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PAri
really nice part :)
liked the story till now
looking fwd to know the rest:)
ookk guys this is the fastest and longest update,.,,
i hope u will lyk it.......
so here it is,,,,,,,,,,, and for the people who hav not yet commented on the previous update (coz i updated too fast are requested to comment on that part too... ) ok enjoy,, and no updates till a long long tym,,,,,,,,,,,, coz gotta update others too,,
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okk this was the first night of mayur....
mayur was feeling very awkward..........
mayank never shared his bed with anyone......
and nupur.... nupur did not know wats gonna happen next......
mayank b4 going to his room went to gunjan....
gunjan and he always shared a great bhabhi devar bond...
m: bhabhs tell me wat to do....
g: pata nahi mayank...... but u know nupur bahut samajhdaar hai so....
m: bhabhs kitni bhi samajhdaar ho wo abhi bacchi hai aur mujhe
seriously bahut bura lag rha hai.....
g: mayank.... tumhe kyu bura lag rha hai tumne thode hi kuch kiya
hai..... bas ab kamre mein jaao.....
mayank finally went to his room....
mayank thot how wud he able to deal with nupur.....
wen mayank entered the room nupur was in the bathroom,.......
she came out....
she was now wearing a light suit... and not that lehenga....
nupur felt nervous seeing him.....
he to enlighten the mood.....
m: sab kuch kitna jaldi ho gya na.....
n: haan...... kuch zyaada hi jaldi ho gya,,,,,
m: to.....
n: to?
m: ab..
n: ab??
m: frnds....
n: fnrds...
mayank thot no other way to talk to her to make her comfortable...
m: so tell me something abt you.......
n: abt me???,,,,, ummm....... mere baare mein kya bataaoo???
m: tumhe kya accha lagta hai?
n: mujhe biology acchi lagti hai par chemistry physics nahi......
m: ohkk...... (he was not thinking of studies but he felt good as he
was also interested in studies..) par chemisrtry physics kyu nahi
acche lagte..
n: bas nahi lagte ussi ki wajah se mere marks down ho jaate hai...
m: ohh par chemistry physics mere bhi subjects the.... aur bio nahi
tha... to mein tumhe pada sakta hoon....
n: sach..... tum mujhe aage padne doge???????
m: kyu??tumhe aage nhi padne???
n: nahi nhai padna hai... aur tum bataao tumhe kya accha lagta hai??
m: mujhe??? mujhe to sab accha lagta hai,,,,,,,,
n: karela bhi???
m: haan....
and they talked and became very good frnds in a nights tym,,,,
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next day.....
nupur was srtruggling to wear saree......
n: by god ye saree mein kabhi nahi pehenpaaungi..... 12th ke farewell
mein pehni thi wo bhi di ne itne saare pins lagaaye the..... aur abhi
to di ke paas bhi nahi jaa sakti.... unki itne romantic se orning ko
bigaad doongi.......
m: saree pehenna zaroori hai?? (he asked listning to nupur)
n: wo maa ne kaha mein kuch bhi pehen sakti hoon lekin aaj saree......
m: ohk...... to tum yeh saree pehenlo.....
he said showin her a saree........ she looked at it... it was a new
pattern in which the saree was already done (the patlis were already
stiched so no need to make them)
n: great....... i love you........
she said and moved to the bathroom.......... without realising wat she
said......
mayank blushed,,,,,,,
m: bacchi hai,,,,,,,
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in the hall....
all were coming and seeing both brides..... and complementing them........
in the evening,,,,
nupur changed to a chudidaar suit..
mm: to baccho ab kya plan hai??
m: kya??
mm; honey moon ka......
m & n: honeymoon????????
s: haan honeymoon.....
g: mein to kehti hoon hum charon saath mein chalte hai,.
s: haan... bbahut maze aayenge..
m: par hum aapke honeymoon pe..
s: yeh tera bhi honey moon hai........
m: par....
g: par war kuch nahi tum dono bhi chal rahe ho bas..
finally they had to agree.....
all four went.....
it was a farm house in Goa.......
both the couples atayed in different cottages...
mayur agreed to give sajan space so that sajan cud enjoy their honey
lyk a honey moon,
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m: so pehle kahaan chale?
n: shopping.............
m: cheeeeeee....... i hate it..
n: plz..... plz patidev plz........
m: kya??? konsa dev??
