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Coffee, Embrace and Another Love Story(Updated!) (Page 5)

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Posted: 26 March 2010 at 4:02am | IP Logged
Hi Pooja =) Sorry for commenting late. I love this story! More so because the protagonist and I share the same name Tongue I love the way you're taking this forward, it's really refreshing and an absolute treat to read! Star You have brilliant writing skills, and coupled with a touch of desiness, you make it impossible to escape the charm of this tale Approve
 
Update soon! :)

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Posted: 26 March 2010 at 6:35am | IP Logged
I am so going to cry.......

The file got accidentally 'off' when the stupid MSEB decided to take revenge on me...I had no back up...

I can retrieve first three chaps from here, but now have to rewirte the next three entirely. Sad? Well, i am heartbroken. :( :( :(

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Posted: 26 March 2010 at 6:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by scratches-head

Hi Pooja =) Sorry for commenting late. I love this story! More so because the protagonist and I share the same name Tongue I love the way you're taking this forward, it's really refreshing and an absolute treat to read! Star You have brilliant writing skills, and coupled with a touch of desiness, you make it impossible to escape the charm of this tale Approve
 
Update soon! :)


Its no problem!
Thanks, I am glad that you liked it. i often find that I cannot relate to the books which are written by non-indian writers. I sure love them, but, well, there is something missing sometimes. That is why the touch of desiness, as you put it!Smile

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Posted: 26 March 2010 at 10:22pm | IP Logged
Wonderfully written.. Keepit up!! Had a great time reading it....U have defined it soo well PoojThumbs Up

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Posted: 27 March 2010 at 7:51am | IP Logged
hey pooja..nice part..
 
Her roomates are quite interesting..but they kept teasing her about Ankit, who she hardly knew n even her dream guy..
 
Geet was like Kareena from JWM?..i liked that character!..Binita seemed a bit more descent..
 
they constantly irritated her but they were her friends :)
 
update soon
 
-aish

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Posted: 27 March 2010 at 11:22am | IP Logged

Really beautiful, Pooja!! :) So well-written. Everything just flows together seamlessly.. Absolutely fantastic. And the whole thing seems so real! Eager to read more!

Oh and I love the song you used. It's such a sweet song and the lyrics suit this part really well :)

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Posted: 28 March 2010 at 1:28pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Kalindi-

Wonderfully written.. Keepit up!! Had a great time reading it....U have defined it soo well PoojThumbs Up

Thanks Kalindi! I am really happy that you read it! Smile

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Posted: 28 March 2010 at 1:29pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by aish_punk

hey pooja..nice part..
 
Her roomates are quite interesting..but they kept teasing her about Ankit, who she hardly knew n even her dream guy..
 
Geet was like Kareena from JWM?..i liked that character!..Binita seemed a bit more descent..
 
they constantly irritated her but they were her friends :)
 
update soon
 
-aish


Hey Aish!
I am glad that you liked the part! Smile Friends are llike that, they irritate the heck out of you, but they are always there for you!Big smile

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