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pRiDa FF- AN UNTOLD STORY updtd pg21(part7) (Page 4)

Ankita_88 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 28 February 2010 at 7:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jyoti06

The intro of the characters and first part of your FF sounds very very interesting..also I loved the storyline a continue soonEmbarrassed

well thanks di.will be updating very soon.

Edited by jhinki143 - 28 February 2010 at 7:17am

Ankita_88 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 28 February 2010 at 7:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aparajhita

hey frnd...........this is fab man!
the unfold story........the title itself is very interesting.........saket and!

the storyline is brilliant
do continue soon and dont 4get 2 pm meSmile

thanks and dont worry.vll pm u soon
Ankita_88 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 28 February 2010 at 7:31am | IP Logged

@jakhushi – thanks and vll update asap.


@lifez_beautiful – I knw tht we can miss prithvi but u knw it will be gud 2 find out other characters name in d form of gaucha.


@maz. – thanks.


@cool_rads – u will be able 2 knw abt MU……..just keep patience.


@sonika.d – yeah I will…..just keep patience.


@rankanrock – hey maham , thanks yaar. And 4 ur kind info , our aditi is not as poor as u guys mite be thinking.she z desperate , bold and beautiful.


@tina-saigal2002 – its ok..u commented. I m happy with tht.


@456kv – awwwh harshad is my fav tooo.vll be updating asap.


@champakiran – thanks.


@snehakapoor – awwh thank u so much.


@nidiz – I m updating asap….dnt worry and I gonna take an active participation to make prida popular in this forum too.

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Ankita_88 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 05 March 2010 at 12:26pm | IP Logged




The house is in hustle and bustle. People are running from one direction to another as tomorrow is the engagement day of d eldest child of dis house . Aryan sighania . all are very happy and busy with last minute preparation . we can see two women are busy selecting ornaments.


Guys I have forgot to introduce SAKET's mom suman saxena . she z namrata's best frnd and karan sighania used to be saket's dad best friend so they are quite close to each other.


Suman : hey namrata , wht abt dis one ? she shows this set.

Namrata : no suman  , this one is not so gorgeous . I want sumthing heavy .after all , its gonna be for kripa my elder son's fiance . I want sumthing different .


Suman : u r still now so choosy when it cums to ur dresses and accessories . now u r treating like this !!!!!! wht will happen when u will prepare for ur daughter's marriage ?? only god knows . she chuckles.


Namrata : when my daughter will be engaged , I will definitely be more choosy but before that I need to understand her . she has totally changed . I can't understand wht she wants and wht has changed her so much . once she used to burgain with all the things , but now whtever u give , she just accepts usually . our actual aditi is missing . we need 2 find her . we have lost our chatter-box . she sighs .


Namrata suddenly watches tht aditi is walking down through stairs . namrata calls "aditi"


Aditi : yes mom .

Namrata : cum here , sit .

Aditi : no mom , I m fine . u tel why have u called me ? I m in ahurry . I have 2 go to the flower shop to decorate house .

Namrata : who to baad mein v ho jayega . abhi time hain aur ayush aur shiv hain na !!!! they will help u .

Aditi : yeah its ok . but still I'd luv 2 do it by my own .anyways , u tel me why r u calling me.

Namrata : because I want you to select some jewelleries . its your brother's engagement and u have 2 select.


Aditi : no mom , its fine. I already have so many jewellery sets . so don't need it.


Namrata : why ??pehle to tu har hafte mein accessory kharid ne k liye taiyar rehti thi aur aab jab ki tere bhai ki shaadi hain , tab tu kuchh v nahin kharid rahi hain ? aisa kyun ?


Aditi ; no mom , actually already have a lot so don't need it.


Namrata : I knw there is sumthing but u will not tell me . I know tht.


Aditi : no mom , nothing like tht . everything is fine bas I m in a hurry.


       Aditi kisses on namrata's cheek and says "goodbye mom , goodbye aunty."

Aditi leaves.

        Namrata  remembers-

"aditi just shut up , ok ?"

" no mom , I can't . I want this earring . plz I want no argument ."

"are namrata , why r u saying no to my daughter? What's wrong ? c'on aditi , I will give u wht u want . after all u r my only daughter."

"karan , u have destroyed my daughter . don't give her everything what she wants ."

" c'on mom , why r u saying tht my dad is destroying me ? my bestest dad nvr do such things."

"I know tht . tell me when u bought last earring? Last week na ? then wht is d necessity of buying another one rite now."

"oh mom , it was last weeeeeeeeek means 7 days means 168 hrs means 10080 minutes means 604800 seconds . O My god , O My God , O My God.its been a decade . how can I think of not buying anything in these much time ????? how did I do tht?"

     Hearing these , all starts laughing .



a drop of Tear falls from namrata's eyes remembering those conversations.

Suman : namrata ???? where have u lost? R u there?

Namrata : yes I m very much here .

Suman : thinking about aditi rite??

Namrata : hmmm

Suman(pressing her hand) : don't worry everything vll be alrite .

Namrata : I hope so .

Suman : ok now see , wht about dis one . she shows dis one .

Namrata : this is awesum . chalo yeh le lete hain.

Suman : so you finally managed .

