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Posted: 17 April 2010 at 5:43am | IP Logged
 i know ,  i  m  very bad in writting english. so  a big sorry ,    i  promise   that  next  time  i   will  improve  it.  i  had  corrected  my    mistake  of 5th  part .   thanks  for  ur  comments.

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but ur a great writer ... i guess ur just lazy about editing ... like me :)

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Loved parts 5 & 6!!! Can't wait to read the next part! Big smile Loved the precap!


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hi people here is the next part.
and mihrii for you i had started writing in english.
hope u all like it

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Part7
At malhotra house
Nikki   and   armaan   planning that how   ammy   can   impress ridhima.
Nikki: u need   to change ur self.
Ammy: what !    and why.
Nikki( after thinking a lot):   u have to become a good boy in front of ridhima as a girl like her                     like decent   guys ,   u know .
Ammy: I didn't get it .
Nikki:(frustratingly): u will not even get it. Ridhima is   a simple   girl    and she   will obviously prefer a simple guy. So from now onwards u need to be simple.
Ammy: (confused): ok………. As u say.
Nikki: good boy. Now its time for make over.
Ammy: god please save me .
After       the make over   nikki makes ammy stand in front of mirror.
Ammy(shocked): what    is   this. I look   like an idiot with this   simple shirt and pant, oily combed hairs, yak…………….
Nikki: (strickly) u want   ridhima or not.
Ammy: ok as u say, but what to do now.
Nikki:(keeping har arm on his shoulder ) just   follow   me.
Both leave for college . in college. No one islooking at ammy   as it use to happen every   time. suddenly   he strikes   with atul.
Atul: oh…….. sorry yaar.
Atul   was leaving the place after saying   this. Suddenly something goes   to   his ears.
Ammy: champ.
Atul:   hi   ammy( he looked for ammmy here and there but was not able to find him) where    are   you.
Ammy( angrily and in a loud tone) I am standing   infront of you.
Atul( after   looking):Aah…………………..   what   happened   to you.
Suddenly   anjali and rhidhima arrived there. and   anjali   recognized him.
Anjali: ammy, what happened   to    you.
Ammy    didn't know what to say. Then he reminds nikkiis word and to make   him good in front of them    he started   as.
Ammy: ( in a filmy style)what, what   happened to me .
Anjali: why   did u changed ur style.
Ammy: because, now I have understood that clothes doesn't matter.its what u are from inside .right   na(he asked ridhima ,while looking in her eye)
Rids:(after   few seconds) ya, it doesn't   matter   what    u   are wearing. A good decision( she passed him a smile and sits on the chair.
Ammy: she smiled   at me.
Atul:   this is nikki's idea na.
Armaan   still smiling.
Nikki and abhi scene.
Abhi    reached the rehearsal   hall .where
abhi saw nikki dancing alone on mar jawan(contempery style
abhi liked her and found   it beautifull   and gracefull.
Abhi   after watching clapped    for her.nikki   find abhi there.
Abhi: you dance   really well.
Nikki(   with a   strange look): is I am day dreaming mr sadu is appreciating me.
Abhi:(with his attitude) if someone have talent ,I always praise it.
Nikki:good, nice quality. Practice after college timing hai ok.
Abhi: till   that   time   I am basket ball ground. Call me.
Nikki: hello, is I am your slave .
Abhi: I mean phone.
Nikki:but I don't have your number.
Abhi gave her his number where AN have a deep eyelock. Abhi leaves after wards.
Nikki:attitude .
AR SCENE
Ammy talking   to himself in corridorsand ridhima coming from front.
Ammy: I know   , she must be finding me a stupid. This   nikki      na.   
Ammy   stikes   with ridhima and all   file   in her hand falls .ammy   find   that it was ridhima.
Ammy: oh   …… I am 0 sorry. I didn't   mean   to……..
Rids: its ok
Ammy   help   her.
Rids:   are you ok.
Ammy: ya, why did    you ask this .
Rids: nothing just like that.
Ammy: I know because of my new   look na.
Rids: no . it was just   that I found u a little worried.
Ammy: no u   found me   stupid   na.
Rids: its not like that(smiling). Infact I like ur speech in the morning.
Ammy: mean you like simplicity.
Rids: yes, I like simplicity and honesty   even   more. I don't like fakeness.i think   what ever u are be that only.
Ammy started thinking over what she find that he was too    being fake to rids.
Rids: I should go home bye take care.


AN   SCENE
NIKKI goes to basket ball   to call abhi   as her phone was not working.nikki    found abhi there and watch him playing and   found that he play really well. Suddenly   abhi saw her.
Abhi:    u   would have called me I myself would come there .
rt
Nikki:   we are doing   a dance play   so first of all the story.its a story of a girl and a boy who met in the college   and   then fall in love   suddenly some misunderstanding is created between them .
Abhi: then
Nikki: its enough   for today.
Abhi: ok
Nikki: what   ok. Who will practice dancing.
Abhi: lets start.
Nikki:   we will practice   acting   later on .ok , now start.
Nikki   played the music     and said :with this music we introduce them ok. now start 1   2 3 go.as the music played abhi started dancing. And he was doing well. When they completed their    performance. It was time for the   couple dancing. nikki played the music and found that abhi was not at all able   to do it.
Nikki( shouted at abhi):   whats your problem, why you are not doing it properly .huh.
Abhi( in little   anger): I don't    know couple dancing.
Nikki: shit, then how will u do it. ( pause)   ok I will teach   you first the basics of   it, but its very late now. We will   start it tomorrow( she takes a pause and   think something) but , at one cost.
Abhi: what
Nikki:you hav to teach me basket ball.
Abhi: what
Nikki: don't you have any other word to show that you are shocked, with your mouth opened huh.
Abhi: but why me, armaan can also do that.
Nikki: do you agree or not.
Abhi: do I have anyother option.
Nikki(smilingly): good. Will   you   droop me.(before abhi   could reply ) aah lets go.


Edited by richasharma0991 - 01 May 2010 at 10:02pm

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Posted: 01 May 2010 at 8:32am | IP Logged
Nice nice...Armaan going Rab Ne Bana Di Jodi way lol
 
And A dropping N home yay!
 
Can't wait for the next part, update sooonnn!!!!

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hope u all are enjoying my FF. here is the 8th part

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please tell me if i had done some mistake in writing so that i can improve it.

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