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Posted: 24 April 2010 at 1:08pm | IP Logged
Read it.Big smile and it's beautiful.ClapClapClapI simply loved it. Awww.. MahiDa started Texting now.LOLTongue I could see their expressions.Embarrassed
Great work Pooj.Big smile

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Posted: 24 April 2010 at 1:15pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Day_Dreamer

Read it.Big smile and it's beautiful.ClapClapClapI simply loved it. Awww.. MahiDa started Texting now.LOLTongue I could see their expressions.Embarrassed
Great work Pooj.Big smile



Actually now that i read over it, it has a lot of typos. I will edit them!:D
Glad that u liked it and sorry for making you all wait so long!

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Posted: 25 April 2010 at 10:23pm | IP Logged

I read it n i can even describe it in one wrd...............WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!ClapClapClapClapClapClap

It was simply superb Pooja!!!!!Luvd all the convo esp. Karthik n Mahendra and Mahida!!!!!
She held him by his wrist!!!!! OMG!!!!i can imagine it ...................awwwwwwwwwwEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
 
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Posted: 26 April 2010 at 2:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sehar mehrotra

I read it n i can even describe it in one wrd...............WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!Clap

It was simply superb Pooja!!!!!Luvd all the convo esp. Karthik n Mahendra and Mahida!!!!!
She held him by his wrist!!!!! OMG!!!!i can imagine it ...................awwwwwwwwwwEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
 
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Hey Sehar!
Wowe, glad that you liked it!

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Posted: 26 April 2010 at 9:49pm | IP Logged
Lovely work PoojHug
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Posted: 27 April 2010 at 1:17am | IP Logged
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Lovely work PoojHug


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Posted: 01 May 2010 at 1:27pm | IP Logged
Author's Note

Guys, I had written this part before Wednesday, that is before I knew that Kartik was going to die.

It is unfinished, but I cannot go back and finish it, but I also cannot bring myself to delete it. This narrative will  NOT feature in the present flow, but just read it as something that might have been.....

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SOMETHING THAT MIGHT HAVE BEEN

A infinitely small piece that does not feature in the In Search flow, but will be here just for it's sake.

"Idiot. Apne aap ko bahut shana samjahta hain."

 

Brinda glanced at Mahendra as he paced in the corridor angrily.

 

"Mahen-"

 

"Back up ke liye wait karo, bola that use."

 

"Mahen-"

 

"Par nahi, ye-"

 

"Mahendra." This time her voice was stern. She was not used to being interrupted, especially b mahendra. And he too was not used to being interrupted, lest of all by Brinda.

 

"Kya?"

 

"Baith jao."

 

He sat down, his gaze frequenting from the ICU to the stairs. Finally a pair of feet resounded on the stairs. Mahendra got up.

 

It was Vidya. "Karthikā€¦..kahan hain Mahendra?"

Mahen looked at her pale face and walked upto her.

 

Taking her hands into his, he said to her softly, "Wo abhi ICU main hain. He is out of danger, par doctors use under observation rakhna chahte hain."

 

Vidya's pale face turned to a ghostly white and fear and relief surged through it the same time. Mahendra lead her towards a chair and propped her up into it. Brinda offered her a glass of water and sat down beside her. Mahendra sat down on the other chair next to Vidya.

 

Usmaan arrived half an hour later. He just looked at the trio with eyes that gleamed with success and also loss.

 

Mahendra got up and walked upto him .

 

"Karthik kaisa hain?"

 

"Wo theek hain..Main doctors se baat karke aata hoon." Mahendra said softly. He had seen the pain in Usmaan'e eyes, and Brinda's. He knew his own eyes were brimming with tears at the mere thought of losing this priceless friend.


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