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Posted: 25 February 2010 at 9:48am | IP Logged
hey lovely start.....cont soon Smile

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Posted: 25 February 2010 at 9:48am | IP Logged
Awesome update!!!!!!!!!!!
Ab gunjan ko bhi jaldi la de!!!!
Mira

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Posted: 25 February 2010 at 12:09pm | IP Logged
OMG......
This part was fabolus...... Thumbs Up
What can I say...
Please cont soon and PM me.... Tongue

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Posted: 25 February 2010 at 1:06pm | IP Logged
tht was soo nice plzz contuied  soon

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Posted: 25 February 2010 at 2:44pm | IP Logged

lovely update...continue it soon..

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Posted: 25 February 2010 at 2:53pm | IP Logged
PART 2
 
Sam comes upto mayank n amir
 
S: hey dude whats up
 
Uday, benji n adhiraj also join them
 
M: nothing yr, actully hamari behen arahi hai to issi khush mein, hamare ghar pe party hai, so u all r invited
 
Kiske ghar pe party hai ( somebody spoke from the back)
 
They all turned around, it was a girl she came upto them
 
Girl: kiske ghar pe party hai
 
Am: ofho suhaani, ofcourse hamare ghar
 
Yes it was suhaani
 
Su: oh wow, lekin kis khushi mein
 
M: hamari behen USA se wapis arhi hai, thats why
 
S: lekin hum shahid hi ayen
 
M: lekin kyun
 
S: kyunke, im too tired, holi itna khela hai, abhi ghar ja k bas songa, agar uth gaya to ajounga warna suhaani hi ayigi
 
M: as u wish dude
 
Su: it;ll be fun
 
Just then a girl came upto them
 
Girl: ofcourse it will, dia ki cousin ayi or maza na ho, aisa ho hi nahi sakta, kyun mayank
 
It was the diva dia
 
M: thats right, aur tum madam subha se kahan thi, pata hai bhaiya tumhe subha se dhoond rahe the
 
D: oh no
 
Am + M : oh yes!!
 
D: shut up guys, mujhe to dar lagraha hai, bhaiya ne to mardalna hai
 
M: exactly, isliye ab ghar chalo, warna aaj to tumare sath hum sab gayi
 
D: yeh cum on
 
M: ok bye guys
 
All: bye
 
They all wnt from there, they reached the malik mansion
 
Dia, mayank, amir n uday entered the house, arman came infront of them in a angrey face
 
All of them got scared, all the maliks joined them
 
Suddeenly arman started to laugh, all of them made a confused face
 
M: bhaiya...kya howa
 
Ar: arre tum sab itne dar kyun gayi the, meine thori tum logo ko kuch kehna tha (laugh)
 
All laughed
 
Ar: ab jaou aur ja k change karlo, guests atte hi honge, saari arrangments hogayi hain
 
All of them went in their room, they changed their cloths n came down, the guests had alreay arrived
 
M: yeh abhi tak gunjan kyun nai ayi
 
Ar: dekha mujhe pata tha wo aisi hi karegi, isiliye mein airport jaraha tha...lekin wo larki kisi ki nai sunti
 
R: woh agayi
 
Ar: kahan hai
 
R: mujhe feeling horahi hai k wo agayi
 
Just then a girl enters the door, she runs upto arman n climbs on his back
 
Girl: bhaiyaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!
 
She gets off, arman was sooo happy, all were sooo happy
 
Ar: gunjan
 
He picks her up n twirls her around, then hugs her
 
Mayank, nupur, sajeeda, sid, niki n amir sees them
 
M: gunjan agayi
 
He too joins in hugs with arman n gunjan
 
Am: kya gunjan agayi
 
He too runs n joins them
 
Si: gunjan!!!
 
