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SANRAJ*Moment** WATCHING Part 6** (P48 Pg143)

Shahara3 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 06 March 2010 at 9:17pm | IP Logged


"Atoott Bhandhan" of  Santu and Dharamraj Mahiyavanshi
journey continues...


1.  A New Start
Part 1 (pg 1)
2.  A New Start
Part 2 (pg 4)

3.  Bullock-Cart, 3 Wise Men,
Splash and D'Pur All India Radio Station
Part 3 (pg 6)

4.  Mouth 2 Mouth
Part 4 (pg 9)

5.  I have 3 Words to Say To You
Part 5, 1 of 2 (pg 13)

6.  I have 3 Words to Say To You  -  I LOVE YOU
Part 5, 2 of 2 (pg 15)

7.  Knock Knock
Part 7 (pg 18)

8. The Swing
Part 8 (pg 21)

9. The Blindman's Bluff Game
Part 9 (pg 26)

10.  Without You? Part 10
(pg 29)

(Pt11 on Pg33)

12.  SANTU -VS- MOTI  Face Off
(Pt12 Pg 37)

13.  DM -VS- MOTI  Face Off
(Pt13 Pg 41)

14.  Moti's Bidaai 
(Pt14 Pg 43)

15.  New Additions to the Mahiyavanshi Family 
(Pt15 Pg43)
**The End of FF on Bandini Forum**

16.  All good deeds and patience give you good rewards
in the end
(Pt16 Pg43)
**The End of FF on Bandini Forum**

17.  Saree and Kurta Purchase Flashback
(Pt17 Pg 52)
Continued from Pt14

18.  Suraj First Day at School, Santu Sad
(Pt18 Pg 54)

19.  A Wish Come True
(Pt19 Pg58)
20.  DM After the News of the Expected One
(Pt20 Pg61)
21.  Blessings of SANRAJ's Joy
(Pt21 Pg64)

22.  Confessions of the Unspoken Hearts
(Pt22 Pg67)
23.  DM's Eyes Search for Santudi
(Pt23 Pg70)
24.  DM's Mission to Bring Back Santu's Smile
(Pt24 Pg73)
25.  Kaise Mujhe Tum Mil Gayi
(Pt25 Pg78) 
26.  The Thoughts from the Heart
(Pt26 Pg80)
(Pt27 Pg83)
28.  Mute Moti Watching Dashing DM Serenading Santu
(Pt28 Pg87)
29.  Change of Heart 
(Pt29 Pg90)
30.  What Happened Next...Moti, Santu's Condition and the Baby (Pt30 Pg92) 
31.  DM Returns From Antwerp to Santu
(Pt31 Pg95)
32.  DMs Punishment to Santu has an Untimely Result
(Pt32 Pg 98) 
33.  Deliveries of the Precious Diamonds
(Pt33 Pg101)
34.  SANRAJ Moments with their Twins
(Pt34 Pg 103) 
35.  Cute SANRAJ Scenes
(Pt35 Pg106)
36.  Silent Tears & Making Up
(Pt36 Pg 109) 
37.  Emotional Santu, Sad, Happy & Laughter
& Caring DM 
(Pt37 Pg112)
38.  Santu gives DM a Taste of his own Medicine
(Pt38 Pg 114) 
39.  Sweet Kiss, The Interruptions & The Escape 
(Pt39 Pg117)
40.  Memories, Past, Present & Future
(Pt40 Pg 120)

41.  New Years Surprise
(Pt41 Pg123)

42.  Never Alone
      (Pt42 Pg 126)

43.  Watching 
(Pt 1 - Pg 129)

44.  Watching 
(Pt 2 - Pg 131)

45.  Watching 
(Pt 3 - Pg 134)

46.  Watching 
(Pt 4 - Pg 137)

47.  Watching 
Sanraj Moment
(Pt 5 - Pg 139)

48.  Watching 
(Pt 6 - Pg 143)



Hi huys, I had been for a while jotting down some scenes on my lappy after the leap but never post any on the forum, not sure anyone would read or like them.  With the tracks at the moment I am not liking them so I thought I would share some happier moments with you guys. 

The leap is only 1 year, not 10 years. Santu is out of jail after a year, DM fought her case and Santu has been released. 

This is the beginning of the next chapter of SanRaj life.



A New Start

Part 1
Its the school holidays, both Birwa and Suraj are bored, theres nothing to do at home both mopping around.  Suraj is playing with his tennis ball in the house, Birwa tells him to stop or else something will break and if Foi catches him, see will eat his ball. 

Suraj: I don't care, if you wont play with me then I'm gonna play in the house.

