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t-mayur-sajan-j IF-Dazzler

Joined: 10 October 2009
Posts: 2620

Posted: 21 January 2010 at 6:01pm | IP Logged
hey linz
loved the start
cont soon
i first tought it was nupur's child
thank god it's not
well written
who is the kid with mayank?
cont soon
thx for the pm

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dmgmjht4ever IF-Rockerz

Joined: 04 August 2009
Posts: 7572

Posted: 21 January 2010 at 6:21pm | IP Logged
My desi girl!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I think I'm using a little bit too much exlamation points LOL

I remember you telling this to me

leken tum abhi abhi kar rehi thi

aur phir mein pheli nahi thi

me sad

but now happy

and angry

and excited

You know I have a million feelings going in my head

kind crazy

I know


so let me the longest commenter

but I must do homework

so reserved

and will edit later

sooo sorry CB

I really have a lot

and I still need to finish my comment on rabi's

so I need to do a lot of things right now

I'm truly sorry

par dekhna


and I mean nobody

will have such a long comment as mine

I couldn't come and talk
I fell asleep...
on the sofa
because I have been really tired
for this whole week
and when I woke up
I realized that I went to sleep for 2 hours
and when my brother tried to wake me up,
I wouldn't
enough blabbering (I like that word LOL)
I loved the beginning
but yeh baby...
Kisska hai?
I'm guessing it's Nupur's
but she's lying
that it's her friends
am I right
I'm now very excited
the story looks amazing
uhhh... what else?
Oh yeah,
you are an amazing writer
and don't think you are bad at it
cause anyone who thinks you are,
I will beat them up
and Rabi and Sammy would be right by me
to beat them up
My arm is hurting
I slept on my arm
now it hurts Ouch
Oh well
anyways continue soon!
and I hope you liked the very long review
most of the time,
my reviews are a little longer than everyone else's
but for close friends,
I will spend hours
and I mean HOURS
writing a review
that will make their day
and I made your day right?
Anyways love ya always!

Edited by dmgmjht4ever - 22 January 2010 at 5:44pm

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Shafoo IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 30 January 2008
Posts: 15049

Posted: 21 January 2010 at 6:49pm | IP Logged
wowow tht was cool plzz contuied soon

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mayurarti IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 29 October 2009
Posts: 22216

Posted: 21 January 2010 at 7:01pm | IP Logged

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cornelia Senior Member

Joined: 11 October 2009
Posts: 357

Posted: 21 January 2010 at 7:04pm | IP Logged
hey linu....
by god... tumto mayur ki sachhi fan nikli yaarDay Dreaming
good jobHug... i feel like jumping or dancing that u didn't give up writing Dancing
idk how many times i told u that..Wacko
i thought ill read tmrw but again cudn't resistPinch
jaldi continue karna...
luv u yaar..HeartEmbarrassedLOL

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ShwePoo IF-Rockerz

Joined: 05 May 2009
Posts: 5433

Posted: 21 January 2010 at 8:12pm | IP Logged
Cool 1...Very Different....
Pls Continue pm....

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Ninelives IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 31 October 2004
Posts: 11440

Posted: 21 January 2010 at 9:25pm | IP Logged
very very nice....why is nupur sad? and what is happening further???

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Sunshine Girl IF-Stunnerz
Sunshine Girl
Sunshine Girl

Joined: 25 November 2008
Posts: 37424

Posted: 21 January 2010 at 9:46pm | IP Logged
Hey lina u write so gud at age of 13..........that's commendable............plz continue nd pm me............btw is ff mai bohut sare secrets hain jiski wajah se mai confuse ho rahi hun so continue soon.............

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