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Heyy all you all know me na? Ok agar nahi toh, first let me tell you that my name is Lina, I am 13 years old, and love love writing fan fics. My favorite couple in the whole entire universe in Mayur, and I enjoy writing FF's on them. I just don't know why, when I write anything on them, I could keep on writing and writing.
 
I know that I have like soooo many pending fan fics, that I will soon update. I will deffi continue them one day guys. The thruth is that I don't feel good writing anymore FF's. Didn't even want to start this one, but this storyline, well I really love it.
 
And to love any of my FF was like impossible but sachi mein I really think this FF is special, different from all the others ones. I really really hope that you all do read it, and like it, so please please do read it. Ok guess I am done with the intro, sooo lets start.

 

Ok well let me first tell you that, I am going to keep talking and talking in here. Basically to tell what I feel about it. So all my stupid baatein is going to be in black. So you can always go ahead and skip it if you like. LOL

 

Ok the title, well I really wanted to put the title "Tu Jaane Na" but someone already took that one. ROFLSo my second choice was this one.

 

There are going to be loadzz and loadzz of songs in here. And a garantee, that all the songs from APKGK is going to be here love that movie's song to the coreEmbarrassed All the songs from that movie will be in here, and loadzz other ones.

 
Ok do notice the numbers of times I use the word smileROFLI use it often, actually more than that.LOL
 
 
                
 
  
 
 
 


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Parts

Part 1- Page 1

Part 2- Page 13
Part 3- Pg 23
Part 4- Pg 35
part 5- 43
Part 6-49
Part 7- Pg 63
Part 8- Pg 65
part 9-Pg 71
 


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Character Stretch

                                
                               Nupur Bhushan-

About 21 years old, lives alone, misses her family a lot. OuchThink that she should of never ran away from home for.....Confused whom she loved a lot. She used to be babbally, talking a lot about everything, haveing fun, enjoying life,Embarrassed but after that she is quite quite, very different.Ouch She used to belive in love, but not now. Love doesn't exist in her world. Will she ever believe in love again? Or no? ShockedLOLSuspence queenLOL

                             
                                       Mayank-
About the same age as her. His parents died when he was very little.Ouch He grew up in orphange. He is very talented and very very cute. EmbarrassedProbably the nicest person you will ever meet.EmbarrassedEmbarrassedAwww I luv you Doesn't really know how it feels to be in luv, but he loves kids a lot. Actually he decide to work in the orphange with the kids, since he adore them. I adore you Mayu more!LOL His life is normal, basically the same, after he meets Come on, it has to be obvoius naLOL.....and falls in love with her.Embarrassed
 
                       
Gunjan Bhushan-
Nupur's little sister. She is just like her. Talking a lot, blackmailing when neccessaryLOLGosh just like meLOL But she is soooo sweet, and she wishes Nupur to return back with jijuShockedNow who is this jiju? Well find out.LOL

                                   
Samrat Shergill-
Gunjan faince,Embarrassedvery sweet, and caring. Embarrassed Nupur, Gunjan, and he used to go to school, high school, and then collage together. But after his parents death, Cryhe and his mom moved to USA, and they three are still friends, they chat online, and on phone sometimes before, but not now.Big smile He loved Gunjan from the very begining he saw herEmbarrassed, and Nupur knew about it.LOL


Arti-
The baby everyone is confused about.LOL
1 month, very very cute.Embarrassed


RV-
Not telling anything about himLOL


Other character that are imp.....
-Gunur's family(Mom, dad, cousins, n the rest)
-Dia
-Uday
-Benji
and loadzz more




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Guyz I think that I am horrible at describing
so I am going to create
pictures
going to change them
to make it look like
what I mean.
So basically
will give u all pics
to make you see wat I mean. I promise this FF is going to be like
U could see all what is happening.
 


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Part 1

 

Gunjan- Di app wapis nahi aa rahi ho? Not even for my engagement and wedding?

Nupur- Gunjan, please mein nahi aana chahati, bohat aajeeb lage ga, after what I have done, mujhe nahi laagta ke sab mujhe maaf karre ge.

Gunjan- Di aasa matt kaho. Aur aapko aana hi pare ga, mere liye, remember tumne promise kara tha ke meri shaadi and maangni mein tum hi sab se zyada dance karo gi? Di hum sab tumko kitna miss karte hai, dont you miss us?

Nupur- Asi baat nahi hai-

Gunjan- Toh kaisi baat hai? Di please. Saath mein jiju ko bhi dekh le ge hum sab. Please di, maana nahi karna.

Nupur- Ummmmm....