n: patidev... yaani husband...........
m: accha...........
n: haan.....
m: aur mujhe patidev kyu bulaaya jaa rha hai??
n: kyuki tum par makhan lagaana hai....
m: ohh,,,,,,,, (he smiled on her innocence)thik hai baba.......
shopping chal rhe hai..
n: yeh.................
they went for shopping..
nupur did a lot of shopping.........
then she saw a icecream waala......
n: patidev....... icecream,,,,,,,,,,
m: nupur icecream??? itni thand mein..
n: plz.............................
m: chalo tume mana karke mujhe koi naya pet name nahi rakhna hai......
n: chalo.....
they went and ate icecream....
mayank was enjoying nupur enjoying the icecream.......
she is so innocent,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, he thot........
they then went home.....
n: dekho mein yeh saamaan laayi hoon.........
mayank: hmm..... par yeh sab?? yeh sab kiske liya?
n: dekho yeh maa ke liye yeh i ke liye yeh jiju ke liye aur yeh
tumhaare liye......
m:" acche hai...................
their bonding was growing very fast........
they started feeling for each other..... but never expressed it..
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after 2 years
now nupur was shifted to the hostel for further studies and mayank too
lived in that hostel only..
one night,,,,,,
there was a knock on mayank's room... (mayank shared the room with
benji and adhiraj)
b: mein dehta hoon......
benji opened the door...... and found a gal with 2 ponies in her night suit....
benji whislted........
b: boys hostel mein kya kar rhi ho madam???
n: naaspeete..... mere pati ko pata chala ki tujhpe seeti maarta hai
to wo tujhe kaccha chaba jaayega,,
benji at once stratled..
b: arey guys yeh dekho koi ladki aayi hai,,
a & m: ladki??? raat ko 11.30 baje??
b: kya zamaana aa gya hai,,,,,, pehle ladke aate the ab ladkiyaan aati hai,,,,
n: patidev......... kaha ho aap??
b: patidev??
mayank reconised her,,
m: nupur....... tum yaha??? abhi,,, itni raat ko..
nupur moving inside,,,
n: bahut gadbad ho gyi hai pativ=dev,,,,,,,, (she said moving inside)
a: arrey areey andar kaha ghusi jaa rahi ho??? yeh hummaara room hai..
n: tumse kisi ne poocha??
m: nupur yeh sab kya hai?
n: mayank wo...
a: mayank yeh sab kya ho rha hai?
n: arrey tum do minute chup karoge....... mein kuch baat kar rahi hoon
na..............
adhiraj looked at her in disbelief,,,
n: haan to mein kaha thi..... haan... kal chamistry ka paper hai aur
mujhe kuch nahi aata,,,,,,,,,
a: to??
n: tu chup raho...
m: tumhe ab yaad aa raha hai.
n: patidev,.,,
m: thik hai ..... aao..... mere paas aur koi option hai kya?/
n: nahi..
m: to aao.....
a: oh hello.... kahaan aao??? yeh amaara apartment hai.....
n: shut up....... chalo mayank,,,,,
maaynk teaches her for an hour and thn she is done.....
n: by god patidev tum bhi na ,,,,,, tum to god ho god..
a: ho gya???
n: aaj mein isse chodne waali nhi hoon... chapar chapar bole jaa raha
hai.... sharam nhi aati pati patni ke beech mein bolta hai..
and she started running behind adhiraj.....
a: (running) mujhe bachaao mayank tumhaari patni mujh khaa jaayegi..
n: accha... (she took aut her slipper and threw it on him)
a: ouch......
mayank stopped nupur........
m: nupur ab tum jaao..... bhut raat ho gyi hai......
n: par mujhe neend nhi aa rai.....
a & b; to????????????????? (very excitedly)
n: to mein yeh game khelungi....
she said looking at the video game there...
a: yeh hummaara hai,.,
n: to mein isse khareedne nahi aayi hoon...
b: guys khelte hai na... kal humaari chutti hai aur ,,, areey haan kal
to humaari chutti hai to tumhaara kal test kese hua??
n?: arrey mera kal koi test nahi hai.... kal mujhe maze karne hai
isliye aaj hi pad li...... par ab mujhe abhi bhi maze karne hai......
b: to khelte hai na..... wese bhi isme chaar jane khel sakte hai....
mein aur adhiraj humesha partner rehte hai mayank ko kabhi koi partner
nahi milta..
n: arrey waah to iski life partner hai na,,,,,,, iski partner banne ke liye,,
mayank was just watching her.....
they started playing the game..
nupur was playing very good..... she was a champion..
finaaly mayur won........
and as they won......
they both stood up and started dancing..
