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Is he mine?


His voice echoes in my ears.

What do I say? Should I tell him the truth? Oh, god. I just want to get away from him now.

What should I tell him? He is looking into my eyes.

"No."

Did I really say that? Oh my god. I lied to him. What if he finds out the truth now? Oh, man. I'm in deep trouble.

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She said no. He isn't mine. That means she found someone else. Then why isn't she married?

I let out the breath I have unknowingly been holding.

"Oh." is all I can manage right now. She looks at me, then turns to go.

"What's his name?" I ask as she closes the passenger side door.

Her answer shocks me to my wits. "Amit."

She sees my shocked gaze and understands why I am so shocked. She gives me a small smile and walks to her car and drives off.
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Phew. Why did I just do that? Oh, well. I have a ton of things to think about other than Abhi. Namely, Amit.

Okay, where is he? Do I have to go inside to get him? I quickly scan the playground to see if his teacher is waiting there. She isn't.

I walk inside and see his class to the far right. As I look inside through the window, I see my son having so much fun. I smile. Amit means the world to me. Well, more than the world. Amit is the reason I am living in the present. Who would've thought that I'd be a mother at 22?

Life is full of surprises. Mine is Amit.
On the way home, Amit tells me all about his first day of school.
"Mumma, Mumma, you know, I made so many friends: Raj, Nisha, Abhi…."

I question him, "Abhi?"

"Yes, Mumma, Abhi….for Abhinav."

"Oh."

I'm just thinking of Abhi too much. I need to stop. I need to focus on Amit.

"You know, Mumma, we made cards for Father's Day because Father's Day is day after tomorrow, but I made my card for an angel since I don't have a daddy. Mumma, why don't I have a daddy? Where is he?"

As Amit chatters off, I ponder on his question. The other times I've diverted his question, but now he's almost four. What do I tell him?

I sigh. It's time to tell him the truth.


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Sorry, guys….I had to end the part here. But the next update is coming in half an hour probably. I will send out pm's once I update the next 2 parts, which are coming up today!!!!
Sheena


Edited by AbhiNikiLuver - 17 March 2010 at 8:00am

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good part Sheenu!!
I knew she wud lie....good for us coz we will get to see the wrath of Abhimanyu Modi!!!

Awww poor child...he needs to know soon abt his dad!!!

waiting for the next two parts!!

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@Honey................wrath??? ok...but its basically his fault..... Big smile...kk...oh, well.

Yes, Amit needs to know abt his daddy!

Will update as soon as i finish writing!

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Posted: 17 March 2010 at 8:50am | IP Logged
Lovely part Sheenu!! Big smile She lied!! Oh well, Wonder how he's going to find out! and poor Amit, hope he finds out that he has a dad soon! Eagerly awaiting the next parts sweety! Hug

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@Aisha -- thanks! Yep...isnt Nikki the biggest liar ever ....or wait -- is it Muski?LOL

Yes. Amit needs to know! I am typing up the next part now! Big smile

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Posted: 17 March 2010 at 11:08am | IP Logged
Fantastic update, short and sweet. So we finally meet the little cutie...amit is adorable. Nikki lied!!...I can sense a storm brewing!
Update soon...n hope its a long update :}}!!!

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fantastic ff really good sheena ..

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