EK RISHTAA::NAKSH FF: PART 39 page 116 - Page 2

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PART 5

She left after saying this and akshara was still confused,wondering…….



naitik came near her after changing his clothes..



N: kya hua akshara, abhi tak kapde nahi change kiye, thand lag jayegi…



A: NAITIK yaha koi bathroom nahi hai, mai kaise change karun????



N: (thinks a bit, then holds her hand) challiye mere saath…(He took her a little back, near the wall) akshara ap folding mat layi hain na???



A: haan, bag mai hai, par kyu????



N: nikaliye.. (akshara gave him mat, he makes a boundary around akshara, on top puts the duppatta so as covering her from all the sides, he protectively holds the corner of mat, and asked her to change her clothes)



akshara settled down and start changing her clothes, naitik give her clothes then turned his face… akshara felt too touched with this incident, naitik had made a sweet little bathroom for her,

she mumbles: ap mere saath hain to kissi ki bhi jarurat nahi hai mujhe naitik… i luv u, don't need anyone, just u.. so lucky to have u..



N: akshara ap ne change kar liya hai????



A: haan naitik.



N: chalein..



A: naitik sindoor laga dein phir chalte hai… ( naitik picked up bag then moved forward)



After walking few meters their was a small temple like structure…



A: naitik ye kya hai????



N: I think charan paduka hogi mata ki, uss guide ne yehi bataya tha.. mata ke pairo ke nishaan,

Akshara and naitik bent down and touched the foot prints of mata with devotion.. and stepped forward



A: NAITIK mai thak gai hun..



N: akshara abhi to 9 kms aur chalna hai, challiye… (he pulled her hand)



akshara slipped her arm in his arm and crossed their hands, they started walking slowly slowly, in between akshara was resting her head on his shoulder… in this way they were walking… although tired yet both were enjoying a lot…



Finally they reached near one temple…

akshara screamed manamdar devi ka mandir aa gaya, aa gaya…



N: (slightly hitting her head) akshara abhi nahi aaya…



A: to ye kya hai???



N: ye garbhjune guffa hai, abhi yaha se 7 kms aur upper jana hai…



A: aacchhaaa… (making a puppy face)



Anyways they passed from the guffa, rest a little in ardhkuwari mandir finally start… the atmosphere start turning a little chilly



After 2-3 hours they reached sanjhichatt, all the place was covered with snow giving a very beautiful look…



akshara and naitik start playing with snow, throwing balls on each other, then made one snowman of ice and took lots of photographs…

then proceed towards bhawan… both were very excited,



Took parshad and entered into bhawan, both were stunned to see the beauty of bhawan.. finally they were in front of mata, for few seconds they were lost then they gave packet to panditji and bent down… both thanked mata lovingly and prayed for their long lasting relation…



Finally proceed for bharavnath mandir… when they were on return.. snowfall starts…

akshara enfold herself in his arms, naitik put his arm around her shoulder, akshara place her head on his chest, slipped her hand in his pocket… they were having pleasure enjoying snowfall as well as their closeness…. Once more they thanked mata heartily…



Next morning they were back to their hotel, both were very tired, wanted to fall on bed but naitik was not feeling ok, he had vomited twice in an hour, akshara was worried… it may be due to chilly weather,


akshara checked his fever but it was normal, so she was some where relaxed, she finally helped naitik to change his clothes and asked him to lie down on bed, then pulled blanket over him and off the lights,



A:naitik mai abhi aa rahi hun, (saying this she went out of the room)



After sometime she came with a bowl in her hand and locked the door and dragged the curtains, put the heater closed to naitik…. naitik was still not ok, he was still feeling like vomiting..



N: aksharaaaaa…



A: naitik bas 15 min dein, abhi theek ho jaenge ap…



akshara finally unbuttoned his shirt and took warm oil from bowl and start massaging him from chest to stomach, so as to produce heat in his body, then did the same thing at back…. naitik felt somewhat relax,



A: NAITIK feeling better???



N: nods his head…



A: ap pehle halka sa kuch khalein phir medicine le lein…



N: nahi,mujhe phir se vomiting aa jayegi,(he says it like a baby)



A: sirf 3-4 biscuits and tea…



N: hummmm…. Finally akshara feeds him, then gave him medicine and place his head in her lap, start massaging his hair to make him feel better, naitik was fast asleep…

Then she gave him massage at his legs, while giving massage she slept on floor coz she was too tired…



In evening, naitik was feeling like chuhe kud rahe ho pate mai, so he woke up, he was now fine, searched for akshara, looked down, she was sleeping on floor rolled in herself..



naitik sit beside her, pulled the strand of her hair back, bent down and kissed her on cheeks and lifts her, put her on bed, looking at her lovingly….



