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kweetrockstar

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Posted: 25 February 2010 at 12:45am | IP Logged
wow Sonal
amazing
all teh hotties in 1 family,
btw, why did mayank n nupur elope to marry, did armaan not agree to their marriage,
seems armaan is the kind of bad guy, n i cant bear it, lol,
anyways, loved the concept,
do cont soon.
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 25 February 2010 at 1:17am | IP Logged
its really nicee...plzzz sonal do continuee soon n pm me....

charmee_sammy

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Posted: 25 February 2010 at 1:25am | IP Logged
aweome character sketch dear...!!!
awww...wow its based on my sajan..!!!Smile
wow..tia n rangveer as pair..actually missed dem togerther after remix..!!
seems interesting..
plz cont soon..
thanx for d pm...!!


Edited by charmee_sammy - 25 February 2010 at 1:28am

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Posted: 25 February 2010 at 1:29am | IP Logged
love alot add me to ur PM list n cont soon
thanxs for PM

dmg_fanatic

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Posted: 25 February 2010 at 2:34am | IP Logged
heyy dear...
 
interesting concept...
and AR married..../
 
pls continue soon
 
and pm me is possible
 
lots of love
kavya

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Posted: 25 February 2010 at 4:13am | IP Logged
wonderful character sketch can't wait to read more
Sheetal

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Posted: 25 February 2010 at 4:35am | IP Logged
woowww!!! many charactrers in one ff...m very excited....lovely charactersketch....plz pm me when u update....

sweetsonal156

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Posted: 25 February 2010 at 4:55am | IP Logged
PART 1
 
We see a guy in white cloths, wwe cant see his face, he is in hospital giving everybody mithai, he was soo happy for some reason, everybody was just looking at him, then he went to the childrens ward, he gave lots of chocolets to the kids n went from there, then he went to the oldies room, he gave very single peson a mithai, he gave the peon  the mithai
 
Peon: dr saab, ap y mithai holi ki khushi mein de rahe hain, yaha kuch aur bat hai
 
Guy: dono hi samjh lo, aaj mein bohot khush hon
 
Peon: Matlab
 
Guy: matlab ye k aaj bhachi wapis arahi hai
 
Peon: arman beta, gunjan beta wapis arahi hai
 
Yes guys it was non other than arman
 
Ar: ji han, meri behen wapis arahi hai usa se
 
Scene shifts
 
A girl enters in white cloths in the hospital, giveing flowers to everyone, she gives to the nurses
 
Nurse: kyun beta, aaj itni khush ho
 
Girl: han aaj mein bohot khush hon
 
She went from there, she saw arman n went upto him, he had his back on him
 
Girl: mujhe mithai nai doge?
 
Arman turned around
 
Ar: ridhima
 
It was ridhima
 
R: han
 
Arman put mithai in her mouthn she gave him a flower
 
Ar: tum kyun itni khush ho
 
R: kyunke aaj, meri bachi wapis arahi hai
 
Ar: meri bhi?
 
They both hugged
 
Ar: ghar chalen, sari holi ki arrangements hogayi hogi
 
They went to the malik mansion
 
Malik mansion
 
A girl was shouting at a man
 
Girl: arre bhai ap ek kam dhang se nai kar sakte, wo flowers theek tarah lagayen
 
Man: arre madam sahi to lagen hain
 
Gir: arre, jitna kaha hai utna karo, pata nahi kahan kahan se ajate hain
 
Just then 2 other girls came from her back
 
Girl 1: arre nupur, usne sahi tarah to lagyi hain
 
She turned around, it was non other than our chulbuli nupur
 
N: arre nahi, dekho na sajeeda, kahan phool lagaraha hai
 
It was sajeeda
 
Sa: ofho, bhai ap apna kam karen, nupur tum mere sath chalo
 
Th both girls pulled nupur to the kichen
 
Girl2: arre kabhi to shant hojaya kar, jab dekho chik chik karti rehti hai
 
N: tu chup kar niki, tujhe nai pata wo admi ko to mein nahi chorungi
 
Yes it was out cute niki, nupur was the smallest bahu of malik family butshe didnt call sajeeda n niki bhabhi cause they were same age as her n they were friends too
 
Ni: acha baba sorry, shant hoja
 
N: kaise shant hojaon, aaj gunjan anne wali hai, aur yahan per abhi bhi tayarian baki hai
 
