EK RISHTAA::NAKSH FF: PART 39 page 116

Posted: 14 years ago
NAKSH FANFIC:
EK RISHTAA

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Part 39 : PAGE 116
Edited by honeey_16 - 13 years ago
Posted: 14 years ago

 

It's 3:00 o'clock, their alarm start ringing..

 

Naitik puts off the alarm, shifts towards akshara whose back was facing to him, put his arm around her waist…

 

N: (sleepy voice) akshara uthiye 3:00 baj gaye hai…hume jana hai…

 

A: (turn towards naitik and she also put her arms around his waist) gud noon…

 

N: gudnoon ( kisses her forehead) ab aap uth jaiye aur nahane jaiye, aapke kapde with jewellery sab uss table par pada hai……

 

A: naitik thodi der aur sone dein na, mujhe neend aa rahi hai

 

N: uth jaiye na late ho jayenge…

 

akshara finally goes in bathroom and got ready, she was wearing a mahrun heavy saree, with all the jewellery as usual looking beautiful, naitik also got ready, he was wearing black suit, both were looking very sweet with each other…. Naitik put her pallu on her head

 

Finally they reached their destination…

 

Naitik cell starts ringing…

 

N: Akshara ap chaliye mai aata hun, wahan se jana hai (he points towards door)

 

A: par naitik (before she cud say anything, Naitik got busy in his cell, as soon as she took 2-3 steps forward, naitik hides behind his car…)

 

Naitik: ok on kar do… (he cuts the call)

 

One step more…… 

 

WELCOME AKSHARA TO UR NEW HOUSE (with lights on wall)

 

Akshara surprised, look back but didn't find naitik, then she move forward towards  the door….. she looked on right side…

 

It's written on name plate which was decorated with plastic flowers…

 

Akshara Naitik Singhania  NEST…

HEAVEN FALLS HERE

 

Just below this plate, a heart shape wooden plate on which it's written

 

life is nothing without u ….

 

On door a chart was hanging..

 

Akshara zayda confuse mat ho, ye hamara hi ghar hai, hamara ghonsla (nest)

Akshara was astounded didn't know how to react, but anyways…

 

 

Posted: 14 years ago

akshara enterd the house

4-5 steps ke baad left mai kitchen rooms etc etc…hai, samne balcony hai 3-4 steps neeche uttar kar,

 

balcony was too big, square in shape, bangle curtains was making the boundary of balcony, giving an extra ordinary look, in the centre of  balcony  one swing was there, dinning table and sofa set  were placed on the corners and right in the front a very big lcd….

 interiors was just wao, and color combination, everything was perfect, akshara turned left, a beautiful heart shape mirror was there, whose edges was covered with lights

 

On windows beautiful wind chaims were hanging, to the right there was store room and  to the left dressing room followed by bathroom, akshara found a chit on curtains of store room….

 

Akshara ji aapka apne store room mai swagat hai, 1st  almirah kholiye, akshara opened it and was surprised to find lods of sarees nd suits and all were stiched, and the thing was these were the same clothes which she had selected when she used to go with nandani  in market… she again found a note….

  hairan mat hoye, ye sab preplanned tha,mai apko market lekar ja nahi sakta tha, saara surprise khatam ho jata, isliye nandani did apko market le jati thi… ab ghar mai har cheez apki pasand ki hai, mujhe pata hai ap meri tareef karna chahengi…. Ohh thanku, thanku, thanku…..

 

Acha apki jewellery saari locker mai hai, aur footwears sabse last block mai…

 

She closed the almirah and was moving to second almirah, found a note…

 

Akshara  iss store room mai ab saari almirah's apki to nahi hogi na, isse na kholye ga ye meri hai….

 

akshara smiled… then she looked other three rooms also…… she proceeded towards terrace…

 

On terrace there was one room made up of glass, in this also one bed was there, and from this room, one way was going downwards, she followed the way and reached in to a beautiful and colourfull garden, full of flowers…… she heard a voice…..

 

N: Aur ye hai aapka pyara sa bagicha (he came from back and holds her) kaisa laga aapko hamara chotta sa aashiyana……

 A: (turned back, kissed him on forehead, then leaned her head on his chest) bahut bahut sundar, bilkul dream house jaisa hai par iski kya zarurat thi,hamare pas pehle se ghar hai na naitik

N:main yeh apko gift karna chahta tha

all nandani,bhabhi maa,gayatri appear from other side n akshara took there ashirwad.

