MJHT - Seperate Worlds MayurFF-Prt9pg.71

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Heyy all you all know me na? Ok agar nahi toh, first let me tell you that my name is Lina, I am 13 years old, and love love writing fan fics. My favorite couple in the whole entire universe in Mayur, and I enjoy writing FF's on them. I just don't know why, when I write anything on them, I could keep on writing and writing.
 
I know that I have like soooo many pending fan fics, that I will soon update. I will deffi continue them one day guys. The thruth is that I don't feel good writing anymore FF's. Didn't even want to start this one, but this storyline, well I really love it.
 
And to love any of my FF was like impossible but sachi mein I really think this FF is special, different from all the others ones. I really really hope that you all do read it, and like it, so please please do read it. Ok guess I am done with the intro, sooo lets start.

 

Ok well let me first tell you that, I am going to keep talking and talking in here. Basically to tell what I feel about it. So all my stupid baatein is going to be in black. So you can always go ahead and skip it if you like. πŸ˜†

 

Ok the title, well I really wanted to put the title "Tu Jaane Na" but someone already took that one. πŸ€£So my second choice was this one.

 

There are going to be loadzz and loadzz of songs in here. And a garantee, that all the songs from APKGK is going to be here love that movie's song to the core😳 All the songs from that movie will be in here, and loadzz other ones.

 
Ok do notice the numbers of times I use the word smile🀣I use it often, actually more than that.πŸ˜†
 
 
                
 
  
 
 
 
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Edited by rkmnkp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Parts

Part 1- Page 1

Part 2- Page 13
Part 3- Pg 23
Part 4- Pg 35
part 5- 43
Part 6-49
Part 7- Pg 63
Part 8- Pg 65
part 9-Pg 71
 
Edited by rkmnsg - 13 years ago
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Character Stretch

                                
                               Nupur Bhushan-

About 21 years old, lives alone, misses her family a lot. Think that she should of never ran away from home for.....πŸ˜• whom she loved a lot. She used to be babbally, talking a lot about everything, haveing fun, enjoying life,😳 but after that she is quite quite, very different. She used to belive in love, but not now. Love doesn't exist in her world. Will she ever believe in love again? Or no? πŸ˜²πŸ˜†Suspence queenπŸ˜†

                             
                                       Mayank-
About the same age as her. His parents died when he was very little. He grew up in orphange. He is very talented and very very cute. 😳Probably the nicest person you will ever meet.😳😳Awww I luv you Doesn't really know how it feels to be in luv, but he loves kids a lot. Actually he decide to work in the orphange with the kids, since he adore them. I adore you Mayu more!πŸ˜† His life is normal, basically the same, after he meets Come on, it has to be obvoius naπŸ˜†.....and falls in love with her.😳
 
                       
Gunjan Bhushan-
Nupur's little sister. She is just like her. Talking a lot, blackmailing when neccessaryπŸ˜†Gosh just like meπŸ˜† But she is soooo sweet, and she wishes Nupur to return back with jiju😲Now who is this jiju? Well find out.πŸ˜†

                                   
Samrat Shergill-
Gunjan faince,😳very sweet, and caring. 😳 Nupur, Gunjan, and he used to go to school, high school, and then collage together. But after his parents death, 😭he and his mom moved to USA, and they three are still friends, they chat online, and on phone sometimes before, but not now.πŸ˜ƒ He loved Gunjan from the very begining he saw her😳, and Nupur knew about it.πŸ˜†


Arti-
The baby everyone is confused about.πŸ˜†
1 month, very very cute.😳


RV-
Not telling anything about himπŸ˜†


Other character that are imp.....
-Gunur's family(Mom, dad, cousins, n the rest)
-Dia
-Uday
-Benji
and loadzz more


Edited by rkmnkp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Guyz I think that I am horrible at describing
so I am going to create
pictures
going to change them
to make it look like
what I mean.
So basically
will give u all pics
to make you see wat I mean. I promise this FF is going to be like
U could see all what is happening.
 
Edited by rkmnkp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 1

 

Gunjan- Di app wapis nahi aa rahi ho? Not even for my engagement and wedding?

Nupur- Gunjan, please mein nahi aana chahati, bohat aajeeb lage ga, after what I have done, mujhe nahi laagta ke sab mujhe maaf karre ge.

Gunjan- Di aasa matt kaho. Aur aapko aana hi pare ga, mere liye, remember tumne promise kara tha ke meri shaadi and maangni mein tum hi sab se zyada dance karo gi? Di hum sab tumko kitna miss karte hai, dont you miss us?

Nupur- Asi baat nahi hai-

Gunjan- Toh kaisi baat hai? Di please. Saath mein jiju ko bhi dekh le ge hum sab. Please di, maana nahi karna.

Nupur- Ummmmm....

Gunjan- Di please.

Nupur- Ok fine, sirf teri shaadi tak. Ok?

Gunjan- Oh my god, sachi mein?????Di I am so happy. I can't tell you, sach mein.

Nupur-Acha baba par abhi mujhe jaana hai. Kal baat karte hai.

Gunjan- Ok di, thank you agian.

Nupur- Acha take care, and say hi to everyone for me.

Gunjan- Acha, I will.

Nupur-Bye

Gunjan- Bye.

Nupur closes the phone and puts it aside. She looks at her and starts crying. Why? You will find out. and who is "She"?πŸ˜•

Nupur- Abb mujhe kuch karna pare ga.

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Scene move to Mayank.

Dude I have no idea how to say Aanat Ashram in english. So I am going to use it in englishπŸ˜†

Kid- Mujhe slide par behetna hai.

