Fan Fiction ' You are mine ' NEW! Ch 26 pg 141 (Page 3)

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Wow I love it pls continue

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u r genious...........................................HugDay Dreaming
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WoW!! awsomee yaar...
....cant wait to read wat happens next...and plzz i have a request...plzz put alot of cute scenes of KriYa...
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lol thank you for the lovely comments. Yes there will be alot of Krishna and Pratigya scenes since the story is completely focused on them. Here comes the next part !

Enjoy xo Tongue


                                           Chapter 4


So shocked was she at the turn of the events that Pratigya failed to react when she was held crushed upon the strangers embrace. Her only reaction was to stand stiff and gaze upon the mans face who still continued to stare at her, without saying a word.

The wind blew gently as a chill ran up Pratigya's spine. She shivered as the breeze touched her face, causing strands of her tied up hair to play on her soft skin.

The stranger diverted his eyes from her face and for a second stared at the tendrils of her hair which were threatening to escape from her hair. He slowly raised his hands towards her and gently moved the strand of her hair away from her face. He tucked in her hair behind her ear and proceeded in running his finger idly on her cheeks.

The touch of his hands brought her abruptly back into reality. She tried to push away from his chest, but his arms tightened around her, refusing to let her go.

The fearful memory of being pulled up against a scrawny chest hit her hard. She was no longer the 19 year old girl, at this moment she was back to where she was 9 painful years ago.

"Pppleasse, leave me alone, ppleeeaase don't hurt me," screamed Pratigya as she struggled in his arms. "Not again, please not again."

She started sobbing uncontrollably. Her body shook in spasms, and she started choking on her own tears.

The stranger looked strangely at her as he gently eased her away from his arms.

Without further notice, Pratigya ran as fast as she could, blinded by her tears she could not see where she was going. So desperate was she to get away from the man, she did not notice that the stranger was also running after her.

Pratigya looked back and she screamed as she realised the man was chasing her, the gun was still in his hand. Instantly she slammed into a broad chest and went stumbling back. A tall man, with curly black hair, a tooth stick in his mouth stood in front of her. He was clearly amused at her state of fear, as he stalked towards her whilst she was edging herself away.

He kneeled down as his greedy eyes roamed over her body. He brought out his hand to touch her when suddenly a bullet struck through his hand, leaving a blood filled hole within his palm.

" ahhhhhh !" screamed the curly haired man, as he wailed in pain. His ferociously angry eyes looked up to see who it was that had dared to shoot him. Suddenly when he realised who stood behind Pratigya, his eyes suddenly turned from anger to what seemed like a certain fear.

"Don't touch her" said the man behind Pratigya. " Look at her once again Angad, and ill tear your eyes from your face."

Pratigya hesitantly looked back as she realised her saviour was indeed the same guy she had been initially running away from.

Hearing the threat, the angad-guy, seemed to have lost all his confidence. He even stuttered when he tried to explain himself.

"K-Krishna, I was just trying to help her, she fell down. " Angad stuttered.

Krishna looked coldly at Angad, " I don't care, even if she fell down, hurt herself, asked for your help. You have no right to touch her."

Hearing his words, something sparked in Angad's eyes but he quickly concealed it by looking down and slowly nodding his head in agreement.

"Now go" Krishna's deadly voice threatened. Upon hearing his whispered words, Angad quickly left. Leaving Pratigya once again alone with Krishna.

Krishna stood above her, looking down at Pratigya's frightened face.

His face softened a trifle, as he offered his hand to help assist her to get up. Pratigya glared at his hand then back at his face. Despite the fact that he had helped her, she could not forget how easily he had shot and killed a man just a few moments ago. Instead of being worried about the fact that he just killed a man, he stood calmly offering his hand to her.

His carelessness frightened her even more. Pratigya purposely ignored his offered hand and proceeded into trying to get up herself. Her refusal seemed to have enraged him as his face tightened in untamed fury. His eyes burned with such rage that Pratigya felt she will burn at any moment. His jaw was twitching and his offered hand was now clenched tightly into a fist. His veins stood out on his forearms and his mouth was once again set in a cruel vicious line.

Krishna bent down and seized her wrists cruelly and jerked her up. Pratigya cried out in pain as she struggled to get away from his hold. Her struggle only added more fuel to his anger as his grasp tightened painfully on her wrist.

"Nobody rejects Krishna" he whispered, "This place runs on my terms, if I say someone must die then they MUST die. If I say something is mine then it is MINE ! So who the hell are you to refuse my help. You dare to reject me? Nobody and I mean nobody can say no to Krishna".

She stared at him in silence, "Not even you" he concluded harshly.

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Wow.....tht was awesome.I culd feel the passion when Krishna kept staring at her and pushed her hair strands behind her ear.Can't wait for the next chapter.Plz continue.
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Posted: 05 March 2010 at 10:19pm | IP Logged
OMg ur a very very very good writer yaar just amazing suoperb fanntabulous i have no words to explain n u r very quick wid d updates yaar.......serissly hats off to u.....i was all magining them ....the fear in her eyes his passion all the tension n last grip n the words wowwowowyyy.LOVED ITTTTTTTTTT......simply OUTSTANDING......ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap.......
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Posted: 05 March 2010 at 10:51pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by kaasshh

u r genious...........................................HugDay Dreaming

haha thank you ! Cool

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Posted: 05 March 2010 at 10:52pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by NZ_rockx

WoW!! awsomee yaar...
....cant wait to read wat happens next...and plzz i have a request...plzz put alot of cute scenes of KriYa...

Thank you Smile, and your request shall indeed be granted as the story is completely based on the both of them :)

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