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Posted: 22 January 2010 at 11:39am | IP Logged

Originally posted by Lion_Priya

                                            Episode:21

 
Ek zor se slap ki awaz aayi......Vikram ki haveli se...
 
Vikram:-"maine tujh se kaha tha Rajveer par goli chalane k liye ...naina par nahi...!!! mujhe Naina zinda chahiye... Raghav...!!! oye ye itni zor zor se kyu chilla raha hai?Raj ne sun liya to?LOL
 
achanak ek zordaar awaz aayi haveli k main door par...door khula...
 
ander apne tez kadmin k sath dakhil hua Rajveer...!!! haha ab ayega maza!
 
Vikram chillaya:- "mere bina izazat k ise kis ne ander aane diya...???" arre iski himmat to dekho...beta jaan pyari hai to muh band rakh!
 
aate hi Rajveer k hath sab se pahle Vikram k gardan par the...!!! us ne Vikram ka gardan kafi tightly pakda hua tha...aur use usi tarah se dhakelta hua...diwar k paas le gaya...!!! *clapping* mar de isko jaan se...fic ka bhala hoga
 
Rajveer us waqt kafi khatarnaak lag raha tha...us ki white shirt khun se pura bheega hua tha...hairs bikhre hue the...left hand me us ne ek gun thaam rakhi thi...aur us k piche vishal khada tha...!!! *whistle*
 
Rajveer:- "mujhe tujhe maarne k liye kisi kutte ki izazat lene ki jarurat nahi hai...!!!" lmaoROFL...bhale hi Raj gusse me hai, but he still speaks gr8 dialogues!
 
diwar se sata hua Vikram khada tha...Rajveer k grip se apne aap ko chudane ki koshish kar raha tha...par Rajveer k ander us waqt voh takat thi jis ki kabhi bhi kalpana nahi ki thi Vikram ne...us ki saansh band hone lagi thi... hehe i cant stop laughing...although Raj ki harkate dara rahi hai mujhe...i cant stop laughing at vikram's fate
 
Vikram k kuch log bhaagte hue aaye...toh un k samne Vishal khada hua...apne revolver se unhe point karta hua kaha jab bade baat kar rahe ho to bachche bich me nahi bolte! haha
 
Vishal:-"kahne ki jarurat nahi hai...par koi bhi agar aage ek bhi kadam badhaya toh jaan jayegi...Vikram ki...!!!" cmon badhao kadam agey...marega to vikram na!
 
Rajveer ne apne gun ko apne paas rakha aur diwar par tange hue ek sword ko khinch kar bahar laaya aur kaha:- "agar Naina ko kuch bhi hua toh tere hi talwar ki pyaas teri hi khun se bujhayunga...!!!" m surprised Vikram didnt faint at this one! gr8 work Priya! mast dialogues hai
 
Vishal ne hath rakha Rajveer k kandhon par aur kaha:- "bhai jee...humain ab jald se jald hospital chalana chahiye...!!! Naina jee ka operation hona tha....!!!" haan...Vikramthank him varna aj Raj tera janaza liye bina yaha se nahi jane vala tha
 
Rajveer ki ankhen abhi tak Vikram par thi...
 
Rajveer:- "abhi se bhagwan se apni zindagi ki dua maang le...Vikram rai...kyoun ki agar Naina ko kuch bhi hua toh vohi waqt tere saanshon k liye bhi akhiri waqt hoga...!!!" hehe ab isko nani yaad ayegi...
 
Vikram ko chod kar rajveer aage badha...jane k liye...!!! Vikram zameen par gira...us ki saansh fuli hui thi...aur voh zor se saansh leta hua kahne laga... oye! isko sharam nhi ati kya?
 
Vikram:- "voh bullet tumhare liye tha Rajveer...voh toh Naina bich me aa gayi...varana is waqt tum apni akhiri saansh le rahe hote...!!! aur Naina ka khwaab dekhna chod do...!!! voh ek rajkumari hai...aur us ki shaadi sirf aur sirf ek raja se hogi yani ki hum se...!!!" shut up u idiot! yaha pe Raj Rajveer aur Rani Naina hai...idiots like u can only fill in for stupid villians...Priya ne tujhe hero k role k liye kab ka reject kar dia hai!
 