Sa: ofho nupur, sab hojayga, tu bas shanti rakh
 
A Guy came from the back
 
Guy: han nupur shanti rakho
 
N: tu to chup hi reh, tu subha se kahan tha
 
Guy: sorry madam, wo mein apni cute sister k liye gift lene gaya tha
 
N: oh, waise sid, humh bhi to batou, kya layi ho gunjan k liye
 
It was sid
 
Si: sorry nupur, jab gunjan kholegi tab dekh lena
 
Arman n ridhima joined them
 
N: arre bhaiya, bhabhi ap dono agayi
 
Ar: han nupur, agayi
 
R: tum sab ki tayrian hogayi na
 
N: han bas, sari tayarian khatam hone waali hain
 
Ar: good, yeh mayank aur amir kahan hai
 
Sa: bhaiya, wo dono college gayen hain, bas ate hi honge
 
Ar: acha
 
Scene shifts to the college
 
It a holi party in the collge, everybody is enjoying the party, two guys were standing in a corner
 
Guy1: mayank ghar chalen, bhaiya agaen honge
 
It was our handsome mayank
 
M: arre chalten hain na, samrat abhi tak nahi aya, aur tujhe ghar jaane ki paari hai
 
Guy1: to kya karon, bhaiya ne hamhe jaan se mar dalna hai
 
M: amir chill, gunjan sham ko aygi, abhi bohot waqt hai sham hone mein
 
It was our sweet amir
 
Am: theek hai
 
Just then we see a guy coming, he goes near the colours, he get the red colur n puts it on his forhead, he has his back on us
 
Just then three guys comes n stands beside him n sings, they turn around, it ws benji, uday n adhiraj
 
 
B:  Wanna Jalwa …
U: I wanna jalwa…
 
The guy, turns around, it non other than out hot n cool dude sam
 
Sam: Yahan bhi hoga wahan bhi hoga
 1 2 3 4 ..
 Break it down

Sam: Yahan bhi hoga wahan bhi hoga ( he puts one hand on udays )
           Ab to saare jahaan mein hoga  ( and one hand on benjis shoulder)
           Kya… mera hi jalwa ( he gives a pucnh on adhirajs arm)
           Mera hi jalwa ( they all dance, as salman, in wanted)
           Arey yahan bhi hoga wahan bhi hoga
           Ab to saare jahaan mein hoga
           Kya…mera hi jalwa
           Mera hi jalwa

Adh:  (Alright to the rhythm and the beats so high
          Tera jalwa jalwa hai right
          To the rock n roll from mine) — 2
          Jalwa… just jalwa … aahan

Sam: Aata nahi hai mujko ke vaade se peeche hatt jaoon ( he has one girl in one side)
           Arey aata nahi hai mujko ke vaade se peeche hatt jaoon ( and one girl on the other side)
           Yaaro yehi hai vaada ke vaade pe apne mitt jaoon 
           Mere jeenay ka jeenay ka dangh hai ( he gets colour in his hand )
           Arrey mera apna apna bas ik rang hai ( he throws the colour at all the boys)
           Mera hi jalwa ( dances like salman)
           Mera hi jalwa
B:        1 2 3 4 …
            Break it down ( they all dance with him)
            Mera hi jalwa
            Break it down… yeh yeh yeh yo man

U:  Jalwa… jalwa …

Sam:  Aaja tujhe batlaa du ke yeh duniya kaise jukti hai ( he puts his arm around udays shoulder)
            Arey aaja tujhe batlaa du ke yeh duniya kaise jukti hai
           Meri tara ho jigraah to yeh duniya usse darti hai ( he stands on the stage n points toward everyone)
            Aandhi toofan jo mujh se takraaye ( he backs off the boys)
            Arey mere aage koi tik na paaye ( he comes infront of the boys n all of them back off)
            Mera hi jalwa ( he dances like salman
            1 2 3 4

Sam: Yahan bhi hoga wahan bhi hoga ( all the boys come on the both sides)
           Ab to saare jahaan mein hoga ( all of the boys at th back of him) B:Kya!!...............................                                                                                                                                                                  

..............................................
 
Ad:     tera hi jalwa ( points towards sam) 
B        Tera hi jalwa ( points towads sam)
U:       Tera hi jalwa ( all point towards sam)
All:     (Alright to the rhythm and the beats so high
Sam:  Tera jalwa jalwa hai right ( points to himself)
           To the rock n roll from mine) ( all dance)
 
End
 
ok guys, hope you all like it
enjoy
i will cont soon
thankyou all 4 ur awsome comments
love you allllll
 
From sonal
 
 

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