He too joins them
 
G: arre ab chor bhi do, mein dab gayi hon
 
All of them get off her
 
M: gunjan i missed u sooo much
 
G: i no bhaiya, i missed u too
 
R: gunjan
 
gunjan turns around n sees her four bhabhis standing together
 
G: bhabhi
 
She runs into them n hugs them all
 
G: i missed all of u
 
R: we missed u too
 
Ar: pata hai, teri bhabhi ko pehle hi pata chal gaya tha k tu agayi
 
G: bhabhi hamesha aisa karti hain
 
Ar: waise bachi, party kaisi lagi
 
G: bhaiyaaaaaa, ab mein bachi nahi rahi, im grown up
 
Ar: lekin mere lie to tu hamesha bachi hi rahegi
 
G: bhaiya, why do u have to be so emotional
 
Ar: because we all love you
 
Dia n uday comes there
 
D: me too
 
U: me three
 
Gunjan hugs dia n uday
 
Just then Amir starts to play the guitar n starts a song
 
Am:  Meri Duniya Hai, Tujh Mein Kahin  ( pulls gunjan in the center)
Tere Bin Main Kya, Kuch Bhi Nahin
M: Meri Jaan Mein, Teri Jaan Hai ( picks gunjan up n twirl her around)
Hoo, Saathi Mere
R: Meri Duniya Hai, Tujh Mein Kahin ( cups gunjans face)
 Tere Bin Main Kya, Kuch Bhi Nahin
N: Meri Jaan Mein, Teri Jaan Hai ( hugs gunjan)
Hoo, Saathi Mere
Si: Meri Duniya Hai, Tujh Mein Kahin ( hugs gunjan from the back)
 Tere Bin Main Kya, Kuch Bhi Nahin...
Ar: Palkoon Mein Tere Roop Ka, Sapna Sajaa Diya ( kisses gunjans forhead)
Pehli Nazar Mein Hi Tujhe Apna Banaa Liya ( cups her face)
Hai Yehi Aarzoo, Har Ghadi Baithi Raho Mere Saamne ( makes gunjan sit down n sits with her)
Si: Meri Duniya Hai, Tujh Mein Kahin ( twirls with gunjan)
Ni: Tere Bin Main Kya, Kuch Bhi Nahin... ( pulls gunjans cheks)
G: Ayesaa Lagaa, Mere Sanam Hum Jo Yahaa Mile ( looks at all of them n gets tears in her eyes)
Saharaa Mein Jaise Shabanamee, Chaahat Ke Gul Khile ( hugs all of them)
Ye zameen, Aasamaan, Kah Rahe, Hum To Kabhee Naa Honge Judaa ( all make a roundabout)
 Meri Duniya Hai, Tujh Mein Kahin ( kisses all of them on cheeks)
Tere Bin Main Kya, Kuch Bhi Nahin ( dances with arman)
Ar: Meri Jaan Mein, Teri Jaan Hai ( Hugs gunjan )
Hoo, Saathi Mere
G: Meri Duniya Hai, Tujh Mein Kahin ( Gunjan hugs all of her brothers)
Tere Bin Main Kya, Kuch Bhi Nahin...
 
The song  was over, the party was also over, it was morning now n all were going to college n hospital, everyone was sitting on the dinning table
 
G: mein ghar mein akeli kya karongi
 
M: gun ( he called her gun for nick, everybody had their nicks for gunjan), tu meri books padh lena
 
G: phir uske baad kya karongi?
 
Si: tu mera psp khelena
 
G: uske bad?
 
Am: tv dekh lena
 
G: usk.......
 
She was about to say further when arman cut her off
 
Ar: uske baad, tum mere hospital ajaana, mein tumhe poora hospital dikha donga
 
G: usk.......
 