Rajveer ek jhatke me turn kiya...aur ek punch pada Vikram k face par...jo ki lagbhag...uchaal kar zameen pe gira...Rajveer ne us ki collor pakdi aur kah:- "Naina chahe rajkumari ho ya kanyakumari...mujhe is baat se koi faraq nahi padta...kyoun ki duniya jaanti hai aur tu bhi apne dimag me bitha le ki Naina sirf aur sirf meri hai...!!! aur dubara use kharoch bhi aayi toh.... *hooting* ye hui na baat...badia sa punch and ek mast dialogue to shut d villian up! We r wid u dear!
 
Rajveer ne Vikram ko chod kar aage diwar ki taraf gaya...jahan Vikram ki ek badi si tashveer lagi hui thi...!!!Rajveer ne use utha kar zameen par phenka...glasses tut kar bikhar gaye...Rajveer ne un glasses k ander me se Vikram ki tashveer khinch kar nikali...aur apne lighter se us me aag laga diya... lmao...ye idea to bahut achcha tha yaar...Vikram ko uski aukat batane ka... i guess the ashes will look better than Vikram when Rajveer will have finished with him.*jumping*
 
Rajveer:- "tere zinda rahte teri tashveer ko aag laga raha hun...aur agar Naina ko kuch bhi hua toh tere body ka koi bhi part nahi milega...tere gharwalon ko.... jinhe voh aag laga sakenge...!!!"hehe gharwalo k paise bach jayenge...
 
Vikram chillaya:- "main tum se darta nahi hun Rajveer...!!! yeh tum bhi jante ho aur main bhi...aur main kya kya kar sakta hun...us k hadh se bhi tum achhe se wakif ho..." abe o chup kar...ander ghus k marungi! Nobody talks to my Raj like dat!
 
Rajveer ne turn kiya toh Vishal ne rok liya:- "bhai is waqt humain Naina jee k paas hona chahiye...!!! is chuhe se toh hum kabhi bhi apna hisaab chuka sakte hain...!!" kyu roka...thoda aur action dekhne ko milta...aisa lag raha that bollywood ki picture chal rahi ho!
 
Rajveer bina kuch kahe chala gaya...Vishal kuch der ruka... Rajveer k main door cross karne k baad...Vishal ne turn kiya aur Vikram k kareeb aaya...us k chehre par ek mushkurahat thi...hahaha
 
Vishal:- "1...Rajveer...2...Naina....3...Aditi...4....Gayatri devi...in logon ko agar ek bhi kharoch aayi...aur mujhe laga ki is me tera hath hai..toh ter rajagiri ki aisi ki taisi...teri dono ankhen fode dunga...taki zindagi bhar 'sholey' k imaam chacha ki tarah 'kya hai...kyoun hai...' karta rahega...!!! aayi baat samajh me...!!!" demonstration k liye ek ankh abhi phod de
 
Vishal ne Vikram k paas pade ek table par zor se punch maara...kuch hi pal me voh table tut kar niche zameen par pada hua tha... chalo even this wasnt bad! hehehe
 
Vishal:- "yeh bass trailor tha...puri film kabhi furshat me dikhayunga...!!! abe is umar me Ramayan paath kar...agar Naina ka khayal karega...toh majburan humain Mahabharat dikhaana padega...!!!" ha! budhdha kahi ka...beti ki umar ki ladki k peeche bhagte huye sharam nahi ati...Rajveer aur Vishal iska keema banake dinner me kha jayenge aur dakar bhi nahi marenge!
 
cut to d hospital...
 
Rajveer aur Vishal corridor me hi baithe hue the...!!! Aditi aayi...
 
Aditi:- "bhai...Naina ko i.c.u me shift kar diya gaya hai...voh is waqt behosh hai...khun kafi baha tha na...!!! par doc kah rahe the ki voh jaldi hi thik ho jayegi...!!! doc ne kaha ki hum ek ek kar k us se milne ja sakte hain...!!! vaise tu tab kaha tha...jab us ka operation chal raha tha...???" ji kuch zaruri meeting thi, vaha gaye the...lol
 
Rajveer ne kuch nahi kaha...i.c.u k ander chala gaya...
 
Naina ander soyi hui thi...
 