Start caressing her hair, akshara felt something and opened her eyes, saw him admiring her, smiled,



A: naitik ab apko kaisa lag raha hai???



N: aapki maherbani se hum bilkul theek thak, hasht pusht aur tandrust ho gaye hai, see.. aur hamare pate mai chuhe bhi jor jor ke chhalange maar rahe hai…



A: (putting her hand on his face) aap rukiye hum abhi taiyar hokar aate hai, phir dinner lene chalte hai… (as soon as akshara stood up she felt pain in her legs, not able to walk but she still managed somehow..)



They took dinner, then went for shopping for their friends…



N: ap ne kuch apne liye to liya nahi???



A: le to lia sab kuch… (naitik confused) are baba mere liye to sab kuch ap hain, aur mujhe kuch nahi chahiye…



N: (smiled his million dollar wali) acha challo uss cloth house mai, waha se kuch dekhte hai..



A: okkk….



Finally naitik and akshara liked one sweater..



A: bhaiya ye wala sweater pack kar dijiye..



Bhaiya: kaunsa colour, red ya blue..



N: blue..



A: red



(ding dong…. Blue was the favorite colour of AKSHARA and red was the favourite colour of NAITIK)



N: nahi akshara ap par blue jayda suit karega..



A: nahi naitik red jayda suit karega..



N: blue

A: red

N: blue

A: red

( akshara want red colour coz he likes it and naitik blue coz she likes it, both started fighting)



bhaiya got frustrated with their fight, I mean they were fighting like kids



bhaiya: aap dono lad kyu rahein hai????



N: hum lad nahi rahe, mai to bas inhe samjha raha hun ki blue jayda acha hai:



A: naitik red jayda acha hai…



N: lets toss..



A: okkkk…. ( and akshara won the toss and she jumped, naitik make a bechara face)



Bhaiya: to ab mai red pack kar doon…



A: (looked at naitik) nahi bhaiya aap blue hi pack kar dijiye..



Bhaiya mumbles: to abhi tak kyu paglo ki tarah lad rahe the, jaise ek dusre ka sir hi phod denge…. Mera saara waqt barbaad kar diya..



naitik as if murjhaya hua phool phir se khil gaya ho….mujhe pata tha ap blue hi logi… I luv u…



A: yehi to problem hai ki I luv u too



When done with shopping they retired to their room and finally settled on bed..



naitik back was facing akshara…



A: NAITIK idhar muh karen na.. (naitik turned towards her, akshara slightly shift near him to cover the little gap between them, and took his arm place it across her tummy)



N: ( pleased with her gesture) kya baat hai aaj to aapke mijaaz kuch badle badle se lag rahein hai, sab kuch theek to hai,( saying this he put his head near her neck, his chin was touching her shoulder)



Akshara slightly blushed, but she wants to remain like this, as she really enjoyed this closeness… armaan kissed her on neck…



A: (change topic) naitik kal hum wapis ja rahein hai???



N: kyu nahi jana kya???



A: NAITIK mai soch rahi thi ki itni dur aayein hai to baaki ki deviyon ke bhi darshan kar jayein, what say??



N: actually maine bhi yehi socha tha, par puchna bhul gaya…



A: par mai kissi bhi devi par ab chadhai nahi karungi, meri tango mai sach mai himmat nahi hai… bahut dard ho rahi hai..



N: (little worried) ap ne pehle kyu nahi bataya, laiye mai massage kar deta hun..



A: are ab to theek ho gai hai, maine khud hi oil laga liya tha, bas halka pain hai kal subah tak theek ho jayega, don't worry…



N: r u sure???



A: haan… ab lights off kare aur so jayen…


naitik put off the lights, akshara kissed him on head, naitik tightly helds her from waist, akshara in return holds his arm tightly, both were lost in dreams…



Coming up: back in udaypur……

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Next day:

 

It's 6:00 o'clock, they left hotel and did taxi for three days and had visited to the following devis

chintpurni devi, chamunda devi, mansa devi, jawala devi, vajreshwari devi, shakambhari devi, kalika devi, Naina devi, thanked them with one wish in heart i.e.  there long lasting relation nothing else they want, took many photographs, enjoyed a lot…

 

this was their first trip together which was just superb, for both of them it was just out of the world, it was full of  love, masti, understanding, passion, enjoyed every bit of it,they celebrated every moment of togetherness

 

naitik had never been interested to visit such kind of places par wo kehte hai na pyar sabko badal deta hai…. This trip added more sweetness in their relation,

 

finally on forth day they were on airport…

 

N: to akshara kaisa laga aapko yahan aakar???

 

A: jaise jannat mai ghum rahi hu, waise jahan bhi aap honge hamare saath wo jagah khud hi jannat ban jayegi, (saying this she put her hand in his arms)

 

N: (smiles) I luv u akshara..

