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Posted: 16 February 2010 at 2:46am | IP Logged
nice intro continue soon

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Posted: 16 February 2010 at 7:23am | IP Logged
a very nice start!!!!
wonderfully written!! Hug

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Posted: 16 February 2010 at 7:33am | IP Logged
 
PART 1
Yesterday was their first night

MORNING

 

                                          SUHAANI's dress
S- adhiraj t\uto   
 

S- adhiraj uto na plssssss

A- (whining like a baby) suhaani sone do na

S- pls adhiraj uto.(seeing that he still does not wake up she goes near him and shakes him but still he wont wake up so suhaani gives up her hope and started to leave thet time adhiraj catches her hands and she falls over him

                                                 

A- Suhaani, how r u

S- just lyk I was yesterday

A- no,

S- what

A- I mean u r not the same

S- means

A- yahi kit um jab tak tumhare gale pe mangalsutr pada he us pal tak tum suhaani thi meri GF

Par aaj u r my wife

S-(blushes)

A- haye main to mar gaya

(again she blushes )

A- suhaanni ab kitni blush karogi yeh to sirf episode 1 hain

 

S- ADIRAJ?????

A- ok baba sorry

(suhaani tries to get up that time she finds that her mangalsutr gets stuck to his vest)

A- deka yeh bi nahi chahtha kit um mujhse door raho par tum to paas rehne ki baath tak nahi karti, yeh mangalsutr chatha hain ki main tumse toda romance karoon

S- KYA TUMHE KAL RAATH KAFI NAHI THA

(she says getting angry that time she realizes what she said and she blushes)

A- to tumhe yaad hain ki kal kya hua

S- nahi

A- bhool gayi ho to no probs repetition anytime available hain .

S- chi chi adiraj

(that time she hears BG calling)

BG- suhaani beta jaldi ao

S- AYI BG

S- adhiraj chodo na BG bularahi hian

A-  nahi

S- pls

A- nahi

S- pls

A- nahii

S- pretty pls adhiraj pls BG bula rahi hain

A- tumne BG se shaadi ki hain ya mujse

S- adhiraj chodo na pls tum jo kahoge man wo karoongi

A- sachi

S- haan haan ab chodo na pls

A- tik hain par remember THE KISS

S- ok ok

A- (he frees suhaani that time she gets up and runs from there )

A- SUHAANI

S- srry adhiraj ( she laughes
A- iska badla to main zaroor lunga (he smiles at her and goes to take bath)

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Posted: 16 February 2010 at 7:43am | IP Logged
Verrrrry gooooood.....
I liked IT.....
PLEASE CONT..... Tongue

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Posted: 16 February 2010 at 7:50am | IP Logged
woho!!!! too good yaar!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 16 February 2010 at 7:59am | IP Logged
nice one!!!
continue soon....

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Posted: 16 February 2010 at 8:03am | IP Logged
too good
loved it
loved suhanni's dress
plz continue soon
thanx for the pm
 

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Posted: 16 February 2010 at 8:04am | IP Logged
hey  sneha

awesome update

par thoda short tha...........

anyway keep rocjing

love pebo




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