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(as all were telling me to continue with first part soon….so I have taken some time from my study and written first part….hope all will like it……appreciation/criticism is welcomed as it is my first try in writing an FF)

(story starts with camera zooming on a big mansion and inside that everyone is in hurry like preparing for some big party like thing…….in middle we see a cute, beautiful girl with some frown on her face…….giving instructions to the servants...also shouting on others also…………do u know who is she….she is  SUHAANI )

S: are bhai woh waha nahi lagne vala…waha lagega(pointing to the other locations)

M:sorry mem saheb……...abhi  me thik karta hu.

S:achaa jaldi karna….aur bhi bohot kam hai yaha..

(at the same moment a tall handsome guy hugs her from the back………Guess who is that……..??????????........it's  ADHIRAJ)

A: hi jaan..tum itne bure mood mai kyu ho…..chill karo.

S: kya khak chill karu…yaha sab kam mere pe aa pada hai…..kal bhai 1 saal bad ghar ane vala hai…..aur muzhe ghar thik karna hai……kitna kaam hai….aur khuch bhi thik nahi chal raha…aur tumhe romance suz raha hai..

A:sab khuch thik hoga jaan…….chinta mat karo….mai hoon na…..madad ke liye.

S: ha ha tum to ho hi….chalo chodo muzhe aur  batao maine tumhe uss furniture vale se milne ko kaha tha……..usse mile tum????????

A:woh..aab…kya hai na…..woh mai …bhul gaya (saying with scratching his head).

S:kyaaaaaaaaa….. tumhe ek kaam diya tha…woh bhi bhul gaye…..aur muzhe kah rahe ho chill karu…..jao aab jaldi woh kam karo….warna anjaam bura hoga.

A:itna kyu bhadkati ho…itna gussa karo gi to chehre pe wrinkles pad jayenge…aur mai apne jaan ko aise nahi de sakta.

S: abe romeo..abhi romance nahi kam karna hai…toh jao aur kam karo…romance bad me kar lena….ab mai bohot busy hu.

A:are tum kitni unromantic ho…aise koi apne boyfriend se kehta hai kya…(showing fake anger)

S:ok sorry………..pls gussa mat ho mere janu.…par mai bhi kya karu....sara kam muzhpe aa pada hai...aur to aur  ye nupur bhi na…abhi tak nahi ayi….wo muzhe help karne vali thi....pata nahi usse yad bhi hai ya nahi???????

A:ok ok….maf kiya…..nupur ko phone karlo….aur puch lo ki  woh kaha hai.

S: wo to mai karungi hi…par aab tum jao….aur jo kam diya hai wo karo……..jaaaoooo.

A:ok baba ja raha hu………..magar muzhe ek kiss chahiye.. ..jaane se pahele

S:tum bhi na…..she moves forward and gives light peck on his cheek and then push him outside the home…

A:this is not fare…..yeh cheating hai…..muzhe aisa kiss nahi chahiye tha

S:abhi tumhe issi se kam chalana hoga…………..(smiling).aab jao.

A:ok ja raha hu.bye

S:bye

S:ab iss zhasi ki rani ko phone karke puchti hu……ki madam kaha hai??????

 

(In the mean time camera shifts to another house……..the main hall is all messed up.and we see two small kids fighting with each others)

N : ( from kichen shouts)please baccho masti band karo……aur aapne sab khilone sahi jagah pe rakho.

(u will be confused about……… who r those kids?????……….those r ….yash and alekh……..both r twins……..sons of  mayank and nupur sharma )

N: yeh mayank baccho ko akela chod ke kaha chala gaya??.(in angry tone muttering to herself…and preparing the breakfast)

M: are baccho….tum ek din muzhe….pitwake hi chodoge……thode der ke liye kya mai anadar gaya...tum log chalu ho gaye ladne ko….sach me apni maa pe gaye ho..wo bhi hamesha ladne ke liye tayaar hoti hai..

N:kon ladne ko tayaar rehata hai???????(in angry tone)

M: (hearing nupur's voice)kiski baat kar rahi ho….mai to baccho ko discipline sikha raha tha..bas aur khuch nahi.

N: (watching the mess around) ha woh to dikh hi raha hai……..chalo baccho breakfast ready hai…jaldi kha lo aaj school bhi  to jana hai na.

