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Posted: 01 February 2010 at 9:58am | IP Logged
Hiiii my dear friendsHug. I m Vinu. Some of you know me some don't. This is my first ever SS & i m dedicating this to all my friends out there, jinme kuch kaise friends bane pata bhi nahi chala. Wink

Specially dedicated to my 2 dear jaanus dolly & mallu
HugHug, who encouraged me to write sometime or other.

I m really nervous and excited too. I don't know how many of you will like it.


So plzz read it & let me know. Criticisms & compliments, both are welcomed. Smile


   #1



ISHQ HAIN YEH DOSTI



Muskan Aapki Yaadon Se Milti Hain,
Dil Ko Rahat aapki Baaton Se Milti Hain,
Band Mat Karna Yeh Dosti Ka Silsila,
Dil Ki Dhadkan Aap Hi Se Chalti Hain !!


If anyone wud have seen Dia then & there, no one  will ever deny saying, "haay !! aapki is muskurahat ko zindagi bhar dil mein kaid karne ka jee karta hain."

Dia's POV:-

Well this had become a daily routine in my life. Benji wud twice a day (before going to coll & be4 going to sleep) text me a beautiful msg like this and i wud all be like....Embarrassed Never thought Benji can be this romantic.EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Kitni ajeeb baat hain, Benji & my relation is known to no one. Though, we are more like friends than lovers, but still kisi ko bhi nahi pata. Pyar to karte, kisi se darte bhi nahi but aadat se majboor, kisi ko ab tak bataya bhi nahi.

We thank RV for bringing us 2gether. Na mujhe woh cheat karta, na benji mere lie fikar karta, na dheere dheere mere lie benji ko feelings aati, na mujhe uske lie feelings aati, na hum dono ko ek doosre ke liye pyar ka ehsaas hota,aur na aaj hum saath hote. RV ke chakkar mein we never got the correct time to express our feelings,not even to ourselvesWink. Samrat ka jail jaana,gunjan se pyar kar bethna, mayank ka door chale jana, phir adhiraj aur suhani ka aana, nupur ka jhoot bolna, samrat-suhani ka relation, bui-bauji ko sab sach pata chalna, aur phir mayank-nupur ki shaadi.....itna kuch ho gaya ki hum kuch nahi kah paaye. & more than that everyone were so much engrossed in their lives tht kisi ko shakk tak nhi hua hamare baare mein. But uday, my sweet little dodo, had doubts since 1 week. After Mayank-Nupur's marraige we were unusually very much happy & dodo ka us waqt baar baar benji ko tough looks dena (poor benji), jab bhi benji mujhse ya main usse baat karne ki koshish karu to distract karna, hum dono ke beech aake khade ho jana, and all. But being dodo, he never succeeded in figuring out about us. Poor my dodo. Sir scratch karta hi rah jata hai.

Ahista ahista mujhe yakeen ho gaya.
ahista ahista yeh dil yahi kho gaya. 

Her cell started ringing (her caller tune since benji came in her lifeEmbarrassedEmbarrassed) It was 11:30 p.m. She saw the name which brought a huge smile on her face.

D: Hey benji!! (she sat on the bed with teddy in her hand)

B: Hi Diya !! Waise,tumne mujhe bataya kyun nahi??

D: Kya???

B: Yahi ki tum mere baare mein akele mein soch soch kar itna muskurati ho aur   sharmaati bhi ho???

Benji's POV:- No wonder why we boys fall for girls when they look so purely beautiful & cute at the same time.

Yeh sunkar dia pehle sharma jaati hain, phir muskurati hain & then reality strikes her....woh window ki taraf dekhti hain but cudnt find him so she rushes towrds thinking  ki kahi chupa hoga....

B: Uffo dia!! Main Samrat ka dost hoon, khud samrat nahi jo khidki se aau. I prefer main door.

She turns around & there he was standing at the door, love of her life, giving his best cutest smile. Well they never showered love on each other lke mayur or sajan, but never loose such a gr8 opportunity alsoLOLLOL.

D: Benji?? Tum yahan??? She closes the door & stand besides him. Kisi ne dekh liya to?? kisi ko shak hua to??

