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Tere Naina#2#(RN)Last Part Wid EPI pg 119(4/6) (Page 5)

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Posted: 22 January 2010 at 9:28pm | IP Logged
Hey Priya   wow!!!! kya baat hain yaar do do updates in  this month aur wo bhi in a week gap utna hi nahin this time mujhe dhamkiyan dena ka mauka bhi nahi diya ....i am so happy   Big smile  Big smile  

 Now  coming to the update,ab  main  kya  kahun  yaar is  ud ke bare main..... mindblowing  Clap     Clap      Clap    Clap.fatastic  Clap   Clap   Clap   Clapawesome   Clap   Clap   Clap  Clapsuperb    Clap   Clap  Clap  fabulous    Clap    Clap    Clap  amazing    Clap   Clap    Clap   wonderful  n beautiful part dear   Clap  Clap  Clapaur bhi kuch kehna chahthi hun but kya kare  i am poor in vocab

  Is update main  saare scenes mujhe bahut pasand aaye ' rajs dhamekadhar entry  us ka gussa  n raj ka ek haath main  gun n dusre haath vikram ki neck par...n his powerful dialogues  aur phir   raj n naina  ka wo cute n lovely scene'all r well written  

Vikram ki kya halat ki raj ne ....maine bahut enjoy kiya us scene ko'.  not to forget  raj ka dialogues  wo kutta wala...i laughed so much when I was reading that one'......whistle karneka bahut mann kiya ...but kya karun i dont know how to whistle......i tried so many times but i always fail...the best thing about your writting skills is  in serious  situations also tum aisa kuch likthi ho ke we cant stop laughing 

 

Raj ne itna badha warning diya vikram ko n still that idiot vikram had the nerve to say raj.... naina ko bhuljayo n the bullet is actually for raj.....accha kiya raj  ne bhi mast jawab diya  wo bhi punch maarke n the dialogue kanyakumari n rajkumari'.oh awesome yaar  hats off to your writing skills

  vishal bhi vikram ko badiya warning di... vishal ne tikhi kaha vikram ko is umar main ramayan paath karna chahiye  

raj n nainas scene is so nice n so cute 'specially when raj ki do boondh aanson naina ki ankhon ki andar girna....n after that naina ki aankhon se aanso bahe rahe the..jo aanso naina aur rajveer donon ki he.... kya scene tha yaar ...tu itna acche se kaise likthi ho yaar

  why raj is not saying what naina  n we all want to hear from him'lagtha hain accha sa muhurat ka intezaar hain .   flash back  main ye aslam kaha chalagaya n wo chudail  kaunsa bad news dene  chali aayi   priya thank u so much dear for the lovely part par kya tujhe nahin laghta ki ye update ki length thoda short hain compared to your previous ones....gussa mat ho yaar ...agar tujhe nahin lagtha to tikh hain  this time u updated fast  mujhe bahut accha laga ...love u for this Hug  Hug   Hug    Hug    Hug

 

ab jaldi se ek accha sa muhurat nikalo raj ke liye to tell naina wo teen magical words

   Lrl joke is too funny  LOL   LOL   LOL   waiting for the next part eagerly   

 

 

 



Edited by princessyogitha - 02 February 2010 at 1:06am

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Posted: 22 January 2010 at 10:37pm | IP Logged
 Hi Priya!!!

Superb update! Just fabulous. Clap Clap ClapAnd if your update has made Yasmin break Yasmin her clicking the like button spree, then it is in itself the greatest comment you can get.LOL LOL  LOL

Anyways coming to the update, I completly agree with Dhara and Yasmin, they have said it all. Rajveer sure  is the show stealer.Clap Clap Clap Poor guy, he was so angry. And I had been thinking about this that the bullet was meant for Raj and Naina came in between. Vishal too had some very good dialogues to his credit. Bbut for me  the best moment was the RN scene in   the hospital. It was such a romantic one. Naina apna badla le rahi thi Raj se ye kehkar ki usse jana hai par Raj ne usse bahut pyar se mana liya. Wish you had made it longer. We are still waiting for Raj's confession and rather waiting eagerly for it.

I'm sure something has happened to Aslam and it   is our villian who is behind it. I mean villians hote hi isliye hain.Angry Anyways, I expect you to continue soon.

The LRL was joke was very nice. Really hilarious!LOL LOL LOL. But I guess you had a joke regarding Huda's visit to Kolkata. The "AMI JAANI NA" wala joke. That was really too much.LOL LOL LOL . I could understand his confusion, poor fellow.LOL LOL LOL.

Anyways, contiinue soon.And please forgive me if there are any spelling mistakes in this part, I'm sure there are some mistakes. I'm sitting in a net cafe and the stupid keyboard doesn't seem to be working properly.Angry Angry Angry.

Waiting for another rocking update.

Love
Guglu

Angry

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Posted: 22 January 2010 at 10:51pm | IP Logged
wow
awsome update
mindblowing
too good
superb
u rocked
very well written
great going
plz continue soon

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Posted: 23 January 2010 at 1:10am | IP Logged
Helo Big smileBig smileBig smile....waise main na har comment pe sabse pehle Raj ka naam leti hu.....aur kyunki maine abhi abhi le liya hai....to I want to say...u r awesum Priya!!!!!!!

