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Posted: 11 February 2010 at 3:12am | IP Logged
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part 2-

love it yaar........... fantastic......
update soon


thanku soooo much mahima !!
i will but shayad time lag jaega but will definitely let u knwo

loads of love
vinu



i'll wait

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Posted: 11 February 2010 at 3:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mjht_admirer

Hi everyone !!! I m so sorry to inform u all that this time also i may not be able to update jaldi jaldi. I m very very busy with studies, college & specially the cultural programme which is this weekend in my society.

That means either i can update it on the valentine's day or nxt week. I know some of u are eagerly waiting 4 the upcoming part, actually me too LOLLOLLOL, but saala yeh time hi nahi milta, milta hai to thaki hui rahti hun kuch likhne ke liye. & this time i too wanna make it a big update, warna phir joote padengeLOL.

So u guys have to wait 4 few more days. Plzzzz bear this intezaar ha !!!

loads of love
vinu


i guess we have no other option but to wait

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Hey jst came across ur ff An dI luv it
and their characters in ur ff r jst perfect
luv all the parts
plz pm me when u update next part and take me on your buddy list..... Tongue Big smile

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hey nice part

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Hiiiiiii friends !! so i m finally back. i was supposed to update on valentine's day, but main nahi kar paayi. Before reading the update, i wanna share some good news tht, last weekend, jis din valentin'es spl episode tha, tht day we had a cultural function in our colony, which turned out to be huge success and i m very happySmile. Thats why i was not able to update properly in the last week and thanku all for bearing this delay.

Bas aur bakwaas nahi, heres the part 3. enjoy. & plzzz do comment. i really love to read them all.

Hugloads of loveHug
vinu


Note: its more like an entire gang scene rather than Benia. i needed to focus on everyone also.



   #3

Bhushan
Mansion

 

Shilpa Aunty and Mrs. Sharma were comfortably sitting in the living room, enjoying their chit chat, when suddenly both decided to have some fun with their Mr. Sadu

 

SA: Mayuuuu.........Khana ban gaya kya? Kuch help kar du??

 

N: Arre nahi maa. Mayank ko help ki kya zaroorat? Uska pyaara sa helper already kitchen mein ha na.

 

Both the ladies giggle and our beloved mr. sadu comes out of kitchen giving his precious sadu look. As soon as they saw him, stopped giggling & tried to make serious faces.

 

M: Maa !  Nupur ! Dekhiye main aap logo ko aakhiri baar kah raha hun, taane marna band kijiye. Nupur, tumse to main baad mein nipat lunga. Apne pyaaaaaare se uday bhaiya ko bhej diya, meri help karne who bhi khaana banana mein aur khud yaha bethe bethe maa ke saath gappe maar rahi ho???

 

N: maa dekho na !! making a cute sad face

 

SA: Mayu !!! Apni nupur se aise baat karte hai kya?? Not happening mayu.

 

Meanwhile uday comes out of kitchen eating a sandwich & stands beside mayank.

 

U: kihi e muhe yaa kia???

 

Mayank giving his sadu looks.Angry

 

M: Dekho uday ! tum ek kaam to dhang e karte ho nahi to do do kaam kyun kar rahe ho???

 

U: huu???

 

M: huu nahi. Tumhara mooh. Ya to chup chap sandwich khao, ja by the way mera tha, ya to sirf bolo jo bolna chahte the.

 

U: Ohhhh. Sorry & gives his sweet smile but it vanishes when he gets continuous glares from his priy jijaji. And as usual he forgot what he wanted to say. SA & nupur were smiling at his innocence.

 

M: uday !! maine tumse kuch bola, bhool gaye???

 

U: haa.....woh....and he makes a sad face.

Both the ladies were terribly enjoying this jiju-saala moment. On one hand where mayank was happy tht "thank god !! uday forgot what he wanted to say or do." And on the other hand, nupur decided to break this heatLOLWink between them by adding a tinch of salt.

 

N: Arre uday bhaiya ! aap kitchen se bahar kyun aa gae?? Aapko kitchen mein mazaa nahi aa raha?? Aapko to kitchen mein time spend karma bahut pasand hai na??

 

SA: haan uday beta. Tumhe waha acha nai lag raha kya???

 

M: Lo!! Phir shuru ho gaye saas-bahu !!WinkWink

 

U: arre nahi aunty, aapka kitchen to bahut hi cool hai. Kitne saare to varieties hai, aur aapka fridge to........WOW!!! main usme poora din guzar sakta hun. Icecream, chocolates, butter, cheese..........and he goes on and on

 

M: to jaake fridege mein hi beth jao na, mera hi sir mila tha kya bethne ko???

