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things abt the character u will know it along with the story
Thoda sa pyaar hua hai
Kkusum: Beta Sujal break fast table par aajaao!
Sujal: Hmmm mom I will be near the table right now mom
Kkusum: Good morning
Abhay: Good morning
Sujal: Morning both mom and dad
Sujal: Dad, ye Sumit ko aapne dekha hai…na raat ko aata hai na subha
Dekho abbhi ghar pe nahi hai aakhir maamla kya hai dad?
Abhay: iske bare mein tumhe zyaada pata ho ga naa … hoga apne nikamme dost jo ki sirf fuzool ki baato mein dilchaspi lete hai
Kkusum: Stop it Abhay .. dekha Sujal jab dekho Sumit kay bare mein
kuch na kuch ulta seeda to bolte rehte hain
Sujal: Dad aap kuch jaaney bigair ap uske bare mein kuch mat bolo
Filhaaal hi use best singer of the millennium ka award mila hai uske kay naye
Album kay release par jo hai Dil de diya hai…. Hamare college mein to isi
Naye album kay charche chal rehein hai
Kkusum: Suna mere bete kay taarifein
Abahy: Nahi Kkusum ye baat nahi kay mein use khush nahi dekh sakta sirf mein ye chaahta tha kay wo Sujal aur Karan kay tarha M.B.A padta kya jaata mein kuch ghalat to nahi sochta naa mera matlab ye nahi kay wo bhi London mein jaata par yaha India mein atleast padta…
Sujal: Dad aur mom please aap ladna band karo
Kkusum: Beta nashta to karlo
Sujal: nahin mom ladayi jhagde se hi mera pait bhar gaya hai agar bhook lagi to Canteen se kuchh khaa pee loonga
Sujal: Hi Rishiii
Sujal: Mein library jaa raha hoo
Rishi: Phir se in stupid aur boring books ke peeche pad gaye
Sujal: mere liye ye books hi kaafi hai
Akshat: hey hi man kaise ho
Akshat: haan waise bhi exams sar par hain aur books kay ilaawa dimaag mein kuch bhi nahi hona chaahiye
Rishi: dekho tum dono mujhe in sab baato say door hi rakho…
Kashish: Hey Shruti thoda dekho meri lipstick sahi hai naa
Shruti: Hmmm sahi hai
Kashish: Mere sandals? Mera Hair style? Mere earrings? Meri outfit jo specially dad mere liya laaye hain London say?
Shruti: Kashish, Kashish you are looking absolutely perfect….
Kashish: Kya Sujal mujhe ????
Shruti: pata hai pata hai tum mujhe kya kehna chaah rahi ho haan definitely
Shruti: Hi bhai
Sujal: Hi Kashish
Kashish: Hi Sujal
Sujal: Looking gorgeous and stunning
Kashish: Thanks (phir Kashish Sharmaati hai Sujal kay compliment say)
Akshat: Jaante ho guys college mein bohot khoobsurat, hot ladki aayi hai
Sujal: ok bye mujhe padne jaana hai bye (then he leaves)
Kashish: mujhe padne jana hai huh! Ye nahi pata kay pad pad kay insaan chariya ho jaata hai
Shruti: Ohh Kashish stop it !
Akshat: Hey Shruti, Kashish wo is taraf hi aa rahi hai
Kashish: Ohh to ye wo hot ladki hai mujhe to kucch khaas nahi lagi
Akshat: tumhe kya maloom khubsoorati kay bare mein aisa naa ho Sujal tumhe ignore karte karte is hot ladki kay taraf attract ho jaaye
Kashish: Akshat, mind your own tongue
Kumkum: hi I am Kumkum
Akshat: Hi Akshat
Kumkum: And u both?
