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yaar tu apna bakbak bandh kar aur jaldi se is new ff ka intro post kar aur fir prt1, 2 , 3.....................................so on n so forth
 
aur ha................baki do ff's ka kya hai hai
ud post karegi ya lagau kaan k neechey ek----------nhi do, nhi, teen
 
 
....................................................................................nhi panch😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by: cute_monaya_fan

yaar tu apna bakbak bandh kar aur jaldi se is new ff ka intro post kar aur fir prt1, 2 , 3.....................................so on n so forth

 
aur ha................baki do ff's ka kya hai hai
ud post karegi ya lagau kaan k neechey ek----------nhi do, nhi, teen
 
 
....................................................................................nhi panch😆

 
yaar tujhe jitna maarna hai maarle, i dont mind mind, n dont worry i will update all 3 ffs on friday ok so love u lot n thnx 4 commenting
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Posted: 14 years ago
PART 1
 
ok guys its valentines day n everybody is enjoyingg the party at excell, sam n sheena, mayur are newly wedded n benia n uday are all dancing together except of gunjan, she was standing in a corner watching them all, suddenly her phone started ringin, she picked up the phone
 
G: hello
 
Guy: hello gunjan
 
G: ji kon bol raha hai
 
Guy: dekhen samrat ki jan khatare mein hain agar ap uski jan bachana chahti hain to second floor k corner waali claas mein ajain
 
G: samrat ki jan........ lekin app hain kon
 
Guy: dkhen isse ziada important hain samrat ki jan
 
He cut the phone
 
G: hello.........hello
 
G: yeh kon tha aur samrat ki jan khatre mein hai, mujhe jaana chaye
 
She goes n tells nupur tat she going on second floor, then she goes to second floor
 
She goes in the class it was dark, then suddenly somebody closed the door from behind n then the lights open up, she turns around n gets shocked to see rv standing infornt of her
 
G: ranvijay, tumne mujhe ahan bulaya?
 
Rv: han meine bulaya
 
G: lekin kyun?
 
Rv: dekho gunjan, mein abhi bhi tumse dobara bolta hon that i love you, ples tum kyun nai maanti
 
G: to tum apni bakwas phir shuru karahe ho, subha kya kaafi nai tha (rv had proposed gunjan in the morning but gunjan refused)
 
Rv: to tum aise nai manogi
 
G: apni bakwas band karo, aur mera raasta choro
 
Rv: nai chorunga, kya karlogi
 
She moves towards the door but rv catchs her hand n pushs her back
 
G: kya karahe ho tum, choro mujhe
 
Rv: ab hum tumhe batate hain k rv ko thookrane ki saza kya hoti hai
 
He takes off his shirt n comes closer to gunjan
 
G: dekho mere kareeb mat aana
 
He rips her cloths off n then he rapes her n goes from there
 
After half an hour
 
S: hey nupur tumne chashmish ko kahin dekha kya
 
N: han abhi thori dair pehle kehri thi k second floor pe jarahi hai
 
S: lekin kyun
 
N: pata nai
 
S: lekin second floor pe to koi nai hai, anyways mein dekh k aata hon
 
Sam goes upto the second floor, he hears gunjan saying
 
G: sam......... samrat...........samrat ( in a very low voice )
 
S: chashmish tum kahan ho
 
He goes to the corner class, gets shocked to see gunjan in such state, she was only covered by her duppata, he quickley runs upto her
 
S: chashmish kya howa tumhe
 
No answer
 
S: chashmish tum kuch bolti kyun nai
 
She was not in the state of talking, then sam covers her duppata propley on her n picks her up n takes her down, th gang was shocked to see gunjan in such a state, all went running upto sam
 
N:sam.........samrat........ kya huwa meri behn ko, ky howa, gunjan ankhen khol, mayank yeh kuch bol kyun nai ri
 
All were crying
 
M: nupur shaant hojao
 
N: mayank meri behen ki halat dekhi hai tumne, mein kaise shaant hojaon
 
M: nupur i understand, samrat jaldie gunjan ko hospital lekar chalo
 
 
The gang rushed to the hospital
 
Hospital
 
Gunjan was in ICU n the gang was waiting for the doc to come out, after a little while, they hear gunjan screaming
 
G:NAHIIIIIIIII CHORDO MUJHE, PLEASE MUJHE CHORDO,  SAMRAT MUJHE BACHOA,SAMRATTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Nupur started to cry even more but mayank was consoling her but on the hand some1 was in shock, it was sam, he was ust crying his eyes out but nobody was there to console him, Just thn the doc came out
 
S: doc, gunjan ko kya howa, wo theek to hojaigi na aur wo chilrah kyun rahi hai
 
Doc: dekhen, this is a case of RAPE
 
The gang was shocked, nupiur just went in shock, she wasnt repondin to anyone
 
S: yeh app kya bakwas karahe hain, gunjan ko kuch nai hosakta, app jhoot bol rahe hain
 
