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                                            Episode:21
 
Ek zor se slap ki awaz aayi......Vikram ki haveli se...
 
Vikram:-"maine tujh se kaha tha Rajveer par goli chalane k liye ...naina par nahi...!!! mujhe Naina zinda chahiye... Raghav...!!!
 
achanak ek zordaar awaz aayi haveli k main door par...door khula...
 
ander apne tez kadmin k sath dakhil hua Rajveer...!!!
 
Vikram chillaya:- "mere bina izazat k ise kis ne ander aane diya...???"
 
aate hi Rajveer k hath sab se pahle Vikram k gardan par the...!!! us ne Vikram ka gardan kafi tightly pakda hua tha...aur use usi tarah se dhakelta hua...diwar k paas le gaya...!!!
 
Rajveer us waqt kafi khatarnaak lag raha tha...us ki white shirt khun se pura bheega hua tha...hairs bikhre hue the...left hand me us ne ek gun thaam rakhi thi...aur us k piche vishal khada tha...!!!
 
Rajveer:- "mujhe tujhe maarne k liye kisi kutte ki izazat lene ki jarurat nahi hai...!!!"
 
diwar se sata hua Vikram khada tha...Rajveer k grip se apne aap ko chudane ki koshish kar raha tha...par Rajveer k ander us waqt voh takat thi jis ki kabhi bhi kalpana nahi ki thi Vikram ne...us ki saansh band hone lagi thi...
 
Vikram k kuch log bhaagte hue aaye...toh un k samne Vishal khada hua...apne revolver se unhe point karta hua kaha
 
Vishal:-"kahne ki jarurat nahi hai...par koi bhi agar aage ek bhi kadam badhaya toh jaan jayegi...Vikram ki...!!!"
 
Rajveer ne apne gun ko apne paas rakha aur diwar par tange hue ek sword ko khinch kar bahar laaya aur kaha:- "agar Naina ko kuch bhi hua toh tere hi talwar ki pyaas teri hi khun se bujhayunga...!!!"
 
Vishal ne hath rakha Rajveer k kandhon par aur kaha:- "bhai jee...humain ab jald se jald hospital chalana chahiye...!!! Naina jee ka operation hona tha....!!!"
 
Rajveer ki ankhen abhi tak Vikram par thi...
 
Rajveer:- "abhi se bhagwan se apni zindagi ki dua maang le...Vikram rai...kyoun ki agar Naina ko kuch bhi hua toh vohi waqt tere saanshon k liye bhi akhiri waqt hoga...!!!"
 
Vikram ko chod kar rajveer aage badha...jane k liye...!!! Vikram zameen par gira...us ki saansh fuli hui thi...aur voh zor se saansh leta hua kahne laga...
 
Vikram:- "voh bullet tumhare liye tha Rajveer...voh toh Naina bich me aa gayi...varana is waqt tum apni akhiri saansh le rahe hote...!!! aur Naina ka khwaab dekhna chod do...!!! voh ek rajkumari hai...aur us ki shaadi sirf aur sirf ek raja se hogi yani ki hum se...!!!"
 
Rajveer ek jhatke me turn kiya...aur ek punch pada Vikram k face par...jo ki lagbhag...uchaal kar zameen pe gira...Rajveer ne us ki collor pakdi aur kah:- "Naina chahe rajkumari ho ya kanyakumari...mujhe is baat se koi faraq nahi padta...kyoun ki duniya jaanti hai aur tu bhi apne dimag me bitha le ki Naina sirf aur sirf meri hai...!!! aur dubara use kharoch bhi aayi toh....
 
Rajveer ne Vikram ko chod kar aage diwar ki taraf gaya...jahan Vikram ki ek badi si tashveer lagi hui thi...!!!Rajveer ne use utha kar zameen par phenka...glasses tut kar bikhar gaye...Rajveer ne un glasses k ander me se Vikram ki tashveer khinch kar nikali...aur apne lighter se us me aag laga diya...
 
Rajveer:- "tere zinda rahte teri tashveer ko aag laga raha hun...aur agar Naina ko kuch bhi hua toh tere body ka koi bhi part nahi milega...tere gharwalon ko.... jinhe voh aag laga sakenge...!!!"
 
Vikram chillaya:- "main tum se darta nahi hun Rajveer...!!! yeh tum bhi jante ho aur main bhi...aur main kya kya kar sakta hun...us k hadh se bhi tum achhe se wakif ho..."
 