Rajveer us k kareeb baitha...Naina ka hath thaama...Embarrassed Embarrassed
 
apna chehra Naina k face k kareeb laaya...us k ankhon me anshun the...us ne dhire se kaha...
 
'sorry Naina...yeh sab meri wajah se hua hai...!!! agar main tumhe apne se dur nahi karta toh aaj tum yahan...is halat me nahi hoti...!!! bass tum jaldi se thik ho jayo...naina...vaada karta hua phir kabhi bhi tumhe aapne se dur nahi hone dunga...!!! plz naina mujhe maaf kar do...!!!" thank God bheje me baat to ghusi!
 
Rajveer jhuka...Naina k forehead ko kiss kiya...apna chehera hataya toh dekha ki Naina use hi dekh rahi thi...
 
Rajveer aur Naina ka face ek dushre k baht kareeb tha...Rajveer k ankhon se do boond anshun chalke...jo Naina k ankhon k ander gire...Embarrassed
 
Rajveer ne Naina k cheek ko touch kiya aur kaha:- "tum thik toh ho na...??? main abhi doc ko bulata hun...!!!" doc kya karega ji...har marz ki dawa Rajveer jo yaha hai!
 
Rajveer vahan se utha jaane k liye par ja nahi paya...Naina ne us ka hath thaam rakha tha...Rajveer ne turn kiya...toh dekha... ki Naina ki ankhon se anshun bah rahe the...voh anshun...jo Naina aur Rajveer...dono k the...!!! haaiii..how touching...priya..dis is for u..Clap
 
Naina ne ishaara kiya Rajveer ko apne kareeb aane k liye...!!! Rajveer us k kareeb aaya...toh Naina use aur bhi jyada kareeb aane ko kaha...
 
Rajveer Naina k baht kareeb aa kar baitha...
 
Naina ne dhire se saansh lete hue kaha:- meri Delhi ki train chut gayi hai...!!! aap next train k liye mera reservation kar denge plz...!!! main thodi si thik ho jayungi toh chali jayungi...aur aap ko taklif nahi dungi..!!!" ab ise kya ho gaya? ek baar me ek ki hi akal chalti hai kya?
 
Rajveer ne apna face Naina k face baht kareeb laaya...apne hath se Naina ka kaan pakda aur kaha:- "kaan pkadta hun...aage se aisi galati nahi karunga...aur agar aisa kabhi kiya toh tum mujhe khinch k do thappad maar dena...!!! aur haan...aage se tum ne agar mujhe 'aap' kaha toh main tumhe do thappad maar dunga...samjhi...???" haan...samjhi?
 
Naina:- "tum ne mera kaan pakda hai...!!!" gud observation..lol
 
Raj mushkuraya aur kaha:- "ek hi baat hai...!!!" really?
 
Naina:- "parr mujhe sach me jana hai..." aise kaise?
 
Rajveer:- "main jaane dun tab na..." haanji...kaise jaogi zara hum bhi to dekhe? itni tragedy k baad agar Priya ne aisa kuch karne ki koshish kari to hum usey chodenge nahi
 
Naina:- "toh kya tum mere sath zabardast karoge...???" sure darling
 
Rajveer:- "jarurat padi toh voh bhi karunga...lekin tumhe khud se alag nahi kar sakta...kabhi nahi...!!!" us ne Naina ko cheek apne hathon se brush karte hue kaha... aawww...Raj mujhe aise dekhe to zindagi bhar hospital me padi rahu...Embarrassed
 
Naina:- "par mera faishla abhi tak nahi badla...main jarur chali jayungi aur mujhe koi nahi rok payega...!!!" hehe pagal
 
Rajveer:- "aur agar maine rok liya toh...
 
Naina:- "nahi rok payoge... im betting on Raj
 
Raj jhuka Naina k chehre par...n showering kisses on her face... Naina chup rahi kuch nahi kaha...Naina k lips kareeb aa kar Rajveer ruka aur kaha :- "tum mujhe chod kar kabhi bhi...kahin bhi nahi ja payogi...!!!" ab iske baad kon jayega yaar?
 
Naina ne apna hath rakha...Rajveer k face par aur kaha:- "i think tumhe kuch kahana hai...!!! kuch spl...!!" go ahead go ahead
 
Rajveer k ankhon me shararat thi...us ne kaha:- "kya kahna tha mujhe...zara tum hi kah do...!!!" ab koi itna bhav khata hai?
 