Sabse pehle bata du....maine koi rushing to the hospital nahi expect kiya tha....LOLLOL...I knw u too well to expect that....waise bhi common sense hai yaar....goli lagi hai to hospital hi le jayenge....LOLLOLLOL....isme itni bhagam bhaag dikhane wali koi baat thodi hai....lolz!!

And now Rajveer ki wo dhaasu entry....wah wah wah Clap

Aur wo confrontation....I cud visualise it all......aur kya lag raha tha wo....main kya kahu...haiii....u make me fal for him all over again!!!Embarrassed

And even Vishal was awesum in his dhamki...LOLLOLLOL....Ramayan-Mahabharat wali baat....jhakas tha bilkul!!!

Aur phir uss idiot ki himmat kaise hui Raj pe goli chalane ki??? Khud ko raja kehta hai???LOLLOLLOL...Samne dekha nahi kaun khara tha...RAJVEER!!!EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed Aur wo soch bhi kaise sakta hai apni Rajkumari Kanyakumari Naina apne Raj k alawa kisi aur ka ho sakti hai....ab ye kaisa Raja hai yaar....jiske paas chiti k jitna bhi dimag nahi hai??? Ye to hum se bhi aage hai Priya....I mean in the sense of Having No Dimag!!!LOL

And now hospital scene btwn Raj-Naina......EmbarrassedEmbarrassed....wo aansoon wala scene....when u said....both Raj n Naina's tears....I was like wow!!! It was soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo beautiful dear!!!

Ab bahut hui taarifein....ye flashbak kyun end kiya???? Mujhe janna tha wo Aslma Raj ko pareshan karke kaha gaya??? Aur Raj ne kya kiya??? Kitne sawal hai yaar!!!

Khair jaldi se continue karo.....mujhe aage padhna hai...TongueTongue...aur sirf mujhe hi nahi sabki padhna hai....we all r very eager...isiliye ek achhi bacchi ki tarah tum bhi likhna shuru karo....Big smileBig smile


Now LRL Joke:

Surijee ko laga unka koi photo le raha hai...LOLLOLLOL...unhone to kabhi bataya nahi unhe photo khichwane ki itni tamanna thi...LOLLOLLOL


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Posted: 23 January 2010 at 3:42am | IP Logged

wow

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Posted: 23 January 2010 at 4:01am | IP Logged
Superb part,
Raj vo bhi gusse me, hieeeee kitna cute lagta hai na vo aise.
Vikram ki halat kharab ho gayi ho gi, Raj ko apne yahan dekh kar. Us ne umeed nahi ki hogi ki jis baat pe vo abhi kisi ko thappad laga raha tha us par proper action lene k Raj vahan aa jaayega.
Raj ne bhi kya kamaal kiya us ne Vikram ko acche se samjhaya ki agar Naina ko kuch bhi ho gaya to kya haal honewaala hai us ka, Vikram bhi bahut mushkil se bacha hai Raj k gusse se.
Accha hua samay rehte Vishal ne Raj ko samhaala varna bachta nahi vo. Sab se jyada hassi mujhe Vikram k vo Princess waali baat pe aayi , ki Naina ki shaadi ek Raja se hi hogi.
Par Raj ne bhi us ko kya solid answer diya na ki Naina bus us ki hai aur kisi ki nahi hai.
Filhaal Naina ko jyada jaroorat thi na Raj ki. Par yahan bhi Vikram nahi maana aur Raj k jaate-2 sach us ne bol hi diya na Raj ko. Aur ek baar fir Raj ka gussa bhadak gaya us par.
Thank god Naina ab Safe hai varna Vikram aur baaki k log to unsafe ho jaate. Par ek baat acchi hue, isi bahane Naina ko pata chal gaya ki Raj bhi bahut pyaar karta hai us se.
Abhi bhi Raj ko shaitaani soojh rahi hai aur us ne, abhi bhi nahi kaha Naina se i love u aur fir se Naina intezaar kar rahi hai. Adi n Vishal bhi milne aaye to Naina ne sach bata diya ki goli ka nishana Raj tha.
Par ye Aslam k saath kya hua tha?
Ab update kar de aur bhi fics ko like Ehsaas n ZTMK.



Edited by Mahak Sinha - 23 January 2010 at 4:03am

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Posted: 23 January 2010 at 8:50am | IP Logged
as always Gr888888888 update !!!

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Posted: 23 January 2010 at 10:49am | IP Logged
Superb, Brilliant, Fantastic. ClapClapClap
Raj ki entry hila dene wali thi. Vikram ki toh ab khair nahiAngry. Raj ke dialogues were awesome.
It was good that Vishal came there on time...nahi toh raj saach mein Vikram ko maar deta. And Vikrams dialogues were too good.
It is scenes and dialogues like this that show the brilliance in your writing.Clap
The scene in the hospital was great. Raj and naina are so perfect for each other...even at times like this they can find something to laugh aboutWink. Naina is right...it is now Raj's turn to say i love you.
Aditi is shocked to hear that this attack was made on Raj. Shocked
In thie flashback it seems that Vikram had only kidnapped Aslam....Shocked
Please continue soon.....waiting for some more RN scenes.

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