NEW FF...PKYD..BAATLE BEgins....Pg118!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago

Hello everyone'''here's a new FF I have started on Nakusha and Dutta bhau'''.😳

I know the show's just rocking ..........the track is interesting and the performances r brilliant..........still here's my take on it all..........I HOPE U ALL ENOY IT...........Here's the first part..........plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do tell me how u liked it and send in ur valuable comments.............😊

Everything happens just like it has in the show'''.and it's a scene in Dutta's house after he has returned with Nakusha after telling her everything about his past life and love and how dutta became DUTTA BHAU!...........😳

Dutta stops the car in front of the house and gets out to open the door for Naku'''.(well gentle man toh hai hii'''.Dutta shriram patil!.........😳)''''The two make their way to the entrance'''Naku doesn't say anything'''.she was in a turnmoil of emotions'''Dutta's story had moved her'''.she felt'''.she felt sad for him'''..and wished that supriya could bring back a smile on his face''''and wished that DUTTA BHAU COULD BE DUTTA AGAIN!..........Lekin naku didn't know there was more to come''''more suffering''''more pain'''.more unhappiness for Dutta''''afterall Supriya was not the one made for him!..............😭

Just as they enter the house'''.Dutta makes his way to his room walking ahead of nakku'''who just stood silently and watched him leave'''''There someone stood watching all this''it was kalavatti'''.she flashe her evil smile and thinks to herself----Kya baat hai'''.AAJ BHAU ISSKEY SAATH BAAHAR GAYA?!..........Hmm'..lagtaa hai aag donon taraf lagney laggii hai''..ABB BHALAA KYA HAI BURAA KYA HAI YEH MUJHEY HII INHEIN SAMJHAANA HOGAA!..............😳👏

Its evening''..everyone in the house is busy'''.it mehendii kii raat'''..the hall is been decorated'''..Aayi sahib calls Dutta who is driving with baaji going somewhere for work''''.Dutta says---Jii aayi sahib kahiye?............😊

She says----Dutta kal terii shaadi hai aur tu aaj bhi kaam kar rahaa hai?.............yeh kya beta'''..jaldii se ghar aa jaa'''..mehendii kii rasm shuru honey waali hai'''.tu haath lagaayegaa wahii mehendii Supriyaa ke haathon mein lagegii'''.😊

Dutta says dryly---Theek haii main bas thodii derr mein pahonchtaa hoon''''😕

Baaji says---Sach bhau main tumhaarey lite bahot khush hoon''''

Dutta wasn't listening to baaji'''.he remebrs how he had asked Supriya to tell him what was bothering her an she didn't''''he recalls how she had got up from the dining table when he was sitting next to her for lunch!..........Dutta closes his eyes and stops the car all of a sudden!..............😕

Baaji stares at Dutta and notices he was lost in his own thoughts he asks----Kya baat hai bhau'''.sab theek hai naa?...........

Dutta hands over the keys to baaji and asks him to drive the car while he hiself gets down to seat in the passenger's seat''''..

It's a scene in the house '''everyone is ready for the evning'''..Kala asks aayiisahib----Bhau nahiin aaya '''..😊

Just then Dutta walks in with Baaji and kala walks upto him smiling----Bhau tu kahaan reh gayaa tha?.............main aayi sahib se tere baarey mein hii pooch rahii thi'''..

Aaysahib says walking upto Dutta----Jaa beta upar jaakey taiyaar ho jaa'''mehmaan aaney lagey hain'''.😊

Dutta nods his head and makes his way to his room and stares at the brown shewaani kept on his bed'''..😳

The next scene u see him dressed in the sherwaani and staring at himself in the mirror when he sees nakku passing by his room in the mirror'''.😊

Bhau remembers sharing his life's first love with naku'''.he calls her---Nakku idhar aana'''.😊

Nakusha stops midway and turns to enter Bhau's room'''.she was uncertain at first as she remembers what he did to her last time!😆...........Lekin she walks in remembering what made Dutta what he was today!.............

She looks up and finds herself gazing at dutta who looked dashing in that brown sherwaanii''''

Dutta says----Dekh aaj main chahtaa hoon kii tu baaki sab kaam chodkar sirf Supryaa ke saath rahey.......

Naku nods her head and lowers her eyes''''Dutta stares at her'''she sAYS---jee saab.........main taayi ke saath hii rahegii.......

Just then Roops comes in with Leela and the two r shocked to see naku in bhau's room!..............😲

Edited by PremLeoManav - 13 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

great start leo...btw i wonder what naku was doing hovering around bhao's room considering its a little off the rest of the house with his own balcony/study.

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Posted: 14 years ago

Thankx dear...........glad u liked it.........yaa Bhau's room is kind of isolated naa.........even I noticed this..........well.........bas yeh samjho kii naku was roaming to make sure bhau was alright afterall she doesn't want him to get drunk again!............😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

I know...she cant stay away can she? btw dont u think datta wouldnt need to tell naku not to tell anyone? she would know that its something she has to keep it to herself. and he would know that she knows it. afterall she didnt even show the letter to anyone.

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Posted: 14 years ago

Yes lekin after all that has happened with him in the past......u see the girl must have ditched him thanks to his sisters.............he just wants to make things sure.............waisey u think a lotttttttttttttttt..................GLAD U READ MY FF SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO CAREFULLY DEAR....................I am soooooooooooooooooo glad.............Thankx................😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

I think a lot...not really...unless its abt datta. 😉

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Posted: 14 years ago

Wow............that was soooooooooooooooo sweet.............waisey me too...................😳

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Posted: 14 years ago

omggg i loveeddd itt leoo

thaazzz urr namee righhtT??

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Posted: 14 years ago

Thankx..............kshreya2002, cool.sindhya, ......for liking it...............😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

Thankx sandhya😊......glad u enjoyed it dear.............Yaa I am a leo............August 1 born..........waisey Hi I am sheeba................😊U know what just got to know.....MISHAL IS A LEO TOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I AM LIKE WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😳

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