Naitk told then akshara to pack her bags as dada g has said her they r gng to mahandar devi temple 4 their honeymoon.all were surprised hearing this but naitik told them that he n akshara wanted to thank god 4 gving us each other.


Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by yrk_fan


wow ...very well written
thanx  yaaaaar
Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by karachi21


it was good plz continue
thnx i will
Posted: 14 years ago
nice ff!!
 loved the sweet and cute love betwen tem
wuld like to have  a house like this
Posted: 14 years ago
PART 3:

 

It's 6:00 o'clock, naitik and akshara were ready..

 

N: akshara ap ne tickets check kar li???( akshara nods) to phir chalein…

 

Finally they reached airport, announcement had been done for their flight..

 

After few minutes they were settled on their seats…

 

N: akshara apko kuch khana hai??? subah se kuch nahi khaya apne….

 

A: (putting her arm around his arm making a lock and leaning  her head on his shoulder, closing her eyes) nahi naitik mujhe neend aa rahi hai..

 

N: kitna soti hain app, kal subah se so rahi hain, neend nahi puri hui abhi tak… mere bare mai to koi sochta hi nahi hai.. (making a puppy face)

 

A: naitikkk… mujhe neend aa rahi hai..

 

N: ap kitni unromantic hain.. (but akshara had already lost in her dreams, naitik looked at her, finally kissed her on her cheek, then caressed her hair, she smiled in dreams also, naitik put his arms around her shoulder, now her face was on his chest)

 

Finally they reached jammu, and did taxi for hotel…

 

Reception: yes

 

N: I'd booked one room with double bed..

 

Re: ur name plzz..

 

N: Naitik singhania..

 

Re: yes sir, ur room no. is 155, plz sign it here…. After all the formalities akshara and naitik retire to their room….. it's 7:00 o'clock in evening

 

N: akshara kal subah hum chadhai shuru karenge, jayda saaman na lijega, carry karna

Mushkil ho jayega….

 

A: haan naitik maine alag bag laga liya hai,

 

N: akshara dinner bahar lene chalna hai ya yahin par order kar de…

 

A: naitik yahin par order kar dete hai, I'm tired…

 

N: akshara ap saare raste soti hui aayi hain, abhi bhi thaki hain??? Ye line to meri honi chahiye thi, abhi tak meri arms aur chest mai pain ho raha hai, ek to itni moti hain aur uppar se saara bhar mujhpar daal diya, haaye mera haath bechara ( he caresses his hand)

 

A: kya kaha mai moti hun??? (she throws pillow on him)

 

N: aur kya kha kha ke tunn tunn hui ja rahi ho, (before akshara cud react, knock at door, waiter cums in and took the order, finally leaves)

 

After dinner, both changed their clothes, finally, akshara sitting on bed supporting wall and naitik was lying on bed and his head was on akshara lap, continuously staring each other, don't know what happened, akshara little bent down and kissed his eyes, then forehead, then cheeks….

 

NAITIK really enjoyed this, then put his fingure on his lips, riddhima slightly blushed, then put hands on his eyes and closed them, start caressing his hair, both were enjoying their silence romance… after sometime, NAITIK shifts to his pillow and AKSHARA  stretched out on bed, put off the lights…

 

In mid night akshara felt very cold, blanket was not enough, she shifted towards naitik, and put her arm around his waist, they were face to face (sideways), his body was so hot, akshara felt so relaxed, his hot breathe was doing wonders this time, akshara slightly moved more close to him, to cover herself in him.. she was feeling so comfortable, now she was asleep….

 

It's 7:00 in morning, naitik cell start ringing, he slightly opened his eyes,cut the call coz he was in no mood to attend it,  then again closed his eyes, but quickly opened it and was surprised to see himself and AKSHARA…

 

He was half lying over akshara, his arms around her waist, and akshara's arms were around his chest, their faces were crossed, they were so near, so emersed in each other

 

When naitik was wondering akshara also opened her eyes, their faces were so closed, that naitik's nose was touching her cheeks with very little gap between their lips….

 

naitik slightly kissed on her cheeks…

 

N: gudmrng …

 

A: (she felt his breathe, feeling tickly in her body, closed her eyes..)

 

N: waise aapne raat ko kya kia tha hamare saath jara vistaar se batayengi…

 

A: maine kya kia.. (very sweetly)

 

Naitik now shifts completely over her, move his head towards her neck so that she cud feel his breathe.. which was doing havoc for akshra…

 

N: bataun kya????

