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Posted: 19 February 2010 at 10:13pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

wonderful update. loved it.

loved the part when naina dar gayi cat se.
loved the way raj giving her promise....so true...
raj is too naughty....


Naina bhi na kitna darti hai, socho ek cat ne kitna kamaal kar diya jo Naina ne kabhi nahi kaha vo bhi aaj keh diya. Wink Wink Wink
Thanks a lot dear
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Posted: 19 February 2010 at 10:21pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by saanch_69

First n foremost...........

A many congratulations for your win dearSmile
Thanks Saanchu, happy to see ur reply on my fic. Big smile Big smile Big smile

The scene was really good, I enjoyed it lots. At first I thought where would he wear the towel but then the rain did wonders
Yeah, every thing has his unique importance na, so as the rain h it made the environment. Wink Wink Wink

the rain or the cat??? am confused Embarrassed Embarrassed True how can Naina be scared of a cat LOL LOL
Are yaar har jagah apna Army ka hisab nahi ho sakta na. LOL LOL LOL Ek cat ne kitne problems solve kar di na. LOL LOL LOL

Thanks to the Cat deary haha

Keep going Smile


Thanks a lot sweet heart, i am so much happy to get ur reply here. Approve Approve Approve

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Posted: 19 February 2010 at 10:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mayadika11

awesooooooooome...........
superb...........
excellent..........


Thanks a lot Preeti. Day Dreaming Day Dreaming Day Dreaming

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Posted: 20 February 2010 at 12:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Lion_Priya

hey vertika congrats dear...
Thank u Priya jee. Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed
 
as usalll...very nice plot...!!! as usall isiliye bola...kyoun ki hamesha se tere sare plot badhe achhe hote hain...aur tu unhe bade achhe se likh bhi leti hai...
Pata nahi, mujhe to kabhi aisa nahi laga, kahin tu mujhe chane k jhaad pe to nahi chada rahi hai na. LOL LOL LOL
 
raj aur naina dono hi ek dushre se pyar karte the...par kabhi kah hi nahi paye...chalo achha hua ki towel aur cat ne yeh kaam karwa diya...
Sahi baat hai yaar, kabhi kabhi choti choti cheejin bhi bahut kaam aati hain na. Wink Wink Wink
 
mujhe cats se bilkul bhi darr nahi lagta...hamare ghar me pahle 3 the...abhi ek bhi nahi...!!! lekin haan naina ka darna jayaz hai...kyoun ki andheron me cats bade darwane lagte hain...kisi horror movie ki tarah...
Haan ye to baat sahi hai, mujhe cats jara bhi nahi pasand hain ConfusedConfused Confused. Par Naina k liye to bahut accha hua ki cat aayi yahan pe. Tongue Tongue Tongue
 
aur tere bich bich k awesome lines k kya kahna...'ek vaada aur ek sach...n all...jo bhi Raj ne naina ko kaha...naina ne raj se kha...voh sabhi...
Kya baat hai, mujhe nahi pata tha ki ek simple se line mere readers ko itne pasand aane waali hai. Wink Wink Wink
 
ab jyada tarif nahi karungi...varna tu bhaav khane lagegi aur tere fics par aur bhi late ud karegi...
Nahi yaar, aisa kabhi nahi hoga bus thoda time kam rehta hai isliye timely comment nahi de paati hoon. Wink Wink Wink
 
luv
Priya


Thanks sweety so much, tere comment k bina poora kaise hota ye OS na.Smile Smile Smile Mujhe lagta hai agar tu saath na hoti to aaj mai yahan na hoti. Day Dreaming Day Dreaming Day Dreaming
Love u n take care
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Posted: 20 February 2010 at 12:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweet_shona

hiii Vertika....
so this ws ur story...so lovely.."vaada".....
raj proposed naina in a very diff n romantic way.... with "vaada'... to be there with her in the whole life....!!!..soo romantic....
awesome, mindblowing story......Hug


Thank u dear tum sab k support se hi mai itna likh paa rahi hoon sucessfully warna shayad abhi tak mai likhna chod chuki hoti.Smile Smile Smile


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Posted: 21 February 2010 at 9:53pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by guglu088

Hi Vertika...

First of all congrats on winning. You deserved it.
Hello dear and thanks a lot Smile Smile Smile

And now... about this OS... it was loveeeeeeeeeeeeelllllyyyyyyyyyyy!!!
thank u again sweety Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed

Yaar mai bahut khush hun ki tumne isse yahan post kiya hai...

Naina ko Raj hot laga... well koi shak nahi hai... wo hai hi hot.Wink
Isiliye to kiya tha ki tum sab khush raho. LOL LOL LOL Yeah that's true that he is hot. Approve
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Acha hua Naina billi se darti hai... warna usse Raj ko towel me dekhne ka mauka nahi milta aur na hi usse Raj hot lagta.Wink
Sach me, aur baaki ka sach bhi jabaan pe nahi aata kabhi. Wink Wink Wink

Aur Raj ne usse ek Vadaa kiya... ek vadaa aur ek sach... beautiful.ClapClapClap
thanks Big smile Big smile Big smile

Mujhe wo line bhi achi lagi jab naina ne kaha ki Raj ko jaane bhi nahi degi. Mujhe humesha se hi Naina ke muh se ye dialogue sunna pasand hai... kash ki LRL me vo ye baat kehti... instead of aap mujhe kabhi chod ke nahi jayenge.Day Dreaming
Haan yaar, kuch aisa hi maine bhi expect kiya tha but Raj k serial chodte hi dil toot gaya. Ouch Ouch Ouch

Great job...

