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Hi

Sumthg lik Masti or Hasin pal zindagi ke

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how about
Fun, Masti & love
or Friendship & Love
or Kuch Lamhe
or College Days-always cherished
or Haseen Pal
or Is Fun Everything?
or Masti time

Please tell me what to chose or which to choose..if u've suggestions please come up with it....I've finished writing the first part but cant update till I give a proper name to this ff......


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kuch lamhe..
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Thankssssssss a lot friends for your response'.Hoping more people will get attracted as the story moves on'.Embarrassed

PART-1:

              A 17 year old girl was running in a garden. Her dupatta was flying with the wind & she loved to feel the wind crashing against her body. She then came to a halt & sat down on grass tired but yet smiling. She loved playing alone. In spite of having many people in life she had always loved being alone. She never liked being in groups. No doubt she is friendly person & talks to everyone but every day or night she removes some time for herself where she does what she likes; like playing with the wind, looking at the stars, remaining in an imaginary world, thinking what her prince charming must be doing. While sitting on the grass that time she closed her eyes & tried to take in the fresh air; she allowed the morning breeze to touch her body. A small smile played on her lips. She always enjoyed this feeling. Some birds were humming in the background. Just than among all these nature's things she heard a voice at distance. A different voice. She looked in the direction from where the voice was coming. Just then she saw something that made her very happy. Her prince charming was coming on a white horse. She stood up in excitement. He had a black mask on his face. He stopped riding the horse & came down from the horse but he was so mesmerized by the girl that while getting down he just slipped from the horse's body & fell over the girl. The boy was now lying above the girl. The girl's hand went upto his mask. She was above to lift it when AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH''.

The girl got up with a scream. She looked here & there & saw water all over her face & bed. She realized she had again been dreaming. She was fuming with anger. Her younger sister, Gunjan was laughing on her. But however angry she would be she would never shout on her sister. Her days always started with looking at a happy gunjan & nights ended by looking at the safe gunjan beside her. Yes she was the one only Nupur Bhushan.  

N: kya re gunjan kitna achaa sapna dekh rahi thi'..aaj to main apne raj kumar ko dekh hi leti'..

G: kya di kuch toh naya bolo'..roz subah ek hi baat'

N:  aaj ke sapney mein kuch toh nayi baat thi'.tujhe yaad hai paanch saal pehle humne Dil toh pagal hai dekhi thi????

G:  haan yaad hai aur tab se aap yeh hi sapna dekhti aayi ho ki aapka raj kumar bhi safed ghode par aayega aur aapko le jaayega'.issme kaunsi nayi baat hai?

N:  nayi baat hai gunjan'.aaj maine woh dekha jo itne saal mein kabhi nahi dekha'..(excitedly) tujhe pata hai aaj mera rajkumar sirf ghode par hi nahi tha'.aaj ussne mujhe dekha aur dekhta hi reh gaya'.aur fir woh ghode se utraa aur uska pair fisal gaya aur woh seedha mujhpar gir gaya'hum dono ek dusre mein kho gaye the'.ussne mask pehna tha'.main dheere se uska mask utaar rahi thi'aur'

G:  Aur?

N(shouting):  AUR TUNE MUJHPAR PANI FEK KAR MUJHE UTHA LIYA'.kaash main uska chehra dekh paati'.

G:  fikar kyu karti ho di'aaj aapka sapna aura aage bada hai'.yeh ek achi sign hai'.shayad aapko aapka rajkumar milne waala ho aur woh bhi shayad issi tarah kahi girte-sambhalte'.

N:  sachi gunjan'.mujhe woh jaldi milega na???

G:  bilkul di'bas kuch din ki baat hai'dekhna uske chehra ka mask jaldi uth jaayega'.

N:  haaye'..kab yeh sapna pura hoga gunjan'by god jis din yeh sapna pura hua na tujhe pata nahi khushi ke maare main kya kar dungi'.

G:  tabhi jo karna ho karna lekin abhi hum late ho rahe hai'

N:  array haan jaldi kar warna bui lakdi lekar aa jayegi uthaane'

Gunjan gave her a puzzled look. Nupur was confused with her expression.

G:  di aapko kab yaad rahega hum do din pehle hi Mumbai shift ho gaye'.bui morena mein hain yahaan nahi'.

N(slapping her forehead):  shit main fir bhul gayi'.morena ka itni aadat ho gayi hai ki kuch yaad nahi rehta'.