 

A: I luv u too… (announcement for their flight)

 

In evening they reached udaypur, mohit,nandani  and rashmi were already waiting for them

 M: heyy naitik kaisa hai??? Kaisa raha tumhara honeymoon (hugged him)

 

N: bahut badiya…

 M: aur BHABHI ap kaisi hain??? Jayda pareshan to nahi kiya naitik ne

 

R: (hugging akshara) waise chehre ka noor dekhkar lagta hai ki aapka honeymoon bahut acha gaya, phir bhi aap bata sakti hai agar aapko naitik ne pareshan kiya ho to…

 

akshara smiled and shakes her head to say no…

 

NANDANI: dekha maine pehle hi kaha tha,  ke chehre ki rounak hi bata rahi hai, waise akshara naitik ne tumhe mata ke darshan to karwa diye the na… (she naughtily asked that)

 

N: didi ap bhi…

 

R: oooo ohhh…. (teasing him)akshara ko kuch kehne ki der hai aur dada ka baaja bajna shuru ho jata hai (all start laughing)

 

N:  hum airport par khade hai, sab dekh rahe hain,,chalen ab....

 

 

A: han rashmi….. plzzz ghar chalein hum thak gaye hai,

 

Finally they went home… when entering in to house, akshara's feet slightly clashed with the stairs due to which she lost her balance and bumps into naitik's back…

 

N: (turning back) akshara ap theek to hain??

 

A: haan bas wo(rashmi cuts in between) 

 

R: kahi chakkar to nahi aa gaya tha??

 

A: (understanding what she wanna say) nahi rashmi bilkul nahi, mera pair mud gaya tha isliye….

 

R: (she whispered in her ears)  bhabhi waise mujhe laga kahi koi gud wali news na ho..

 

A: batane ki jarurat nahi hai, mai pehle hi samajh gai ki tum yehi kahogi…

 

R: (sitting on sofa) are wah pehli baar kissi nanad aur bhabhi mai itni achi understanding

Dekhi hai…

 

A: haan aur pehli baar maine aisi nanand dekhi hai jo har waqt apni bhabhi ki tang khinchti rehti hai…

 

R: waise ap logon ko  switzerland, mauritius jaisi jagah jana chahiye tha apne honeymoon ke liye… ya kahin aur jo achi si dekhne ki cheez ho…

 

A: nahi rashmi vaishno devi jakar bahut maaja aaya, aur tujhe pata hai wahan mata ne scheme nikali hui thi….

 

all together: kya matlab????

 

N: mai samjhata hun, mata ne scheme ye nikali hui thi ki mere darshan karo aur muft (free) mai pao jharne (waterfalls)

 

A: side scenes jo kabhi na dekhe ho…

 

N: water kingdom where we can play with water (banganga remember)

 

A: snow where we played with lot of ice…

 

N: snowfall bhi hui thi, aur sabse badi baat hum logon ko free mai mila ek dusre ka saath, 48 hours haath pakadkar masti mai chalna

 

A: aur uske baad mata ke darshan.. ahh haaa… aakhein khuli reh gai thi maa ka bhawan dekhkar….

 

N: ab tum batao rashmi itni achi aur sasti scheme kahin aur milegi??? Sab kuch to dekh liya.. aur mata ke darshan bhi ho gaye

 

N: ohh to ye baat hai naitik……par abhi tum mata ki chadhai nahi kar rahe ho, ab ap apne ghar par ho, phir tmne akshara ka haath kyu pakad rakha hai…

 Akshara gave her a frustrated look..

 

N: apni biwi ka hi haath pakad rakha hai…

 

M: ab bas karo yaar bahut bhook lagi hai, kuch khane ko milega???

 

N:haan khana ready hai,,didi hum kal ghar pe sb se milne ayen ge...thek hai

after eating:::::::::

 

 

N: akshara upper apne room mai challiye, wahi par soye ga, challein jaldi se..

 

A: naitikkkkkkk (she said it sooooo sweetly)

 

N: (turned back) haan..

 

A: (stretched her arms)   naitik goddi.. (said like a baby, then make a puppy face)

 

N: ohh my sweetu..

 

he lifts her up, akshara put her arms tightly around his neck, looking him continuously, then start playing with his hair, finally they were in their room, naitik put her on bed, but she was still holding him from his neck…

 

N: akshara ap apne room maa agai ho, (he thought that she slept, but akshara was awake

 akshara shook her head to say no...

 

N:aapke iraade hume jara nek nahi lag rahe…

 

 A:irade bhinek hai, aur hum bhi nek hai, bas aapko chodne ka mann nahi kar raha

 

naitik smiled… naitik kissed her on her forehead

 

Next day it was Sunday, they slept till 11:00 o'clock, in evening went to meet all,firstly to naitik home then akshaara home....