B: Hmm...mujhe laga tha ki shayad sirf morena sisters freak out hoti hai. Lekin yahak to kuch aur hi scene hain. She glares at him.Waise,
he leans a bit forward & softly whispers in her ear,agar tumhara roz yuhi sharmane ka irada hain to mujhe dia karo, main aa jaya karunga aur haan tum chaho to main khidki se bhi aa sakta hun.

She never ever imagined Benji's such romantic avatar. But whenever he does something like this, she wud get butterflies in her stomach. Embarrassed

D: Hits him on his arm. Benji !!! U r impossible !!

B: Impossible aur main?? Not fair Dia!! Pehle khud kahti ho,imitating her style, "Benji, u r very boring, bilkul bhi romantic nahi ho. Sammy & mayank ko dekho.." & ab???....
He turns around keeping both his hands on his hips & makes sad face like a 5 yr.old kid

She came to his right side, slids her left hand between his right one & waist(i hope u got the position. like how couples enter a party) & pulls his cheek with her free hand.

D: Awww....U r so cute benji. My cutipie!!! SmileSmile

B: Thanks Miss Dia Bhushan.

They go & stand near the window enjoying the cold breeze, enjoying each other's company. College mein to aise saath spend karne ka mauka kahan??

B; Waise dia, tum kis soch mein doobi hui thi???

D: Hamare baare mein benji. Kaise hum mile, kaise ek doosre ko pasand karne lage. U know benji, i m so excited for tomorrow. Hum finally sabko batane waale hain.Isn't it exciting???

B: Haan.Woh to hain !! Lekin Dia, jab sam ko pata chalega to woh to mujhe chodega nahi yaar!! Bolega,"kaisa dost hai??? kuch batata bhi nahi."

D: Don't worry benji. Hum sab handle kar lenge. Sammy zyada der tak nara nahi rahega. Aur naaraz hua bhi to hum use mana lenge. Samjhe??? She again pulls his cheek.

B: Yes my Diva Doll !! Both smile at each other.So...ready for 2mr???

D: 100% and they share a hi-five. After an hour he left for his home.


So basically the story is that its been 3 weeks since mayank-nupur got married & mayank & shilpa aunty moved back to mumbai. 2mr(i.e;sunday in my SS) shilpa aunty has personaally invited everyone for lunch at their place which turned out to be a perfect time for benji dia to reveal their ultimate secret.

Note: - Hi again.I hope u were not bored. I dont know how many of u wud accept Benji as a lover like this, but i loved writing him like this.Wink Plzzzz do comment, criticise, whatever u want. & silent readers plz press the LIKE button, so tht i can know how many of u read it. Thanku.

I'll update the nxt part asap.Smile

loads of love
vinuSmileHug



INDEX:

part 1 - page 1
benia siggie - page 1 - free to use
part2 - page 1
part3 - page 4
note - page 6
part4 - page 7
part5 - page 12


Edited by mjht_admirer - 28 May 2010 at 8:06am

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Posted: 06 February 2010 at 10:44am | IP Logged
first to comment.......
glad u posted your ss in the fan fiction section.......
simply love it.......
add me to your pm list.....
can't wait for you to update.......
a benia ff was a great idea


Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 06 February 2010 at 10:45am

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lovely start,loved it. continue soon and thanks for the pm dear.

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Posted: 06 February 2010 at 12:05pm | IP Logged
Loved it:)
totally cute n sweet
(i think i had commented int he other link vinu :)
but superb actually:)

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Posted: 07 February 2010 at 11:11am | IP Logged
As u must have noticed, my topic got closed in the mjht forum,jo pata tha so i m not feeling low.Shifted it here in FF section. Be4 the update, thanku 1 and all for ur extra ordinary love. I m overwhelmed by u all.

loads of love
vinu


Hiiiiiii my dear friends !! so sorry for the late update. But kya karu?? Sach mein busy thi.
SmileBut now i m back with an update.Smile
Well its very short, lekin aur intezaar karwati to bahut logo ka apaar pyaar jhelna padta tha.Wink
So here goes.
HugHugHug
Enjoy.
I hope u like this one also.

Plzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzz read & leave ur comments.
They mean alot for me.