Shruti: I am Shruti and she is Kashish
(after 4 days)
Kashish: Hey guys u and Kumkum
Kashish: tum to kuch puraane dosto ko to bhul hi chuki ho
Shruti: aisa nahi hai mein aur tumhe bhul jaaoon
Kashish: to chalo mere saath
Kashish: ek long drive kay liye aur kyaa
Shruti: par lekin meri chemistry class
Kumkum: tum kab se padaaku ho gayi
Kashish drives the car
Kashish: Would u like to hear some light music?
Kumkum and Shruti: Yes "off course"
The songs starts
"Dil de diya hai jaan tumhe denge
daga nahi karenge sanam rab di
kasam yaara rab di kasam"
Kumkum: kitna touching gaana hai naa guys
Shruti: haan really ye gaana bohot accha gaaya hai is singer ne
Kashish: This song is sung by ………….
Kumkum: (impatiently) Sumit Kapoor my favourite and a heartthrob too…
Kashish: tum shayad Sumit ko bohot pasand karti ho rite
Kumkum: hmmmm (kumkum phir sharmaati hai) lekin Kashish aur Shruti
Har gali aur har jage Mumbai nagri mein uske posters lage huey hai aisa kyu?
Shruti: uska bohot bada concert ek show honey waala hai
Kashish: Kumkum tum mere saath chalo we will take u along with us….
Shruti: ye kahan le aayi humey long drive to ho chuka naa
Kashish: dekho shruti dad kay kucch confidential papers the wo mujhe sahi time pe pohchaana hai to tum bhi mere saath aajaao naa
(Shruti aur Kumkum office mein wait kar rahi hai Kashish kay liye par tab tak ek tea boy waha aakar Shruti dress pe garam garam tea gira de deta hai)
Kumkum: ohh shit!
Shruti: You stupid anpad gawaar jaahil insaan jaante ho tumne ye kis par ye tea girayi hai Miss Shruti par ye bohot mehenga padega tumhe
Kumkum: Stop it Shruti stop it
(phir Aryan aajaata hai jo Kashish kay bade bhaiyya hain)
Aryan: What the heck is happening? Kya hulchul horahi hai yaha par?
Shruti: dikh nahi raha…
Kumkum: really I am sorry ye sab band bhi to ho sakta hai naa
Aryan: tum intelligent aur bohot samajhdaar lag rahi ho tum isko kucch bolti kyu nahi
Shruti: kya kya mujhse baat karo naa
Kashish: Shruti ya kya ho raha hai plz stop it …. Bhai sorry for this
Shruti: Bhai…. mujhe bataaya nahi
See this is a story of true affairs in love life so it revolves on the 4 leading pairs of star plus which are:
But 2 or 3 readers which are Sumit's fans asked me that when is Sumit's entry…
But I should ask them all that you guys are not asking about the Nandini- Karan's entry
Y man? Don't like them or what? So let's not bore u so I will start the episode…
First Scene of the episode
Shruti: mujhe kyun nahi bataaya kay tumhare bhaiyya states say aagaye hain
Kashish: Shruti. Mein bhul gayi bataana par wo parso hi aayein hain naa
Shruti: ye mein tumhare bhaiyya ki baat nahi kar rahi par ye baat to 100% sahi hai
Kay all men's are bas***d
Kumkum: please Shruti ye sab time jhagdaa karney kaa nahi hai think about your rep man!!!
Shruti: I don't care Kumkum about those things
( Shruti apne ghar chalii jaati hai aur wo kaafi frustrated hai)
Tulsi: Beta Shruti kya huwa?
Shruti: all mans are same!!
Tulsi: kya huwa tumhe mein kucch tumse pooch rahi hoon na…
Shruti: aaj kashish ke bhai se ladayi hui
Tulsi: ye tum kisi aur ka gussa Kashish kay bhai pe kyu nikaal rahi ho?