Naina:- "main kah chuki hun...ab tumhe kahana hai...!!!"
 
Naina ne zidd ki...Raj:- "kya kahana hai...???" either he is too dumb or zada bhav kha raha hai
 
door k paas kuch aahat aayi...toh Raj Naina se alag hua...oh no
 
doc aa kar Naina ka cheak-up kar k chale gaye...un k jane k baad Naina ne dekha...Raj gayab tha...lekin Aditi aur Vishal vohi the... as expected...kaam k time hamesha gayab!
 
Aditi ko dekh kar Naina mushkurayi...Aditi:- bhai ko dhundh rahi ho...??? voh bahar maa se fone par baat kar raha hai...!!!" smart girl, Adi
 
Aditi aa kar Naina k paas baithi aur kaha:- "sorry Naina...yeh sab bhai ki wajah se hua hai...!!! na hi bhai tumhe jane ko kahta aur na hi voh log tum par goli chalate...!!!" ye sab sirf us sirfire Vikram ki wajah se hua hai
 
Naina:- "goli mujh par nahi Rajveer par chalayi gayi thi...!!!" Shocked ShockedShocked
 
Aditi:- "kya...???"Shocked
 
Naina:- "haan...maine jab dekha ki us aadmi ne Rajveer ko point kar k khada tha...toh main Rajveer ko batane ja rahi thi...aur..." she stood between him and death...naina Raj se kitnaaaa pyaar karti hai! haaiii...ab jab Raj ko ye pata chalega to vo kya karega?
 
Naina ne aage aur kuch nahi kaha aur mushkura diya...!!!
 
Vishal:- "aap us aadmi ko pehchaan sakti hai...???"
 
Naina:- "nahi...voh aadmi baht dur tha...aur face par ek kapda baandh rakha tha...isiliye main us ka chehra dekh nahi payi...!!!" bad luck
 
Flashback......
 
Vikram shaadi k liye haan kar k chala gaya tha...!!! par Rajveer ko abhi bhi Vikram par shaq tha... hmmm right
 
baarat jane ko taiyaar thi...par Aslam gayab tha...!!! why???Confused
 
Rajveer:- "Vishal... Aslam kahan hai...???"
 
Vishal:- "bhai...us ne kaha ki voh namaaz aada kar k jaldi aa jayega...!!! par abhi tak nahi aaya...!!! gadbad hai...
Rajveer:- "maine kaha tha na ki use akela mat chodna...!!!"
 
Vishal:- "voh akela nahi tha bhai...us k sath kuch aur log bhi gaye the...!!!"
 
Vishal ne ek aadmi ko bulaya aur kaha:- "Aslam k sath toh tum bhi gaye the na...phir Aslam kahan hai...???"
 
dat man:- "Aslam ko kisi ka fone aaya tha...voh vohin khade baat kar raha tha...!!! phir kahne laga ki voh kuch hi der me ghar pahunch jayega...aur yeh kah kar akele hi chala gaya...!!!" pakka gadbad hai...is Vikram ki to...aisi ki taisi
 
Vishal:- "aur tum ne use jane diya...kyoun...???"
 
dat man:- "hum sab ne baht mana kiya par voh maana nahi... akela bike le kar kahin chala gaya...!!!" arre ye shadi nahi karna chata kya?
 
Rajveer:- "yeh Aslam kab se itna bewakuff ho gaya...??? kya kar raha hai voh...??? kahan chala gaya...??? achha Vishal use fone karo...!!!"Dead
 
Vishal:- "kab se try kar raha hun bhai...ring ho raha hai par koi receive nahi kar raha hai...!!!" Cry
 
achanak ek police van aa kar ruki...aur ander se Jigyasa bahar aayi...aur Rajveer se kaha
 
Jigyasa:- "aap ko ek baht buri khabar deni thi...!!! marr gaye...Dead
 
end of d epi......
ek baat batao thoda aur likh k end nahi kar sakti thi? jaise hi mujhe lagta hai k this time suspense khulega, Priya ji ka end of epi dikh jata hai...aisa mat karo na...plz batao na kya hua tha...
 