 

SA: mayu !!! and she gives her typical mom look.

 

U: arre mayank !! tumhara naam kabse mayank se mayu ho gaya?? Waise mayank se zyada acha mayu sound karta hai.

 

Both the ladies again giggle.

 

M: tabse, jabse tum mere sale ban gaye ho, nupur ke uday bhaiya . aur khabardaar jo mujhe mayu bulaya to.

 

Uday gets scared by his jiju's glares & stands behind hi fav sister, making a cute puppy face.

 

SA: ohooo mayu !! ab itna bhi mat darao apne sale sahib ko. Dekho, kitna pyaara ladka hai & she pulls his cheeks. Uday ke to khushi ka koi thikana hi nahi rahta. Seeing all the ladies' support, mayank gets irritated and gets back to kitchen work, but not b4 giving looks to uday which clearly meant, "don't u dare to follow me uday."

 

N: koi baat nahi uday bhaiya. Yeh lijiye chips and gives him a full plate of potato chips. Aapke liye khaas taur se le aayi hun.

 

U: thanku soo much my fav sister.

 

Itne mein sajan aur adhiani dono aa jate hain and this is the 1st time all of them are meeting shilpa aunty. Nupur 1st calls mayank from the kitchen and thn introduces everyone to her mom.

 

N: "maa, yeh hai gunjan. Meri pyaari si behan," (and she keeps her right hand on gunjan's cheeks.) "aur inki saali sahiba".

Gunjan touches her feet and gets her blessings.

 

G: Namaste aunty !!

 

SA: "Namaste beta !!" she kisses her forehead. "khush raho beta."

 

N: "yeh hai adhiraj urff real babloo aur yeh hai suhaani".

 

They both also touches her feet & gets her blessings. Now, u all must be thinking ki where is our jaanuable samrat ji??? Wait wait wait, he is also there. Ab unki tuning to kuch alag hi hoti hai na har kisi seWinkWink. Though he was meeting shilpa aunty for the 1st time  but had heard so much about her from nupur tht he secretly started admiring her. He always wanted someone like shilpa aunty to be his mom. Is maamle mein who hamesha mayank se jealous feel karta tha, but now he was ok. Infact today he was on cloud 9 aur is mulaakat ko who aise waise tareeke se thodi hi gava deta. Aakhir hamara samrat hai bhai !!WinkWink

 

N: "aur yeh hai........be4 she cud introduce him, yeh mahashay khud hi shuru ho jaate hai.

 

S: (pointing himself) ......."aur yeh hai aapki filmy bahu ke genious pati ki pyaari si saali sahiba ka best cum special friend, Samrat Shergill".

 

Ab yeh kya kam  tha, jo Shilpa Aunty bhi shuru ho gayi.

 

SA: this time she pointed herself -..........."aur yeh hai, is pyaari si gunjan ke jiju-sir ki filmy patni ki saasu maa urff shilpa aunty".

 

Everyone laughs & surprisingly samrat touches her feet & hugs her. Gunjan was touched by his gesture, everyone felt so proud of him n nupur was very happy for both of them.

 

SA: jeete raho beta !! waise kaafi kuch suna hai tumhare bare mein aur tum bilkul waise hi nikale. A very handsome badmaash.

 

Su: Aakhir bhai kiska hai !!

 

A: wrong Suhaani. Tumhe kahna chahiye, "aakhir boyfriend kiska hai!!"

 

Everyone laughs and gunjan Blushing.

 

M: saali sahiba, agar abhi itni Sharma jaogi to shaadi mein kya karogi???

 

She blushes even more. Blushing

 

N: mayank !! tum bhi na. waise maa, suhaani samrat ki behan hai aur adhiraj''.

 

SA: samrat ka saala. I mean hone waala saala.

 

Now it was suhaani's turn to BlushingBlushing& samrat comes near her and hugs her sideways.

 

SA: adhiraj beta, morena mein jo kuch bhi hua aur shaadi mein bhi jo kuch hua''

 

A: aare nahi aunty !! aap please aise mat sochiye. Us waqt maine hi situation ko thode galat tareeke se handle kiya tha aur mayank nupur ki to koi galti hi nahi thi aunty. Bas bui n bauji ko bahut badi galatfaimy ho gayi thi. Aur aaj main in dono ke liye bahut khsuh hu. SmileSmile (side se mayank ko hug karta hai) warna main yaha aata hi kyun aunty??

