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Malika

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Posted: 11 February 2010 at 8:16am | IP Logged
awesome meenakshi....loved sammy's characterisation...seemed like a combo of actual sammy n sujal from kth..well two of my all time fav. characters...pls do continue soon and add me too ur pm list.will wait for ur update.

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plz ontinue soon
i really love ur story
and plz add me into ur pm list
loved the intro and concept dear

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AWESOME CS
continue soon
add me to ur pm list

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tht was awesomeeeeeee  CS plzz contuied soon

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awesome start
plz add me to ur pm list

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hey
i wud love to read this ff
plz do add me to ur pm list
i'll be waiting

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Hey ! !
Nyc concept ..
Plz Add me to pm list.

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<p align="center">Intro Preview</p>

Hello Dear friends on India Forum (hence forth refeered as
IF
), I am Dia , from excel college, main excel college ki Diva Queen hum(with a sweet smile on her face)


(someone coming from behind her ) And I am Benji , Excel college ka hopeless studentSmile


Dia: Benji, kabhi kabhi tum sachai itni beautifully kaise
bol dete ho LOL


Benji: Well sweetheart sab tumhara asar haiTongue,,,nething fro my
pretty lady (dia punches him him on his chest blushinglyEmbarrassed says "U know u r d
best n perfect for me even with ur imperfections just like I am for u"


Benji: Absoultely sweetheart, never even have a second thot on that,
life wud never have been d same without u n is lost in her eyes n suddenly
feels people r staring at them ...of course the IF readers r luking at them n smilingBig smile n benji realizes that he's ignoring the IF
readers'n motions to Dia as well who realizes she got carried away


Benji n Dia together to IF Readers : Sorry friends '.woh
kya hai na ki hum apne pyaar me thoda kho gaye aur bhhool gaye ki hum aapse
baat kar rahe the'.really sorry guys'waise lets come to d point'..i know mai
aur benji kehte rahte ki hamari love story best hai, waise hai to but aap log
abhi ek aur beautiful Jodi ki lovestory be bare me padne jaa rahe hain. Yes guys its
our best friend Samrat's love story, we will keep meeting you now n then to narrate
certain instances in detail maybe, but yes yeh story hamare love story se
bhi zyaada pure hai'


Benji interrupting Dia : coz its Samrat's story'.Waise
friends is story me aap Samrat ka ek doosra roop dekhenge, bahut baar woh sarcastic hoga, humse bhi, magar pls don't judge him harshly, shaayad bahut
logon ko gussa bhi aayega ki hum kaise dost hain but trust me as u read u will
get to know more of the real samrat n not d fake Samrat that he potrays to be
his image. Samrat ko mujse zyaada koi nahi jaanta (saying this he thinks of
something n has tears in his eyes, dia touches his shoulder in a loving gesture
as if imparting strength n love through that touch, Benji smiles n continues to
IF readers)


"sorry guys woh kya hai na, Samrat ko leke mai bahut
sentimental hun, Woh bachpan se mera best friend hai,aur woh aaj mane ya mane mai
b uska sabse acha dost hun haaan woh kabhi izhaar nahi karne dega, aur us jaisa
friend duniya me ho hi nahi sakta, Usse dosti karne ke liye aapko uske Past se
bhi dosti karni padehi tab samajh jaayenege ki woh kyun itna sarcastic hai, mai
zyaada details abhi nahi batonga siwaye ke bachpan se samrat ka koi b apna tha hi
nahi, uski ma aur behen ne use chod diya aur pitaji ke liye 'uff unke bas me
hota to ghar ke furnitures aur usme koi farak unhe nazar nahi aata tha'sab
cheezon ki tarah samara bhi unke liye ek samaan tha, ab samaan ka toh koi
feelings nahi hota'mmagar ekk chhote ssse bachhe ka'.

(benji takes a deep breathe, he realizes he has to
control his emotions if he has to complete d intro narration to IF readers n if
he gets emotional he will start struttering n will not be able to finish this
netime soon n bringing his emotions in check he continues)'.sorry 'haan toh aap
smaj chuke honge aise father ke saath samrat ke nanhe se dil ka kya haal hua
hoga'.furniture kaharab ho jaata toh uski marammat karate hai yaa phenk dete hai'waise
hi samrat choti si galti karta to ek non living thing ki tarah uske pitaji use
peetthe the'yeh b samjhe bina ki us nazuk dil pe jo apni maa ki mata aur behen
ke pyaar se wanhit tha, use aur chote kaise koi insaan pahuncha sakta hai,
especially uske father (takes a frustrated sigh)'.neways toh aap smajh sakte ki
woh kyun itna harsh n rude nazar aata hai aapko, Aap toh kya sara coll aisa hi manta hai,'haan
they love him as cool dude but they hate his guts n attitude sometimes, mujse hi kitne
logon ne sawal poocha hai ki mai kaise uske insults aur sarcasm ko seh sakta hun'.well
I tell them uske liye tum logon ko uska sacha dost banna padega, without
expectation uske dil me jhaankna padega, jo ki woh allow kabhi nahi karega, magar
kehte hai na acchai lakh chupaye chup nahi sakti'samrat se hum yaani ki mai
dia, dodo mayank aur nupur bahut pyaar karte hain magar kabhi uske saamne
izhaar nahi kar paaye ki hamare liye woh kitna important hai'.samrat hates emotions
'jaise hi kisine aisa kuch karne ki koshsih ki bas agle din se uski chutti'.but
I promise u dear readers before d end of this story samrat khud izhaar karega
ki woh mera best friend hai'mera kya sabka, hamare poori gang ka sabse pyaara
friend hai, aur friendship ke saath saath aap log yeh bhi realize karenge ki jo
ladki uski life partner banegi who duniya ki luckiest girl hogi'..kyunki uske
jaisa pyaar toh koi b nahi kar sakta ,


