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Posted: 06 February 2010 at 11:18am | IP Logged
hey sweety finally read your parts , they were all great , i soo loved reading them all
 
per only gunjan ki story , atleast samrat ki thode to story bataao , and now this sameer god he is all behind gunjan  , just wating to read ahead
 
lets seee what you preparring to doo next
wll be waiting for your next part ,
till then take care and thanks a lot for your pm's
 
lots of love
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Very nice part par sam ko jaldi lao

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PART'5b

 

 

Scene: everybody arrives in moreana, bui , bauji, along wid adhi's  family were stanidg at the door to greet them.

On seeing sameer and his friends bui: yeh log kaun hai?

N: wo yeh hamarey dost hai, inhone kabhi chote sheher ki tyohar nhi dekhi,....................bas isiliye

G: ha bui isiliye yeh hamarey saat aye hai...........................

Everybody is happy to see gunjan taking side of sameer.

That day only at n8 after having dinner nupur meets bauji alone and talks about sameer. Well she don't say nething about samrat since he don't know nething about sajan's relationship. So, she just speaks about sameer's background .........................well  icing of the cake is 4m the very first bauji too have felt an instant liking towards him

 

N: bauji, main kaheti hu is baar gunjan ki haath peeli kar dijiye ..................akhir kab tak wo aise akeli rahegi. Aap ne mere liye ladka chun li aur gunjan k liye?????????? Thik hai aap ne try nhi ki pad ek baar meri pasand ko parakh k dekhiye, sameer sach mein bahaut hi achcha ladka hai. Wo hamari gunjan ko khush rakh khega.........................

While talking she turns towards the door(it was bauji's room where they were talking) .............gunjan was standing there dumbfounded!!!!! Nupur felt nervous , she cant met her eyes..........................cat is out of the basket now.

Gunjan have already understood the plan of the whole gang...............nupur slips out of the room silently , escaping eye to eye contac wid gunji. Gunjan after nupz departure just looks at her bauji n widout uttering a single word turns back to leave , but is eventually stooped

Bauji: gunajn beti mujhe nhi lagta ki nupur ne kuch galat kahan hai.......................aur sameer mujhe bhi pasand hai. Wo tumhe khush rakh khega

 

G:  (turns back to him n replies very seriously)............bauji abhi bhi is saal ka dushera nhi aaya hai

N saying this she leaves, leaving behind bauji speechless, as if he had done some heinous grevious act.................which his daughter have reminded back once again....................................

 

Gunjan came to the terrace after the convo wid bauji. She was tsanding like a statue gazing the moon, lost in some trance......................"mere barein mein soch rhi ho"

Gunjan turns to find the silence breaker.....................it's none other but sameer standing wid the usual smile on his face and his chocolaty charm....................par shayad is bar yeh gunjan par beasar ho jayega.

G: tum yahan is waqt, soye nhi?

Sa: tum bhi to nhi soye, jab meri friend jag rhi ho then how can i sleep

G: sameer plz, mujhe kuch der k liye akele chor do

Sa:  (coming in front of her) apne friend se bhi share nhi karogi apni problems! Gunjan main tumhara friend hu,........................agar koi probs hai mujhe bolo main...........................

G: (cuts off) ha sameer tum mere dost ho, special ya best friend nhi, aur hum apni sarein batein ya to apni family se share karte hai ya fir best friend se. N sorry to say u r not the 1..................(she walks away from there but stops at the exit n turns) aur nahi kabhi hone ki koshish karna!!

 

She leaves aur bechara sameer wahi k wahi khara rahe jata hai......................"isey achanak kya hua? Why is she behaving so differently today?.....................(after some pause a naughty smile slowly n slowly comes widening his lips) n 1 more thing, main yahan tumhara bst frnd nhi, tumhara humsafar banne aaya hu............................

The next few days passes widout ne more stress.......................gunjan after hearing that days convo have maintained a safe distance from sameer, which he on the other hand paid no heed to.........

