost running, naitik hold her hand…

 

N: akshara kab tak bachengi….

 

A: (controlling her feelings and slightly piching his hands) jab tak phone ki kripa rahegi (then almost running, but in heart she was also disturbed with this phone, hamesha wrong time, she was really enjoying his touch, his madness…. Anyways she picked the phone up)

A: hiii nandani didi, kaisi hain ap????

 

Nandani: main tu thak hun..tum apna haal btao akshara???

 

naitik from bathroom: akshara kiska phone hai?????

 A:nandani didi ka hai

N:ohhhhh

A:didi main college ja rai hun,wapis a k baat karun gi..apna dhyan rakhiye gai,byee

 

akshara was standing in front of dressing table wearing jewellery, putting sindoor, after that she start wearing her saree, but was memorizing what had happened in bathroom…… she was not able to make falls of her saree…

 

akshara mutters oh ho ye saree bhi, pata nahi kyu theek se tie nahi ho rahi….. all of a sudden she felt something at her stomach, she looked down and saw naitik was making falls of her saree, sitting on his knees….  (so sweet naa)

akshara smiled, naitik hands were touching her skin that cause tickly in her body, she was lost totally

 

N: akshara dekhiye theek se ban gaye hai ye… (no answer, he looked up then stood up, holds her face from both of his hands)akshara…

 

A: huhh…(she enfolds herself in his arms) Naitik  I luv you…

 

N: I luv u too (kissed on forehead)

 

After few minutes both break, it's 8:30…..

 

A: naitik 8:30 ho gaye,  mera lecture start hone wala ha….

 

N: very bad, apki wajah se late honge..

 

A: nAaitiiik….

 

N: jab  ap  romance kar rahi thi tab nahi yaad aaya ki late ho rahe hain????

 

Akshara rushed to hit him, but he ran… after having breakfast both proceed towards car…

 

In car..

 

A: naitik  aaj main apne dosto se kitne dino ke baad milonge, kitna maaja aayega…

 

N: haan, aaj tu mera bhi office main first day hai..sb kitne khush honge

 

A: haan, aaj ka din bahut acha jayega, I'm very excited…..

 

Soon they reached akshara college, Naitik parked the car, then opened door for akshara…

Akshaara sets her saree, naitik gave his hand to akshara, she clasped her hand with his… both smiled…

 

N: chalein….

 

A: (with a sweet smile) sure…

 

As they entered the college, everyone started looking at them, who was walking hand in hand, everyone was caught by this beautiful couple, simply looking made for each other, they can't be compared with each other,

 

means both are fairly equal in everything, equal beauty, equally attractive, equally adorable and ofcourse equally good….. equally devoted in love….

 

 Nobody can say that naitik is better than akshara or akshara is better than naitik..

Simply mesmerizing…

 

They were greeting everybody who comes in their way,  all were lost, staring them till they are vanished…. Kissi ka aankhein hatane ka hi mann nahi kar raha tha…

 

aisa lagta tha ki jaise kissi ek ko bhi hatayenge iss couple maise dusra bilkul useless ho jayega, adhura, very very rare case….

 But really they were looking like this only…..  simply met, created for each other......

 then naitik after meeting her freindzzz left for his office
okkk dears aaj ke liye itna he., next update.. padna na bhuliye ga.
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