HugHugloads of loveHugHug
HugvinuHug


   #2


Next Morning ' Bhushan Mansion

 

Samrat came early & took his chashmish with him on a short drive before going to Sharma Mansion. Uday, surprisingly went to mayur's place. Y???? Ab khane ki baat ho aur waha hamare uday bhaisaab na rahe, aisa kabhi ho sakta hai??? Nahi na !!! Now, he went there to help them or himself, only mayur & shilpa aunty knows. So whos left???'.WinkWinkWink.......ofcourse, hamare benji ki pyaari dia !! If benji wud have known tht no one is at her place then aaraam se prince ki tarah aata. But uski kismet phooti aur use aana pada khidki se. 


Actually, uski kismat to kuch zyada hi khoobsurat nikli !!! As soon as he climbed into her room, his heart skipped a beat & everything else went blur. The world seemed to have lost its track on time. The entire beauty of universe on 1 side & his Diy on another.


Dressed in maroon anarkali dress, with light make up, flower shaped hair clip on right side of her hair & even a tiny nose ring. A simple yet very elegant princess.(her dress was something like this)




She was standing in front of the mirror & was hanging her earrings, when'..

 

B: God se mera LBW karne ka deal sign kiya hai kya Dia??WinkWinkWink

 

His sudden voice scared her & she dropped her earring. She turned around and saw him sweetly smiling at her. He approached her & was just 2 feet away from her. Ab Dia itni alag lag sakti hai to benji kyu nahi???? Colour T-shirt was replaced by a plain black round necked T-shirt, perfectly hugging his well shaped body (Mayank aur Sammy se training li hogiLOLLOL), & black jeans and carrying beautiful roses in his hand.

 

Dia for the 1st time noticed tht Benji's such romantic gaze can make her go weak in her knees. She cud feel her face warming up with continuous blushing & looked everywhere except him. He picked up the earring and gave it to her. She took it & turned around to hang them.

 

D: Abb.....Benji'......maine tumhe kal bhi kaha tha na ki khidki se mat aaya karu.

 

B: ConfusedConfusedConfused.....Dia, i think tumne kuch iska ulta nahi kaha tha.....???

 

D: Turning around and facing himConfusedConfused. Haaa.....??? Oh !! Abb....Jo bhi ho !! Tumhe nahi pata benji?? Its bad manners to enter a girl's bedroom who bhi bina knock kiye.

 

B: Arre!! Mujhe kya sapne aarahe the ki tumhara sweet little dodo & hamara kabaab mein haddi (clutching his teeth)yaha nahi hai aur gunjan bhi already chali gayi hai ?? Aur by the way,'..reducing the distance between them''Miss Dia !! Agar tumhe nahi samajh aaya to main bata deta hun ki agar main is tarah nahi aata to inti beautiful princess ke itne beautiful expressions kho nahi deta??? Hmm???

 

D: Embarrassed

 

B: tumhare lie....& gives her the roses.

 

Poor roses, aaj Dia ne to unhe bhi peeche chod diya. Embarrassed

 

B: Ab chale??? Warna late ho jaega.

 

D: Ya !! chalo.

Note: I m soooo sorry friends ki itna chota chota update likha hai. Nxt time wil try to make it big & even end it.Smile

And if i get time i will update the nxt part 2mr & also reply to ur comments individually. Smile



Edited by mjht_admirer - 28 May 2010 at 8:09am

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Posted: 07 February 2010 at 11:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by MjhtFan_Mahima

first to comment.......
glad u posted your ss in the fan fiction section.......
simply love it.......
add me to your pm list.....
can't wait for you to update.......
a benia ff was a great idea


thanku dear !!!
you r already there dear.

loads of love
vinu

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Posted: 07 February 2010 at 11:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

lovely start,loved it. continue soon and thanks for the pm dear.


thanku soo much dear !!
ur most welcome

loads of love
vinu

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Posted: 07 February 2010 at 11:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by myownarea

Loved it:)
totally cute n sweet
(i think i had commented int he other link vinu :)
but superb actually:)


thanku again dear !!
yes u have, but phir se kiya, mujhe acha laga.

loads of love
vinu

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