 

 

 

It was the morning b4 dusshera............i.e. 9th day of navratri. Gunjan  was going to the mandir to offer morning prayer when she froze...........................lukin at the entrance door of her house.

Mr. Deshpande and some other collegues of his office.............were standing there.

 

G: deshpande uncle, mr. Goyel.................aap sab aur yahan

Desh: kyun gunjan, hum nhi aa sakte kya? Wel tumne to invite nhi kiya, to humne socha kyun na khud hi chale aaye...........................i hope u didn't have a problem?

G: (wid a big smile on her face) yeh aap kaisi baat kar rahe hai......................i'm very happy that u all came, mujhe to lag raha hai jaise mera apna pariwaar aa gaya hai

Gunjan POV:

Seriously, pechle kuch dino se main jaise apno k beech mein bagani ban chuki thi.............i was feeling lost, alone. N suddenly today wen i saw my office collegues , specially deshpande uncle.........mujhe aisa laga, i got back my family, muself. As if they were away from me since ages

"aisa kyun hota hai............................kabhi kabhi apne paraye kyun ban jaate hai aur paraye apne!!!!!"

 

She introduced them to each n everybody.....................all were happy. The most was gunjan. Itne dino baad gunjan ko itna khush dekhkar nupur ko thodi rahat mili,....................raat ko wo gunjan se baat karne k liye uske kamre mein jaati hai

 

N: gunjan

G: ha di, are tum bahar kyun khari ho andar aao na................

Nupur comes and sits beside her: tune kya socha hai?

G: kis barein mein?

N: wo.......................sameer k...................

G: di plz, mujhe us barein mein koi baat nhi karni hai.................agar aapko koi  aur baat karni hai to thik hai, nhi to mujhe nind aa rhi hai

N: (bursts out) kyun nhi karegi bol, aakhir kab tak us bewafa k barein mein sochti rahegi...................tu kyun nhi samajhti gunjan agar use aana hota to wo itne salon mein aa chukka hota...........wo tujhe nhi chahat hai, aura b tub hi uske barein mein sochna bandh karde

G: di, bahaut raat ho chuki hai aap jaake so jaiyein.....................kal subha  uthna hai

Nupur goes out but turns bck: gunjan kal dusshera hai, sochkar aayi thi is baar moreana mein dushere k din do dil zarur milenge................

She goes out.......................................................................................

Gunjan went to sleep quite early that day while nupur n other were gossipin at the terrace. They were actually listening the dusshera story from nupz. Waise sach bolu................gunjan soi nhi thi, wo sirf sab se dur rahena chahati thi.......................shayad kuch chupa rhi thi, par kya???????????

 

The next day from morning every body was busy in their work,...................sara din puja mein hi beet gaya. It was the evening time wen all were sitting at the roof top.............this time gunjan too along wid his collegues. Suddenly deshpande ji ka phone bajne laga n he excused himself from there.

 

N: achcha, kal tum sab ladkon ne mujh se moreana ki rajkumari ki itni pyaar bhari dastaan suni phir bhi akal nhi aayi?

Su:  exactly, how come u guys r so un romantic......................kam se kam kuch to kiya ota hamare liye. Raj u really disappointed me...................

N like this sarein patniyan apne patiyon se naaraz ho gayi.....................then the boys starts singing there

 

Song: tenu leke from jai veeru (guys me not givin the lyrics)

All the jodis starts dancing, sameer too trys to dance but somehow gunji escapes..................

M: bolo ab thik hai.......................

B: diya tum kitna bhi humse dur chale jaao, hum tumhare saat hi challenge

U: kyun cj...................howz my singind talent???????????

Ladkiyan: yeh to haq ki baat ho gayi, kuch romantic baatein karte to mante hum

Boys: (totally astonished, to find their spell not workin on gulz)....................KYA>>>>>>>>>>>>>

Suddenly the lights go off n somebody starts singing dil ibadat ..................