Namrata : hmmmmm.

Suman : I knw aditi's behaviour is bothering you . but don't worry she is matured . she mite has sum problem but I think she does not wanna share all these things to elders . but I think kripa knows everything . after all she is her best frnd.

Namrata : in fact I think so . I need to talk to kripa .

Suman : and then , saket is cuming today . I will tell him to talk to aditi . they were very gud frnds .sayad aditi use kuchh bataye .

Namrata : haan , I know . waise saket ki bhi toh engagement honewali hain na? waise kab plan hain ?

Suman : I don't know . In fact I don't like simran . pata nahin usme usse kya dikh gayak who usse shaaadi karma chahta hain !!!!! she z not at all well-behaved . she z very rude and arrogant . I really don't like her.

Namrata : so abhi se u r disliking ur daughter ' in ' law ??????? hmmmmmm??? its not gud sign..

Suman : no suman , I can judge human being . she z really not a gud girl . if its kripa or aditi , I will definitely say nthng becoz they care elders' emotions but this girl does nt seem 2 gve respect 2 fact I wanted aditi to become my daughter ' in ' law . but seems like god doesn't want fact I think , saket does not love simran but still I can't understand why he wants 2 marry tht girl .

Namrata : ok ok leave it . abhi v bohot saare kam hain . waise when will be saket reaching?

Suman : I think he shud reach till 12 noon.

Namrata : chalo abhi toh sirf 9 30 hain.

Next scene

Aditi on her phone ..

"kripa , I m feeling very much scared ."

Kripa(played by neha bamb) :

"don't worry aditi , everything will be fine . u just be happy and do not pay attention . everything will be alrite."

Aditi : I m just very much tensed . after 3 long years , he is cuming before me . oh god , I just can't stand it .

Kripa : don't worry at all . after all , shiv and ayush will be there . so no need to worry .

Aditi : ok ok , I m talking to u later . now u plzzz crry on ur talk with Aryan . he mite be missing you .

On the otherside , kripa blashes .

Aditi : cha lab zyada blush mat kar , phone rakh .

Kripa : bye .

Kripa says to herself : how aditi , how ???? everytime u keep ur sorrows after urur family regarding tht jerk(saket) !!!! why u face ur sorrows only by ur own?/why don't u let anyone to support you?why? family's happiness and u don't let me to talk to

She sighs. And suddenly her mobile rings . "Aryan calling" appears on the display screen.

Kripa : hey.

Aryan(played by iqbal khan) :

hey sweety ,kisse baat kar rahi thi?

Kripa : mmmmm.... d closest person in my life.

Aryan : wht? Accept me , who can be ur closest?

Kripa : hain koi, secret hain . nahin keh sakti.

Aryan : its my order to my soon-to-be-wife tht she shud disclose her secret with her husband.

Kripa : I don't want . and who the hell r u to give mr permission or order or sumthing like tht?

Aryan : hey plz tell me na , in fact why m I argueing !!!!! I know u were talking to aditi .

Kripa : so u have finally caught us .

Aryan : hmmm and there is more things b/w u and aditi which I need to catch up and I promise tht I will catch it someday .

Kripa(becomes conscious ) : oh cum on darling there is nothing like tht .

Aryan : u knw wht kripa ? I knw u more than urself so just stop lying to me. I did never forced you and vll never force u. I will find it by myself .

Kripa : I know dear . in fact I too know u more than urself.we both know each other more than ourselves.i luv u becoz of this yaaar. U know I m d luckiest girl in d whole world to get such an understanding hubby like you.

Aryan : baatein ghumana toh koi tumse sikhe . u always changes the topic when I wanna talk abt it . chalo bye . i love you .

Kripa : I love you tooo .

 She cuts the phn and tells in her mind :

I know Aryan , I know. I can understand ur feelings for aditi . par agar who sab baatein bahar aa gaye toh saare rishtey ulajh jayenge aur aditi will think tht she is responsible for all these things jo ki main nahin chahti . u don't know Aryan how much pain she bears in her heart .aaj usse kaisa feel ho raha hoga sirf wohi jaanti hain.she sighs.

[ok guys , here is the next part . at first i want apology from all of you . actually i have becum late 2 post but next time i will update very soon. so sorry 4 being late actually xams thi aur result v nikkal gaya kahin saare xams ke . so i was having jhatke pe jhatka was nt ready to write FFs . i m really sorry.]




Edited by jhinki143 - 05 March 2010 at 12:34pm

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Sia889 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 05 March 2010 at 12:52pm | IP Logged
sorry for the late ...already read it couldnt comment
it was v  nice
good going
keep up the god work

Edited by sia88 - 29 March 2010 at 9:28am
jakhushi IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 05 March 2010 at 3:09pm | IP Logged
Jhinki very nice...
now quickly make Gaucha meet yeir. Ohhh I meant Aditi & saket... I am waiting with bated breadth for that partEmbarrassed.....
Waiting for fireworks when they meet after so many years.

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sam. IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 05 March 2010 at 10:07pm | IP Logged
Gr8 update jhinkiSmile,waiting for saket and aditi to meet now.
jyothi_cool IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 06 March 2010 at 1:08am | IP Logged
wow jhinki awesome story cont soon

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