G:  aur aapko yeh bhi yaad nahi humara aaj college mein first day hai'

N:  COLLEGE!!!!!!woh toh main bhul hi gayi'.time kya hua??

G:  9:30 am.

N:  aur tu mujhe ab utha rahi hai????humaari 10:30 ko principle se meeting hai na???shit hum kaise pahunchege'.pehle hi din meri wajah se late ho jaayega'.

G:  di relax'.aap mera tension mat lijiye'.aap aaraam se tayaar ho kar college pahunch jaana main aage jaakar principle sir ko rok kar rakhti hu'

N:  par tu akele kaise college jaayegi?tu bas paanch minute rukh main abhi tayyar hokar aati hu'.

G:  di aap jaanti hai na aap paanch minute mein tayyar nahi ho sakti'.aapko ek ghanta toh sirf nahaane mein lagta hai'..aur fir make up karne mein aur pandraa minute'.isliye behtar yahi hai kam se kam main time par principle sir ke paas pahunch jaao'..first day humaari impression kharaab nahi honi chahiye.

N:  lekin gunjan naya sheher, naye log'tujhe toh ajnabee logon se kitna darr lagta hai'.tu kaise khud ko sambhaalegi'.

G:  di aap fikar kyu karti ho'.bas baahar se rickshaw pakadni hai aur college pahunchna hai'.aur college mein dia hogi'.woh aur uday bhaiyya already humaara wait kar rahe honge'.aap fikar mat kijiye'.main nikalti hu'.bye'.

Nupur hugged her.

N:  all the best gunjan'.

G(winking at her):  aapko bhi apne rajkumar ke liye'.

Gunjan left & nupur was still worried for her. She decided she would get ready fast & leave for college. She even skipped her breakfast. The clothes she removed to wear was torn near shoulder. Cursing her luck she changed into other clothes & accordingly had to change her accessories. She walked upto the auto stand when her sandals broke. She got more angry. She went back home & changed her sandals. She was mumbling to herself 'jab bhi jaldi jaana hota hai tabhi sab gadbad hoti hai.' She reached the auto stand & was surprised to see no rickshaw. 'Haila yeh aaj kya ho raha hai'.already itni late'upar se subah se sab gadbad ho rahi hai'.aur ab ek rickshaw bhi nahi'..hey bhagwaan kahaan fas gayi'.pata nahi gunjan theek se college pahunchi hogi ya nahi'.please bhagwaanji jab tak main na pahunchu uska dhyaan rakhna'..ab main kya karu'.kaise jaao college?' She was busy murmuring to herself that she didn't realize she was walking in the middle of the road & some car was continuously horning. She was too busy criticizing her day & her luck when the car stopped just beside her leg. Shocked with the sudden approach from the car nupur fell down. There was wet mud down due to rainy season & nupur's clothes drenched in that dirty wet mud. Nupur went mad. She got up in frustration ready to kill the driver. The person who was driving came out. Nupur looked at him in anger. Their eyes met. Something in his eyes captured nupur's attention. His eyes spoke some unspoken words. Something inside nupur softened. He came close to her anger written all over his face for this stupid girl. But just like nupur even his anger softened little on seeing nupur. Yes he was Mayank Sharma. His leg slipped on the wet mud & he fell over nupur (just like nupur's morning dream). His body was lying over nupur's. Their eyes remained glued. Nupur could feel goosebumps in her body. He felt some tingling sensations too. Just then other vehicles horns bought them back to this world. Yes they had blocked the roads & created traffic. Both of them got up & with that their anger came back.

N(shouting):  tum gaadi dekh kar nahi chalaa sakte????andhe ho kya???? Agar mujhe kuch ho jaata toh?

M(shouting):  kuch hua toh nahi na???aur waise bhi kya tumhe meri gaadi hi milli thi takraane ke liye???kissne kahaan tha andhe ki tarah road par chalne ke liye?

A rickshwala:  behenji side mein jaakar jhagda kijiye'.aapne road block kar diya hai'.