 

S: kyunki tumhari suhani aayi hai yah ape, isilie.

 

Ab itni bhari sabha mein tumhe aur tumhari gf ko itne pyaar se tease karien to koi bhi Sharma hi jayega na. aur aisi hi halat kuch adhiani ki thi. Blushing

 

M: maa, ab bas bhi karo. Kitchen mein na bahut saare tamatar pade hue hain. Hume jeete jagte tamatar nahi chhiye.

 

Again everyone laughs and adhiraj came back to his normal form.

 

A: ohhhh, so mayank ko bhi logo ki taang khichayi karni aati hai !!!

 

S: aakhir sangat ka asar hai.

 

G: mere jiju-sir ko itna bhi padaku mat samjho adhiraj. Inka sense of humour bahut hi kamal ka hai. Hain na jiju-sir???

 

M: bilkul meri saali sahiba.WinkWink

 

N: chalo chalo, baut baatein ho gayi. Arre !! yeh dia aur benji kaha rah gaye???

 

They hear the sound of a vehicle.

 

S: lo, sahitaano ka naam liya aur shaitaan haazir.

 

Benia today came in Benji's car, u all know why??? They parked the car and entered the house.

 

Samrat's POV ' yeh benji kiske saath aa raha hai??

Mayank's POV ' who benji ke side mein kaun hai???

Nupur's POV ' haay by god !! yeh kaun hai???

Gunjan's & Suhani's POV ' Kitni sundar lag rahi hai who.

Adhiraj's POv ' whos she???

Uday's POV ' kaash mujhe bhi koi aisi mil jaati.

 

As soon as she came much nearer, they realized who she was and then''

Everyone's POV ' dia???? Deedz????

 

Its so strange na, how everyone's mind was working in the same way and no one, no one noticed our beloved benji jiCryCry. Well, whom he wanted himself to get noticed by, already noticed him very nicely few hours backWinkWink. So it didn't mattered to him whether his frndz notice him or not. He was actually enjoying this attention which they all were giving to his Dia. He always knew tht Dia gets attention all the time, but this kinda attention was making him feel very proud. She was his treasure and the thought of getting so many happy and shocking reactions from them after revealing their ultimate secret was making him even more excited.

 

Everyone knew that dia always looks very beautiful, but never imagined tht she cud look this much beautiful and tht too with benji. (pheww......thank god, benji came in limelight) May be they forgot but they have already seen her like this earlier on Dussera day. Ab bechare sab apne problems mein itne uljhe hue the ki dia ko theek se notice hi nahi kar paaye. Ab sab to dia ko notice karne mein busy the, to let us see what was her reaction?? How was she handling this situation.

 

Dia's POV ' Why everyone is staring at me like this?? Kya main achi nahi lag rahi?? And why benji is smiling this much?? Is he enjoying thi moment?? Of course he is. Warna itna kyun smile karega who bhi tab, jab koi bhi kuch bhi nahi bol raha ho aur sirf aise hi khade ho. Oh god !! plzzz koi kuch to bole. If this is the condition right now, then how wud they react when they will know the realty??or do they already knew it?? Why I m freaking this much?? They are ur friends dia. So be cool.

 

She looks at benji who gives her assuring smile, which made all her nervousness take off. Finally Samrat broke the silence.

 

S: Wow Candy !! looking very very beautiful !!

 

D: thanku Sammy !!Smile

 

U: deedz, tum kabse aise kapde pehne lagi???

 

B: whispers very lightly so tht only dia cud hear him, "jabse who meri gf ban gayi hai."

 

She gives him "stop it benji" look.

 

N & Su: By god Dia !! aaj to tumne Simran ki bhi chutti kar di.

 

D & B: simran???

 

N & Su: DDLJ ki simran yaar !!

 

G: haan dia !! di bilkul theek kah rahi hai. Tum wakai mein aaj bahut achi lag rahi ho. Bilkul kisi pari jaisi.

 

D: thanks doll !

 

M & A: hi dia!!

 

D: hi mayank jiju !! hi adhiraj !!

 

She saw tht shikpa aunty was continuously smiling at them

 

SA: hi dia beta !! main shilpa aunty, mayank aur nupur ki maa.

 

D: hi shilpa aunty !! (she hugs her) it is so nice to finally meet you.nupur ne aapki bahut tareef ki hai.

 

SA: who to hai.......

 

B: hi aunty !! main benji ! dia ka b.....i mean dia aur samrat ka childhood buddy.