Rajveer ne turn kiya toh Vishal ne rok liya:- "bhai is waqt humain Naina jee k paas hona chahiye...!!! is chuhe se toh hum kabhi bhi apna hisaab chuka sakte hain...!!"
 
Rajveer bina kuch kahe chala gaya...Vishal kuch der ruka... Rajveer k main door cross karne k baad...Vishal ne turn kiya aur Vikram k kareeb aaya...us k chehre par ek mushkurahat thi...
 
Vishal:- "1...Rajveer...2...Naina....3...Aditi...4....Gayatri devi...in logon ko agar ek bhi kharoch aayi...aur mujhe laga ki is me tera hath hai..toh ter rajagiri ki aisi ki taisi...teri dono ankhen fode dunga...taki zindagi bhar 'sholey' k imaam chacha ki tarah 'kya hai...kyoun hai...' karta rahega...!!! aayi baat samajh me...!!!"
 
Vishal ne Vikram k paas pade ek table par zor se punch maara...kuch hi pal me voh table tut kar niche zameen par pada hua tha...
 
Vishal:- "yeh bass trailor tha...puri film kabhi furshat me dikhayunga...!!! abe is umar me Ramayan paath kar...agar Naina ka khayal karega...toh majburan humain Mahabharat dikhaana padega...!!!"
 
cut to d hospital...
 
Rajveer aur Vishal corridor me hi baithe hue the...!!! Aditi aayi...
 
Aditi:- "bhai...Naina ko i.c.u me shift kar diya gaya hai...voh is waqt behosh hai...khun kafi baha tha na...!!! par doc kah rahe the ki voh jaldi hi thik ho jayegi...!!! doc ne kaha ki hum ek ek kar k us se milne ja sakte hain...!!! vaise tu tab kaha tha...jab us ka operation chal raha tha...???"
 
Rajveer ne kuch nahi kaha...i.c.u k ander chala gaya...
 
Naina ander soyi hui thi...
 
Rajveer us k kareeb baitha...Naina ka hath thaama...
 
apna chehra Naina k face k kareeb laaya...us k ankhon me anshun the...us ne dhire se kaha...
 
'sorry Naina...yeh sab meri wajah se hua hai...!!! agar main tumhe apne se dur nahi karta toh aaj tum yahan...is halat me nahi hoti...!!! bass tum jaldi se thik ho jayo...naina...vaada karta hua phir kabhi bhi tumhe aapne se dur nahi hone dunga...!!! plz naina mujhe maaf kar do...!!!"
 
Rajveer jhuka...Naina k forehead ko kiss kiya...apna chehera hataya toh dekha ki Naina use hi dekh rahi thi...
 
Rajveer aur Naina ka face ek dushre k baht kareeb tha...Rajveer k ankhon se do boond anshun chalke...jo Naina k ankhon k ander gire...
 
Rajveer ne Naina k cheek ko touch kiya aur kaha:- "tum thik toh ho na...??? main abhi doc ko bulata hun...!!!"
 
Rajveer vahan se utha jaane k liye par ja nahi paya...Naina ne us ka hath thaam rakha tha...Rajveer ne turn kiya...toh dekha... ki Naina ki ankhon se anshun bah rahe the...voh anshun...jo Naina aur Rajveer...dono k the...!!!
 
Naina ne ishaara kiya Rajveer ko apne kareeb aane k liye...!!! Rajveer us k kareeb aaya...toh Naina use aur bhi jyada kareeb aane ko kaha...
 
Rajveer Naina k baht kareeb aa kar baitha...
 
Naina ne dhire se saansh lete hue kaha:- meri Delhi ki train chut gayi hai...!!! aap next train k liye mera reservation kar denge plz...!!! main thodi si thik ho jayungi toh chali jayungi...aur aap ko taklif nahi dungi..!!!"
 
Rajveer ne apna face Naina k face baht kareeb laaya...apne hath se Naina ka kaan pakda aur kaha:- "kaan pkadta hun...aage se aisi galati nahi karunga...aur agar aisa kabhi kiya toh tum mujhe khinch k do thappad maar dena...!!! aur haan...aage se tum ne agar mujhe 'aap' kaha toh main tumhe do thappad maar dunga...samjhi...???"
 
Naina:- "tum ne mera kaan pakda hai...!!!"
 
Raj mushkuraya aur kaha:- "ek hi baat hai...!!!"
 
Naina:- "parr mujhe sach me jana hai...
 