Sid cuts her off
 
Si: princess, uske baad hum sab ghar pouch jayenge
 
All laughed, later they all went to their places, gunjan was all alone in the big manion, after  hours she went to the hospital, she reached the hospital
 
Scene shifts to the college
 
All of the gang were sitting in the canteen
 
M: sam, plessss mera ek kam karega
 
S: bol dude
 
M: actully,kal mein bhaiya k pas hospital gaya tha to wahan mein apni project ki file hospital mein hi bhool aya, aur aaj project collect karwane hain, please tu ladega, meine bhaiya ko batadia hai wo file bhaiya k pas hai bas ja k collect karni hai, please dude
 
S: ok mein jata hon
 
Sam leaves
 
Scene shifts to gunjan entering the hospital, she goes near the reception
 
She looks at the receptionist, she was a total tomboy,She wor a cap n a big glasses, her cloths were like boys, the girl didnt look at her, she was doing some work with her head down
 
Re: ji kahain, kise milna hai apko
 
G: apke boss se
 
Re: Sorry, hamre boss, bina appointment k nahi milte
 
G: dekhen mujhe mujhe appointment ki zaroorat nahi hai
 
Re: kyun tum prime minister ki beti ho
 
G: nahi, mein dr arman malik ki behen hon
 
The girl looked up, she got scared
 
Re:  ma....ma...madam app. apne pehle kyun nahi bola, unka cabin wahan left pe hai
 
G: pleas bhaiya ko yahan bolado
 
Re: ji mein abhi ayi, jab tak ap mere seat pe bait jain, agar dr malik ko pata chal gaya k humne apki khatir daari achi nai ki to meri naukri to gayi
 
The girl took of her glasses n cap n wen inside
 
Gunjan sat at her place, she was fiddling with things, then she put hr hair up n wore the hat n the bigg glasses
 
Just then sam entered the hospital, he went to the reception
 
S: excuse me, mujhe dr arman malik se milna hai
 
G: sorry nai mil sakte ( acted like the receptionist)
 
S: lekin kyun
 
G: kyun k wo bina appointment k nahi milte
 
S: dekhen mein nke bhai ka dos hon, aur mujhe unki file chaiye
 
Befor she could answer, she saw arman comeing down the corridor talkin with a nurse
 
G: oh shit bhaiya
 
Sam was confused
 
Gunjan took of the cap , her beautiful silky straight hai came down, sam was just looking at her, he was memerized in her beauty, he couldnt take his eyes of her, then she took off the big glasses, sam was just looking at her beautiful green eyes, he was most in her eyes, she is so beautiful he thought, just then arman came upto them
 
G:mein kabse apka wait karahi hon
 
Ar: oh im sory bachi, actully bohot busy hogaya tha
 
Sam came upto arman
 
Ar: file lene aye ho
 
S: yes
 
Arman gave him the file
 
Ar: sorry mere bhai ki waja se takhleef hui apko, waise koi takleef to nai hui na
 
Sam looked at gunjan, who looked scared
 
S: nahi koi takleef nai hui
 
Just then armans phone rang n he went on a side
 
S: waise acting achi karleti ho
 
He said this n went from their, gunjan just smiled
 
Arman was back, just then ridhima came
 
R: gunjan
 
Gunjan hugged her
 
G: bhabhi, apko hamesha kaise pata chalta hai k mein agayi
 
R: meine  tujhe bachpan se pala hai, to mujhe nai pata chalega to kisko pata chalega
 
G: i liove you both
 
Ar + R: we love u too
 
Then they show her the hospital n the later they all go home
 
 
 
End
ok guy thanks alot for your comments, hope you all like it
n let me tell u all that this is a sajan story, th other characters are the side characters but this is a sajan story ook
Enjoy
love you all
 
 
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Miracle_sweet

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Posted: 25 February 2010 at 2:59pm | IP Logged
Awesome update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
But now i'm a little confused???
Dont sajan know each other already????? well nevmind ill look at the charecter scketch again
ok thanxs for the marvelous update!!!!
Mira

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Posted: 25 February 2010 at 3:09pm | IP Logged
Cool! I liked it! saJan meeting was really cool!!! plz continue soon! And do PM me!!!

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