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that was an awesome chapter girl!...simply superb!..you made me laugh and feel samrat's pain at the same time...like i said before you have a beautiful way with words...and seriously how did you write these lines:
"jab who tumhari life me aayega toh jab bhi tum use miloge tumhare kaan
me music bajega, aisa lagega ki uski aankhon me zindagi bhar ke liye kho
jaaon, raat dal jaaye magar uski baaten
khatam na ho, zindagi me koi toofan tabahi macha jaye magar uski pyari hanseen idhar se udhar
na ho, duniya poori doob jaaye magar uske aakhon me kabhi nami na ho, dil ka
har sapna tot jaaye magar uske arman kabhi adhure na rahe, poori duniya root
jaye magar uske berukhi ka kabhi shikar na banun, aur sabse khaas baat subah ki
roshni dikhen na dikhen magar in nigahon ko har roz us pyar bahre chehre ka
deedar zaroor ho
Clapgosh the way you described what love is, is just so touching!...you have a poet's soul my friend...

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AWESOME UPDATE!!!!
plzz continue soon!!!!
THANKS for the PM!!!

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wooooooooooooooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww amazing too good superb mindblowong i simply loved it.. i hope u continue soon.
i am waiying for u upadte and nyc story line o i hope saja nbecum frends soon ...

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hey...awesome...!!!
really loved it..!!!
continue soon..
thanx for d pm..!!

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aweosme jst read all the ud do continue soon and can u plzzzz add me to ur pm list jst loved this pt continue soon

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Chapter 2 (part A)

 

(this chap part dedicated to  a lovely friend gina …sorry hon thoda late ho gaya.

n yes am going to try n continue to dedicate each of my chapters to all u lovely readers from next chapter onwards to express my gratitude for reading n liking my stories Smile

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Samrat is about to exit when Mayank stops him "Samrat kahan jaa rahe ho, nupur tumhe bula rahi hai"

Samrat knew there's no escape now. Nupur was one of those people around whom he tried to curb his sarcastic attitude as much a possible but sumtimes it still got d better of him but he was going to b extra careful as he didn't want to spoil her happiness may b it was d bond created during that accident.

Samrat shakes his head as if clearing his mind n goes to nupur "haan bolo bakabak machine, tumne mujhe yaad kiya"

Nupur sings dramatically "humne pukara aur tum chale aaye, pyaari si smile face pe le aaye re haye…."

Samrat "my god nupur ….kaise tum inti bollywoodish ho sakti ho"

Nupur "well yeh ek secret hai…chah ke nahi bata sakti Mr Casanova….waise yeh batao tum itni der se udhar khade kis ladki ko line maar rahe the"

Samrat (blushing at being caught n trying to remove attention from his blatant action fe min back) "oh babes ladkiyan samrat ko line maarti hain not d other way round….yaad nahi mayank jab tumhe mujhe pehli baar milane aaya tha tab tumhari aankhen mujse hat hi nahi rahi thi"

Nupur (blushes n thinks in her mind " oh samrat I was dumbstruck coz I felt sad for a boy lost amongst such a beautiful gang of friends n having heard so much about u from d gang , soch rahi thi kit um kab tak pyar aur dosti se bhagoge, jis din tum bhaagke tak jaaoge tab tum bahut hurt feel karoge n I don't want to c u sad"

Samrat  (snapping fingers in front of nupur's face) "Oh hello miss khayali pulao….kahin mayank ke bare second thots tho nahi aa rahe hain…..abhi bol do baagne ke liye mai taiyyar hum (with a naughty smile)

Maynk playfully hits him . Nupur "samrat tum kabhi nahi sudroge(smiling)…waise maine tumhe is liye bulaya takhi mai aisi ladki ladki se tumhe milaun jise dekh ke tumhara mooh khule ka khula rah jaayega….are ye kahan gayi n screams at d top of her voice "chutki kahan hai tu" (nupur calls gunjan chutki as a pet name)

Gunjan replies  " aayi di" n gunjan rushes towards nupur  "kya hai di tum itni chilla kyun rahi ho, mai yahi toh hun"