Shruti: mom ye aap bhi jaanti ho kay mein kya kehna chaah rahi hoon
Tulsi: ye tu puraani baatein bhul jaa naa
Shruti phir rone lagti hai
Shruti: kaise bhul jaao mom kaise? Jab hamare paas paise nahi the ek ek rupaiye
Kay liye jab hum mohtaaj the tub daddy humey chodke chale gaye aisa kyu mom
Mein hi jaanti hoon aapne mujhe aur Akshat ka kharcha kaise poora kiya khud kucch nahi khaati thi lekin hamare pait bhar deti thi
Tulsi: jo hogaya use bhul jaao
Shruti: aaj aap bohot badi businesswoman hain par tab humare paas kucch nahi tha
That's why I hate men's
Tulsi: beeti baato ko bhul jaa naa
Akshat: haa mom aap to bhul jayengi lekin hum kabhie bhul nahi paayenge
Shruti: Thanx Akshat kay tumne mera saath diyaa… koi to hai jo mujhe atleast support to karta hai
Akshat: dekho di I am with u always … par ye time ye sab baat karney ka nahi cool down naa di
( Shruti is a girl where she can find everything in life money, power, luxury and many more but the thing here is to take revenge against her father she hates all men's in this world except her brother and she is not much into make up, styling herself or grooming
She is always with a book in her hand and her 9 or 10 pair of dresses which is her denim jeans and some t-shirts… life has not been very kind to her she thinks that for her world is only books, books and books…she is not very trendy with her outfit or specs or make-up she wears a specs which has a black frame… her specs is not too trendy also…but shruti has a crush on Rishi I mean Kashish's younger brother but see he is a complete flirt too)
(next day in the college)
Kashish in the college auditorium mein announce karti hoon kay
Kashish: Hello guyz as I am the vice president of the college mein announce karna chaahti ho kay there is a show around tomorrow… jo kay ek concert hai young aur charming singing sensation jo hum sab ka favourite hai that is none other than Sumit Kapoor… aap Uskey show kay ticket mujhse collect kar sakte ho… thank you
Rishi: tumhare bhai ka show honey waala hai or humey battaya nahi yaar
Sujal: muje bhi abhi pata chala hai yaar…
Kashish: Sujal aakhri ticket bachi hai kya tum mere saath aana chaaho gay?
Sujal: naturally, mere paas zyaada time nahi hota
Kashish: to kya apne bhai kay concert mein nahi aaogay
Sujal: agar tumhe mera aana accha lagey to mein zaroor aaonga…
Kashish: ohh thanx Sujal ..
(Kashish phir sab kay saamne Sujal ko kiss karke chali jaati hai)
Sujal apne dil mein kehta hai kay " isey kya hogaya?"
Kashish: Dekho Shruti maine tumhare liye aur Kumkum kay tickets kharidli hain
Shruti: then cries
Kashish: Kya huwa Shruti?
Kumkum: Madam ka mood aaj sahi nahi hai
Shruti: wo mama say thodi si argument hui
Kashish: kahiin wohi baat to phir se nahi hui naa?
Shruti: Kashish, ab mein tumhe kya bataao tum to jaanti ho yahi topic mein hameshaa ladayi hoti hai…
Kashish: Chill hameshaa kay liye rona dhona bhull jaao aur kal tumhe mere saath tumhe aana hi hoga
Shruti: par mein …wo
Kashish: kucch nahi mein sunna nahi chaahti bye…
Next I am saying about the 4th character which is Nandini who is a middle class girl who is a radio jockey (R.J) in Radio City she hosts for the show which is "LIFE HO TO AISI" she solves love or any thing else problems which happens in most teens or adults life even she gives some suggestions for them also… But Radio City belongs to Abhay Kapoor… But also Abhay thinks that one day his sons which are Sujal, Sumit and Karan will take the responsibility of the radio… Changing tracks, Nandini soon became the most popular R.J in the radio Nandini is the one and only daughter of Anurag... Anurag is the closest friend of Abhay Kapoor … Anurag's wife has died in a car accident
Nandini and karan are also the closest friends in their childhood but Karan is not in Mumbai but stays and lives in States - London because of his studies sometimes Nandini and karan keep in touch through e-mails
Karan: Karan is in London for his studies when he was at the age of 8 or 9 he was very naughty so he was uncontrollable so he was sent to London in hostels from that day onwards nandini departed from Karan... Whenever they kept in touch nothing came in between them something love kind of thing in their friendship but they always keep on fighting….