N:  BEHENJI????Behenji kissko bola re???issne mera accident kiya hai aur jab tak yeh jhagda khatam nahi hota yahaan se koi nahi jaayega'.(to mayank)  tum mumbai waale khud ko samajhte kya ho????gaadi khareed li toh kya road khareed liya???logon ki jaan ki kuch fikar hai ki nahi'..arrey gadi humaare morena main bhi chalaate the par aaj tak kissine 20 ki speed se zyaada nahi chalaayi hai'.arrey bail gaadi bhi jaati thi toh woh bhi logon ke saamne apna sar jhuka kar chalti thi'..aur tum Mumbai waale'pehle accident karte ho aur fir seena taan ke khade reh jaate ho'.By god agar morena mein kissine mere saath aisa kiya hota toh pura morena usko milkar peet ta'

M(closing his ears & screaming):  Oh Ms. Morena Express'.jo bhi ho tumhaara naam'.pehle apna mooh bandh karo aur kaan kholke yeh baat sun lo yeh morena nahi hai Mumbai hai'.yahaan par koi tumhe rani banaakar nahi rakhne waala'.agar itne hi nakhre karne hai toh dubaraa apne morena mein jaoo aur udhar hi reh jao'.yahaan Mumbai mein yeh sab nahi chalta'.aur haan madam tum meri gaadi ke saamne chal rahi thi'.khud ko road cross karna aata nahi aur mujhe sunaa rahi ho???

Rickshawala:  bhai saab please ab toh side mein jaakar jhagda kijiye'.poora traffic jam ho gaya hai'

Mayur looked at him in daggers so he became quite.

N(shouting):  array cross hi toh kar rahi thi na'. kissi ka khoon karke toh nahi bhaag rahi thi'..ek toh mere saare kapde kharaab kar diye'.mujhe college ke liye late kar diya'.aur upar se attitude dikha rahe ho'..aaj hi college ka pehla din hai'..tumhaari wajah se main pehle hi din late ho jaogi.

M:  dekho Ms. Mujhe tumse baat karne mein koi interest nahi hai'mujhe toh daya aa rahi hai uss college par jisme tum jaa rahi ho'darr lag raha hai tumhaari wajah se bechaari college hi na bandh ho jaaye. Subah-subah mera mood kharaab diya'.tumhaare kapde hi kharaab hue hai na'..(removing his wallet) yeh lo paise (he pulled her hand & placed 2000 Rs. on it)'.aur waise bhi tum mere poore 15 minutes aur 37 seconds waste kar chuki ho'.isse zyaada time main tumhaari stupid bakwaas ko nahi de sakta'

Saying this he got in his car & drove away. Nupur stood there fuming with anger. People around her on the road were laughing at their stupid fight.

N:  umeed karo tum mujhe kabhi dubaara life main na miloge Mr. Khadoos warna tum nahi jaante tumhaara kya hoga'

She went to the rickshawala & stood in front of him with anger. Rickshawala got scared.

N(pointing her finger at him):  idhar hi rukhna'..idhar se kahin jaana nahi'.main paanch minute mein kapde change karke aayi'

The rickshawala nodded like an obedient student. She went back home to change.

Rickshawala (to himself):  baap re'kiss toofaan express se pangaa le liya'.isse dekh kar lagta nahi hai ki yeh Mumbai mein nayi aayi hai.

Mayank was driving his car but his entire mind was fussing over the girl with whom he just fought. Signal approached & he realized his t-shirt had become muddy. He lifted the windows of his car & removed another t-shirt from his bag & quickly changed it.

M(to himself):  na jaane kaun thi woh'.kitni arrogant'.aisi sample maine aaj tak nahi dekhi'.kitna bolti hai'.I hope aise samples mujhe dubara kabhi na mile'..aaj pehli baar uski wajah se mujhe car mein kapde change karne padhe aur  toh aur mere 15 mins 37 seconds bhi waste ho gaye'.shit raat ko aur 16 minutes zyaada jaagna padhega'.sab uss pagal ladki ki wajah se'..relax mayank tu uske baare mein itna kyu soch raha hai'.aaj tak tune kabhi kissi ladki ke baare mein sochne ke liye ek minute bhi nahi nikaala aur aaj peechle 6 minutes 42 seconds se uske baare mein soch raha hai'.woh sirf ek accident tha'.aur waise ab woh tujhe dubaara nahi dikhegi. 