(looking at his watch) hey friends...V r getting late for coll but ek chota sa incident batana
chahunga takhi aap samajh sake ki woh jab pyaar barsata hai toh kaisa lagta'.haalah
ki woh yeh samajhta hai ki hum sab anjaan hai, but hum sabko pata hai aur hamesha
yaad rahega kaise usne secret angel banke humari life me apni friendship aur
love ka chaap choda hai '.waise uske love ke bare toh gunjan hi aapko bata
sakti'.kyunki humare pas uski dosti ke liye shabd kum hai toh phir pyaar ke bare
me kaise bata sakte haiWink''.mai ek bahut middleclass family se hoon '.bachpan me
do waqt ki roti ke liye paisa mushkil se bach paata tha uske upar school ki
fees, busfare, books, uniform, '.uniform(takes a deep sigh as if lost somewhere)'bahut special hai mere liye meri
uniform kyunki uske wajah se hi mai samrat ka dost ban paaya'.mai 6th standard
ke pehle din ke liye school jaa raha tha, naya school tha, thodi fees zyaada
thi par phir mere dad ne mushkil se mujhe school bejha, meri maa ne mere senior ki maa se (7th clss student) joh hamari neighbor thi,
uska purana uniform request karke liya tha'.jab mai bus se uthar raha tha toh meri
shirt handle me atak ke thodi phat gayi right side me'.mere aankhen bhar aayi'pehla din'kaise
mai phata uniform pehenke jaa sakta hun'sab mazak udayenge'.ghar me bol bhi nahi
sakta tha'.warna dad ke upar aur pressure aa jata'.isliye dil me confidence ki
aahsa leke mai school gaya'.

samrat ek corner me alag khada tha'.uski aankhon me ajeeb
si chamak b thi,kahsmakash b thi, thoda dar tha toh bahut saara attitude b
jhalak raha tha'.magar maine pehle uski chamak ko dekha tha, dekhte hi mujhe
itna acha laga,'..mano jaise mai use bahut dinon se jaanta hun'.but usne ekdum
apne aankhen blink kari aur laga ki ice ki tarah sab emotions freeze ho gaye'..woh
meri taraf aaya'.right me shirt ke hole ko dekha aur smirk karke bola'.."kyun
dude, tailor ke seelne se pehle hi jaldi me kapda waapas le aaya kya'..yah hawa
aane ke liye tune hole kar rakha hai"'.I was hurt by d harsh words n I thot
jiske aankhon me main ek dost ka affection dekha woh itna harsh hai'.meri aankhen
bhar aayi'Samrat bola'.chill dude ab roke subah subah mood kharab mat kar, yeh drama nahi chahiye'.waise
I am samrat shergill aur tum '.Controlling my tears n not to allow him to rile
me I said 'Benjamin Thomas'.Samrat "baap re koi darawne scientist ka naam lag
raha hai,,,,haan teri shirt phati hai magar tu itna darwna nahi lag raha hai'.mai
tuhje...(thinking) tujhe benji bulaunga'.haan yeh naam theek hai'tere tarah timid n cute'saying so he
flashed his brilliant sincere smile'.i was like kya yeh wahi insaan hai jisne abhi
mujhe itna hurt kiya'I shook hands n decided to be careful around him coz I could
not trust him'.


