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Posted: 09 March 2010 at 1:53am | IP Logged

first update....guys dis update is a sort of a piller..for strong story line further..might be quite boring...bt it was needed for further story line..!!!

scene...
its morena...morning tym...
we can see a gal...hands joined together...eyes closed...murmuring sumthing...
ohh..she is praying..lets go further n see who's she....

TINK TONG....TINKONK...[ Oohh..door bell rang..]
D same gal slowly slowly opening her eyes..awwwwwww her eyes r so beautiful..reflects d purity of her heart too...
Its none other den our sweet...cute..innocent..caring...gunjan..!!
She is moving futher towards d door..n opens it..see's a person standing at d door..

G: hmmmmm ji aap..
Person: brij bhushanji ghar pe hai beta..!!
G: namastey uncle[joins her hands]..mai abhi bauji ko bula ke aati hun'aap andar aayiye..!!
P: nodds'!!

Gunjan goes into house..to call bauji..n d persons comforts himself on sofa..!!
Till bauji cums to d living room...gunji brings water for d person...

G: uncle paani...[n gives him d glass of water]..bauji aa  hi rahe hai..!!
P: thanx beta..[while he is drinking water bauji arrives]
B: to tu aagaya..kaha to hota bus stop par lene aa jata..tune bataya nahi tu aaj he morena aa raha hai..
P: itne saalon baad mile hai..pehle gale nai milega..[n both of dem hugs]
P: tu to jaanta hai mai yaaha sirf kuch dino ke liye aaya hun..morena ka ghar bej [sell] ke waapas jaana hai..turant...aur haan ab plz muje phone pe jo lamba-chauda bhashan diya tha fires mat dena..!!
B: thik hai bhai..nai dunga...chal ab tuje ghar ke sab members se milawaata hun..mere foreign return dost..!![smiles]
B:ye gunjan hai..meri chhoti beti..!!
G: namastey uncle..[ saying dis toches his feets]
P: namastey beta..!
B:beta nupur kaha hai..??[to gunajn]
G:bauji di room me hai..abhi bulati hun.....diiiiiiiiiiii
While nupur is on ger way to living room..bauji introduces his frnd to bui..n tells him abt gunur..n sum news abt morena....
While d whole conversation...bauji's frnd is observing gunjan n her culture/sanskar..!!
Nupur cums...
N: haan gunjan..tune bulaya..
B: ye hai meri badi beti nupur..
N: namastey uncle..[.joins her hands n lows down, touches his feet]
P: namstey beta..chal brij ab mai chalta hun..kal fir milte hai..!!

N he goes bck home..
Ok..his home..he house is jus behind gunjan's house..as in u can say facing bck..a common wall in between adjoining  d backs..!!


On other side..at gunur's room..after dinner..
G: di kal..kal kya hoga..!!!
N:gunjan tub hi naa...isme itna darr kyu rahi hai..koi pehli baar tu..
[cutting off nupur]
G: di plz kal mere sath chalogi naa..result lene..di plz..tum to jaanti ho..kal ka din mere liye bahot bada hai..aur muje tumhare sath ki zarurat hai..plz di..!!
N: gunjan tu to aise baat kar rahi hai..jaise pehli baar tu koi exam ka result lene jaa rahi ho'muje samaj me nai aa raha..tu..gunjan bhushan..morena ki sabse brilliant ladki..result se darr rahi hai..????
G: lekin di...
N: gunjan tuje apme aap pe bilkul bharosa nahi...khair tuje nai hai to naa sahi..muje bauji..hum sab ko tujpar pura bharosa hai..dekhna tu hi awal [1st] aayegi..tu chahe to mjse bet lagale..!!
G: di tum bhi naa...jo bhi ho..tum mere sath chal rahi ho kal..mai sabse pehle bade waale ambe maa ke mandir jaungi..fir hum sathme mera result lene jaenge..ok di..
N: gunjan wo mandir to bahot durr hai...[actually guys dis temple is outside morena..its situated in town/citi next..or jus a lil way away frm morena]
G: mai jaane waali hun..tum kuch bhi kaho..
N: hey bhagwaan iss ladki ka mai kya karu..!!!
Gunjan muje samajme nai aata tu baar baar bhagwan ko bina waje disturb kyu karti hai..iase chote-chote kaam ke liye bhagwaan ko disturb karegi to bachare wo log jinhe savh me bhagwaan ke prayers ki zarurat hogi..unka no. to aayega hi nahi..!![jokingly..laughs]
G: di shayad tum jaanti nahi..ya shayad mujse durr Mumbai rehne chali gayi hona is liye bhul gayi ki kal mera final 12th ke results hai...aur mera future isi par depend karta hai..!!
N: offo gunjan..!!
Maine kaha naa..tu 1st aayegi..to aayegi..aur tu apne future ka tension mat le..tera future maine soch liya hai..
G: kya..???????
N: Mumbai...excel colg...ye sab tera intazaar kar rahe hai..!!


On other side...at bauji's frnd's place..
He is  thinking abt gunjan..

P: gunjan...gunjan jitni sanskari ladki maine aaj tak nai dekhi..Muje lagta hai mai jo sochh rajha hun..wo sahi hai..mai kal hi brij se gunjan ke bare me baat karunga..!!
Nahi abhi..isi waqt..
Dails bauji's no..

b:hello...
p:hello...mai bol raha hun...
b:is waqt laise phone kiya....
 
after sum while thinking abt d words he is gonna speak......
p: wo mai....mai wo...
b:aree kya baat hai bolna...
p: MAI APNE BETE KE LIYE TUMHARI BETI GUNJAN KA HAATH MANGTA HUN...!!!!
 
OK GUYS....I HOPE U'LL WER ABLE TO BARE DIS BORING UPDT...BUT AS I TOLD U'LL IT WAS IMPORTANT FOR FURTHER STORY LINE...kehte hai naa....ki agar jade mazbut ho to pedd bhi mazbut rehata hai.....sumwt lyk dat...n m sorry if any mistakes..!!!
ok will updt d 2nd part soon...!!


Edited by charmee_sammy - 09 March 2010 at 2:39am

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Posted: 09 March 2010 at 2:49am | IP Logged
awesomeeeeeeeee ud dear..
amazinggggggggg.....
jaldiiii se cont karna ab..
cant wait to read further..

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Posted: 09 March 2010 at 2:52am | IP Logged
sam is the guy ri8.. if not then u kne that am killing you.....
haha.... wil acha hai abhi.. bar batr mat bol boring hai pls.. bahut acha hai.. aur ha.. next time baaaaaarar wala update aur mere sammy ka entry karwo soory hamare samrat ka entry karwao,, ehhehe...

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Posted: 09 March 2010 at 3:09am | IP Logged
awwwwwwwwwwwww.jaan you strated.i will read asap.7 do add me to your pm list..........

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Posted: 09 March 2010 at 3:10am | IP Logged
thanxz for the pm!!
 
this is rocking haan!!!
plzzz pm me the next part,
w8ing for it!!

al2gether awesummmmmm starting!!
 
~Sania~

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Posted: 09 March 2010 at 3:27am | IP Logged
hey niceeeeee update charmeee....wau to go....pls cont soon....am waiting to hear sajan wedding bellsWink

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Posted: 09 March 2010 at 3:39am | IP Logged
awsomeeeeee, mindblowwwww, brilliantttttt ud
loved it
ples cont soon
n thnx 4 the pm

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Posted: 09 March 2010 at 4:07am | IP Logged
thnaks for the pm charmee
i hope sam is the guy Smile
plzz continue

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