The whole gang of college is in the Concert specially Kumkum is very happy!
Sumit apna Show apne gaane say start karta hai
Dil de diya hai jaan tumhe denge daga nahi karenge sanam (2)
Rab di kasam yaara rab di kasam
Rukh zindagi nay mod liya kaisaa
humney sochaa nahi tha kabhi aisaa
Aata nahi yakeen kya say kya hogaya kis tarha mein tumse bewafaa hogaya insaaf kardo mujhe maaf kardo itna hi kardo karam
Dil de diya hai jaan tumhe denge daga nahi karenge sanam…
After the show every fans take Sumit's autograph so kumkum also goes to take one
Kumkum: autograph please…?
Sumit ki nazar hat nahi rahi thi Kumkum say Sumit is qadar uski aankhon mein dekh raha tha kay usney aaj tak aisi ladki nahi dekhi ho…
Sumit: Sumit kehta hai dil mein kay
" ye bholapan ye masti ye pyaar jhalak raha hai sirf meri imagination hai … ya ye sach hai Kashish uski aankon mujhe aisa kya jo mujhe uski taraf kheench raha hai"
Kumkum: Thank you ( kumkum then leaves)
Sumit: aisa lag raha hai kay meri manzil aur zindagi dono mujhse judaa ho rahein hai
(kumkum goes to mandir mannat maangne kay liye jaise hi wo mandir say nikalne lagti hai Sumit wahaa use miljaata hai)
Kumkum: Aap … yahaa
Sumit: kyu main yahaa mandir mein nahi aa sakta?
Kumkum: nahi mera matlab kucch aur tha aap jaisa ek bohot bada pop icon … aur waise bhi ladke mandir bohot kam aate hain…
Sumit: kucch ladke to aate hain naa main unhi main se ek hoon miss….?
Kumkum: Kumkum Gujral
Sumit: kaha padti ho?
Kumkum: poori life history jaanni hai kya?
Sumit: nahi bataana hai to mat bataao…
Kumkum: aisi koi baat nahi mein R.V. college mein padti hoon
Sumit: great! Mere bade bhai bhi wahi padte hain
Kumkum: shayad mein unhe jaanti hoo…
Sumit: unka naam hai Sujal
Kumkum: ohh I know him
Kkusum: Nandini, kaisi ho ? tum yahaa
Nandini: theek hoo aunty. Uncle kahaa hai?
Kusum: wo andar hain
Kkusum apney dil mein kehti hai kay …
Jab dekho baap beti aajaate hain
Aur abhay bhi kucch zyaada hi attach hain
Pata nahi baap beti nay kya jaadoo kiyaa hai
Nandini: Sir may I cum in?
Abhay: yes, sure beta
Nandini: wo kucch confidential papers sign karvaana tha…
Abhay: ohh beta karvaalo
Nandini: yahaa is paper main karna hai… haan yahaaan is papers pay…
(aur suddenly abhay's phone starts ringing and then Abhay picks up the phone
To see his son Karan has called him he smiles when he called Abhay)
Abhay: haan beta tum nahi aaogay… beta mein to tumhara intezaar kar raha tha itney
Dino say… par.. yahaa to sab log… okay … Nandini bhi tumhaare intezaar main hai
Kon Nandini? Wo theek hai keh rahi thi kay bohot din hogaye tumse ladayi kare bagair
Nandini: kya huwaa sir?
Abhay: haan wo karan hain naa use postpone kar liya hai wo aaj nahi kal aa raha hai
Nandini: kya? Wo aaj aaney waala tha?
Nandini apney dil mein kehney lagti hai kay aane do Mr. America ko… dekhte hain kitna badal gaya hai…
Hope u enjoyed it.
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