pRiDa FF- AN UNTOLD STORY updtd pg21(part7) - Page 5

Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by pridafan


Loving it but hoa tha kya i m geting impatient
Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome job Jhinki πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Waiting for more 😳

Jhan
Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update. Looking forward to reading the next part. I am sorry I am late to comment I just checked my mail today. So please continue with this ff. πŸ‘ πŸ‘
Posted: 14 years ago
Gr8 update jhinki😊Waiting for the next part and really curious to know the reason as to why saket-aditi broke up.
Posted: 14 years ago
Great updates Jhinki.....awesome.....
πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
 
Wondering what happened between Saket and Aditi and why they broke up....
 
Guess am late sorry abt that.....
 
Good going ....will wait for the next updates.....
 
 
 
 
Posted: 14 years ago
ahaaaa!!!!
dis part was de best dear....short and sweet.......i cn imagine saket in dis scene, only saket☺️
and den it starts again.......dat holding businessπŸ˜†
i luv pri 4 dis onlyπŸ˜†

update it soon....
Posted: 14 years ago
Jhinki,
 
Khub shundor lekha hoyecheπŸ˜›.
 
Very very nice. They finally meet. Now I really glad. The falling & catching has begun....I can totally imagine those in the scene. So inderretta plays shiv here ...😊.
 
Next time please make this a longer scene. I cant wait for Saket & Aditi's interactions.
 
Do update soon dear. And thanks for the PM.
 
 
Khushi.
Posted: 14 years ago
loved all the parts.
just finished catching up with it.
just pm me when you are going to update the fab FF
 
Sid
Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Jhinki.. read both parts... very nice.. hmm so additi has changed alot.... sad that..
liked the 3 part as well.... liked the bit when she calls shiv by sakets name.... and their meeting... nice one... with flowers showering over them.. very nice...
 
thanks for the pm
 
sori for late reply..
 
Maham
Posted: 14 years ago
hey at last i got it
all the parts where very nice....well written
n like the shiv concept

good going palπŸ‘

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