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Posted: 15 February 2010 at 11:26am | IP Logged
Beautiful story
Raj and naina both love each other but they still haven't confessed their feelings to each other. Raj wants to tell naina his feelings for her...but cannot get the words to express it.
The rain has made the atmosphere more romantic.
naina darr ker raj ke paas aati hai..only to find him standing there wearing a towel.
Raj ko naina hamesha sexy aur hot lagi hai...and this time even naina awed to see him like this....she finds him too hot to resist. And this confession was just the trigger that raj needed speak out his emotions. Raj vaada karta hai ko who naina ka saath kabhi nahi chodega uar use hamesha khush rakhe ga ...
They are both made or each other.

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Posted: 15 February 2010 at 11:27pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by arpita25

awesome dear,
thanks Arpita Smile Smile Smile

Mai soch rahi thi ki is fic ko tum yahan post karo aur dekho tum ne meri baat maan li aur kar bhi diya.
Haan yaar vo Shiropa ne kaha tha jis se sab log padh lein jo vahan nahi padh paaye hain. Tongue Tongue Tongue

Superb, ek baat mujhe is OS ki sab se acchi lagi ki tum ne is me bus Raj n Naina k pyaar aur love acceptance ko hi dikhaya hai na kuch unnecessary liya hai na hi story bekaar me drag ki hai.
Yaar maine pehle hi socha tha ki base line romantic hogi bus vahi kiya. Wink Wink Wink

Dono ek doosre ko chahte hain aur pyaar karte hain but ab jaa k accept kar paaye hain.
Bus yahi is couple ki sab se badi problem thi na. Ouch Ouch Ouch

Finally ek cat ne vo kaam kar dikhaya jo koi aur nahi kar paaya. Raj ne bhi jabardasti Naina ko barish se bahar liya varna sach me madam bemmar padna chahti thi.
Vo jaanti hai na ki Raj hai us k pass us ki dekhbhaal k liye bus isiliye itne naughty ho jaati hai. Wink Wink Wink Cat na hoti to jaane dono kya karte? LOL LOL LOL



thank u dear  Big smile Big smile Big smile

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Posted: 15 February 2010 at 11:40pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sumaiya wahid

Wow.....Vertika That was reallllllllllllllllyyyyy lovely!!! I loved it when Raj was confessing his love....I loved the depth of his love...EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Thank u darling, Big smile Big smile Big smile sach me Raj k pyaar ki gehrai bahut hai Naina k liye aur ye Naina bhi samajhti hai. Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed

And Naina said suddenly....that he looked hot...Embarrassed...how cute!! Achha hua Naina darr ke chillane lagi....warna wo ek sunehra nazara miss kar deti na....LOLLOLLOL
Sahi me, kaisa sunhera najara tha na. Thank god sahi time par cat ki entry hue. Wink Wink Wink

But I really loved the way u put it Vertika....awesum job!!! It was really very enchanting n romantic as well!!Wink
Thanks sweety again Big smile Big smile Big smile



Thank u sweety Smile Smile Smile

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Posted: 15 February 2010 at 11:44pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by fanatic 21

simply amazing.......Clap
thanks so much Smile Smile Smile

totally beautiful ...luved d lines of raj der...tooo romantic....Clap

glad d at u posted it here....Smile

thnx...
Smile


Thanks that u liked darling  Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed


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Posted: 16 February 2010 at 11:29pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Dhara_s

Vertika sweety...congrats for winning...!!!!

thank u darls..........Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed

I just loveeedd your OS...!!! It is soo sweet...!!!!
thanks again Smile Smile Smile

So Raj has not confessed his love to Naina yet...!!!! And now the moment is here..!!!
Kabhi na kabhi to kehna hi hai na pyaar kiya hai to........Wink Wink Wink

So Naina is scared of a cat...!!!
Tabhi to cat wonders karte hai..........LOL LOL LOL

Naina ne usko hot kaha...???? ShockedShocked Aur iske badle me raj ne ek vaada  de diya...!!! EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Socho ek baat se kitne badi badi cheejin ho jaati hain. Tongue Tongue Tongue

Lekin Raj ne itniiii naughtiness dikhayi ke they finally became one...!!!!
Mauka kahan chodne waala tha Raj. DancingDancingDancing