Samrat is flabbergasted n is wondering how is gunjan known to nupur

Nupur "yeh dekh yeh hai samrat jiske bare me maine tujhe bataya tha yaad hai….samrat yeh hai chutki , I mean gunjan , meri choti laadli bahen n is about to pinch her cheeks when gunjan's cheeks affectionately when gunjan reminds her "di kay kar rahi ho mehendi kharab ho jaayegi"  gunjan is trying to cover her shock with these words when she realizes who samrat is. She had heard a lot from nupur n her jiju abt samrat n had unknowingly developed a soft corner for him but is now shocked that d person in her mind n d reality are both on other sides of like n hate equation in her heart  but she quickly hides her reaction n says shyly "Hi Samrat"

Samrat is shocked n his mouth is gaping open

Nupur nudging him with her elbow "maine kaha tha tumhara mooh khule ka khula reh jaayega…..ab bandh bhi karlo"

Samrat recovers quickly n tries to hide behind his fake form "kya nupur tumne bataya nahi ki chashmish tumhari behen hai"

Nupur shocked "tum dono ek doosre ko jaante ho" benji explains to every1 how they knew each other

Samrat "absolutely"…winking in gunjan'd direction says in alow voice to nupur "waise aaj subah se tumhari behen ka fav past time mujse takrana hai "

Gunjan blushes at  his outrageous accusationn interrupts "oh pls shakal dekhi hai aaine me"

Samrat "chashmish uska jawab maine subah tumhe de diya tha (read d prev chap if u dont rem Wink)….ab tum toote hue tape recorder ki tarah  sound kar rahi ho"

Nupur n benji both notice d change in samrat of which even he's not aware. He has never been flirtatious to ne girl without a gud dose of his sarcasm n attitude topping it

Gunjan (fumingly) "di samrat ke bare bahut kuch bataya magar itni important baat  kyun batana bhool gayi"

Everybody including nupur is wondering wat gunjan is talking about n nupur signals her with eyes asking what

Gunjan " ki tum log samarat ko log zoo se utake laaye the"

Everybody laughs heartily including samrat who laughs secretly at chashmish's retort.

Samrat "very funny chashmish, mai tumhe yeh tab yaad dilaunga jab tum agli baar mujse takroagi, waise ab toh tum samajh gayi ki main zoo se hun t oh khabardar zyada mat ulajhna warna kaat dunga tumhe (makes a mock biting action)

Gunjan taken aback backs off. Nupur interrupting "eh mr. Casanova meri behen ko kaatne se pehle tumhe is sherni ko paar karke jaana hoga (growls in a mock lioness voice)

Samrat (smiling) "sorry bak bak machine mai itna risk nahi le sakta, mujhe apni jaan bahut pyaari hai"

Diya "guys b introductions ho gaya to aaj ke games ki or chale, gunjan doll tum apne doosre haath ki mehendi jaldi se laga lo thaki hum game start kar sake"

Gunajn sits down n gets mehendi on her other hand applied…everybody helsp themselves to wonderful chaat items in d next ten minutes, Mayank n benji lovingly feeding nupur n diya as they have mehendi in their hands, dodo helping himself to multiple chaat items simultaneously all d while gunjan feels sum1s eyes burning her back n luks up to see samrat staring at her as if not realizing n she stares back at him to make him realize it so indecent to stare at sum1 like that . Jab who uski nazron ki intensity dekhti toh sharmake apni aankhen jhuka leti hai, not before she sees samrat smilingly winking in her direction. A pleasant feeling erupts inside her at d smile n she scolds herself 'gunjan who ek flrt hai aur rude insaan hai, tu use door hi rah.'

Nupur "diya ab batao kya game khel rahe hain hum sab"

Diya  poetically muses

mausam suhana hai ,romance to ek bahana hai

yaar ka saath hai, haathon me haath hai

bahon me bahen dalen anakhon me aakhen ladaye

dooriyon ki ab koi  ahamiyat nahi, jab couples ke beech todhi bhi jagah nahi

saansen aur kadam ghul mil gaye, jab jab paper thode thode kam huye

 

"Yes guys mai paper dance game ki baat kar rahi hun, is me har ek couple ko ek paper me khade hona padega aur ek chota music bit bajega aur  jab music stop hoga paper ko half me fold kar diya jaayega aur couples aur bhi close aa jayenge aur jo couple end tak apna balance maintain karke us folded paper ke upar khada ho payega wohi winner hoga. (The game is played by folding a newspaper into smaller and smaller pieces until the partners are practically standing on their toes. The couple that hangs onto their piece of paper will be deemed the winners. This game sort of reminds you of marriage too!)

