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Posted: 14 February 2010 at 12:06am | IP Logged
hiii vertika
wow what a beautiful shot
mindblasting
too romantic
love raj lines
thanx for posting it here.....

love
deepa

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Posted: 14 February 2010 at 3:55am | IP Logged

wonderful update. loved it.

loved the part when naina dar gayi cat se.
loved the way raj giving her promise....so true...
raj is too naughty....


Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 14 February 2010 at 12:41pm

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Posted: 14 February 2010 at 9:48am | IP Logged
First n foremost...........

A many congratulations for your win dearSmile

The scene was really good, I enjoyed it lots. At first I thought where would he wear the towel but then the rain did wonders

the rain or the cat??? am confused Embarrassed Embarrassed True how can Naina be scared of a cat LOL LOL

Thanks to the Cat deary haha

Keep going Smile

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Posted: 14 February 2010 at 10:31am | IP Logged
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Posted: 14 February 2010 at 11:35pm | IP Logged
hey vertika congrats dear...
 
as usalll...very nice plot...!!! as usall isiliye bola...kyoun ki hamesha se tere sare plot badhe achhe hote hain...aur tu unhe bade achhe se likh bhi leti hai...
 
raj aur naina dono hi ek dushre se pyar karte the...par kabhi kah hi nahi paye...chalo achha hua ki towel aur cat ne yeh kaam karwa diya...
 
mujhe cats se bilkul bhi darr nahi lagta...hamare ghar me pahle 3 the...abhi ek bhi nahi...!!! lekin haan naina ka darna jayaz hai...kyoun ki andheron me cats bade darwane lagte hain...kisi horror movie ki tarah...
 
aur tere bich bich k awesome lines k kya kahna...'ek vaada aur ek sach...n all...jo bhi Raj ne naina ko kaha...naina ne raj se kha...voh sabhi...
 
ab jyada tarif nahi karungi...varna tu bhaav khane lagegi aur tere fics par aur bhi late ud karegi...
 
luv
Priya


Edited by Lion_Priya - 14 February 2010 at 11:36pm

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Posted: 15 February 2010 at 3:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Revolutionbreez

hi vertika ! Big smile
 
It was one amazing shot !
Hello Darling, thank u so much. Smile Smile Smile
 
 i really liked the plot and how the things proceed in this...
 
No confusion and messing of feelings...only love!
That's what i wanted to show that. Big smile Big smile Big smile
 
Though both knew that they loved each other , but still has not confessed it....
Ab mai kya karoon in dono ka, in dono ne mujhe tung kar rakha hai. Angry Angry Angry
 
Waise even I'm scared of cats, but I take this opportunity to thank her ! LOL LOL Kahin na kahin wahi madam responsible for making the confession happen...and ofcourse the towel !
Sahi waqt par cat ki entry aakhir nahi aati to Raj n Naina ki setting kaise hoti na? LOL LOL LOL
 
I really liked those lines...." Ek vaada aur ek sach..."...superb ! Clap
Kya baat hai, sab ko ye baat bahut pasand aayi............ Wink Wink Wink
 
And so finally happy ending !!! Big smile
Yeah, ye to hona hi tha. Wink Wink Wink
 
once again congrats for the award....you deserved it !!! Big smile


Thank u so much Manali, tum sab k support se hi mile hain ye awards. Smile Smile Smile

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Posted: 15 February 2010 at 7:05am | IP Logged
Hi Vertika...

First of all congrats on winning. You deserved it.

And now... about this OS... it was loveeeeeeeeeeeeelllllyyyyyyyyyyy!!!

Yaar mai bahut khush hun ki tumne isse yahan post kiya hai...

Naina ko Raj hot laga... well koi shak nahi hai... wo hai hi hot.Wink

Acha hua Naina billi se darti hai... warna usse Raj ko towel me dekhne ka mauka nahi milta aur na hi usse Raj hot lagta.Wink

Aur Raj ne usse ek Vadaa kiya... ek vadaa aur ek sach... beautiful.ClapClapClap

Mujhe wo line bhi achi lagi jab naina ne kaha ki Raj ko jaane bhi nahi degi. Mujhe humesha se hi Naina ke muh se ye dialogue sunna pasand hai... kash ki LRL me vo ye baat kehti... instead of aap mujhe kabhi chod ke nahi jayenge.Day Dreaming

Great job...

Love
Guglu

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Mahak Sinha

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Posted: 15 February 2010 at 11:20am | IP Logged
hiii Vertika....
so this ws ur story...so lovely.."vaada".....
raj proposed naina in a very diff n romantic way.... with "vaada'... to be there with her in the whole life....!!!..soo romantic....
awesome, mindblowing story......Hug

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