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okkk ab aap sab k comments ki baari...mujhe pata hai ki is ud me aap sab ek lambi chadi hospital k bhagam-bhaag ud ko xpect kiya hoga...par maine aisa kuch nahi kiya...kyoun ki mujhe story aage badhani thi...!!! achcha kia doctor shab wale scenes pe time waste nhi kia..i hav enough of them already! Part was fantastic! Raj ka har scene was outstanding...jab usne /vikram ko dhamki di thi, i was jumping wid joy...aur Naina k sath wale wer soooo sensitive sweet caring nd romantic...bahut hi pyara tha.
Finally usne kaha k Naina uske paas rahegi...wow! ab akal ayi sir ko...dat sending her away is not a gud idea...
aur ye Naina kya jana hai jana hai ki rat laga rahi hai? ek baar me ek hi ka dimag chalta hai...LOL
scenes and dialogues wer commendable! Clap
and very gud for d quick uds...we love it...ab aise hi lagi raho aur next ud bhi jaldi post karna ok?
LRL joke was also very funny!LOL
 
plz dont forget to write ur precious comments for me...!!! i will b waiting for ur generous support...!!! plz do comments...or press d LIKE botton...!!!Big smile
i hav a feeling this fic is gonna cont in the 3rd thread 2! keep up d gud work dear!
love
Sur



Edited by Sur_Singhania - 23 January 2010 at 10:44am

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Posted: 22 January 2010 at 12:17pm | IP Logged
Hi Priya, How r u dear?

First of all COngratulation on the 2nd thread of Tere Naina...!!! Thumbs Up

Update is awesome.... yes naina is in the hospita but still update is just mindblowing..!!
Raj threatened Vikram... ofcourse..he deserves it..actually he deserves more than that.. Angry
So finally Raj ne apna haq jataaya... he asked naina to forgive him... its a lovely scene... small yet romantic... liked this side of Raj's... Embarrassed
but the spoiler..the doc... came to spoile the very moment.. Angry ...kuchh der baad nahi aa sakta tha kya??
hmm..flashbackk..Aslam is gaayab...ofcpurse Vikram's hand behind it... Angry
waiting for the next update...Smile
n yeah..LRL joke....just awesome... ROFL

Edited by sweet_shona - 22 January 2010 at 12:18pm

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Posted: 22 January 2010 at 12:22pm | IP Logged
that was awesome
and congo for second thread
plz continue soon

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Posted: 22 January 2010 at 12:39pm | IP Logged

Naina chahe rajkumari ho ya kanyakumari...mujhe is baat se koi faraq nahi padta...kyoun ki duniya jaanti hai aur tu bhi apne dimag me bitha le ki Naina sirf aur sirf meri hai...!!! aur dubara use kharoch bhi aayi toh....

ROFL ROFL ROFL Clap


Naina:- "toh kya tum mere sath zabardast karoge...???"

 

Rajveer:- "jarurat padi toh voh bhi karunga...lekin tumhe khud se alag nahi kar sakta...kabhi nahi...!!!" us ne Naina ko cheek apne hathon se brush karte hue kaha...


Day Dreaming Day Dreaming Day DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming Thank God! kum se kum use samajh aaya ki naina ki jagah unke sath hai, and I have to admit yeh baat woh bade romantic tarikhe se maana hai. hai mere Sharukh, yeh hui na baat!!! Embarrassed 


Also CONGRATS!!!! and a huge Hug for the second thread, Party


I don't believe this, yeh mein teesri baar post ko edit kar rahi hoon D'oh , lekin I had to say thanks for listening to our ahem! "request" Wink and adding some romance. Mogambo khush hua!!! maine abhi ke liye apni gun se goliyaan nikaal rahi hoon lekin yaad rahe dono mere paas hi rahenge Evil Smile ......mwah ha ha ha ha!!! (that was my villainous laugh Wink)



Edited by sea_nyx - 22 January 2010 at 1:08pm

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Congratulations for the Second Thread of Tere Naina!!!!!!

 
 
       

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Too good!!!Awesome!!!!!