"bhangra"... and they were singing.. "hum jeet gye hum jeet gye... tum
haar gye tum haar gye.."
adhiraj and benji were lookng at them in disbelief.
a: tum dono poore paagal ho,,,,, i cant believe mayank jo IIT clear
karne waala hai aur nupur jo doctor banne ke aim se yahaan aayi hai wo
dono yeh dance.........
b: yes,,,,,, aur nupur ab mujhe lagta hai ki tumhe ghar jaana chahiye
kyuki ab subah ho gyi hai,.,,
n: haan to jaa rhi hoon na,,,,,,,,
a: ab to hum teeno bhi tumhaare saath chalte hai coz hume miss aha ne
bulayaa tha,,,,,,
n: to chalo...
b: par tumhe watchman ne dekh liya to...
n: chalo bhi...
mayur, adhiraj and benji went to the door wen watchman stopped them,,
wm: ohh nupur madam mere paise??
n: konse paise??
wm: aapne hi to kaha tha ki agar mene aapki shikaayat principal se nhi
ki , ki aap raat mein boys hostel aayi thi to aap muujhe 500 rupees
dengi..
n: par mein to nhi doongi....
wm: to thik hai mein principal ko bataa deta hon...
n: to bata do...
wm: kya...
n: haan tum yehi bataaoge na ki kese tumne paison ke liye apna eemaan
bech diya... jis thaali mein khaate ho usme ched kar diya... (trying
to act filmy) aur...
wm: accha accha thik hai aap jaao.... jaao jaao.......
they left..
and adhiraj and benji were amazed by nupur's wits....
b: great nupur....mayank tumhaari wife bahut clever hai.....
mayank felt pride....
wen nupur recieves a phone call....
n: hello..... kya??? sach,,,,,,,,,,,,,, by god mubaarak ho..........
of course hum aaj hi aa rhe hai,,,,,,,
she cuts the phone,,,,,,,,,,
n: mayank.. good news gunjan di ko ladka hua hai.
m: sach.......... thats gret,,,,,
n: haina by god.......
they leave for mumbai,,,,,
they reach mumbai.....
nupur goes and excitingly takes the baby in her arms...
n: awee....... kitna sweet hai.....
wen mayank too cums and starts playing with the kid...
m: arearee...... chachu ke saath kheloge...........
n: nahi maasi ke saath..
m: chachu..
n: maasi..
m: chachu....
g: arry dono ke saath,,,,,,,
they both start plzying wih the kid,........
soon the guest arrive........
on the dining table.....
all were having lunch....
wen one of the auntys said
aunty: arrey shilpa ab teri choti bahu kab khush khabri suna rhi hai.....
mayank was eating the snacks and the snacks came out of his mouth and
he started coughing....
while nupur was all red......
shilpa: arrey kya bataaoo.... mujhe bhi issi ka intezaar hai.....
nupur was red lyk tomato and mayank started coughing more badly....
shilpa: arrey nupur beta mayank ko paani pilaao,,,,,,,
nupur not able to meet mayank's eyes started puoring water in his
glass.. wen the water spills and falls on mayank's shirt...
s: jaao jaa kar saaf kar lo... nupur iski madad karna warna yeh poora
shirt kharaab kar dega...
n: jee....
they go to the washroom of their room......
nupr is helping mayank wash his shirt..
m: oh leave.................
and he removes his shirt........
he was wearing black vest now and was looking hot......
nupur was blushing..
now i have to tell you wat i saw in their diaries........
in mayank's diary'
i love nupur because she is sweet...... and never gets dissapointed
that she is married.. she always wears a small mangalsutra and puts a
little sindoor ... and in home she wears a long mangalsutra... i love
her for that.... she never feels shy to call me "patidev" in front of
everyone,,,,, she never feels shy to tell everyone that she is
married,,,,,,, i love hr the way she is.......
