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Coffee, Embrace and Another Love Story(Updated!) (Page 3)

yikes Senior Member

Joined: 11 November 2009
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Posted: 23 March 2010 at 12:40pm | IP Logged

reserved :D

P.S - I see the protagonist and I share the same name :P

whimsical Senior Member

Joined: 06 March 2010
Posts: 408

Posted: 23 March 2010 at 1:07pm | IP Logged
Hey I'm new here. I didn't know about this forum. Was just browsing when I saw your story. You write very well! Loved this!
_.serendipity._ Senior Member

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Posted: 23 March 2010 at 1:21pm | IP Logged

Lovely update, Pooja!! I love the way you narrate the story. It really draws the reader in :) :) And I find it very interesting that you have two titles. Like the narrator is in two minds. Your story seems very, very promising. Can't wait for more!!  

scarlett.lady Groupbie

Joined: 04 February 2010
Posts: 78

Posted: 23 March 2010 at 9:26pm | IP Logged
IF wont let me 'like' your post, forget the 'love' tab you had earlier suggested - the comment should reinforce my intent however, for the existence of that latter!

Quite the riot aren't you? I loved that narrative... every bit of seemed to spell some truth I have either faced, seen or heard of. Like I said before, its that kind of tale we may have all heard, your zing to it in the writing style is marvelous!

I'm so glad I hopped onto this thread!

mishti_17 IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 07 November 2009
Posts: 28536

Posted: 23 March 2010 at 10:23pm | IP Logged
Oh lovely written.....Description of  dress wid monthly salary n laptop desire one of the reasons stickin to the job was too good...
I did not have my 10th physics formulae by heart, but ask me his dialogues, the dunce turned into a dashing-dialogue spouting-star crazed fan. Just to make one thing clear, I love the character not the actor. There is a difference the size of the English Channel between the two.

lol we are similar, formulas are forgotten, dialogues can never be forgottenLOL

Tera hone laga hoon was fantastic, it suited well.....

Very well written, loved it......

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afreen_786 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 22 November 2005
Posts: 3254

Posted: 24 March 2010 at 1:50am | IP Logged
hey pooja
luv ur story
plssss continue soon
n add me to ur pm list
update soon
aish_punk IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 11 January 2008
Posts: 20577

Posted: 24 March 2010 at 4:32am | IP Logged
hey pooja..nice story..just read it..
She had to go to the cafe..n she was getting late..but what was she confused about?..
It was time for her results..n they all were very nervous..but when she finally got it, they breathed a sigh of relief. Her parents went bragging about it n she talked to her friends..they had dinner at a lavish restaurant..but she said she wanted to be a journalist..n wow they were okay with it?..she could have talked to them before!..
She worked in a cafe..nice..lol love the way u describe the accents, yaar!..
She had a regular customer..who looked like her fav star on tv..she saw him bored with another BBBB..lol. She decided to play a prank..n he got the point too..so they chased Shikha off..lol!..n he was eternally thankfull to her..but everyone else was shocked..
update soon
Pooj@ IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 24 March 2010 at 5:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by scratches-head

reserved :D

P.S - I see the protagonist and I share the same name :P

LOL Yeah. I have loved that name since forever.Big smile

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