Rajveer:- "main jaane dun tab na...
 
Naina:- "toh kya tum mere sath zabardast karoge...???"
 
Rajveer:- "jarurat padi toh voh bhi karunga...lekin tumhe khud se alag nahi kar sakta...kabhi nahi...!!!" us ne Naina ko cheek apne hathon se brush karte hue kaha...
 
Naina:- "par mera faishla abhi tak nahi badla...main jarur chali jayungi aur mujhe koi nahi rok payega...!!!"
 
Rajveer:- "aur agar maine rok liya toh...
 
Naina:- "nahi rok payoge...
 
Raj jhuka Naina k chehre par...n showering kisses on her face... Naina chup rahi kuch nahi kaha...Naina k lips kareeb aa kar Rajveer ruka aur kaha :- "tum mujhe chod kar kabhi bhi...kahin bhi nahi ja payogi...!!!"
 
Naina ne apna hath rakha...Rajveer k face par aur kaha:- "i think tumhe kuch kahana hai...!!! kuch spl...!!"
 
Rajveer k ankhon me shararat thi...us ne kaha:- "kya kahna tha mujhe...zara tum hi kah do...!!!"
 
Naina:- "main kah chuki hun...ab tumhe kahana hai...!!!"
 
Naina ne zidd ki...Raj:- "kya kahana hai...???"
 
door k paas kuch aahat aayi...toh Raj Naina se alag hua...
 
doc aa kar Naina ka cheak-up kar k chale gaye...un k jane k baad Naina ne dekha...Raj gayab tha...lekin Aditi aur Vishal vohi the...
 
Aditi ko dekh kar Naina mushkurayi...Aditi:- bhai ko dhundh rahi ho...??? voh bahar maa se fone par baat kar raha hai...!!!"
 
Aditi aa kar Naina k paas baithi aur kaha:- "sorry Naina...yeh sab bhai ki wajah se hua hai...!!! na hi bhai tumhe jane ko kahta aur na hi voh log tum par goli chalate...!!!"
 
Naina:- "goli mujh par nahi Rajveer par chalayi gayi thi...!!!"
 
Aditi:- "kya...???"
 
Naina:- "haan...maine jab dekha ki us aadmi ne Rajveer ko point kar k khada tha...toh main Rajveer ko batane ja rahi thi...aur..."
 
Naina ne aage aur kuch nahi kaha aur mushkura diya...!!!
 
Vishal:- "aap us aadmi ko pehchaan sakti hai...???"
 
Naina:- "nahi...voh aadmi baht dur tha...aur face par ek kapda baandh rakha tha...isiliye main us ka chehra dekh nahi payi...!!!"
 
Flashback......
 
Vikram shaadi k liye haan kar k chala gaya tha...!!! par Rajveer ko abhi bhi Vikram par shaq tha...
 
baarat jane ko taiyaar thi...par Aslam gayab tha...!!!
 
Rajveer:- "Vishal... Aslam kahan hai...???"
 
Vishal:- "bhai...us ne kaha ki voh namaaz aada kar k jaldi aa jayega...!!! par abhi tak nahi aaya...!!!
Rajveer:- "maine kaha tha na ki use akela mat chodna...!!!"
 
Vishal:- "voh akela nahi tha bhai...us k sath kuch aur log bhi gaye the...!!!"
 
Vishal ne ek aadmi ko bulaya aur kaha:- "Aslam k sath toh tum bhi gaye the na...phir Aslam kahan hai...???"
 
dat man:- "Aslam ko kisi ka fone aaya tha...voh vohin khade baat kar raha tha...!!! phir kahne laga ki voh kuch hi der me ghar pahunch jayega...aur yeh kah kar akele hi chala gaya...!!!"
 
Vishal:- "aur tum ne use jane diya...kyoun...???"
 
dat man:- "hum sab ne baht mana kiya par voh maana nahi... akela bike le kar kahin chala gaya...!!!"
 
Rajveer:- "yeh Aslam kab se itna bewakuff ho gaya...??? kya kar raha hai voh...??? kahan chala gaya...??? achha Vishal use fone karo...!!!"
 
Vishal:- "kab se try kar raha hun bhai...ring ho raha hai par koi receive nahi kar raha hai...!!!"
 
achanak ek police van aa kar ruki...aur ander se Jigyasa bahar aayi...aur Rajveer se kaha
 
Jigyasa:- "aap ko ek baht buri khabar deni thi...!!!
 
end of d epi......
 
