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Sanraj Always Together(epi 20 Pg 143) (Page 2)

priyankapatwa Goldie

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Posted: 27 February 2010 at 12:51pm | IP Logged
Episode 2
Dm & Baa hear voice of Santus payal chan-chan,chan-chan.Baa says santu came & dm feels happy.Suddenly they hear Suraj voice shoting Maaa-Maaa.Dm & Baa runs out.Dm see Santu lying on the floor & comes running towards her & calls her name out.But Santu doesnt reply.Baa calls rest of the family members & asks Suraj wat happen to her.He say she was ok but a soon as she came in angaan of the house she fainted & he started crying.Dm sees Hiten & tells him in loud voice wat r u seeing at me go now,just now & call the doctor.He picks Santu in his arms & takes her to their room & puts her on bed & sits beside her & calls her out saying SANTU-Aye Santudi.
Then doctor comes & tell Dm to go out.But he tries 2 say something & dr tells him,Mr.dharamraj mahiyavanshiji go i will take care of her.After half an hour she comes out.Dm & others are worried as dr.has taken a lot of tym.She comes & Dm ask her that how is Santu.Is she ok.Everything is fine naaa.Dr.plz say something.She says Mahiyavanshiji atleast let me speak.Then she says chill & says now u need 2 take care of her as she takes care of u guys.After 9 months a new member will come into ur family.Congrates u r going 2 become papa.....but her body is very week u need 2 take special care of her & ur baby & plz take care of her diet & give her medicines on tym,i hav given her injection & now she is sleeping so dont disturb her & take care,congrates agains & she leaves.
Everyone is very happy & Dm is on cloud 9.Every1 wants 2 meet Santu but Baa tells every1 dat no let her sleep now when she gets up we will meet her & tells Dm 2 go & take care of Santu & tell him 2 sit with her.Dm go 2 his room & closes the door.He admires Santu sleeping & smiles........& takes a deep breath & go near her.He sits near her & slowly takes her hand in his & kisses her hand & his eyes r filled with tears of happiness & he wants to express his feeling on Santu abt this.He is stareing at her & after sometimes he close his eyes.Santu gets up after sometime & sees Dm sleeping near her,holding her hand in sitting position.She gives a loving look 2 Dm & tells that i m here sleeping.Wats wrong with me??She gets up & slowly removes her hand frm Dms hand but as soon as she starts moving Dm holds her hand & pulls her behind .She understands dats it Dm & turns behind & gives him a big smile & come near him & sit.Dm comes close 2 her & places a soft kiss on her head,forehead,then on her cheeks & slowly on her lips & Santu closes her eyes & hugs him tightly.Even Dm hugs her & tells
Dm:Tujhe khabar che aaj meine tujhe kitna yaad kiya.
Santu:mujhe bhi aapki bahut yaad aa rahi thi par meine aabko jayada yaad kiya.
Santu:Kyu ki mein aapse jayada pyaar karti hoon.Then she gets up & moves toward dressing table & starts combing her hair.Dm gets up & stands behind him puts his both the hand on Santus waist & leans his chin on santus shoulder & looks at her through mirror & even Santu see him.
Dm:Mein tujse jayaada pyaar karta hoon is saboot bhi de sakta hoon.
Santu:Aachaa to di jiyee & turns towards him & raises her eyebrows & say kya hoa dijiyee naa.Dekha i won.
Dm places his hand on her lips & places his another hand lightly & slowly on her stomach & says,
Dm:Aye Santudi,yaha hai aur 9 mahinee baad is duniya mein bhi aajayeega........
Santu eyes are filled with tears & she dont have words 2 express her happiness & starts crying.
Dm:kya hoaa???Why r u crying????Khush hai naa yeh toh mein janta hoon pun isme roone ka kya hai.
Santu hits her hand lightly on Dms chest & they have a eyelock.Dm wipes her tears & says duffor tu maa bane wali hai now grow up,badi ho jaaa & hugs her & say aaj mein bahut khush hoon ab hamare pyaar ki nishani kuch hi mahino mein aane wali hai.Then they go down 2 have dinner everyone congrates them & every1 say Santu dat frm now u will not do any work & will only take care of yourself.She tries 2 say something but Baa say dats final & Dm says no more arguement.Then Dm & Santu have a small eyelock & episodes ends on their happy faces.
TO BE CONTINUED................
Precap:It has already been 2months of Santus pregnency.Dm is shouting very loudly on Santu......

Edited by priyankapatwa - 06 March 2010 at 4:38am

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svmi Senior Member

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Posts: 965

Posted: 27 February 2010 at 1:22pm | IP Logged
Very nice and sweet. you have fulfilled the wishes of many on the forum

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soni-zee IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 27 February 2010 at 1:39pm | IP Logged
wow Priya, love it, but why DM is shouting on Santu hope no angryDay Dreaming

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Jaz1990 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 27 February 2010 at 3:22pm | IP Logged
priya dat waz amazing...please continuee :D

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shabz50 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 27 February 2010 at 3:48pm | IP Logged
really nice writing please contiune soon

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s000 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 27 February 2010 at 4:11pm | IP Logged
good one - hald of it we scene so we cna visiualise it but next scene goonna be good i can feel it
- that comment was firts episode
oooooo mubrakaan good one keep them coming - this for 2nd episode

Edited by s000 - 27 February 2010 at 4:14pm

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leena04 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 February 2010 at 10:56pm | IP Logged
@ priya,

u both part was very nice amazing &
 for fulfilling all of us wish of Sanraj kid u get

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crystal30 Goldie

Joined: 10 February 2010
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Posted: 28 February 2010 at 12:38am | IP Logged
Hey Priya....very nicely done..hw cute Santu wld be looking na...i wish we get to c this in the serial...too goodClapClap Waiting 4 ur next post....

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