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richasharma0991

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Posted: 09 December 2011 at 3:05am | IP Logged
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Originally posted by mitzification

You really write like a true tv creative sweety u shd write for karna johar flicks hehehe
 thats so sweet of u LOL

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Posted: 09 December 2011 at 3:28am | IP Logged
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Richu, I was so waiting for this part and what an update! Wow! I loved it. I loved the way how both of them are nervous about their feelings.
Abhi came to her left ear and said "look where you are going, every time I won't be there to rescue you"
That was so Day Dreaming
Loved the drama portions. The videos that you incorporated were fab. Really looking forward for the next update.
Update soon!


Edited by Nehu_1 - 12 December 2011 at 6:40am

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Posted: 09 December 2011 at 6:05am | IP Logged
Amazing part cont soon

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Posted: 09 December 2011 at 6:12am | IP Logged
Finaly an UPDATE!! Dancing

I like the drama parts.:) and AR's friendship!! Smile

Looking 4ward to the story!
update soon...wanna read more! Star 
Dont make us wait so long this time.plzz...Disapprove


Edited by ANrucha - 09 December 2011 at 9:49am

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Posted: 09 December 2011 at 6:27am | IP Logged
wow richu nice part loving it Clap plz continue soon Wink

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Posted: 09 December 2011 at 11:43am | IP Logged
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Hey Richa, update is very nice and cute, as usual.. Entire 'spot light falling' scene was very descriptive.. Loved the way Abhi conveyed her care and fear for Nikki and the way he held her. It was so cute..
 
College Drama scene and dialogues are very well written.. enjoyed reading Rahul- Anjali nok johk.. Reminds me of KKHH.. One of my most fav movie.. Good selection of songs.. I particularly love 'Hulchul huwi zara shor hua.. Beautiful song..
 

Awesome update.. Waiting for more.. Continue soon dear Big smile




Edited by namy_an - 09 December 2011 at 11:34pm

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Posted: 10 December 2011 at 6:40am | IP Logged

woaah richi rich u bak Big smile  Hug

welcome welcome dear..
hope ur fine shine..
 
now to update..
woaah totally cool yar..
i mean the spotlite scene waz really nice, him helping her reminded me of diwali scene..
awesome..
they conveyd all ther love care fear need through ther eyes.. n i just lov this about AN!
truely amazing part.. love it..
 
n the story ur writing on anjali n raool *ma accnt WinkLOL* iz so difficlt task gal..
 i mean to explain hoe the met, first fight then soft corner , fake attitude, open enemies but  in reality care 4 eachothr, help eachothr, know eachothr wery well, nok jhok.. its really too cool.. really wana c how ur gona proceed wid the scene.. n then how they wil come to the stage when they finally  understand they lov eacothr n then confession.Big smile
wow . i agen sey its realyy diff to write yaar but ur goin great..Clap
ur ff so entertaining..StarStar
n watever mitzi sed i completely agrree  wid that..Big smile
toatally supercool update..
love it to the core..Star
keep it up dear..
n once agen welcome bakBig smile
 tak cr...alwaz!
 
regardz
-cherryEmbarrassed


Edited by cherry_an - 10 December 2011 at 6:42am

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Posted: 10 December 2011 at 6:44am | IP Logged
n ya thanx 4 providing vidz..Big smile
totally cool!

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