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okkk ab aap sab k comments ki baari...mujhe pata hai ki is ud me aap sab ek lambi chadi hospital k bhagam-bhaag ud ko xpect kiya hoga...par maine aisa kuch nahi kiya...kyoun ki mujhe story aage badhani thi...!!!
 
plz dont forget to write ur precious comments for me...!!! i will b waiting for ur generous support...!!! plz do comments...or press d LIKE botton...!!!Big smile

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Posted: 22 January 2010 at 9:49am | IP Logged
                               LRL JOKE
 
Suri jee ki death raat k 12 baje k baad ho gayi...unhe current laga tha...par marte waqt bhi un k chehre par ek lambi si smile thi...
 
God ne pucha:- sabhi log jab marte hain toh un k chehre par udaasi hoti hai...par tum marte waqt hass kyoun rahe the...???"
 
Suri jee:- "voh mujhe laga ki koi meri photo le raha hai...!!!"
 

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Posted: 22 January 2010 at 10:02am | IP Logged
I have always loved Rajveer - Vikram face-offs....!!!!! And will continue to do so but only till its Vikram who is at the receiving end...!!!WinkWink

So I liked it this time also...Vikram khud toh mota hai hi but uska dimaag usse double mota hai....Kyun Rajveer se pange leta hai....??? ConfusedConfused

Naina is getting well....good...looks like Mana has done her job very well....!!!! Tongue

The sort of confession and manaoing session was absolutely cute....!!!! Embarrassed And you described soooo wellll.....!!!! Clap

Pls pls pls put up the next part soon...!!!! Big smileBig smileBig smile

Oh and congo shongo for TN 2....!!!! You are doing a brilliant job....!!!!! Star


Edited by Dhara_s - 22 January 2010 at 10:21am

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Posted: 22 January 2010 at 10:03am | IP Logged

hi priya Tongue Tongue Tongue
the update was superb Clap Clap Clap
vikram ke saath raj ne bilkul sahi kiya.........he is so bad
raj-naina ka scene to bahut hi acha tha Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed
thanks naina ko jaldi se theek kar diya
their scene was just awesomeStar Star Star
the whole part was gr8
plz continue soon
luv preetHugHugHug

   

Edited by preet09 - 22 January 2010 at 10:27am

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Hi Priya
How  r u?
 Update was terrific,mindblowing,fantastic etc etc...ClapClapClap
 Sach mein tum itna accha likhti ho ki bas muaahThumbs UpHug
Naina ko sach mein goli lagi thi.But woh goli uske liye nahin raj ke liye thi.ConfusedConfused 
Rajveer ne to Vikram ki jam kar dhunai kar di..Aise aise dialogues bole ki mera hans hans ke bura haal ho raha thaLOLLOLLOL
These were some funny moments
"Rajveer:- "mujhe tujhe maarne k liye kisi kutte ki izazat lene ki jarurat nahi hai...!!!"
Dog to bol nahin sakta but Vikram ko marne ki permission koi bhi de sakta haiLOLLOL..Rajveer ke andar us waqt dhrmendra ki aatma aa gayi thi
 
"agar Naina ko kuch bhi hua toh tere hi talwar ki pyaas teri hi khun se bujhayunga...!!!"
talwar khoon bhi piti haiROFLROFL
 
"Rajveer ne us ki collor pakdi aur kah:- "Naina chahe rajkumari ho ya kanyakumari...mujhe is baat se koi faraq nahi padta...kyoun ki duniya jaanti hai aur tu bhi apne dimag me bitha le ki Naina sirf aur sirf meri hai...!!! aur dubara use kharoch bhi aayi toh...
.Clap LOLLOLLOLagar yeh scene hall mein aata to log bahut siti maarte..
 
"Rajveer ne Vikram ko chod kar aage diwar ki taraf gaya...jahan Vikram ki ek badi si tashveer lagi hui thi...!!!Rajveer ne use utha kar zameen par phenka...glasses tut kar bikhar gaye...Rajveer ne un glasses k ander me se Vikram ki tashveer khinch kar nikali...aur apne lighter se us me aag laga diya...
 
Rajveer:- "tere zinda rahte teri tashveer ko aag laga raha hun...aur agar Naina ko kuch bhi hua toh tere body ka koi bhi part nahi milega...tere gharwalon ko.... jinhe voh aag laga sakenge...!!!"
 