 

Nupur "waah diya kya game socha hai, bygod tumne toh mood bana diya" n then realizes she's d bride n blushingly lowers her eyes saying "chalo kaun kaun khelega, mai aur mayank, diya aur benji, dodo aur aur kaun….haan chinki meri cousin chinki, samrat aur aur…haan ofcourse chutki"

 

Both gunjan n samrat r shocked Gunjan "di mai nahi khel sakti maine mehendi lagai hui hai", trying to escape, when samrat notices her blushing color n is mesmerized by her blushes

 

Nupur "toh hum sab ne kya aata laga rakah kya haatme, koi bahana nahi chalega, tujhe khelna hi padega, samrat mai tumahri bhi koi baat sunne nahi wali, tum bride ko mana nahi kar sakte, when samrat is about to object n gives up thinking she will never listen once she has made up her mind

 

Gunjan "par di"

 

Nupur "mai kuch nahi sunne wali, chalo chotu (d helper ind house) jaldi se 9 papers le aao

 

There are five local couples joining d game

 

All d couples r standing on the paper. Mayur n benia n another local couple take d max benefit of this game n start stepping close into each others arms right at d start

 

Music at d background is a mix of many songs

 

As the newspaper is small smarat n gunjan r standing close n samrat much to his dislike is drawn to chashmish's face like a bee to flower

 

Music at d background starts "dil ne tumko chun liya hai , tum bhi isko chuno na , khaab koyi dektha hai tum bhi sapne buno na, dil ye mera tum se kuch kah raha hai suno na"

Samrat groans n thinks wats with this music n all romantic numbers killing his alrdy tensed mind n he notices gunjan is shyly looking here n there.

 

Music stops, everyone folds dpaper into half  n steps onto it

 

Benia n Mayur are lost in each others eyes while samrat n gunjan r finding d proximity both exciting n scary while d music in d background starts

 

"Pyaar Ki Yeh Kahaani Suno Ek Ladka Tha Ek Ladki Thi Hoti Kya Hai Jawaani Suno Ek Ladka Tha, Ek Ladki Thi Woh Bhi Ek Daur Tha Waqt Hi Aur Tha Jab Woh The Ajnabi Dono Tanaha Se The Par Woh Kehte Kise Baat Jo Dil Mein Thi "

 

By now d lights have been dimmed major time n all old people have gone for food n d youngsters playing this game n there is hardly any light to say so, may b a romantic dim glow just enuf to see ur partner's face but not enuf to see others close by

 

When d music stops, dodo loses as d aroma of food makes him step off d paper by mistake n also another shy couple who r unable to come close balance n exit, abhi sirf 7 couple rah gaye. Everybody folds d paper. Now its only half of a full size paper. Couples have no toher option but to step in much closer n girls have to be extra careful as they cant get their mehendi ruined, so guys have to balance that aspect as well.

 

By now samrat is lost in her eyes n beauty n without a concious thought pulls her into his arms n their bodies collide. Gunjan is shocked at d sensation n d act n looks up to samrt saying "who kya hena chashmish tumhari haathon ko side me hona hai warna mehendi kharab ho jaayegi is liye mujhe tumhe baahon me lena hi padega " n smiles mischeviously

 

Gunjan is electrified by d close proximity, its as if beyond her control her body is reacting to samrat's proximity while her mind is losing d battle to her body

 

Music starts when all r gazing into theyr beautiful partners eyes including samrat as if unable to help himself, while gunjans mind is reeling from d effect of  breathe of samrat  fanning on her cheeks

 

"Aankhon me teri ajab si ajab si adayen hai, dil ko banade jo patang woh sansein teri adayein hai"

 

Music stops n other two local couples lose their balance n quit. Now its just mayur, benia, sajan n another local couple. Paper folded into quarter.

