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Khusum reveals her identity.Knowing the evil personality of Mahi even
Kali hates her.Mahi commits suicide.Kali accepts Khusum as her
mom.Garv is the one who was there with Khusum always.Abhay,Kumud &
Kali see Khusum with a sad face.They ask her the reason.Kali:Khusum
mom,now whats ur problem?U got everything back.U got papa...ur
daughter....    Kali weeps....:now u hav another daughter
too.Myself.Kumud & Abhay smile.KHusum weeps & hugs kali:u were always
my daughter.She wipes her tears.Abhay:tell khusum,whats ur problem?
Khusum:nothing like that,i was simply thinking about Garv.If he was
noth there with me...i can't imagine.Abhay:Yes,he is a nice guy.Kumud
turns back.Kali notices her face _expression.Khusum:i did'nt hav the
luck to giv b"th to garv.Abhay:but he is always our sonShe:i know
that .But he was always alone.Now he is going abroad.Kumud gets
shocked.Abhay:he doesn't want to live here with his sad
memories.Tears rises in Kumud"s eyes.She goes.kali follows her.She
sees her crying.she returns back to khusum & abhay.abhay :kali,garv
is alone.why can't u go back to him.he is such a nice guy.Kali:yes,he
is a nice boy.i understand my mistakes.THey smile.Kali:but i can't go
to garv.Abhay:why?kali:i don't want to giv anyone painKhusum:who's
going to become sad?everyone will be happy.Kali:kumud won't be
happy.abhay:kali,now also u hav misunderstanding about kumud.she
wants to see ur happiness.Kali:i know that papa.Kumud wants to see me
happy.like before this time also she will sacrifice her happiness 4
me.but i don't want her to do that anymore.Abay:what do u mean?
kali:ha papa,kumud loves garv.khusum:what nonsense,she loves
kshitij.Kali:kshitij was her 1st luv,but her true luv is garv.Being
her parents u did'nt understand that?Shame.u know how she controls
her tears?just now i saw her crying.3 of them see kumud praying
before Ganesha:why r u giving pain to garv ?he always luves me.But
what did i giv him?pain..only pain...what life is this god?Abhay &
khusum understand her worries.3 of them in a room.Khusum:but kumud is
somebody else's wife.we should not forget that.kali:but mom,if she
does'nt get happiness from him,whats the use of living with him?Kumud
was thinking about garv.Background song-tere naam....Kshitij notices
her sadness.kali meets kshitij& tells him about kumud's feeling 4
garv.Kali:she controls everything bcoz of u.if u luv her,u should giv
her happiness& her happiness is garv,only garv.Kali goes away.Kshitij
meets with an accident,bcoz he was careless in his driving thinking
about kali's words,Garv sees it & takes him to the hospital.He gets
consciousness & he asks 4 kumud.Kumud goes.Kshitij:kumud,i called u
to say 'bye-bye'.Kumud cries:no,nothing will happen to u.he
smiles.He:i'm going ...but u should not waste ur life by crying.Garv
is a nice guy.Ur life is garv.She gets shocked,He:i know that ur mind
has place only 4 garv.my mistake was that i tried to get his
position.kumud cries.Then he asks 4 garv.garv comes.Kshitij:i'm going
garv.Garv:no...it won't happen ,bcoz kumud needs
u.Kshitij:no,garv.but she needs u.she should not be alone.u must be
there with her.Garv could'nt say anything.Kshitij dies.After a few
months only garv decides to go abroad.he comes to say good-bye to
kumud.she controls her tears.When he goes....flashback with the song
tere naam....kumud looses her control & runs to garv.Though she
did'nt say anything her tears tell that she wants to be with
garv.Abhay,khusum& kali see it& become happy.Kali's tears come out&
she wipes it.It rains.It was a romantic rain 4 garv & kumud.They look
at each other.Pure luv in their eyes.THE END.




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Posted: 20 November 2005 at 12:10am | IP Logged
plz read

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Posted: 20 November 2005 at 1:30am | IP Logged
I read it...it was NICE... Smile   

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hey u do a gr8 job with your stories. ijust loved terenaam plz continue it.

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Posted: 22 November 2005 at 6:32am | IP Logged

LOL

Originally posted by jasminerahul


Mahi commits suicide.

LOL

Arre Suraj raat mein nikal sakta hai,

Chand nikalna bhool sakta hai, Lekin Mahi SUiICIDE karle yeh kabhi nahi ho sakta...LOLMahi woh Dain (Witch) hai jo sabko maar kar hi maare gi...LOLLOL

Usko toh KKUSUM hi ko marna padeka....

Warna woh toh marne walon meinse hi hai....LOL

 

Other than that....I was perfect....Clap

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