ClapClapClap mast hai boss..hero se aise hi umeed hoti hai..Kya scene thaThumbs Up
 
Phir Vishal ne bhi kuch mast dialogues maare
"1...Rajveer...2...Naina....3...Aditi...4....Gayatri devi...in logon ko agar ek bhi kharoch aayi...aur mujhe laga ki is me tera hath hai..toh ter rajagiri ki aisi ki taisi...teri dono ankhen fode dunga...taki zindagi bhar 'sholey' k imaam chacha ki tarah 'kya hai...kyoun hai...' karta rahega...!!! aayi baat samajh me.."
Sach mein Vikram vaisa lagega ki nahin???coz woh sholey wale chacha to kaafi patle the but Vikram ki sehat to hathi jaisi haiLOLLOLLOL
 
"Vishal:- "yeh bass trailor tha...puri film kabhi furshat me dikhayunga...!!! abe is umar me Ramayan paath kar...agar Naina ka khayal karega...toh majburan humain Mahabharat dikhaana padega...!!!"
Vikram  iss umar mein bhi swamyvar karna chahta haiLOLLOLIss umar mein usko kuch Bhagwaanji ka dhyaan karna chahiye coz usne itne paap kiye hain ji narak mein uski jagah reserved hai..
 
Finally Naina was fine...
Raj was so worried over her..Der se hi sahi but akal to aayi..LOLWink
Yeh dono to hospital mein hi romance karne lage..Naina ti abhi bhi jaane ki zidd kar rahi thi but Raj ne usko pyaar se mana hi liya..But usne woh 3 magical words nahin kahe..Naina is still waiting
"When you fall in love
It's not just a whim.
You spend every moment
Just thinking of him:
Where is he now?
Where was he then?
And he doesn't know
The unrest within!

When you fall in love
It's not just a whim.
For one glamorous night
When the music is dim,
You will utter the words
Which he will repeat
As he kneels down beside
Two prettiest of feet."
 
Flashback se to lagta hai ki Aslam ko Vikram ne hi kidnap karwaya hoga..ConfusedAngry
Continue soon
Bye
Joke was too funny..LOLLOLLOL
When will u update Ehsaas n Ztmk??? 


Edited by suhana_dixit - 22 January 2010 at 10:28am

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 Priya !!! Big smile 

samajh nahi aa raha ki tujhe hamesha ki tarah Hi-hello kahu ki seedha ek jhappi dedu !! Chal second option hi perfect hai !Hug
 
Kya dhasoo start tha !
 
first line padhaa...and believe me, I could hear that thappad ka gunj....
Aur phir kya, main bass ek pillow ko pakad ke apni ungli chabate huye, curiosity aage padhne lagi..ki kya hoga??
 
Yeh saala Raj ko maarna chahta hai...
 
LEKIN.....
 
tabhi zabardast entry hui....Raj ki .....!!!
 
Rajveer:- "mujhe tujhe maarne k liye kisi kutte ki izazat lene ki jarurat nahi hai...!!!"
 
What dial baap !!! Maine toh ek zor ki seeti maari !!!
 
What grip man ! Vikram ki toh aaj khair nahi...
aur uske log kuch kar bhi nahi sakte...coz.....
 
Vishal:-"kahne ki jarurat nahi hai...par koi bhi agar aage ek bhi kadam badhaya toh jaan jayegi...Vikram ki...!!!"
 
Waise Raj was the STAR and HERO of the Update ...but Vishal bhi yaad rahega! His dial were just superb !
 
Aur kya style se ussiki sword nikaal usse hi dhamkaya!!
 
Raj chup chap jaa raha tha, par yeh Vikram!!! Kych jyaada hi khumkhumi hai ussmein...jo nahi bolna chahiye  wahi bol diya aur phir aisa punch pada ki ki Khud uchal pada ! LOL
 
And this dial....
 
"Naina chahe rajkumari ho ya kanyakumari...mujhe is baat se koi faraq nahi padta...kyoun ki duniya jaanti hai aur tu bhi apne dimag me bitha le ki Naina sirf aur sirf meri hai...!!! "
 
Waah ! I just sent 2-3 muaah muaah muaah in air at this ! LOL
 
Haai !!! Kya lag raha hoga woh pure scene mein...!Day Dreaming
 
Haila Priya woh tasveer waala scene....***sigh*** main kab aisa dhasoo likh paungi !!! Yaar teri script toh mind blowing hai !! Sach sach bata tu sachmein wahi hai na jo mujhe kehti hai, ya koi badi script writer???? par...phir tu IF pe kya karti ??? Confused
 
And then Vishal's dialogues were just mindblowing !!!
Specially woh 1...Rajveer, 2....NAina waala....
 