Mayank- *Smiles* Theeke, chalte hai.

They went to the park that is right outside the aanat ashram.

Mayank watch the kids playing, then hears a baby crying.

He starts looking, but doesn't find the baby. At last, he goes to the swing, and sees a baby lying on it. It is a girl, she was covered with a blanket, she is probably 1 month atmost, and looks soooo cute. Mayank smiles and is about to pick her up, when he hears someone coming.

He hids behind the swing. It is a girl, she is covered up in a shawl, and he couldn't see her face, since it is covered up with a scarf.

He guesses he is feeling for the baby on the swing, since she really can't see behind her scarf.

She touches the baby, and Mayank holds her hand. Confused, she lifts up her scraf, and Mayank is shocked. It is Nupur!  A warm breeze on his face. (Eyelock)

Mayank thinking- Oh god she's beautiful. No gorgeous. Par yeh yahan? Aur yeh bhachi?

Some minutes passes.

Nupur-Ummmmmm''..

Mayank realizes he is still holding her hand, and he lets go quickly. Nupur holds the baby and is about to go when he stops her. She stops and looks back, confused why he stopped her.

Mayank- Hi mein Mayank.

Nupur- Ummm nice meeting you, par abhi mujhko jaana pare ga. Sorry.

She turns to leave again.

Mayank- Nahi rukiye.

He runs up to her, and stands in front of her.

Mayank- Aap aur yeh bhachi?

Nupur- Ummmm'.. who'. Actually'.haan'meri best friend ki beti hai yeh, par actually usski aur usske husband ke death ke baad, I am responsible for her, but mere paas khud hi rehne ki jagah nahi hai, toh meine socha ke mein issko yahan aanata ashram mein chorr jao, par baadmein mujhe ehsaas hua ke mein gaalata kar rahi hoon, that's why mein wapis aa gayi.😲

Mayank- Oh I see, par agar aap chahein toh issko yahan chorr sakati hai.😳

Nupur- *Smiles* Nahi, I am sorry par mein issko aapne paas rakna chahati hoon.😳

Mayank- Nahi nahi plez app sorry nahi kahe. I understand.😳

Nupur- *Smiles back* thanks for understanding.😳

Mayank- *Smiles* No problem.

Nupur- I think I should go now.

Mayank- ok bye.

She turns to leave, when it starts raining.😲😳😍

Nupur- By god abb kya karoon?

Mayank- I think we should go under there.

So before it starts rainig harder, they go under a shelter, with many benches. It starts raining harder.

Mayank thinking- Shayad god bhi nahi chahta ke app jaoen.😳

Nupur thinking- By god, yeh kya hua? Waise bhi sab packing karni thi, aur kal suabah use bhi mil na tha, aur mein yahan phas gayi.

Guyzz will deffi continue this FF, this is my fav FF I wrote. So the next update is gonna be tomorrow. But if you all dont like it then I wont.πŸ˜ƒ Plez do comment na plezzz.
-Lina-
Edited by rkmnkp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey lina janu i am the first one to comment great πŸ˜‰i wanna know why nupur was sad while talking to gunjun jaldi update karna sweeti me waiting and thanks 4 pm😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lina...before I read ur intro mein tumhe bohot dantne wali thi for not continuing ur other FFs...par after reading ur intro...my dear chatter box..I loved ur non-stop chatter and when u said U love this FF I was immediately interested..

Trust me, ur Part 1 was just awesome!!!
It was truly awesome :)

waise mayur hai hi aisi jodi *smiles* (in ur style)

Please ise properly continue karna ok??

aur haan anath ashram is orphange in English :)

all the best on ur neww FF ..update soon πŸ€—

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Posted: 14 years ago
hey linz
loved the start
cont soon
i first tought it was nupur's child
thank god it's not
well written
who is the kid with mayank?
cont soon
thx for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lina!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
My desi girl!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I think I'm using a little bit too much exlamation points πŸ˜†

I remember you telling this to me

leken tum abhi abhi kar rehi thi

aur phir mein pheli nahi thi

me sad

but now happy

and angry

and excited

You know I have a million feelings going in my head

kind crazy

I know

okay

so let me the longest commenter

but I must do homework

so reserved

and will edit later

sooo sorry CB

I really have a lot

and I still need to finish my comment on rabi's

so I need to do a lot of things right now

I'm truly sorry

SOOOOO SORRY
par dekhna

nobody

and I mean nobody

will have such a long comment as mine

EDIT
Sorry,
I couldn't come and talk
I fell asleep...
on the sofa
because I have been really tired
for this whole week
and when I woke up
I realized that I went to sleep for 2 hours
and when my brother tried to wake me up,
I wouldn't
okay
enough blabbering (I like that word πŸ˜†)
I loved the beginning
but yeh baby...
Kisska hai?
I'm guessing it's Nupur's
but she's lying
that it's her friends
am I right
I'm now very excited
the story looks amazing
uhhh... what else?
Oh yeah,
you are an amazing writer
and don't think you are bad at it
cause anyone who thinks you are,
I will beat them up
seriously
and Rabi and Sammy would be right by me
to beat them up
Right?
Right!
Ouch!
My arm is hurting
I slept on my arm
now it hurts
Oh well
anyways continue soon!
and I hope you liked the very long review
most of the time,
my reviews are a little longer than everyone else's
but for close friends,
I will spend hours
and I mean HOURS
writing a review
that will make their day
and I made your day right?
Right?
Anyways love ya always!Edited by dmgmjht4ever - 14 years ago