EXCEL COLLEGE:

Gunjan reached the college. She felt as if she'll be entering a totally new world. All sorts of nervousness filled her body. Butterflies were flying in her stomach. She wished nupur was with her. Slowly she walked into college. She saw girls wearing very short clothes. This made her feel conscious. She never wore anything else than salwaar-kameez. She realized some girls were laughing on her & pointing towards her. She felt as if she was an alien. Her nervousness increased more. She felt like running away. She wanted to search for dia as soon as possible. She hated this feeling. She didn't have her books behind which she could hide her nervousness. She didn't have nupur to hide behind. She never liked facing the world alone & now she was here standing in the middle of college among all new faces not knowing where to go. She had told dia she would meet her at entrance but dia was still not here. She decided she would wait there until dia comes.

CANTEEN:

D: Sammy tum ready ho na?sab kuch taayar hai?

S:  please dia'.kitni baar sab check karogi??

D:  C'mon sammy woh mere cousins hai'.tum nahi jaante maine unhe kitna miss kiya'.aur jab mujhe pata chala woh yahaan shift ho rahe hain main bataa nahi sakti main kitni khush thi'.maine poore ek ghante tak dodo ki non stop bakwaas suni aur usse maara bhi nahi'.

S:  WHAT!!!!!!tumne ek ghante tak uday ki baat suni?????tab toh tum sach mein bahut khush ho'.

D:  haan bahut khush hu'.main apni sisters ko sweet sa surprise dena chahti ho'.unhe bahut shor achcha nahi lagta'.isliye maine canteen mein yeh simple party plan ki hai'.I hope unhe achi lagegi'.issi bahaane woh mere saare doston se bhi millegi'..Oh God!!!I'm so excited'..

S:  waise tumhaare sisters hai kaisi????tumhaari tarah modern???

D:  dono mujhse bahut alag hai'.aur sirf mujhse nahi dono ek dusre se bhi utni hi alag hai'..ek north pole hai aur dusri south pole'.Nupur hamesha strong, confident rahi hai aur gunjan hamesha sweet, polite. Nupur kissi se nahi darrti aur gunjan abhi bahut nazook hai'..par main jaanti hu waqt aane par woh apni aur apno ki rakhsha zaroor karegi'.Nupur studies se door bhaagti hai aur gunjan studies ke peeche bhaagti hai'..But all in all they are the best sisters.

S:  wow'that's amazing'.waise tumhaari morena sisters kab aa rahi hai?

D:  abhi dus baje aane wale hai'.

S:  to tum yahan kya kar rahi ho??its already 10:30'.

D:  WHAT????

She checked her watch.

D:  Oh no'meri ghadi bandh ho gayi hai'..shit woh log entrance par kabse mera wait kar rahe hoge'.main abhi jaati hoon.

A peon came.

Peon:  Dia ji aapko Ms. Aha ne bulaaya hai'immediately.

D:  unse kaho main thode der mein aati hoon.

P:  par unhe kahi jaana hai'woh thodi der mein nikal rahi hai'.

D:  theek hai main aati hoon'.Sammy please mera ek kaam karo'.Nupur aur Gunjan entrance par mera wait kar rahe hoge'.Please unhe princi ke paas le jao'.Main tum logon ko thodi der mein yahin par canteen mein milti hu'..

S:  par main unhe pehchaanuga kaise?

D:  tum unhe dekhte hi pehchan jaoge'.jo sabse alag ladki ho gi'woh hi meri behen hogi'.Bye sammy'.

Saying this dia went away & Samrat made his way to find dia's sisters.

ENTRANCE:

RV & the gang were observing gunjan from sometime. They knew they had found the best bakra.

RV:  lagta hai nayi student hai'.

Sheena:  ewwww'uska dressing style toh dekho'kaunsi ladki college mein aise old fashioned kapde pehenti hai''bilkul behenji lag rahi hai'.

RV:  toh kyu na iss behenji ke saath mazaa kiya jaaye'.afterall naye students ka swaagat karna to humaara farz hai'.Ready Boys???

The gang answered:  ofcourse ready!!!!

RV had a wicked smile.

 

PRECAP: RV's gang troubles Gunjan. Sam saves her. Surprise party for Gunur. Sayank talk. Mayur meet again.  

Okay finally updated'.Please comment/criticize''It's the first time I'm trying college life'..This part may be boring but it'll get interesting as the ff moves ahead.

P.S:  I haven't named the ff yet'..Please select a name which you feel fits.

Fun, Masti & love
or
Friendship & Love
or
Kuch Lamhe
or
College Days-always cherished
or
Haseen Pal
or
Is Fun Everything?
or
Masti time

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