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Posted: 19 February 2010 at 8:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Pooj@

Pehle hi warn kiya tha gaaliya mat dena, aap log toh full fledged pitai kar rahe hain yaa! WIll update soon!
Kahan ho tum, Kahan ho tumLOL.....By the way wanted to tell u that the title is rockingThumbs Up Lavkar update kar, aamhi vaat pahat aahotWink

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Posted: 20 February 2010 at 2:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Kalindi-

Originally posted by Pooj@

Pehle hi warn kiya tha gaaliya mat dena, aap log toh full fledged pitai kar rahe hain yaa! WIll update soon!
Kahan ho tum, Kahan ho tumLOL.....By the way wanted to tell u that the title is rockingThumbs Up Lavkar update kar, aamhi vaat pahat aahotWink


Thanks...glad that u liked the title...main toh chemistry ki kitabon main kho gayi hoon, kal test hain...uske baad jaroor update karoongi!

Thodi vaat paha, mhanje milalya cha ananda dwigunit hoil! LOL

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Posted: 20 February 2010 at 3:53am | IP Logged
hi pooja,
            you write rly very nice.after reading the second part  i actualy said "so sweet".

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Posted: 20 February 2010 at 4:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Pooj@

Originally posted by -Kalindi-

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Pehle hi warn kiya tha gaaliya mat dena, aap log toh full fledged pitai kar rahe hain yaa! WIll update soon!
Kahan ho tum, Kahan ho tumLOL.....By the way wanted to tell u that the title is rockingThumbs Up Lavkar update kar, aamhi vaat pahat aahotWink


Thanks...glad that u liked the title...main toh chemistry ki kitabon main kho gayi hoon, kal test hain...uske baad jaroor update karoongi!

Thodi vaat paha, mhanje milalya cha ananda dwigunit hoil! LOL
Hmm so u occupied wid studies, koi baat nahi, aaram se update karna, we will wait, aur sabr ka phal mitha hota hai....ho ki naahi??Big smileWink

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Posted: 21 February 2010 at 2:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rnfandeboo

hi pooja,
            you write rly very nice.after reading the second part  i actualy said "so sweet".


Thanks dear! I am really glad that u liked it!

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Posted: 21 February 2010 at 2:17am | IP Logged
@Kalindi : Aaj tests khatam hui...Sab Krebs cycle aur Halo-derivatives wagera kachra  nikal ke MahiDa bithane ki soch rahi hoon...wheeee...feeling relieved! Sabr ka fal toh mitha hi hota hain! Kuch accha jaroor milega, hope so! :P

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Posted: 21 February 2010 at 4:39am | IP Logged
Digressions: Author's note

I won't apologise again...That will be included whenever this appears.LOLWink I decided to make up for my delay, here is another part..

I hope you all like it. It is a bit different from the earlier ones.


Edited by Pooj@ - 21 February 2010 at 4:39am

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Posted: 21 February 2010 at 4:40am | IP Logged

Chapter III


Dimensions

Morning

 

It wasn't the first time that Mahendra had set his foot in such an area. Tall, swank, and suave skyscrapers were lunging at the heaven. The broad roads and the suave colours were typical of Malabar hill. He stopped in front of a society, cross checking the name with the one scrawled on a lined white paper' He parked his bike in the visitors' parking and walked up to the security.

 

"Shinde'" He muttered, surveying the guard from behind his glares.

 

The man cross checked his register, and slid it to Mahendra.

 

'Rajesh Sharma' he wrote in it, as the guard turned to inform the house of Rajesh Sharma's impending arrival.

 

Mahendra nodded at the man, and then walked towards the elevators.

 

The elevator stopped on the ground floor with a metallic ping, and the doors slid open, expensively noiseless. He walked in the empty elevator and pressed the floor number sixteen.

 

He stepped out, and stood for a moment in the corridor, admiring the view of the sea. With a purposeful stride, he advanced to the Apartment 1601.

 

The door was opened by a woman in her late thirties.

 

"Namaste Bhabhi ji. Sahab hain ghar pe?"

 

A big burly man appeared in the living room, asking, "Kon ahe ga Sumitra?" Seeing Mahendra in the door way, with a smile on his face, and the glint of an official badge in his hand, he paled beneath his tan.

 

"Come in. Sumitra, chai."

 

The woman realized the undertone of stress in his voice and slipped into a corridor leading to the inner part of the house.

 

"Baithiye. Chai coffee?" he asked in a genial tone.

 

"Powder." Drawled Mahendra. Palpable drops of sweat broke on Shinde's forehead. There was a sharp knock on the door. Karthik and Mukharjee stood in the doorway, smiling. Karthik placed the warrant on the coffee table, and the police poured in for the raid.

 

Drawers upturned, every imaginable thing littered the floor, and impatient officers pacing in the room with furious urgency. In the middle of this was a quivering heap. Shinde sat on the chair immobilized. His wife had barricaded herself in the bathroom.

 

Suddenly, there was a commotion from the ground floor of the building. Mahendra rushed to the window. He swore violently.

 

Crisp notes were floating in the air. On the ground floor, a few notes had landed and a mad crowd was waiting for the rest of the money to come down from the air. With every breeze that altered the direction of the falling notes, the crowd swayed, the primitive savagery rising, as every single bill instigated violent and cheap conflicts. Money never fell out of the sky. But today, it was raining money.

 

Brinda thumped the door with her palm, but the woman refused to open the door.

 

Wham!

 

Mahendra looked up from the window due to the noise.

Looking at Karthik, he asked, "Kya hua?"

 

Wham! Together, they looked at the source of the noise.

 

Brinda had slammed her shoulder into the door, hoping that the force would budge the door.

 

"Pagal."

 

Karthik looked at her in astonishment, and his mouth opened in surprise as Mahendra rushed to her side. Together, they delivered the next blow. The bolt splintered and cracked. The third blow did the work.

 

The woman was crouched on the washbasin counter, throwing out illegitimate gains out of the window. Tears streaked down her face. White powder lined the counter, leading to the commode. She had tried to flush the drugs.

 

Headquarters

 

Usmaan looked at the team with pride. Shinde was a minor vassal of Ansari. Now that drugs had been seized from his house, there was a probability of tying everything back to Javed Ansari.

 

Brinda was sitting in her cubicle, finishing her work, occasionally applying the ice pack to her bruised shoulder. She rubbed her eyes, as weakness and exhaustion settled in.

She was on a high due to success of today's raid and a few bruises did nothing to mar their victory. They instead glorified the incident. She winced, thinking about her mother's reaction. She slipped away in the bathroom to take a good look at her shoulder. The purple bruises seemed particularly nasty in harsh tube light.

 

She came back to take her bag.

 

On the other side of the room, Mahendra was talking with a girl. She could recognize the curly brown hair anywhere. Nodding her head with a small stab of irritation that surprised her, she thought, "Some things never change."



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