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Posted: 30 January 2010 at 5:39am | IP Logged
Mayur oneshot – Valentines Night

Both mayank and nupur were walking through the corridor .
"Mayank tumhe pata hai aaj kya hai?" asked nupur excitedly
"Haan aaj 14th feb hai aur mujhe extra time college main rukhna hoga aur haan aaj tum bhi mere saaath rukh jaana" said mayank
"Tumhare jaisa unromantic pati maine aaj tak nahi dekha" said nupur under her breath
"Kuch kaha tumne , nupur" asked mayank
"Nahin to main kuch kyun kahongi" said nupur
She was upset that mayank did not remember that it's valentines day today
"to chale….."
"Haan chalo" said nupur and they both walked
          After the work being finished both mayank and nupur entered the house it was dark,the lights were switched off.
      "Pata nahi ye lights kisne band kiye" said nupur and switched on the lights. She was shocked to see the room it was fully decorated with nupurs and mayanks photo in the centre of the wall. Baloons of red and white colour had covered the floor.
    Just then mayank hugged her from back resting his chin on her shoulder.
"Mayank ye sab"
"Tumhe kya laga main itna important din bhool jaunga"said mayank
"Happy valentines day Mrs. Sharma" said mayank kissing her neck and nupur just blushed
"Mayank chodo kya kar rahe ho" said nupur trying to free herself
"Kya kar raha hoon kya ,aapne wife ke saath romance kar raha hoon" said mayank kissing her
"acha thik hai jaldi change kar ke aao" said mayank let nupur go
           After 15min nupur came down. Mayank just kept staring at her. She was wearing a red saree. She was looing so gorgeous that it was unable for mayank to take off his eyes from her.her hairs were left open making her look more beautiful.Mayank just kept staring at her which made nupur blush more.
       He went close to nupur
"I Love U" mayank whispered while nupur just blushed
"Tum sharmati ho to aur bhi khoobsurat lagti ho" said mayank making nupur blush hard which could be seen on her face
"I Love U too" said nupur
             Just then mayank went and turned on the music. He went towards nupur and asked her for the dance.
mayank kept his hands on nupurs waist and nupur kept her hand around mayanks neck

saanson ko saanson mein Dhalne do zara...
dhiimii sii dharkan ko bharne do zara
lamhon kii guzaarish hai yeh
paas aa jaa'en
hum hum tum
tum hum tum       they danced slowly

nupur rested her head on mayank's chest

aankhon mein hamko utarne do zara
baahon mein hamko pighalne do zara
lamhon kii guzaarish hai yeh
paas aa jaa'e
hum hum tum
tum hum tum

saanson ko saanson mein Dhalne do zara
mayank twirled her

silvaTen kahiin karvaTen kahiin
phail jaa'e kaajal bhii tera
nazaron meun ho guzarta hu'aa
khwaabon ka koii qaafila
jismon ko ruuhon ko jalne do zara      he went close to her and was abt to kiss her but nupur pushed and ran
sharmon kaayaa ko machalne do zara
lamhon kii guzaarish hai yeh
paas aa jaa'e
hum hum tum
tum hum tum
mayank held nupurs wrist and pulled her and kissed her on cheek. nupur just hid her face in mayank's chest

saanson ko saanson mein Dhalne do zara
baahon mein hamko pighalne do zara
lamhon kii guzaarish hai yeh
paas aa jaa'e
hum hum tum
tum hum tum

hope you enjoyed it
plz do comment

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Posted: 30 January 2010 at 5:42am | IP Logged
heya vinu di...!!
wat an os..!!
it was cho cuute...!!
it was luvley too...!!
luved d ecorations omade by mayu...!!
n d song sequence..!!
awww...evrythin was grt...!!
thanxx for d pm..!!

wid loads of luv

Edited by kash_sajan - 30 January 2010 at 5:44am




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Posted: 30 January 2010 at 5:45am | IP Logged
it was so romantic




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Posted: 30 January 2010 at 6:06am | IP Logged
superb update.loved it.sweet romance.
thanks for the pm dear.




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Posted: 30 January 2010 at 6:15am | IP Logged
really sweett yaar...continue writing...



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Posted: 30 January 2010 at 7:15am | IP Logged
that was so cute and romantic loved the one shot




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Posted: 30 January 2010 at 8:01am | IP Logged
awesome  oneshot dear...................loved mayu for suprising nups..............

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