 

Samrat " Cmon chashmish mere aur paas aa jao warna paper se bahr tumhare legs chale jayenge" Gunjan hesitates how can she when already her heartbeat is going at 120/min but smarat without giving her any chance pulls her closer n is thrilled when their bodies have hardly any gap between them

 

Music in d background "Chehra hai ya phool khila hai, zulf ganeri sham hai kya, saagar jaise aankhon wali yeh toh bata tera naam hai kya"

 

Gunjan's hairs r behind her back n her hands r way away from her body, its almost as if samrat is holding her  a prisoner in his arms n she's unable to do a thing


Samrat not knowing what he is doing at having found himself this close to her bare neck n shoulder , as if drawn by d pure white milky smooth skin wants to test if it is as smooth as it luks n kisses her softly on d region joining her neck n shoulder passionately . And a buziing thrill passes d moment his lips make contact with her milky skin n both r stunned by d current that jolts them n gunjan hisses under her breathe shouting mildy "samrat" n tries to pull away but samrat realizing d moment n recovering from his trance holds her tightly…."sorry chashmish woh kya hena mera balance choot raha tha isliye mai tumahre shoulder pe ghir gaya" n tries to steal his eyes guiltily from her stare

 

Music stops  benia n d other couple lose their balance n now its just mayur n sajan. Though other couples have lost it they continue to do ball dance in each others arms n hardly one couple is noticing another couple

 

Paper folded further  n music starts n before gunjan cud do anything, samrat lifts her n places her legs on his feet, now their noses r clashing n breathe almost is intermingled

Gunjan tries to turn her head n samrat turns his face in d same direction, she turns right n samrat turns his head right n in d process their noses n cheeks r rubbing n creating mini shocks in their bodies n without ne choice her body's impulses force her to look into samrat's deep eyes n this time she realsises what ever happens she will be equally guilty as she's unable to turn away from d passion n intensity of his eyes.

 

 "kaise bataye kyun tujko chahe yaara bata na paaye, baten dilo ki dekho jo bahi aankehn tujeh samjhaye , tu jaane na , aaaa tu jaane na"

 

Samrat  oh so slowly brings his lips forward (as if its d most natural thing to do with d most right person at d most right instant), not breaking d passionate eye contact they share n gunjan is unable to stop or break d contact, she knows she shud stop, she shud move away, to hell with d game, this shudnt be happening but is helpless to do anything but anticipate d first touch touch of his lips n when his lips connect with hers , million flowers bloom insider her heart, n crackers burst at d same time, its as if life n soul have got interwined, breathe n emotion r mixed up not knowing where onse's starting n where d other's is ending, they forget they r amidst a crowrd, they r in public but they just aware of  d physical sensation each has created in d other. Samrat is drinking greedily from her lips n oh so passionately as if he wad dying of quneching this thirst for d last 21 years n gunjan is unable to do nething but drown in d whirlpool- samrat's magical lps r creating n both r lost in totally another worls, as if wanting everyhting else to fade away n this moment to hold o n d sensation of magic created by their lips to continue till eternity as if unabel to pull away from each other/......n then d moment is broken when nupur shouts "aaauuuu meri mehendi ….hato mayank" n in d process steps off d paper

 

Both samrat n gunjan r shocked at what they had done n that too publicly but thankfully everyone's attention is drawn towards nupur n diya starts clapping. Gunajn is ahsmaed n wondering what has got into her head n tries to die a thousand death for allowing a stranger to kiss her in front of all n retuning his in d process....

 

"great samrat n gunjan…..u guys have done it……..tum dono jeet gaye….i must say u guys have awesome balance to hold each other so well n beautifully , n both blush but gunjan is tightly ensconced in samrat's arms still .

 

Now having taken care of her mehendi problem Nupur notices the sparks between gunjan n samrat n yells playfully "tum jeet gaye ho samrat, ab meri behen ko chod sakte ho"

 

Samrat blushingly  removes his hand n gunjan with bowed head n blushing face luks elsewhere while samrat tries in a teasing flirting tone "kya Karen bak bak machine tumhari behne hai hi aisi ki chodne ka man hi nahi karta"

 

Gunjan turns a further shade of red n wants d ground to swallow her up n execuses herself "di mai abhi aayi"

 

N samrat combs his hand nervously thru his hairs cursing himself n his fate for d nth time "dude tu yeh kya kar gaya. Bas complications zindagi me kam the kya jo chashmish ko usme jakad liya n uses some cussing words for himself"


To be continued

 

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Sorry dear  friends, sorry for this late update….was caught up in some imp office work, with great difficulty have tried to write this chapter in half an hour….it might not be that gud, ….so pls excuse me if its not upto ur expectations….i will try to do a better job next time for sure…pls do frankly let me know ur comments….will try to post part b of this chapter by tomorrow

 

Cheers n Luv,

Meenakshi

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I loved it.....
And I love all of Sajan ff...Soooo
Please cont soon.... Embarrassed
And one more sajan ff.....I am Happy now.... Day Dreaming

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