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05/23- Garv,Angad,Karan,kkavya talk! (Page 3)

~aashka~rocks~ IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 21 November 2005 at 9:26pm | IP Logged
omg plz cont soon!
u no me im soooo impatient LOL

~aashka~rocks~ IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 21 November 2005 at 9:27pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by Garv_Kumud_4eva

Originally posted by ~aashka~rocks~

omg!! its really great!
when r u gonna cont ur other garv and kumud one sammu(ritika here)

i don't think i will continue. i don't know ritika, i am really confused whether is hould or not. lol. how are u?

im fine thanx!!

u shuld do like one more part and finish it off cuz then its like abadonedLOL(my chpice of word is bad). i love this fanfic its wicked!

Kumud_Kshitij Goldie

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Posted: 21 November 2005 at 9:40pm | IP Logged
continue soon
RonitPallaviNR IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 23 November 2005 at 12:32pm | IP Logged
thanks guys, i will post the next part soon
RonitPallaviNR IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 23 November 2005 at 2:24pm | IP Logged
Kumud sees Kali and wipes her tears immediately. Kali comes to Kumud and asks her whats wrong? Garv is also there.

Kali: Kumud, Whats wrong?
Kumud: Nothing, Garv just told me a joke! It was so funny that I almost cried.
Kali: weird!
Kumud: Anyways, are u leaving?
Kali: Yea, Papa and ma just left. I was gonna leave with u. So?
Kumud: Yea, I think we should leave.

Anjali comes along.

Anjali: Whats up guys?
Kumud: I think we will leave now.
A: but kkusum aunty and uncle are still here.
Ku: I know but I have to get up early tomorrow.
A: well then, Garv bhaiya, why don't u drop em home.
G: Yea, sure.
Ku: no its ok, Kali and I will manage.
G: don't be ridiculous Kumud, I will drop u both home.

Kumud is still upset with Garv, and thinks he doesn't like her, despite his telling her that he does like her, but is not able to go out with her because of Kshitij, who is his good friend.

Kali on the other hand is also attracted to Garv. She thinks that he is nicest, sweetest and the most handsome guy she has ever met. Lol. Both Kumud and Kali are fida over him. Kali is a nice girl in my version. Lol.

Garv takes the car out of the garage, and Kali sits in the front seat. Garv decides to drop Kumud first because he doesn't want kshitij to see kumud with him when he drops kali. He doesn't want to create misunderstandings between him and Kshitij and make matters worse.

Kumud on the other hand misunderstands garv even more, and starts hating him, I mean she thinks that he is not worth her love. She knows she likes him, but from now pretend like she doesn't give a damn about him. Lol.

Garv and Kumud share their stares, I mean kumud looks at garv through the rear view mirror but stops when she sees garv looking at her. There is absolutely no conversation between the three of them, mostly because Kali is tired and because of the thing that happened between kumud and garv.

They reach the Kapoor House and Kumud gets out.

Ku: Bye Kali!
Kali (who is kinda sleepy ) Bye!
G: Bye Kumud.

Just completely ignores him and walks away. Garv feels bad. He goes ahead and drops kali home. Kshitij is sitting outside on the stairs and Garv comes out of his car with Kali.

Kali: Thanks Garv
G: no Problem Kali! Good night!
Kali: (smiles and says good night too)

Kshitij is still upset, Kali says good night to him too and goes in the house. Garv comes and sits besides Kshitij.

G: Mujshe naraaz ho dost?
Ks: Nahin, apne aap se.
G: Come on KShitij, cheer up.
Ks: Garv, I like her but she likes someone else and its none other than my good friend, how can I handle this.
G: Listen, Kshitij. I am not gonna come between the two of u.
Ks: I know Garv, that u wouldn't do anything to hurt me, but ...
G: But what!
Ks: do u like her?
G: Naa, she is not my type.
Ks laughs
Ks: not ur type. What exactly is ur type?
G: I will tell u some other time, right now its kinda late buddy. Don't worry kumud and u will definitely hook up. I guarantee.
Ks: are u gonna play Will Smith, u know the movie Hitch.

They both laugh.
G: yea, sure.
Ks: Garv, thanks.
G: For what.
Ks: being a good friend.
G: come on yaar, tere liye toh jaan bhi haazir hai.
Ks: chal fimi dialogue band kar
They both hug.
G: Kshitij, I will talk to you later.
Ks: Yea, take care.
G: U doing fine, naa. Don't worry about it.
Ks: I am fine.
G: bye.

Garv leaves. Kumud on the other hand has made the decision to go out with kshitij.
RonitPallaviNR IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 23 November 2005 at 2:41pm | IP Logged
The next morning. (Sunday).

Karan calls Nandini on her cell phone

K: hey nandu.
N: Nandu.. ewww? Whose this?
K: Its me, your gonna be husband, Karan kapoor.
N: Karan are u outta ur mind? You just called me Nandu.
K: kyun, acha nahi laga tumhara nick name. Come on its cute.
N: Cute? Are u kidding me. Karu?
K: Karu, so sweet. From now on call me Karu okay?
N: Ok enough of this sweetness, tell me why u called?
K: Remember our date?
N: Oh yea! Its tonight naa?
K: Yea, so be ready at 7.
N: I will be there.
K: Be where?
N: On our date.
K: Nandu, this is not a business meeting, this is our romantic date. So I am going to come pick u up. Got it. Is this like the first time u are going out with someone?
N: Don't try to be smart with me, and its none of ur business to know whether this is my first date or not.
K: it is, I know it.
N: Shut up or else I will hang up.
K: sooner or later I will find out, but yea, be ready at 7. Bye jaan.
N: Jaan, Nandu? What the hell is wrong with you.
K: I am just expressing my love yaar.
N: Please don't. I am busy now.
K: Busy thinking about me?
N: u are sooooooo..
K: So cute, handsome, charming, talented, funny...?
N: none of those.
K: What is your problem yaar, always ready to fight?
N: Ok I am sorry. I have to go now.
K: Yea ok.
N: Bye Karu. (she says its sweetly)
K: BYeeee nandu (he says it sweetly too)

Anjali is watching Nandini talk like this to Karan, she is like meri behan sudhar gayi lol. Nandini sees Anju and immediately disconnects the phone.

Next part coming in like 10 minutes.
calichick35 Senior Member

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Posted: 23 November 2005 at 2:59pm | IP Logged
oo i just started readin it 2day! and omg..its just smashin! woww...i cant even say it in words! lolz
i totally luv it!
luv da storyline!!
keep up the wicked work!

RonitPallaviNR IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 23 November 2005 at 3:32pm | IP Logged
thanks Jyothi. I appreciate the nice comments that u have given about the ff. I will continue it. And thanks for calling me hilarious, lol in nimmu's group. Wink


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