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.Aparajhita.

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Posted: 17 May 2010 at 12:37am | IP Logged
Jhinki,

Awesome update friend
The length was perfect

AR- They are adorable. Their chemistry is mind-blowing. And i loved the way in which Kripa scolded Aryan. That was too cuteLOL.

SAKET- So now, he is finally repenting for his acts, good!
But his habit of jumping to conclusions has done it again. god when will he understand!.
But now i am glad he started understanding his feelings for aditi. Yes man he loves her.
He was not able to make out whether Aditi is jealous or not, but ofcourse she was not, because she is perfect and far more better than Simran, so why should she.?

ADITI- i just hope she is able to forgive Saket and throws out Simran from Saket's life.

The song sequence was awesome. Loved it!

Continue ASAP

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Posted: 17 May 2010 at 1:40am | IP Logged
Awesome update, Jhinki. Loved how you put all the emotions to words... I really hope Saket Aditi get together soon, and that Simran does a vanishing act. LOL And I loved the dance. Star Update soon.
 
- Ishaan

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Posted: 17 May 2010 at 2:03am | IP Logged
Hey Ankita,

really sorry for not commenting..
I read 1st 2 parts but then lost the track of the FF...
was really bz...
but now i will complete it & then comment Big smile
Thnx for the pm..

1st 2 parts were really amazing.. like it..
keep up the good work..Thumbs Up

love khakshan

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Posted: 17 May 2010 at 3:35am | IP Logged
lovely part dear cont soon

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Posted: 17 May 2010 at 3:41pm | IP Logged
What I love about your writing, is the attention to detail.  I have always believed that beauty lies in the details, so for me your writing is just phenomenal. Some ff are just people's fantasies in writing, which I find quite intrusive and uninviting...however with yours there are depths for me to drown in...Loved it!!!StarStarStar
Thanks Ankita for sharing! ClapClapClap


Okay, now for my highlights of this part...

deep down he knows the fact that he cannot live without aditi.he breathes aditi,he feels aditi.all his mind is occupied by her but he has decided to ignore the fact.let's see how many days he ignores the fact.
This was beautifully heart wrenching...then that poking taunt at the then...LOLI didn't know whether to laugh or cry, so I did both...Embarrassed

Aryan : jab dekh hi raha hain toh pooch kyun raha hain.
nice sass!

Saket who was listening to kripa's blabbering for a long time and battling with his emotions in his mind has now became aware of the fact that aditi has come and his pair of eyes automatically moves to the stairs through which aditi is coming.
good line! Loved it, simple but catches your attention at its detailed implications.

The whole song choreography....ClapClapClapStarStarStarJust outstanding! loved it!

Love Sabah




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Posted: 18 May 2010 at 8:03am | IP Logged
Gr8 update Jhinki.
Loved Aryan's reaction on seeing kripa in her wedding outfit.LOL!! Also loved saket-aditi interaction during the dance:))

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Posted: 19 May 2010 at 11:17am | IP Logged
looovely ... awesoeme.... superb..........fantastic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 21 May 2010 at 8:01am | IP Logged
wowie dear !! i can imagine CS lukjn like a doll !! hahah.. saket aka pri cudnt take his eyes n thots off her ?? arrey yeh tho hona hi tha !!! hehehe...

gud im likn Shiv too !! lets make dat saket fella suffer !! muwahahha.. okies dat sounds *** wicked *** :D.. hehhe.. bt cant b helpd.. he made mah aditi cry !! hmmpf ! mLOL !!

waitng 4 d nxt update !~!!!! soonnnnnnnnn...!! :)

-Luv Niki !

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