 

Dil Ibaadat Kar Raha Hai, Dhadakane Meri Sun
Tujhako Main Kar Loon Haasil Lagi Hai Yahin Dhun
Jindagi Ki Shaak Se Loon Kuchh Haseen Pal Main Chun
Tujhako Main Kar Loon Haasil Lagi Hai Yahin Dhun

Dil Ibaadat Kar Raha Hai, Dhadakane Meri Sun
Tujhako Main Kar Loon Haasil Lagi Hai Yahin Dhun
Jindagi Ki Shaak Se Loon Kuchh Haseen Pal Main Chun
Tujhako Main Kar Loon Haasil Lagi Hai Yahin Dhun
Jo Bhi Jitane Pal Jiu, Unhe Tere Sang Jiu
Jo Bhi Kal Ho Abb Mera Use Tere Sang Jiu
Jo Bhi Saansein Main Bharu Unhe Tere Sang Bharu
Chaahe Jo Ho Raasta Use Tere Sang Chalu
Dil Ibaadat Kar Raha Hai, Dhadakane Meri Sun
Tujhako Main Kar Loon Haasil Lagi Hai Yahin Dhun

(mujhako De Tu Mit Jaane Abb Khud Se Dil Mil Jaane
Kyun Hai Itana Faasala
Lamahe Yeh Phir Na Aane Inako Tu Na De Jaane
Tu Mujhape Khud Ko De Luta
Tujhe Tujhase Tod Loon Kahin Khud Se Jod Loon
Meri Jismo Jaan Pe Aa Teri Khushbu Odh Loon
Jo Bhi Saansein Main Bharu Unhe Tere Sang Bharu
Chaahe Jo Ho Raasta Use Tere Sang Chalu
Dil Ibaadat Kar Raha Hai Dhadakane Meri Sun
Tujhako Main Kar Loon Haasil Lagi Hai Yahin Dhun

Baahon Mein De Bas Jaane Sine Mein De Chhup Jaane
Tujh Bin Main Jaau Toh Kahaan
Tujhase Hai Mujhako Paane Yaadon Ke Woh Najraane
Ik Jinape Hak Ho Bas Mera
Teri Yaadon Mein Rahu Tere Khaabon Mein Jagu
Mujhe Dhundhein Jab Koyi Teri Aankhon Mein Milu
Jo Bhi Saansein Main Bharu Unhe Tere Sang Bharu
Chaahe Jo Ho Raasta Use Tere Sang Chalu

Throughout the song the lights on the terrace was dimed n there was a focus light on gunjan, ......................while others were trying to figure out what was hapennig, gunjan stood there enjoying the song.....................

 

Dil Ibaadat Kar Raha Hai, Dhadakane Meri Sun
Tujhako Main Kar Loon Haasil Lagi Hai Yahin Dhun-------------------while dese lines were sung crakers started bursting out n it seemed to be daylight--------------------all looked at the sky where they found only three words:

 

I LOVE U

Shocked to see this.........................everybody, else gunjan. She saw it, n closed her eyes ....................tears drenched her cheeks, however nobody saw that as they all were engrossed in this mesmerizing style of proposing...........................all ladies lukd at their reaspective husbands wid 1 question written on their face. "kya yeh sab tumne kiya hai"

Alas all theb hubby's had 1 ans.................."no, it's not done by me"

Suddenly nupz spoke: by god sameer, mujhe pata nhi that um itne romantic ho.......................yeh sab tumhi ne kiya hai na

Sa: wel nupz, thnx 4 d compliment. Yes i'm romantic par shayad us bande se kam jo apni mehbooba k liye asmaani kagaz pad hal-e-dil bayan kiya ho. Even i too want to meet him, kaun hai wo?

G: (now she opened her eyes n spoke) i know him........................

 

"gunjan just look who came to meet u........................our MD, n your boss al well"

Everybody turns to find deshpande ji standing at the terrace entrance..............he moves to a side n somebody from behind comes into lime lite..............................................

 

 

Everybody gets shocked.............................how come he is here? The only question coming in everybody's mind. And gunjan, she simply walks out of the place, not even looking at samrat once........

Sameer: hey dude, wassup?

He said as he came ahead and hugged samrat.

