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Fan-Fic..*Dil Ka Rishta*CONTIUED *PG 38* (Page 3)

Rabba-Ve-Delena IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 20 November 2005 at 1:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by nottyangel

Originally posted by Amazin nd hot!

Originally posted by nottyangel

Originally posted by Amazin nd hot!

Originally posted by nottyangel

yepeeeeeeeeeeeeee looks like another super fabolouse fan fic iz starting Embarrassed

ouma darling i love your fan fics soooooooooo much Embarrassed
i cant wait for tomorow Big smile Big smile this fan fic sounds soooooooooooooooooooooooo good n intresting Clap you are one of the best fan fic writers Thumbs Up Tongue
sweety cont soon Embarrassed lob ju Embarrassed


maryam

Aww Maryam SUPERSTAR...EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed..ThankU soo much for you kind compliments...LOLLOLLOL, its only for you Superstarz I write theese Fan-Fics....and I really hope you like this one...ThankU so much.

Tomarrow is the wedding...

Luv ya..

Ouma

welcome iz alwayzBig smileEmbarrassed

of course i will love it Embarrassedi love this kinda love storiez about A-KEmbarrassed

lob ju laodzEmbarrassed

maryam

 

Lol, Yes me  love reading these kind of stories too, but rubbish at writing them, you know Romance ain't my thing, but Thriller writing...lolz, Yes..

Luv ya too..

Ouma

LOL

are sab jalta hai ...romance ho ya thrillerLOLur storiez are not rubbish at allEmbarrassed

they are so cute n sweetEmbarrassed

lob ju

maryam

 

Awwwww, so sweet ji, Ur superstar..

Luv ya..

Ouma

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Posted: 20 November 2005 at 1:41am | IP Logged
sounds cooooool

grr8

continue soon!!!!!


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Posted: 20 November 2005 at 1:47am | IP Logged

Originally posted by angad-kripa4eve

sounds cooooool

grr8

continue soon!!!!!


lol, Thanks I wil continu today some time..

Luv ya..

Ouma

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Posted: 20 November 2005 at 9:12am | IP Logged

Preparations!

Dulha ka ghar

Khanna house looked Grand as ever, decoraters, Lighters, Entatainment, and many many more wedding planners were buzzing around. Naina came running downstairs, she wore a Burgandy sari, with gold wire decorations. She looked around then started shouting for someone.

N:Kartic, Kartic beta kaha ho tum, aur yeh Pritvhi bhi kaha gayab hogeya...

A man comes from the outside he was wearing a black suit with a sparkly white shirt underneath, he was on his Samsung D500 phone,

K:Yes ek mintur rookye(Wait).. Kya hai Mom, dehck nahi rehri main kitna busy hoon, Angad ki shaadhi hai..

N:Beta state the obivous, isse bhaat ki bareh maine tumme bolaya, tum log yeh..yeh kya karahai hoo, dehcko, lighting bhi nahi shuru hui, beta guests arrre hai, shaadhi 4 ghanto mani hai, I'm getting stressed out.

Kartic looks up kind of laughing,

K:Mom, look Mandap tayaar hai, aur lighting baad main...

N: Aur..aur Khana, woh teek hai na, acha khana hai na..

K:Yes Mom, Food is Fine..

N:Tumme kaise pata, what what if theres something wrong in there go and check..

K:Mom, AniTTah check kari hai..

N:Kya matlab.

K:You no, aur motti hona chahti hai woh,

Kartic laughs, Naina just walks around even more tence,

N:Mazaak ki waqt nahi hai, aur yeh Pritvhi kaha hai, aur Angad, Angad tayar hai ki kya...

K:Mom, Angad uapar uapna bedroom main hai, Dadi ki saath...

Sure enough Angad was upstairs in his bedroom, Dadi sat on his black leather sof, Angad had his on her lap, Dadi patted on the head gently....

A:Dadi, uape khush hai naa,

D:Bete aghar tum khush hoon, toh main kyun nahi, ajj tumhara shaadhi hai, barsoo ka joh sapna that woh aj pora hora hai.

Anhad smiled, something in his face told Dadi he was not entirley happy, that today was his wedding day..

D: Beta I'm sorry.

Angad lifts his head, kneels to face Dadi, who wore a sad expression on her face.

A:Dadi, sorry mujhe kyun..uape mujhse bari hai, Dadi please...

D:No beta, mujhe pata hai tum kush nahi hoon, kyunki jis duhlhan se tumhara shaadhi hori hai tum ne toh usse millatak nahi hai abb..

A:Dadi phone peh bhaat kiya naa..

D:Line kharab ta..yaha tak tumne uski chera tak bhi nahi dehcka...

A:Shaadhi ki bhaat raat din toh decko gha,

D:Par kyu na, tum abbhi dehcklo..

She wore a smile..

A:Matlab, Dadi..

D:Photo beta photo dehcko...

She passes a photo of the Dulhan

Angad gets the photo, and closes his, eyes, he hopped she was what he wanted, he opens his eyes, there he sees a beautiful girl sitting there in beutiful sari, she wore a pretty smile, her hair looked shiny and silky. Angad smiled...

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Dadi smiles..

D:Kya hua Angad....Achi lagi meri pari..

Angad giggles, and gets embrassed, Dadi laughs,

D:Shaadhi ki age yeh haal hai, photo main itni khubsurat, toh socho shaadhi main kaise lagegi?

Angad giggles even more.. Naina who enters,

N:Par Mummy ji, humara Angad bhi kuch kaam nahi, Rockstar hai woh Rockstar, socho woh ladki kitni lucky hai....Abb Angad tum ready ho jao...

Dulhans Ghar

Her room was packed with girls running around giggling,

Kripa sat in front of the dressing table, prefessional beautions, got her ready. After that Gaythri came and but the long red scarf over her head, she looked beautiful....

Bobby, Kripas little brother enters,

B:Thank-God ajj shaadhi hai, aur shaadhi ki dog din baad hum Nanital wapaas jahreh hai, I'm missing My PS2, I hate living in this hotel...

Indeed the Sharmas were staying in a hotel, since they orrignally live in Nanital, thats why the shaadhi is takeing place at the Duhlas,

K:Bobby shut-up..

B:Par didi, sab se acha bhaat main batawo,

K:Kya..

B:Aj tum jahreh ho, iska matlab, tumhara room abb mera hoga, YES YES YES,..

Kripa gets a up and grabs a pillow to wack Bobby, Bobby runs and teases...

G:Tum dono larna band karo abb,

............................................................ ..................

Ok thats it for now, wait anothe hour Wedding will be up..............

Do comment..

Luv ya..

Ouma

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Posted: 20 November 2005 at 9:47am | IP Logged

ConfusedConfusedConfused...CryCryCry..No-One liked it....Confused...Ufff...LOLLOLLOL..Fine me not writing no..more..lolz

Luv ya..

Ouma

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Posted: 20 November 2005 at 10:03am | IP Logged
no i luved it cont soon plz pzl plz !!
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ouma my pyaari jaanu luved it man Clap
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