Vikram is angry at his men kyunki woh goli Naina ke liye nahi Raj ke liye thi!!!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry

Raj ne kya dhamakedaar entry maari!!!!!!Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap

Raj ne gusse mein Vikram ki gardan ko pakda with a gun in his other hand!!!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry AngryWow!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile Smile

His angry is very fierce like a tiger!!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Clap Clap Clap Clap

Raj's dialogues were just too good!!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap

Vikram ki toh haalat kharab ho gayi hai!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

Vikram ke aadmi bhaagte huye aaye inko lagta hai pata nahi hai ke jab do bade log baat kar rahe ho toh beech bacche nahi bolte!!!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove

Vikram still had the nerve to say that the bullet was meant for Raj!!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry

He said ke Naina ek rajkumari hai aur uski shaadi sirf aur sirf ek raja se hogi!!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile Smile

Raj ne usse jo punch maara aur phir Raj ka rajkumari waala dialogue was fantastic!!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL

I loved it when Raj said ke Naina sirf aur sirf uski hai!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap

Raj ne Vikram ki tasveer ko aag laga diya and warned him of the consquences if anything happened to Naina!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Thumbs Up Thumbs Up Thumbs Up Thumbs Up

Par jaate jaate bhi Vikram ko Raj ke gusse ko aur bhadkana tha!!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove

Accha huya Vishal ne Raj ko rok liya and said ke unhe Naina ke paas hona chahiye warna Raj sach mein Vikram ko maar deta!!!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve Smile Smile Smile Smile

Vishal's Sholay dialogue was awesome!!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL

Uska trailor bhi kamal ka tha and he said ke puri film kabhi fursat mein dikhayega!!!!!Clap Clap Clap Clap

Vishal ne sahi kaha ke Vikram ish umar mein Ramayan padhe, agar Naina ka khayal karega toh majburan unhe Mahabharat dikhani padegi!!!!Stern Smile Stern Smile Stern Smile Stern Smile

Magar Vikram toh ish umar swayamvar rakhwana chahta hai!!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

Thank God Naina is safe now warna Raj pata nahi kya karta!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile

Raj ko aakhir ehsaas ho hi gaya ke agar woh Naina ko khud se dur nahi karta toh woh ish haalat mein nahi hoti!!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy

Raj ki ankhon se Naina ki ankhon mein aasoon girna aur phir Naina ki ankhon se Raj aur Naina dono ke aansoon behna was very touching!!!!!!!Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry

Naina ab Raj se apna badla le rahi hai aur jaane ki zidd kar rahi hai!!!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

Raj ka Naina ka kaan pakadna aur kehna ke ek hi baat hai was very cute!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile Smile

Raj ab Naina ko pyaar se mana raha hai aur uspe apna haq jaata raha hai aur kehta hai ke kabhi Naina ko khud se alag nahi karega!!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing

Raj and Naina are romancing in the hospital and Raj is showering kisses on her!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed

Raj ko abhi bhi shaitaani sujh raha hai and he is not saying the three magical words thats Naina is waiting to hear from him!!!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue

Naina told Aditi ke goli Raj pe chalayi gayi thi and she was just going to warn Raj when she got shot!!!!!Ouch Ouch Ouch Ouch

Baarat jaane ko taiyaar hai aur Aslam gayab hai!!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy

Ho na ho iske peeche zaroor Vikram ka haath hai!!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry

Ab Jigyasa aayi hai aur keh rahi hai koi buri khabar hai!!!!!Shocked Shocked Shocked ShockedVikram ne zaroor Aslam ko kisi cheez mein phasaya hai!!!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry

The joke was very funny!!!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL

Waiting for Raj to confess his love to Naina!!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed


 



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Congratulations on your 2nd thread of "Tere Naina" Clap

Another awesome part........
 
Raj ne vikram ki haalat bigad di aur Vishal ne bhi dhamki de di..........
 
Naina and Raj convo was nice.......
Finally Naina and Raj will be together chalo Raj ko kuch akal to aayee...... Ab vikram ki khair nahi wo to gaya lekin ye Nandini kahan hai? Pichle kuch episode se dikhayee hi nahi di.......
 
keep up the good work.......
Please PM me when you post the next part.........

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Congratulations Priya for ur new thread'.!!!!!

keep  rocking dear'!!!ClapThumbs UpThumbs UpThumbs UpThumbs Up

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ur fanfic is just too mind blowing,i really appreciate ur creativity which u have depicted through ur fanfic.hope to read more wonderful parts
 
 
 
 
 
 


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