Fan Fiction ' You are mine ' NEW! Ch 26 pg 141

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Fan fiction - 'You are Mine'

 Hey everyone, this is my first attempt of writing a fan fiction. There is only one issue, I understand Hindu completely, but I may have difficulties trying to incorporate them into dialogues. So everything will be written in English, but ill try to put some dialogues here and there.

Hope you like it, and please feel free to give any feedback. Will be much appreciated.

Also I don't want to go in much detail about Pratigiya's and Krishna's family. Basically their families personalities are the same. Krishna's personality is the same but only he is educated. However Pratigiyas personality is not.

~ Character Sketch ~


A young 19 year old girl who has just returned to her hometown after studying abroad. She is very simple and innocent. However she is mentally and physically scarred from a traumatic experience which occurred when she was very young. When she was 10 years of age, she had been kidnapped by a bunch of 'goonda's' where she was abused. This had heavily impacted upon Pratigiyas life, thus causing her to live in constant fear.

Will Pratigiya find someone who will love her and kiss away her tears. Will she find someone who will take away her fears and forever protect her.


Krishna is a 23 year old man, who belongs to a political and ruthless family. Although he is well educated, he refuses to act like a sophisticated man. Instead he is known as a bully, in which everyone shivers in fear upon hearing his name. Krishna character is very dominating and possessive. In short he is a perfect example of an alpha male. He has grown up in a place where women has no respect and is only good for cooking and bearing children.

Will Pratigiya's love and gentle nature change Krishna's perspective

                                           Chapter update
                                        Chapter one - Page 1
                           Chapter two - Page 2
                           Chapter three - Page 2
                           Chapter four - Page 3 
                           Chapter five - Page 4
                                         Chapter six - Page 5
                                         Chapter seven - Page 7
                           Chapter eight- page 9
                           Chapter nine - Page 10
                           Chapter ten - Page 11
                           Chapter eleven- Page 15
                           Chapter twelve- Page 16
                           Chapter thirteen - Page 17
                           Chapter fourteen - Page 23
                           Chapter fifteen - Page 23
                           Chapter sixteen - Page 28
                           Chapter seventeen - Page 29
                           Chapter eighteen - Page 35
                           Chapter nineteen - Page 45
                           Chapter twenty - Page 66
                           Chapter twenty one - Page 95
                           Chapter twenty two - Page 106
                           Chapter twenty three - Page 118
                           Chapter twenty four - Page 126
                           Chapter twenty five - Page 128
                           Chapter twenty six - Page 141

Edited by siinnce.09 - 20 April 2010 at 11:32pm

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                     You are Mine


                                      Chapter one


The dark room personified her fears, as she sat crouched tightly against the wall. Tears burned her eyes and slipped down her pale and sunken cheeks, devoid of life. Her slender body jerked in spasms of fear as she awaited death to come upon her. She could feel the blood sticking to her clothes and although her back was tender and bruised from the whips, she refused to back away from the wall.

Suddenly the door opened, and a man stood at the door way with a smirk playing upon his cruel lips. The very sight of him revolted Pratigiya as she edged herself further away from him.

" pppleaase, don't hurt me" she whispered fearfully.

Oblivious to her pain, the man walked towards her, his lust filled eyes devoured her. With a cry, Pratigiya quickly stood up and ran across the room. Rough hands gripped her arm and yanked her slender young body towards his scrawny chest. The smell of alcohol lingered strongly on the mans foul breath as he slowly came closer to her face.


"Nooo !!!!!!!!!!" Pratigya screamed, "don't touch me please, leave me alone".

Still shaken from her nightmare, Pratigiya still could not stop shaking as her younger sister Arushi, wrapped her arms around Pratigiya and assured her that it was just a dream.

"hush pratigiya, it was just a dream." she soothed, " Your at home now safe and sound, no one is going to ever take you away from us again."

Hot tears spilled down Pratigiyas eyes, although it had been 9 years ago she still could not forget anything. She tried to stay happy in front of her family but as soon as she was alone, she could not contain her true feelings.

Arushi gently touched Pratigiyas face and again like many other nights tried to assure her that everything will soon be alright.

" Prats, believe me I know someone out there is going to come into your life one day and sweep you off your feet. Your prince charming will be handsome, gentle and nice and he will love you forever and make you forget."

Pratigiya tried to smile through her tears at her sisters childish notion of a prince charming. Although she knew there were no such thing. Somewhere deep inside her broken heart, she hoped that Arushi will be right. Someone will come and take away her fears and will protect her from ever getting hurt. Someone will come and love her despite the horrid scars on her back and will tell her that she's beautiful.

Yes, Pratigiya thought to herself, maybe dreams do come true.

Okay so this was the first chapter, dont know if you guys like it. I will continue if only you guys like it. Hm ive never ever done a fan fic so yeah :) 


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Posted: 04 March 2010 at 10:26pm | IP Logged
hey that was so KRIYA...loved the concept.......this so cute plz plz continue n do pm me............ wat abt other charchters i mean her mom dad n roli n adarsh n his parents.btw would love to read more.........
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Posted: 04 March 2010 at 11:22pm | IP Logged
gr8 work hun
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Hugwonderful yar.....plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz ya......
hey it wud be much better if u write in colourful fonts
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Posted: 05 March 2010 at 1:58am | IP Logged
pls continue i lile it. and pls introduce krishna in the story
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Posted: 05 March 2010 at 3:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sups2222

hey that was so KRIYA...loved the concept.......this so cute plz plz continue n do pm me............ wat abt other charchters i mean her mom dad n roli n adarsh n his parents.btw would love to read more.........
Hey thank you Smile, the rest of the family will be mentioned here and there. But my story is mainly focused on Pratigiya and Krishna's love story. Tongue
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Originally posted by Aabrayy

gr8 work hun
Thank you Tongue

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