Suraj is angry and bounces the ball harder and as it happens, Moti is coming down the stairs stuffing pann down her mouth, whilst she was about to bite into her pann, she ends up biting the tennis ball that Suraj had bounced.  Suraj and Birwa both shocked and just stare at Benba choking at the ball who spits it out and yells;

Moti:  Damn you children, what have I told you about playing in the house, what do you think that it is Dharampurke Wimbledon in here? Nickaljow! (get lost)

Suraj and Birwa both upset walk towards DM's library where Baa, Bapuji, DM and Santu are sitting having morning tea.

Santu: Whats wrong, why are you both upset? 

Suraj: Foi took my tennis ball and she wont give it back. Theres nothing to do.  

Santu: Why don't you go and play outside, its a nice day.   

Birwa: Its boring, theres nothing to do, we don't do anything exciting anymore. The last time we did anything fun was when we went on your and papa's honeymoon.  We all had so much fun.

Santu remembering back to their honeymoon that day with a smile on her face, DM letting her win duck, duck goose, (cant remember the name of game), getting pear for her and helping her up the shaky ladder and she has a thought...

Santu: I have an idea, why don't we all go on a family outing, its been such a long time and as everyone is at home today, we should spend it together.

Baa:   Kya jana beta (where do you want to go dear) with a smile

Santu: I was thinking we should all go to the village for the day to Nanaji's house. We haven't been there in a long time and there is so much fresh air, open space and things to do.  Birwa and Suraj can play with the other children, Baa and Bapuji you have both been cooped up in the house, it's not good for you, you both need some exercise.  Malik, you haven't been there in a while and the villagers will be happy to see you especially Nanaji and we can spend time together. (Santu blushing)

Baa and Bapuji both looking at DM and Santu.  Baa has a big grin on her face, she is happy.

Birwa: Papa say yes, we have never spent the day at Ma's house at the village and I will be able to see Monghi.  Please Papa.

Suraj: Papa please!!!!

Santu smiling at DM with her puppy eyes to which he couldn't say no to.  DM smiles and thinks that theres been so much going on and now things have settled and before his workloads increase, he will be able to spend some quality time with his Santudi.  A naughty smile spreads across his face thinking he could take her away for alone time.

DM:    Ha, you make a good point, we all deserve a break. Chalo, I have decided, we will go to the village today, everyone be ready by 11.00am. Ey Santudi, make the arrangements for us to leave.

Santu: Ji Malik.

Baa:   Come Santu, we have packing to do. 

Everyone happy gets up and move towards their rooms to get ready.

DM:    Ey Motiben, tum humare sat chologi? (you coming with us?) 

Moti:  Kya, meh ous Santuri ka gar jana? (what, me go to this Santuri's house?) No thanks, I don't mingle with Choti Jhat, I would rather sit here eating this tennis ball.

DM's happy face changes from a smile to an angry face at moti's comments.

DM:    Why do you have to talk like that? Here everyone is happy after such a long time and this is because of Santu. What is your problem with her? Why is it everyone wants to be close to Santu and then theres you who can't stand to be in the same room as her? Let me tell you one thing Motiben, Santu is my wife, I love her alot, I can't express to you how much and anything or anyone upsets her, upsets me.  These comments you make are very hurtful and disrespectful not just to Santu but to me. Fine, it will be good for you to spend time on your own, I'm going to spend it with my family, I thought you would want to spend time with us before going back to Kanji Bhai's house.

Moti:  Nanka meh..Confused

DM leaves and Moti stands with her mouth open shocked.

To be continued...

Precap:    DM holding on, Santu has uncontrollable laughter.

Please post your comments. 


Edited by Shahara3 - 16 June 2011 at 10:44am

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Ayushi_01 Goldie

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Posted: 06 March 2010 at 9:29pm | IP Logged
well done sahara.............i really enjoyed reading your ff...........interesting new angle to this for your next episode.......til thenHug

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ammoos IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 06 March 2010 at 9:29pm | IP Logged
ROFLMoti got a big slapROFLloved it ShaharaThumbs Up

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anna44 IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 7659

Posted: 06 March 2010 at 9:39pm | IP Logged
Amazing Sahara,
Loved it. I so hope DM will correct moti in your sentences...

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vrsharma IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 7455

Posted: 06 March 2010 at 9:40pm | IP Logged

Really gud part yaar.

Yes Uma,
She got jaberdhasth jatka from DM

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xXIheartRayaXx IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 06 March 2010 at 10:35pm | IP Logged
Gud start shahara.Keep it up...

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ronitfan IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 06 March 2010 at 10:36pm | IP Logged
WOW Shahara!
A new story... !!!

This is really cute.. esp those puppy looks from Santo to him and his knowing smile.. hawwww..

Waiting for part 2 - great job :D

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priyankapatwa Goldie

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Posted: 07 March 2010 at 2:36am | IP Logged
cool1 waiting for ur next

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