B: sam chill, im sorry doc
 
Doc: its ok i can understand, dekehn unki halat bohot kharab hai, wo bohot daariwi hain, agar unhone thori dair mein respond nai kiya to, she might fall in coma
 
They all were shocked, sam was so shocked he couldent say anything, he just went n sat on the bench
 
Doc: dekhen its a police case, humne police ko inform kardia hai, wo thori dair mein aati hongi, gunjan ka statement lene k liye
 
N: yeh kya bakwas karahe hai, ap jante hain isse meri behen ki kitni badnami hogi
 
Doc: dekhen i understand lekin humare hospital k rules hain
 
N: baar mein jayein apke rules............
 
She was about to say futher but mayank stopped her
 
S: mujhe gunjan se milne hai
 
Doc: abhi app unse nai milsakte, unki halat bohot kharab hai
 
S: meine kaha na mujhe gunjan se milna hai
 
B: sam chill, abhi nai mil sakta, be patient yr
 
S: kaise pateint hojaon, meri bestfriend wahan mout aur zindagi k beech larahi hai aur tu kehraha hai pateint hojaon, i will kill that bas###d, usne meri chashmish ko hath i kaise lagaya, ek dafa mujhe pata chal jaye wo kon hai, gunjan ki yeh halat mujse nai dekhi jaati
 
He broke down
 
B: its ok yr, ples himat se kam le, agar tu himat har gaya to gunjan ko kon sambhalega
 
Just then the doc came back
 
Doc: gunjan ko hosh agaya hai, app log isse mil sakte hai
 
They all ran inside to meet gunjan,when  they saw her they all stande together at the door, she was sitting on the bed with her head on her knees covered by her hands, she was crying
 
Nupur went upto her
 
 
Edited by sweetsonal156 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

OMG Yeh kya hua Gunjan ko😭 I was almost in tears after reading this!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Samrat was also suffering from seeing her in such a state.
Kaisa dukh bhara part likha hai tumne!!!!!!!!!!
Plz update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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N: gunjan
 
Gunjan looked up, nupur quickley hugged her
 
N: gunjan kya howa yeh sab,kaise howa
 
Gunjan started to cry even more
 
G: diiiiiiiii.......(crying)........ussne............(crying)
 
N: gunjan merko sab kuch bata, per phele tu rona band kar
 
Nupur wiped her tears, then the gang came upto them
 
G: ussne..........(crying)............ mere sath.............( crying)......... zabardasti ki
 
M: kisne gunjan, mujhe batou
 
He hugged her to console her, then he broke the hug
 
M: batou gunjan kisne tumare sath zabardasti ki
 
G: ra...................ran.................RANVIJAI
 
Everybody was shocked, sam was boiling in anger, he went out for rv
 
Gunjan told them everything
 
D: dont worry gunjan, mein usko chorungi nai, ussne meri behen ko hath kaise lagaya
 
U: han gunjan i will kill him
 
B: usne jin hathon se tumhe hath lagaya hai na, wo ziada dair tak nai tikenge, mein uske hath thor dunga
 
N: dekh gunjan hum sab tere sath hain, usne teri aisi halta ki hai na, mein uski aisi halat karungi k wo kisi bhi ladki ko hath nai laga payega
 
Just then the police came
 
Inspecter: miss gunjan, humhe apse kuch sawal pochne hain
 
N: gunjan ghabra mat, yeh log tera bayan lene ayen hain
 
Inspecter: ples ap sab yahan se bhar chalen jayein
 
N: mein nai jaongi, meri behen ko mein kabhi bhi akela nai chorungi
 
Inspecter: ap kon hain?
 
N: mein gunjan ki behen hon, nupur
 
M: nupuir wo apni duty karahe hain, humhe bhar chalna hoga
 
Inspecter: its ok, she can stay
 
 
Gunaj told the inspector everything
 
Inspecter: dont worry miss gunjan, hum usse dhoond k rahenge
 
Just then sam came in
 
S: koi faida nai hai, wo apne ghar pe nai hai, mein abhi wahan se araha hon
 
Inspector:  ap kon hai?
 