Gunjan- Di please.

Nupur- Ok fine, sirf teri shaadi tak. Ok?

Gunjan- Oh my god, sachi mein?????Di I am so happy. I can't tell you, sach mein.

Nupur-Acha baba par abhi mujhe jaana hai. Kal baat karte hai.

Gunjan- Ok di, thank you agian.

Nupur- Acha take care, and say hi to everyone for me.

Gunjan- Acha, I will.

Nupur-Bye

Gunjan- Bye.

Nupur closes the phone and puts it aside. She looks at her and starts crying. Why? You will find out. and who is "She"?Confused

Nupur- Abb mujhe kuch karna pare ga.

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Scene move to Mayank.

Dude I have no idea how to say Aanat Ashram in english. So I am going to use it in englishLOL

Kid- Mujhe slide par behetna hai.

Mayank- *Smiles* Theeke, chalte hai.

They went to the park that is right outside the aanat ashram.

Mayank watch the kids playing, then hears a baby crying.

He starts looking, but doesn't find the baby. At last, he goes to the swing, and sees a baby lying on it. It is a girl, she was covered with a blanket, she is probably 1 month atmost, and looks soooo cute. Mayank smiles and is about to pick her up, when he hears someone coming.

He hids behind the swing. It is a girl, she is covered up in a shawl, and he couldn't see her face, since it is covered up with a scarf.

He guesses he is feeling for the baby on the swing, since she really can't see behind her scarf.

She touches the baby, and Mayank holds her hand. Confused, she lifts up her scraf, and Mayank is shocked. It is Nupur!  A warm breeze on his face. (Eyelock)

Mayank thinking- Oh god she's beautiful. No gorgeous. Par yeh yahan? Aur yeh bhachi?

Some minutes passes.

Nupur-Ummmmmm''..

Mayank realizes he is still holding her hand, and he lets go quickly. Nupur holds the baby and is about to go when he stops her. She stops and looks back, confused why he stopped her.

Mayank- Hi mein Mayank.

Nupur- Ummm nice meeting you, par abhi mujhko jaana pare ga. Sorry.

She turns to leave again.

Mayank- Nahi rukiye.

He runs up to her, and stands in front of her.

Mayank- Aap aur yeh bhachi?

Nupur- Ummmm'.. who'. Actually'.haan'meri best friend ki beti hai yeh, par actually usski aur usske husband ke death ke baad, I am responsible for her, but mere paas khud hi rehne ki jagah nahi hai, toh meine socha ke mein issko yahan aanata ashram mein chorr jao, par baadmein mujhe ehsaas hua ke mein gaalata kar rahi hoon, that's why mein wapis aa gayi.Shocked

Mayank- Oh I see, par agar aap chahein toh issko yahan chorr sakati hai.Embarrassed

Nupur- *Smiles* Nahi, I am sorry par mein issko aapne paas rakna chahati hoon.Embarrassed

Mayank- Nahi nahi plez app sorry nahi kahe. I understand.Embarrassed

Nupur- *Smiles back* thanks for understanding.Embarrassed

Mayank- *Smiles* No problem.

Nupur- I think I should go now.

Mayank- ok bye.

She turns to leave, when it starts raining.ShockedEmbarrassedDay Dreaming

Nupur- By god abb kya karoon?

Mayank- I think we should go under there.

So before it starts rainig harder, they go under a shelter, with many benches. It starts raining harder.

Mayank thinking- Shayad god bhi nahi chahta ke app jaoen.Embarrassed

Nupur thinking- By god, yeh kya hua? Waise bhi sab packing karni thi, aur kal suabah use bhi mil na tha, aur mein yahan phas gayi.Ouch

Guyzz will deffi continue this FF, this is my fav FF I wrote. So the next update is gonna be tomorrow. But if you all dont like it then I wont.Big smile Plez do comment na plezzz.
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hey lina janu i am the first one to comment great Winki wanna know why nupur was sad while talking to gunjun jaldi update karna sweeti me waiting and thanks 4 pmSmile

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Posted: 21 January 2010 at 5:40pm | IP Logged
Lina...before I read ur intro mein tumhe bohot dantne wali thi for not continuing ur other FFs...par after reading ur intro...my dear chatter box..I loved ur non-stop chatter and when u said U love this FF I was immediately interested..

Trust me, ur Part 1 was just awesome!!!
It was truly awesome :)

waise mayur hai hi aisi jodi *smiles* (in ur style)

Please ise properly continue karna ok??

aur haan anath ashram is orphange in English :)

all the best on ur neww FF ..update soon Hug

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