Posted: 28 April 2011 at 5:41pm | IP Logged
I didn't know that you have posted the next part as it was not in first page of IF, it was in the previous pages I think.
Oh God,Thanks a Lot Dear for this part and Muvaas,
Whatever I wish to see in character of Manav and archana you have showed it.
I wish Manav was strong in refusing Shravani when he couldn't solve the expectations ahead.
Your Manav did it.
I wish archu shouldn't have given her husband in a platter to another woman. Here, your archu is already mourning about that thought and I am sure she wouldn't.
ok,instead of imaging her with sathish, it is going to be Manav with shravani which is going to Haunt archu.
I liked it. They way you have expressed archu's shock,oh the feeling she felt could be felt thro your writings. could feel for your character they way you wrote it. I think archu need this shake to know herself and to know what she wants.
Yes,she started realizing,its due to her mistake of divorce decision she is going to lose Manav for ever.
I felt sad for her and at the same time also glad that she started realizing.
She has to feel this and the pain how it would be as Manav as gone thro this thought already when he before accept for divorce.
And your Manav, No words
,the way he handled shravani's issue, Really poor fellow for being blamed to take that decision. Only one time he thinks about himself, and that too its not about himself,only if he is able to do and fufil expectations ,then everyone will be happy ,otherwise it gives Takleaf for everyone. so His decison is to keep everything balanced.
And Tarun's advice ,i dont find fault with him. as you all said, a human nature with a practical approach. He was right. but what i wish is ,archu should reach the level where he says, yes archu deserves you(my friend) Manav. Hoping for it in the upcoming parts.
And i know my archu will deserve your Manav at one time in your FF.
Thank you so much Nikki for this part. As usual it is worth waiting and No words Yaar. You are superb writer
and the way you brought through emotions ,really could feel it.
Feel for both archu and Manav.
Again should I say, I was eagerly waiting for your next part.
Edited by umayal - 28 April 2011 at 5:43pm