Later when I entered d class boys in d last bench'.d spoilt
brats started shouting abhe phatichar, naya uniform kabade ki dukaan se
kharidha tha kya'.friends dekho yeh 6th standard me padtha hai magar
uniform bhi dang ka nahi pehen sakta'.one more in d gang shouted -oye jaake
corporation school me admission lele'.uniform free milega 'just then samrat
entered n gave them a cold stare n said'"really phir tuje toh us school me jaana
chahiye jahan pe akal free me baante hai kyunki do saal se toh fail hoye jaa
raha hai, toh tub hi naya school dhoond le"'saying this samrat moved to his bench n signaled
me to follow him in a hard stare'all d guys backed of'from their expression it
lukd as if they were scared of him,'.d gang leader kinda starts explaining'woh samrat
wo'Samrat cuts him" oh shut up u fatso mujhe tumhari bakwas sunne me koi interest nahi
hai" n saying this he starts reading a tinkle book from his bag. I was confused
yeh kaisa insaan hai pehle khudh mujhe hurt karta hai aur phir jab doosre log
wohi karte hai toh unhe daanta hai, I was confused and still sitting alongside him I was wary'.magar I cud not escape d whispers of whole class which took
my attention away from samrat'everyone was talking in whispers abt my uniform or
rather lack of proper uniform'

jaise hi bell baja to escpae the curious stares
of my classmates, I rushed to d playground n found d corner of a neem tree behind
which I went and sat n released d tears which were waiting to escape'.i felt so
helpless, so young to fight the situations n was crying silently when I heard a
commotion behind me, I peered through the gap in d branches, obviously they
were not able to see me'samrat was holding d collar of d fatso guy n hsi gang yelling "Dude
ek aur baar tune benji ko kuch is fat mooh se kaha na tere jabde todh doonga'.usse
pange lene se pehle soch lena, ki mere dost se panga le raha hai, khair mana ki
mai tujhe is baar warning deke chodh raha hun, agli baar, bolunga nahi directly
peet dunga"'d guys back off apologizing profusely'samrat leaves them n I had such
a nice feeling... I mistook d guy who really cared for me as a friend, I wiped my tears n went back to
class,glad for having made such a nice
friend d first day, but was shocked, samrat acted indifferently as if he never had
come to my defense, as if he never had stood up for me, he was being nice to me
but indifferent and sarcastic as well, I was totally confused'.tab mujme itni
akal thodi na thi ki use samaj paon''.i went home still in a confused state'

that
late evening'..a lady claiming to be fom a social service organization came and informed us
that as part fo their activities, they were donating new unfiroms for d kids in
d local area for the three schools in that region n if I liked I can benefit
three sets of new uniforms for myself'.meri maa ke liye toh jaise uniform nahi
aasman se farishta tapak pada tha'.she accepted the same with lots of gratitude'.d
lady was about to leave when I peeped out of window n saw samrat drawing d
window pane of his car up before anyone cud spot him'..I was touched by his
gesture,i dont know still how he came to know about my financial status or how that young child cud think so far to hel me, but later I came to know d lady was his governess n h didn't want anyone
escply me to know that he had helped us '.that day I understood him as far as
my age and maturity cud allow''with tears of gratefulness I decided I wil
become his best friend, a friend of whom he will be proud....

n I knew as time
went by he does not want to show his love and affection openly to anyone ,
including his friends..but he was always there more often than he wanted to but only as an invisible angel, never coming to d front'..but once u realize d golden heart behind his harsh faade,
trust me u wud have hit a goldmine of friendship nt thats wat he has been to me'.n
yes to answer ur questions, I am his best friend whether he admits it or not
but as I said he will admit it soon n not just frienship but also his conditioanl n unescapble feelings of love more importantly'..

oki guys, I took ur time for long, but I
just wanted u all to understand a lil about our friend samrat before u read
about his story, about d journey of love n friendship'.hope u will like n love
him as much by d end of this love story, as much as we all do'(n hugged dia in a
moment of shared understanding, both reflecting a brilliant smile)' '

looking back at IF readers: will catch
u guys soon to give some brilliant instances of his friendship n maybe love if
gunjan does not do d honor before us (winking in dia's direction )'. Oh yeah n
take it for granted v will be meeting soon if not in Mumbai for sure in Morena'.Love
all u wonderful IF readers, this is Dia n Benji signing off 'take care


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Hello dear n wonderful IF friends,


Thank u so much for all ur lovely comments n wanting to read
more'.am truly very happy n will reply to all individually soon. I got busy
with writing an intro preview for all of u'.friends a small warning those who
have read my previous OS Samrat's challenge on d date, pls be aware this is not
at all mushy mushy story like that one'.it is being written by me at a total
different level.....an intense story of love n frienship highlighted by beautiful moemtns n yeah a small request to all of u, I have taken a diff approach
to this story, if u have read d intro u will understand what I am saying'.one of d reasons
is to make sure none of u bash me Wink coz as I told earlier Samrat's character here
initially might not be liked all, but trust me n am hoping u will understand my
reasons n see how d character evolves n surfaces when I am done with the story, so pls don't
get offended n I assure u I love samrat as much as each of u if not moreLOL n by
d end ofd story u will meet d same samratEmbarrassed. This intro is important becoz these guys(d gang)
will help gunjan as well to understand more about samrat when they throw light on
d kind of beautiful person samrat is. Will try to post the first chapter soon n yeah a reqst -u all have to get used to my longer chapters coz that d way i write....i will try not get carried away thoughSmile


Plss pls do let me know ur honest comments',

With lots of luv,

Meenakshi




Edited by meens1981 - 13 February 2010 at 12:46pm

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