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@Sayu:
Hey! Thanks for replying. i am sorry I could not send out the PMs yesterday. The power went off after I had uploaded this - I could not even format it. :(
Yeah no one can resist Ankit!!! :D

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Lovely work PoojThumbs Up Continue soon :)

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What does he do?????????????????
Love it..... I love the attitude on her!

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@Kalindi: thanks!!!!!!!!!

@aaditee: haa...that is for me to know and u 2 guess!!!!!!

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Posted: 25 May 2010 at 12:13am | IP Logged
Lovely part again Pooja!

I for one however, wish that it was longer, and that more action had actually eventuated! - something like knowing 'I am ... ' completely what Ankit really is! or even going deeper under Geet's skin ... actually I wouldn't mind more on Madhvi either ... and that's really what I missed, more in terms of info on the characters - it felt like I knew all that you were telling me already, you know?

Can't deny your writing is still, and always a pleasure to read - Munnabhai! She needs to dig her Bolly knowledge and pull some wonderful stint on Ankit next time - not for romance i swear - but for the heck of an interaction more than a stammer!

Post soon!
(S.L.)

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Posted: 25 May 2010 at 5:52am | IP Logged
hey pooja..cute part..
 
when she just met ankit she was totally out of words, not knowing what to say..well that happens!..
 
madhavi though striked a convo with him..n more so with shiv..
 
when they had just began talking, madhvi had to leave..so both of them left..
 
madhavi got shiv's no?..wow, that was quite fast.
 
they cried at the airport..aww so sweet..
 
i liked the way u described typical delhi..made him lol..n what was up with geet?..she wasn't talkin mch..
 
update soon
 
-aish

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@SL: Thanks for the feedback - many people told me the same thing about the chapter...I am getting about to edit it as I type this...

@Aish: Thanks aish. Updating soon!

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Wow. lovely story. u write beautifully. keep it up..

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