 

A: (slightly whispers ) naitik…..

 

Though  akshara was unable to control her body reactions for this close contact yet she was enjoying, she wants to put her arms around him, but… knock at door…

 

Both didn't like this interruption, but.. but…….

 

Naitik got separated with her, she was blushing, when going to open the door naitik pulled the blanket over her to neck as akshara was in her night suit…

 

Akshara liked his possessiveness… waiter came in for giving newspaper and bed tea…

 

Naitik again got a call, it's from ritu…

 

N: (giving cell to akshara..)

 

A: hello..

 

Nandani: hiii, gudmrng.. pehle kyu call katti, kya kar rahe the ap dono??? (she naughtily asked that question)

 

Akshara blushed and looked at naitik, then: kuch nahi..

 

N: kuch nahi, matlab sab kuch… batao na akshara afterall main tmhari nand hun????

 

(Naitik took the cell, as he had heard what she was saying)

 

N:hum so rahe the didi.....

 

N:acha tum log kb niklo ge.....

 

N: haan theek hai, bas thodi der mai nikal rahein hai…

 

N: okay then bye, take care, enjoy..

 

N: byeee…

 

AKSHARA already gone for bathing, after sometime when both were ready to go,

 

A: I luv u … (hugging him from back)

 

N: . I luv u too akshara…


Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by yrk_fan


toooo cute ...pls cont soon
thnx sure yar
Posted: 14 years ago

PART 4:


Then both leave for their yatra…. naitik had already gathered all the information, means from where to start, what to see etcc.. etc….

 

Their taxi finally stopped from where the actual yatra starts… they stepped down from taxi, both were not wearing their footwears…

 

naitik went to yatra registration counter and took the yatra slip…

 

Now they were finally starting their yatra, both were happy… they crossed the darshani darwaja, their first step… they showed their slip at banganga check post….

 

After walking few meters their first stoppage that is banganga arrived, they stepped down.. and settled on base, looking the flow of ganga….

 

A: waoo naitik kitna saaf aur nirmal pani hai, kitna sundar lag rahi hai ganga maiya, maine aaj tak itna sundar naajara nahi dekha…

 

N: haan, kehte hai mata ne dharti mai teer mara aur ye ganga prakat hui thi…. Tabhi

 To itni saaf hai..

 

People were bathing in this water, sumone told them to take bath, then proceed forward…

 

akshara was wearing a casual suit, so she decided to get down in water in this suit only and naitik put out his jeans and shirt…

 

naitik first stepped down in water, it was too chilled as if ice, he gave his hand to 

akshara so that she cud easily come down..

 

As soon as she put her leg in water she stepped out and sits on ground…

 

A: naitik ye to bahut thanda hai, mai nahi naha paungi..

 

N: pani ke andar aa jaiye, dekhna khud thand lagni band ho jayegi…. He opened his arms wide so as to take her in his lap..

 

A: nahi naitik mai nahi aaungi, finally naitik from water put his arms between his legs and thighs and one arm holding her from back, lifts her up, akshara shouting- nahi naitik bahut thanda pani hai….

 

But naitik finally dropped her in water.. she was screaming mummy kitna thanda hai (like a baby) and enclose herself in his arms.. naitik also put his arms around her… both were standing like this until akshara felt better…

 

And the other people were enjoying them, from akshara mehendi and her chudda everyone understood that they are newly married…

 

N: AKSHARA ab bhi thand lag rahi hai????

 

A: nahi, ab theek hai.. (finally they realized that they were in public place, they got separated)

 

akshara naughtily spilled water on him, naitik in return did the same, both were enjoying very much, playing with water then holding each other hands jump in to water together…. (pehle pani ke andar jane ka mann nahi tha aur ab pani se bahar aane ka mann nahi tha..) after sometime they both get out..

 

NAITIK started changing her clothes, akshara took out her clothes from bag and searching for bathroom… stopped someone…

 

A: kya aap mujhe bata sakti hai ki bathroom kahan hoga????

 

Lady: yahan bath room to nahi hota, aapko nahi pata??? Yaha to saare chunni(duppatta), bedsheet ki oat (shed) banakar change karte hai……

 

She left after saying this and akshara was still confused,wondering…….

 


Posted: 14 years ago
yar u r too gud..
continue soon.!

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