Love
Guglu


Thanks dear, tum saare doston k pyaar aur wishes se mai abhi aage bhi likhti rahoongi. Approve Approve Approve

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Posted: 08 March 2010 at 8:22am | IP Logged
hii vertika.. Big smile main bhi kitni stupid hoon na.. mujhe jabtak OS ka matlab pata nahi chala tabtak maine uss link ko open karke bhi nahi dekha.. ROFL shayad meri bewakufiyon ki koi limit hi nahi hai.. ROFL acha hua tune aaj mujhe pm karke OS ka matlab bata diya warna main toh iske bare main bhul hi gayi thi.. aur apni bewakufi aur bhulne ki adat ki wajah se itna cute romantic story miss kar deti.. Angry

its was sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo nice sweetieeeee.. Clap i loved raj's VAADA to naina.. Clap every line was mindblowing specially the ek sach ek vaada.. Clap

naina soldier hoke cat se darti hai LOL waise soldier hai to iska matlab yeh to nahi hai na ki use cats se hi fight karni hai.. ConfusedLOLLOL isliye uska cat se darna bilkul jayaz hai..Thumbs UpLOL waise bhi agar woh cat se na darti to kaise keh pati raj ko ki he loooks hottt Wink i loved der confession.. Embarrassed


thanks for posting it here and ofcourse thanks for telling me the meaning of OS LOLLOLBig smile


love
nandini Big smile

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Posted: 03 September 2010 at 5:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shaina_b

Congratulations on winning the award!!!!!!Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap

You deserved it and I had guessed it was written by you!!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap

Raj has brought Naina where she had always wanted to come!!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile

This song from Veer-Zaara would have been apt for this situation!!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile

Lahraati Hui Raahein,
Khole Hue Hain Baanhein
Yeh Hum Aa Gaye Hain Kahaan
Palkon Pe Gahre Halke,
Hai Reshmi Dhundhlake Ke
Yeh Hum Aa Gaye Hain Kahaan... Smile

Woh sab kuch bhool ke kho jaana chahta hai in waadiyon mein Naina ke saath!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed

Abhi tak jo Raj ne nahi kaha tha ab woh sab kuch Raj Naina se kehna chahta hai!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Thumbs Up Thumbs Up Thumbs Up Thumbs Up

Usne apni feelings ko bahut dino tak chupaya hai magar ab koi bandhan nahi hai!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile Smile

Raj Naina ko apne pyaar ka ehsaas karwana chahta hai!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Heart Heart Heart Heart

He promised her that he will never let Naina cry because of him or because of any other reason as he cares for her!!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve Smile Smile Smile Smile

It started raining heavily making the atmosphere more romantic!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed

Naina bheegna chahti thi and also wanted Raj to enjoy the rain with her!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Dancing Dancing Dancing Dancing

But Raj did not let her and carried her inside a small cottage!!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile

Naina went inside the other room to change but got scared and rushed outside into Raj's arms!!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Hug Hug Hug Hug

Naina is scared of a cat and Raj is making fun of her!!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

True how can the brave Naina be scared of a cat??Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue

Naina couldn't take her eyes off Raj in that towel and found him too hot to resist!!!!!!Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing Day Dreaming Day Dreaming Day Dreaming Day Dreaming

Raj felt embarrassed by Naina's intense gaze!!!!!Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed

Naina said suddenly that he looks hot like this and Raj liked Naina saying it!!!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing

This confession was just the trigger that Raj needed to speak out his emotions!!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Thumbs Up Thumbs Up Thumbs Up Thumbs Up

The line Raj said ek vaada aur ek sach batana chahta hoon tumhe aaj was too good!!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap

Raj vaada karta hai Naina ko ke woh Naina ka saath kabhi nahi chodega aur usse hamesha khush rakhega!!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile

He confessed ke woh Naina se bepanah mohabat karta hai!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed

Naina also said that she loves him very much and Raj is very happy to hear that and hugged her!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Hug Hug Hug Hug

They are both made for each other!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap

Raj is really a gem and Naina is too lucky to have him as her life partner!!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed

Thanks to the cat and of course the towel finally Raj and Naina confessed their love for each other!!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

Kyunki agar Naina cat se darr ke nahi chillati toh itna sunehra nazara kaise dekh paati!!!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue

Raj is too naughty and is not letting Naina go and said he should get something!!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink Smile Smile Smile Smile

Naina showered his face with kisses but Raj indicated his lips!!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed

Raj kissed Naina passionately and this sweet kiss ended with a passionate love making!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing

Raj and Naina are soo romantic and passionate!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing

Finally they became one!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap

The song is very nice and perfect for them!!!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile

God has showered them with His blessings and they are finally together!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile

Raj promised Naina ke woh usse ek pal ke liye bhi chhod ke nahi jayega!!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed

I loved it when Naina said ke woh jaane bhi nahi degi!!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile

So finally happy ending!!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap

It was beautifully written and very enchanting and romantic!!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap


 



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