S: mein gunjan ka dost hon, samrat
 
Inspecter: theek hai, dont worry wo ziada dino tak bhar nai rahega, we will catch him
 
Then the inspecter went out, sam came upto gunjan
 
S: chashsmish tum theek ho na
 
G: samrat tumne mujhe kyun bachaya, aisi zindagi jeene se acha mein mar jaati
 
S: gunjan ples aisi baten mat karo, filal abhi tum sojao, hum sab yahan hi hain poori rat, doctor kal tumhe discharge kar dega
 
G: jis insaan ka sab kuch lut gaya ho wo chain ki neend kaise so sakta hai
 
S: ples chasmish aisa mat bolo, hum sab tumara saath hain
 
He was controling his tears, gunjans words were echoing in his mind
 
JIS INSAAN KA SAB KUCH LUT GAYA HO WO CHAN KI NEEND KAISE SO SAKTA HAI
 
JIS INSAAN KA SAB KUCH LUT GAYA HO WO CHAN KI NEEND KAISE SO SAKTA HAI
 
JIS INSAAN KA SAB KUCH LUT GAYA HO WO CHAN KI NEEND KAISE SO SAKTA HAI
 
He went outside to cry
 
SAm to himself : chashmish mein tumse promise karta hon, k mein tumara sath aur kuch galat nai hone dunga
 
NEXT DAY
 
They all brought flowers for gunjan, she was sitting on her bed, then nupur came with gunjans cloths, later gunjan got ready n went home, she didnt go to the college from 1 week n rv was nowhere found
 
1 week later
 
Gunjan was sitting in her room n the nupuir came ther, she was living with gunjan since 1 week to take care of her, n gunjan was not gunjan anymore, she was changed, she just talked less, eat less, n stayed in her room all day, she was in a shock
 
N:  gunjan kal tu college chalegi na........
 
She was sitting there not responding, she didnt even no that nupur was there
 
N: gunjan....
 
no response
 
N: gunjan......
 
no response
 
N: GUNJAN!!!!.......
 
G: huh............ han di bolo tum kab ayi
 
N: gunjan mein terese yeh puchne ayi thi k kal college chalagi na
 
G: nai di, mein kaise un sabse nazare milaoungi
 
N: lekin gunjan , tu kab tak unse nazaren churaigi, ek na ek din tujhe college to jana hoga na
 
G: di mein college chor dungi
 
N: kya!!, gunjan iss hadse ki waaja se apni parai mat chor, please mein tere aage hath jorti hon
 
G: lekin di...
 
N: nai gunjan, meine tujhe paal pos k bara kiya hai aur uske sath bohot sapne bhi dekhen the, tu doctor banegi, mera aur bauji ka nam roshan karegi......
 
G: di nam to mera waise hi roshan ho chuka hai
 
N: gunjan ples mujhe beeti baten yaad nai karni, bas mujhe itna pata hai k tu kal college jayigi aur ye mera akhri faisala hai
 
She went from there
 
Next day, nupur convinced gunjan to come with her to college n they went to the college
 
COLLEGE
 
Gunjan n nupur entered the college, everybody stared towards gunjan, then nupur holde her hand n took her to the canteen, where the gang was sitting
 
Everybody was so happy to see gunjan in college
 
They both sat down, then he two girls were walking by talking about gunjan
 
Girl1: dekh aaj gunjan ayi hai college, iska to rape howa tha na
 
The gang was so angery, gunjan had tears in her eyes, she got up from the table n went out from the canteen followed by the gang 
 
Then there were some boys, they came infront of gunjan
 
Guy1: yr rv ne to apna maza lelia, ab hum to maza lelen, kyun gunjan ji
 
Guy2:  lkin hum kisika rape nai karte, hum to pyar se pochenge, kya hum apko touch karsakte hain
 
All started to laugh n the boy was about touch her, when somebody caught his hand, it was non other than sam
 
S: ab mein terese pouchon k mein tujhe hath laga sakta hon
 
He punched him direct in th face n then they all started to fight, benji,  uday n mayank joined him, they all beat them very badly, then other guy hits sam with a knife on his chest, then sam beats him very badly n then finaly they all ran from there
 
Gunjan was about to go when sam caught her hand
 
S: chashmish kahan jarahi ho
 
G: samrat kab tak yeh sab karte rahoge, kis kis ka moo band karoage
 
S: tab tak, jab tak mein zinda hon...................( long pause )............... im sorry sheena, shahid ab jo mein karne jaraha hon, uske liye tum shahid mujhe kabhi maaf nai karogi
 
Sheena was also standing with the gang
 
Then sam put blood on his thumb n putted his blood ob gunjans mang, everybody was shocked, the whole college was shocked, gunjan was shocked
 
G: samrat ye tumne kya kiya
 
S: meine jo kiya sahi kiya................ TUM SAB LOG GOAR SE SUNLO, GUNJAN KO MEIN SABKE SAMNE APNI PATI MANTA HON, AUR AGAR KISI NE MERI PATNI KO ZARA SA BHI TANG KIYA, TO MERE SE BHURA KOI NAI HOGA............
 
The gang was so happy for them
 
END 
 
ok guys i hope you all like it, i will cont on monday since im very busy ok, so enjoy
love you all
 
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