(hearing this kids go into kichen………giving sweet kisses to nupur)

N:mayank tum bhi andar jake breakfast karlo.tab tak mai sab thik karti hu.

M: muzhe bhi wo chahiye.

N: kya??????(confused)

M: jo abhi abhi baccho ne tumhe diya……(and smiling in naughty way)

N: kya diya baccho ne muzhe.

M : (now going close to her )and whispers in her ear……KISS

N: KYAAAA…..tum bhi na mayank……kahi bhi shuru ho jate ho…….chup chap andar jao aur nashta karlo.

(Mayank goes inside with sour mood…………..Nupur watch that and feel really bad…………..so she think of doing something)

N:  (after cleaning mess in hall…..goes into kitchen ) baccho tumne nashta kar liya????

Kids : yesssssssssssssss momma

N: ok ab jaldi tayaar ho jao…….school bhi to jana hai.

(at that moment phone starts ringing……..nupur takes it)

N:hello.sharma mension……kisse baat karni hai???

S: oye zhassi ki rani..kaha hai tu….mai tera kabse wait kar rahi hu….aur tu abhi tak ghar pe hi hai………(really in  angry tone)

N: oh suhaani….sorryyyyy….wo mai na baccho ko tayaar kar rahi thi…aaj unka  school shuru ho raha hai na……………to time lag gaya…….aur tum janti hi ho……….ki wo do shaitan kitna tang karte hai.

S: ok ok ……(smiling)…….ab jaldi sab khuch khatam kar aur aa ja

N: ok

(call ends)

N: mayank kya tum muzhe samrat ke ghar chod doge office jate waqt??????

M: ok(still in sour mood)

(In the car…….at the traffic signal )

N: baccho wo dekho…………waha kya hai?????????

KIDS got up from the back seat and start looking back.

Mayank was busy in watching the signal to go green……..doesnt hear what nupur said.

(AT that precise moment )

Nupur move towards mayank and give a sweet peck on the cheek of mayank………..with that mayank got shocked and afterwards starts smiling…………..nupur is also smiling and blushing slightly

N: baccho chalo bait jao….jo tha wo aab chala gaya.

M: he was just smiling.

(after reaching sam's home)

N: good bye baccho..mann lagake padhna….and gives sweet kisses to kids...........

Bye mayank sham ko milte hai.

M: ok………bye ……apna khayal rakhna.

(with that he leaves)

(after entering into the house she finds suhaani shouting to some servant)

N: are aab bas bhi kar..kitna chilllaye gi……..shant ho ja..mai aa gayi hu na.

S: to abhi time mila tumhe ane ka.........chalo thik hai..tum bahar ka kam dekho mai sam ke room ka kaam dekhti hu.

N: ok

S: (after entering sam's room) kitna ganda hai ye room…sab jagah dhul  jami hui hai………..kya bhai ke jane ke bad koi nahi aya kya yaha???????

Aab sab muzhe hi saaf karna padega….chal suhaani lag ja kam pe……..(with that she starts cleaning the room)

During cleaning the upper space of cupboard….one red diary falls………suhaani thinks what is this????

S: yeh kiski diary hai……..(removing dust from the cover  she opens it……and gets shocked)

Inside the diary its written………….MY LOVE………..CHASHMISH……..and she sees many photos of a girl with specks………..some photos r of that girl with sam……suhaani get confused.

wht is this???………..who is this girl????…………..she looks thereough the diary…..to see if there is anything about that girl………but to her dismay she finds nothing…….at that time she find something written on one of the page.

 

Chashmish hamesha kehti thi ki …..samrat diary likha karo……apne haseen yado ko hamesha hamesha ke liye aapne paas rakhne ka ye sabse acha tarika hai….magar mai un hasin yado ko jo maine chashmish ke sath bitaye the…unhe dil dimag se bahar hi nahi nikal pa raha hu……muzhe to sirf ye gana yad aa raha hai……jo meri condition describe karr raha hai……

(BREATHLESS song by Shankar mahadevan)