Keep it up Vertika...!! ClapClapClap


Thank u darling n i will try my best to keep ur expectations fulfilled all time. Hug HugHug

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Posted: 17 February 2010 at 1:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by suhana_dixit

Hi Verika
How r u??
Hey Suhana i am fine dear. Smile Smile Smile
 
This fiction was really gud..ClapClap
thanks sweety Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed

Raj n Naina really compliment each other a lot..Abhi tak jo ankaha tha woh sab kuch Raj Naina se kehna chahta tha..
Haan serial me nahi par yahan to mai confession kara hi sakti hoon na. LOL LOL LOL

Usne apni feelings ko bahut dino tak chhupa hai but ab koi bandhan nahin hai.
Raj Naina ko apne pyaar ka ehsaas karana chahta hai..Smile..
Karana bhi chahiye, kyounki kabhi-2 kahi hue baaton ka asar bahut hota hai Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed

baarish ne mausam aur bhi romantic kar diya ..Naina bheegna chahti thi but Raj ne usko aisa nahin karne diya..
Offcourse, ab tabiyat kharab ho jaati to? Ouch Ouch Ouch

Naina was scared  n Raj was making fun of her..LOLLOL even I'm too scared of cats..
Aur kya ek Army officer dar jaaye to .......... LOL LOL LOL
 
Naina ko Raj towel mein kitna hot lag raha tha..Bechara Raj bhi uske aise dekhne se uncomfortable ho gaya thaWinkEmbarrassed
Sharmaa raha tha Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed

This line was too gud.
 
"Ek vaada aur ek sach batana chahta hoon tumhe aaj."
 
thank u darling Wink Wink Wink

Raj is too naughty.But he is really a gem..naina is too lucky to have him as her life -partner.Tongue
Kisi ko bhi aisa life partner mil jaaye to us ki life settel ho jaaye. Tongue Tongue Tongue
 
God has showered them with his blessings n they r too fortunate to b with the one they loveTongue
 
"A dream to become real
A memory I can feel
I look into her eyes to see
In her arms is where I'll be

The dream, a never fading happiness
Spreads through my heart
Faster and faster it beats
As the memories begin to start

A dream to become real
A memory I can feel
I look into her eyes to see
In her arms is where I'll be

The memories, ones I'll never forget
I'll make sure to go at a slow pace
All I ever wanted was to wake up
I open my eyes to see your face

A dream to become real
A memory I can feel
I look into her eyes to see
In her arms is where I'll be

I take a look into your eyes
The unbearable flame of pain welcomes your rain
It's an amazing feeling
To hold you once again

A dream to become real
A memory I can feel
I look into her eyes to see
In her arms is where I'll be

Your arms like tress, cover over me
Protect me from all the fears
A day, week, month passes
You will always be mine for years

We wait for that time to come
Dreams we make shadow the nightmare to overcome
Memories that will never fade for eternity
Beautiful eyes that are worth every moment to see

A dream to become real
A memory I can feel
I look into her eyes to see
In her arms is where I'll always be."
awesome darling, these lines r beautiful.
 
Congratulations for winningClapClap
Bye


Thank u again for such sweet reply Day Dreaming Day Dreaming Day Dreaming

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Posted: 17 February 2010 at 10:33pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Deepanwita

hiii vertika
wow what a beautiful shot
mindblasting
too romantic
love raj lines
thanx for posting it here.....

love
deepa



I am fine n hope same for u. Wink Wink Wink
Thank u sweety
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Posted: 18 February 2010 at 10:44pm | IP Logged
Hey g8 work Clap, mujhe expected tha ki tum jaroor koi na koi short fic likhogi fic contest me aur jab maine ssaari entries padhi thi to sach me mujhe nahi pata tha ki it's urs yaar. Wink
amazing superb. Big smile
That's called a true romantic story na.Embarrassed Bus pyaar and Raj aur Naina ki thodi si naughtiness.LOL Raj se first time Naina ne kaha ki u look hot and is tarah se hi ek khoobsurat rishte ki shuruvaat ho gayi. Wink Jo kaam shayad karne me Raj ko time lagta vo ek cat ki help se khud aaram se ho gaya.Smile
Keep writing babes..............Smile 


Edited by desaiprachi07 - 18 February 2010 at 10:45pm

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