And Vishal bilkul sahi hai! Umar toh Ramayan paath karne ki hai par Naina ke sapne dekh raha hai gadha Angry
 
Waise maine apna kaam bahot sahi tareeke se kiya !! Naina safe hai !! Tongue
 
Priya this RN scene makes you to receive 3-4 whistles, 4-5 jhappies, and a muaah !
 
I wanted Naina to behave this way only !
Bada shaana bann raha tha na? Naina ko dur bhej raha tha!
Ab mere kaleje thandak pohochi...jab woh usse rukne keliye mana raha tha! Tongue
 
Par shai bhi hai, Naina usse chodkar kabhi bhi kahin bhi nahi jaa sakti !Wink
 
That scene was quite sweet and romantic !
 
Aur tu kya keh rahi thi mujhse???
Itna romantic kaafi tha madam, hospital mein isse zyaada kya karegi??? LOL LOL LOL
Main allow nahi karti !! Raj ki entry hi bandh hojati jabtak Naina ka discharge na ho ! LOL LOL LOL Abey serious patient hai yaaar....koi sardi,khaasi bukhaar ka case nahi !LOL 
 
But Yeh Raj na....abhi bhi tashan dikha raha hai! Aakhir woh three words bole bagair hi chala gaya !
 
Parr kabtak bhaagega!
 
Flashback was quite intriguing....Aslam kaha gaya??
 
And nice LRL joke ! LOL
 
Update soon please !
 
 
 


Edited by Revolutionbreez - 25 January 2010 at 10:10pm

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although i know i shouldnt be because situation garam hain Ouch but still i'm laughing my ass of, not literally because thats not possible lolLOL haan haan you probably think im crazy laughing at such a tensed update Confused but i'm sure even you know that your supposedly tensed updates was kind of hilarious LOL and that is not at all a bad thing let me tell you,Big smile  i actually love how you can make the most serious of situations so light-hearted by just mere dialougues Big smile seriosly you should be a script writer, your film will definetly be a Mega Hit Big smile 

anyways the best dilaoge of the update i guess it had to be vishals, sholay and mahabbarat one ROFLING huge time here ROFLROFL and now my back hurts after all the rolling round on the marble floor, let me tell you the floor was ice cold aswell Ouch it's all your fault LOL
 
Well although Vishal took the best dialouge award, rajveer was again the update stealer, yaar he should sometime let the others get the limelight LOL he outshines everyone, even Naina Embarrassed
 
His anger was woah !!! like a tiger EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed very fierce and i can just imagine how hot he must have looked with those gorgeous eyes blazing in fire BlushingBlushing i think i'm melting over here lol, all of a sudden my room feels to hot to bear EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
 
but you know what was the best, his funny dialouges even when he seemed ready to kill that good for nothing moron, jerk and *beep* vikram AngryAngryAngry like that kutta dialouge LOLLOL and that rajkumari kanya kumari one lmao LOLLOL but the BEST od the best was Naina sirf meri hain, sirf meri *sigh* EmbarrassedEmbarrassed i could just imagine that scene infront of my eyes ... definetly that was a standing ovation moment Clap he's a complete star Star
 
Now steering away from Rajveer, although that's not really possible ...  EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed i am glad that Naina is okay, otherwise you wouldn't have been okay, i would have sent you where Naina is right now lol AngryLOL lol just kiddin, if anything happens to you what will happen to our updates Confused Anyways i'm glad that she's okay and that short but very cute romantic moment was needed after that very Intense but somehow hilarious scene LOL but yeh kya that idiot (do i really need to go into details on who that idiot is) why the hell did he not say those three magical words AngryOuchConfused he is asking for a slap from me Ouch make that two right across his too cute for his own good face AngryLOL
 
But i'm glad to see him all mischevious again, he was really worried for her ... atleast in all this we found out the intensity of his love for Naina Embarrassed
 
Now i'm just waiting for him to confess .. and that stupid but so gorgeous veer better do that before i decide to pick up my shotgun AngryLOL
 
Anyways a brill update and congrats for the second thread Clap your rolling hommie lmao, i was really dying to use this phrase LOL
 
Take Care
 
Yasmin
 
p.s  Suri jee lmao LOL

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