Koi jo mila to mujhe aisa lagta tha

jaise meri saari duniya main geeton ki rut

aur rangon ki barkha hai khushbu ki aakdhi hai

mahki hui si ab saari fizaayen hain

bahki hui si ab saari hawaayen hain

khoyi hui si ab saari dishaayen hain

badli hui se ab saari adaayen hain

jaagi ummengein hain, dhadak raha ahi dil

sapnon main toofaan hain, hoton pe nagme hain

aakhon main sapne hain, sapnon main beete hue

se vo saare lamhe hain

jab koi aaya tha, jazron pe chhaya tha

dil main samaya tha, kaise main bataun tumhe

kaise use paaya tha, pyaar ke chehre pe bikhri jo julphen

to aisa lagta tha jaise kohre ke peechhe

ek os main dhula hua phool khila hai jaise

badal main ik chaand chhupa hai

aur jhaank raha hai jaise raat ke parde main

ek savera hai roshan roshan aakhon main

sapnon ka saagar jismain prem sitaron ki chaadar

jaise jhalak rahi hai

lahron lahron baat kare to jaise moti barse

jaise kahin chandi ki payal goonjey

jaise kahin sheeshe main jaam girey

aur chhann se tootey jaise koi chhip ke sitaar bajaye

jaise koi chaandni raat main gaye

jaise koi hole se paas bulaye

kaisi meethi baatain thee

vo kaisi mulakaatein thee

vo jab maine jaana tha

jazron se kaise pighalte hain dil

aur aarzoo paati hai kaise manzil

aur kaise utarta hai chaand jameen par

kaise kabhi lagta hai swarg agar hai

to bas hai yahin par

usne bulaya mujhe, aur samjhaya mujhe

hum jo mile hain, hamain aise hi milna tha

gul jo khile hain, unhe aise hi khilna tha

janmo ke bandhan, janmo ke rishtey hain

jab bhi hum janme to hum yahin milte hain

kaanon main mere jaise, shahed sa ghulne lage

khwaabon ke dar jaise aakhon main khulne lage

khwaabon ki duniya bhi kitni haseen aur

kaisi rangeen thee khwaabon ki duniya

jo kahne ko thee par kahin bhi nahi thee

khwaab jo toote mere, aakh jo khuli meri

hosh jo aaya mujhe

maine dekha maine jaana

vo jo kabhi aaya tha, nazron pe chhaya tha

dil main samaya tha, ja bhi chuka hai

aur dil mera ab hai tanha tanha

na to koi armaan hai, na koi tamanna hai

aur na koi sapna hai

ab jo mere din aur ab jo meri ratain hain

unmain sirf aansoon hain

unmain seif dard ki ranj ki batain hain

aur pharyaadein hain

mera ab bhi koi nahi main hoon aur khoye

hue pyaar ki yaadein hain

  Suhaani calls nupur

N: kya hua suhaani…tum chilla kyu rahi ho????

S: ye kon hai nupur??????…………showing her the pics of that girl in diary…….iska bhai se kya nata hai???

N: ( watching the pics gets shocked and gets emotional)

S: tum isse janti ho?….pls batavo na……ye kon hai???…aur Sammy ke room mai iski tasveer kyu hai???????(confused a lot)

N :yeh GUNAJAN hai……samrat ki CHASHMISH….jisse wo bohot pyar karta tha.

S: karta THA?????…matlab……kya who ab yaha nahi hai kya??

N: malum nahi.

S:malum nahi….iska kya matlab hai?…muzhe kuch samaz nahi aa raha..muzhe sab shuruwat se batao…..pls

N: ok..mai tumhe sab kuch shuruvat se batati hu…….3 saal pahele.

(now story rewinds to 3 years back and we will now see how sajan met and how they fall in love and what happened to gunjan)

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Posted: 27 February 2010 at 6:10am | IP Logged
nice start.Its really good.

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Posted: 27 February 2010 at 6:19am | IP Logged
nice one avi!
loved mayur scenes...
continue soon!
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Posted: 27 February 2010 at 6:23am | IP Logged
Avi luved itThumbs Up
Mayur scenes were sooo gud

Edited by pari_smile - 27 February 2010 at 6:24am

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Posted: 27 February 2010 at 6:40am | IP Logged
great one avi!!

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Posted: 27 February 2010 at 6:41am | IP Logged
add me to ur pm list

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Posted: 27 February 2010 at 6:42am | IP Logged
it ws awesomeeeeee dear..
pllzzzzz cont soon..
n thnxx for d pm..

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