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in nupur's diary
i love mayank becoz he is smart.... and never ever he tried to
misbehave with me..... always stayed with me lyk a friend and made me
feel comfortable....... he never asks me to stop calling him patidev
in front of ever one.. every tym i call him patidev he smilingly
replies which i luv... many boys try to hide if they are maried but he
never asked me to do so..... i love him the way he is...
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i blushed reading that....
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okk again to the scene ,,, they were in the bathroom....
nupur turned back and her foot slipped.... and she was going to fall....
but mayank was there to hold her.....
he held hre befoe se cud fall......
his one hand was on her waist. and other holding her hands tightly,,,,
and nupurs hand was on mayank's chest/..,.
there was a long eyelock..........
then they came back to senses......
mayank made her stand......
they were looking everyw here except each other....
n: ouch...
mayank saw she was hurt and was not able to walk............
he caught hold of her waist and put his one hand on her shoulder and
helped her walking..
nupur felt a sensation as he came close same with mayank.....
but twas not helping nupur still was not able to walk..
finally mayank ook her in his arme and went to the room.....
he made her sit on the bed......
brought the spray,,,,,,, he put he leg on his hand
and sprayed it on her ,,,,,,,
then he started giving her massage......
ar rather he was moving his hand lovingly on her ankle...
nupur was blushing and mayank was enjoying seeing her blushing,,,,,,,,,,,
and wen she was blushing he understood she has sum feelings for him..
and from passt many days he is noticing that nupur has also fallen for
him,, (hai mera dimaag daar mayyu)
he wanted to tease nupur..
m: umm nupur,,,,,,,,
n: haan.......
m: wo maa kya keh rhi thi???
n: kya??
m: ki choti bahu konsi khush khabri sunaaa de??
nupur's jaw dropped...... she knew he was teasing her... but how can
he just ask her lyk that??? but ofcourse he is yur husband
nupur,,,,,,,
n: mayank tumhe mein nahi chodungi mujhe chida rahe ho...............
she wanted to rum behind him but her ankle got hurt,,
n: aah..........................
mayank: tum bhi na npur,,,,,,, do min wait karo yeh abhi thik ho jaayega,,,
n: itni jaldi??
m; haan,,,, tumhe fracture nahi hua hai jo mahine lag jaayenge..
n: thik hai.. mein doctor hoon........
m: hoon nahi banne waali hoon......
after one hour..
nupur was alright now,,
n: haan to tum kya keh rahe the patidev?? (she sid mavng towards mayank)
m: kuch nahi...
and he started running...... nupur was throwing pillows on him and
cushions and many more......
and was trying to catch himm.....
mayank was just enjoying the moment ,,,,, he cud hav replied by
thowing pillows back but he did not do so,
finally nupur cauht him........
now the scene was myank was on the bed and nupur was on him..
n: ab bolo nupur ki jai..................
m: nupur ki jai...................
n: hmm......
nupur tried movng up but soon fell on mayank............
now they were too close.....
their lips were just inches away,,,,
there was a long long eyelock,,,,,,,,,,,,,
mayank broke the eyelock......
m: umm.....
nupur slowly moved aside and gave way to mayank.......
mayank stood up.........
and went out of the room....
at night,,,
this after a very long tym that mayur were sleeping on same bed,,,,,,,,
a little awkwardness but both were happy inside..
thye both slept as soon as they lied on the bed coz they weere too
much tired of their journey and recieving the guests..
in the morning....
mayank woke up and found that nupur and he were too close and nupur
was on him...... his hand was covering her waist and her hands were on
his neck....
there legs were antangled with each other......
his other hand was in her hair.........
they wer literaaly hugging..... and nupur's head was resting on his
chest below his neck......
mayank was lost in her......... they were very comfortably nuzzled to
each other.........
wen nupur moved a bit and her lips touched his chest,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
mayank cudnot help gazing her,,,,,,,,,,,,
wen nupur in sleep made herself comfortable by wraaping her arms
around him.........
mayank smiled...................
mayank was lost in her beauty,,,
wen he noticed her smile...
she was smiling in her dreams....
and soon her smile started disappearing.....
and her expressions changed into a frightening ones.....
her nails were digiing in his arms....
a tear rolled down her eyes.................
mayank was watching all this,,,,,
nupur suddenly woke up with a jerk.............
she saw mayank in her arms and hugged him tightly....
mayank cud feel she was crying....
m: nupur.... nupur u okk........ koi bura sapna dekha kya??? (he said consoling her)
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