 

SA: hi benji beta !! now she whispers to benji only,"sirf childhood buddy??? " & raises her eyebrows.

 

B: Confused

 

SA: waise sab log to dia ki hi taareef kiye jaa rahe hai. Kisine bhi benji ko compliment nahi diya. Kyunki jaha tak nupur ne mujhe bataya hain benji to kabhi bhi itna tayyar nahi hota. Hain na Dia beta???EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

 

B & D ' oh god !! unhe kuch kuch shak hone lagta hain ki kahi shilpa aunty ko unke bare mein shak to nahi ho gaya na????

 

SA: bahut smart lag rahe ho benji. Mere mayu se bhi zyada samart.

 

Dia ke to par nikal aaye.Dancing

 

B: thanku aunty.

 

S: keeping his hand on benji's shoulder.........."Wow dude !! Kya baat hain !! Aaj itna saj dhaj ke??? Kuch special hai kya???"

 

SA: haan !!

 

B & D: kya???ConfusedConfusedConfused

 

SA: mera matlab hai ki, ab hamare ghar aaye hai to special baat hi hogi na??? kyun benji??? WinkWinkWink

 

B: yes aunty.

 

A: waise benji tum logo ko itni der kyun lag gai aane mein???

 

B: who actually hum........hmmmm

 

D: actually adhiraj, yeh saari galati dodo ki hai and she hits him on his arm, as usual.

 

U: deedz !! main???

 

D: yes dodo. Subah to breakfast ke waqt bada order de rahe the ki "aaj hum nupur ke ghar saath jayenge". Aur khud breakfast ke baad daude daude yaha chale aaye. Isilie to mujhe benji ko bulana pada mujhe pick up karne ko.

 

SA in her mind ' " very smart couple." WinkLOLWink "chalo chalo. Bahut baatein kar li. Khana khaye??

 

U: haan aunty chaliye.  Mujhe bahut bhook lag rahi hai.

 

B: beta uday, tumhe kab bhook nahi lagti???

 

They have the lunch. Btw lunch bahut hi tasty banaya tha. Afterall, hamare best male cook mayank Sharma ne jo khaya banaya tha. Wink icon. They had lot of fun, bahut saari taang khichayi bhi kar li. Benia bhi kuch der tak tension free hoke sajan, mayor adhiani ki taang khichayi karne lage, kyunki jab unki taang khichayi ki baari aayegi to bechare kuch bol hi nahi payenge na???

 

Be4 leaving from Bhushan Mansion, benia decided to tell everyone immediately after the lunch and as soon as the time was approaching, dia was getting very nervous. Hain to saare friends and family, but ladki hone ki wajah se itna darr to laga rahta hai na?? seeing all her tensed, benji takes her one side.

 

B: dia chill !! kuch ghabraane ki zaroorat nahi hai. Hum sabko aaram se bata denge aur phir jnhe jo poochna hai who pooche, hum unke saare sawaalo ka jawab denge. Aur tumhi ne kaha than a ki ab jitna jaldi bata de utna acha hai. Aur isse acha mauka hume kabhi nahi milega. Main bhi thoda sa nervous hoon, but tum ho na mere saath???

 

Dia looks at him & his one smile gave her some sort of strength. They both holded their hands & finally decided to go in front of them and tell everything.

 

Everyone was sitting in the living room. Shilpa aunty, adhiraaj and samrat were busy teasing mayank. Gunur and suhani were enjoying the moment. Itne mein benji-dai unke saamne aake khade hote hai.

 

B: guys !!! hume tum sabko kuch batana hai.  

Ok guys, main na bahut thak gayi hoon type kar karke aur soch soch ke. n its 2 in the night so plz is baar bhi issi se kaam chala lo. agli baar tum logo ka luck acha hoga.


& who n all want pm, plzzz add me to their friends' listSmile


loads of love

vinu



Edited by mjht_admirer - 28 May 2010 at 8:11am

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Posted: 18 February 2010 at 3:06pm | IP Logged
great part!! loved the whole gang teasing each other!!
can't wait till
benia get teased too lol
anyways continue soon

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hey Vinu.this was a fun update!! loved the masti of the whole gang..with shilpa aunty pulling everyone's leg..really sweet :)

I m waiting to see the reactions of Benia declaration :)

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Posted: 19 February 2010 at 12:53am | IP Logged
awesome update.loved it, full gang doing masti and enjoy lots.
continue soon dear.
thanks for the pm dear.

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