 

M: tum..........................tum samrat ko jante ho? Yani tumhe pata tha SJ company ka MD yehi hai

Sa: yup, i knew it....................we know each other from b4. He came to complete his final year of graduation in US in our coleg....................but hey, hold on tum log ise kaise jante ho?

Dia: wo ........................wo actually...................

But b4 diya could say nething nupur  bursts..............: ab yahan kya lene aaye ho tum Mr. Samrat shergill?

Bolo fir se kyun aaye ho hamare zindegi mein , kay wo kuch kam tha jot um karke gaye the. Jo si baar kasar puri karne k liye wapas aa gaye

 

Until now samrat was standing still he only had a formal smile on his face...............but now he got completely shocked by this sudden outburst of nupur

S: nupur tum mujhe galat samajh rhi ho

N: achcha , to ab tum sikhaoge k galat kya aur aur kya sahi.....................(closing her hands as if begging) samrat main tumhare samne haat jodke vinti karti hu plz yahan se chale jao , chale jao hum sab ki zindegi se aur khas kar................................meri bahen gunjan ki zindegi se

Suhani wished to take her bros side but can't. Kaise karti, uske bhai ne kaam hi kuch is tarha ka kiya hai.

 

Samrat could not speak a single word. He simply walked away. As he was getting down the stairs he saw bauji bui n adi's family downstairs staring at him. He just looked n surpassed without uttering a single word. On the other hand everybody by now have come there..........................sameer wanted to stop samrat, he was not able to understand what was hapenig..............pad is baar bhi nupur use rok leti hai...........

Sa: nupur, tum yeh kya kar rhi ho? Wo gunjan ka boss hai, she will lose her job

N: achcha hoga, aise insaan k company mein kaam karne se bahetar hai meri bahen ghar mein baithi rahe

Chalo hum andar chalet hai, yahan faltu ka waqt zaya karke kya fayda. (she said this purposely in a loud voice so that samrat could hear her)

Samrat bahar jaane k liye jaise hi darwaza khola koi peeche se kaha, "mujhe bina saat liye aap kahan jaa rahe hai"

Samrat turned, other too........................it was gunjan standin beside a pillar near her room downstair wearing the same white n red anarkali salwar which she was wearing on the drama finale n8.

 

However der's a slite change......................this time she was lukin a lot different..............plz plz, she was wearing her glasse but along wid that

 1 mangalsutra and sindoor on her
 
mang....................................................

 

Wel this much for today, hamesha bolte rahete ho, jaldi update karo......................main isse zyaada jaldi nhi ud post kar sakti, ek din mein 4 prts n dat too so big.......................................wel ab sirf tum sab k comnts chahiye, nxt n d last prt chahiye kin hi.

Plz frnds batana do u like the much awaited samrat's enrty????????????????/ plz reply i want to read ur reaction on the last bit.....................................gunji's dress hope u hv got d hint

1 more thin------------------some of u guesed rite samrat is d MD, i said that only to confuse uLOL

Edited by cute_monaya_fan - 06 February 2010 at 12:04pm

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Posted: 06 February 2010 at 11:45am | IP Logged
awsomeeeeeee updatzzzzzzz
yar loved it soooooooo much
loved the new name also ( guneer ) lol, per usse ziada acha sajan hai
and im eger to know why gunjan was wearing magalsutra and sindoor, ples cont sooooooooon
n thnx 4 the pm


Edited by sweetsonal156 - 06 February 2010 at 12:09pm

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Posted: 06 February 2010 at 11:49am | IP Logged
Really bad update.....nothing interesting....without asking gunjan all r planning for her marriage seriously not good

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Posted: 06 February 2010 at 11:52am | IP Logged
VERY beautiful loved it very much waiting for last part

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OMG OMG OMG... awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ud finniee...
it ws mindblowinggggggggggggg... finallyyy sammy aa gaya... yuppiieeeeeee.... nw i think everything will be guddie guddie...
it ws grr888888888..
luved it to d core....
pllzzzzzz do continue soon...
n thnxx for d pm...

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Now that calls an update.....awesome update....really loved it....really

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