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Posted: 17 January 2010 at 10:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mina_18secret

hey...
its was really gr8 but toooo short!
pls update a longer one next time!
continue soon! and hope nupur and mayu meet again!
love
mina
 
Hey Mina! Thank u so much for reading! Yep. I know I made it a little short  but I will try my hardest to make the next part longer! And don't worry! Mayank and Nupur will meet very very soon! So plz continue to read and comment! Bye!

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Posted: 17 January 2010 at 10:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by tehzeeb25

gr8 start
thanxx 4 d pm
 
Thx for rea[ding and will Pm u when I continue! Plz keep reading and commenting!

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Posted: 17 January 2010 at 10:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mjhtnupurmayank

Great Concept....
1st Part Was Very Nice..
Continue Soon...
Pls pm....
Waiting For Your Update....
 
Thx so much for liking the SS! I will continue very soon! So plz do read and comment once again! And I will Pm u!

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Posted: 17 January 2010 at 10:18am | IP Logged
when u r going to update yaar?

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Posted: 17 January 2010 at 10:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -afsha-

Hey Great SS

Yup ye Anger ki bimaari pata nahi hamare Hero heroine ko kab chodegi
 
Plz add me to ur pm list
 
Yup, I will add u to my list and will pm u when I continue! Thx so much for reading and commenting!

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Posted: 17 January 2010 at 10:21am | IP Logged
Hi dear,
just found ur ff and read it.
it was very nice.
loved it so much.
Plz try to pm me ur next part.
update soon
take care

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Posted: 17 January 2010 at 11:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Tapoor

when u r going to update yaar?
 
Will update soon!

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Posted: 17 January 2010 at 11:36am | IP Logged
A big big big hi from me to all my friends! Here's the next part updated! do comment and read! Thx a lot!
 
...
 
Nupur Bhushan grabbed her tray and walked over to the closest table where her best friend Sanjana sat, waiting for her.
 
'Kya hua yaar? Subah se dekh rahi hoon! Tu itni pareshaan kyun lag rahi hai?'
 
Nupur fingered her salad that sat in a big blob in the centre of her plate.
 
'Kuch nahi...woh...thoda mood off hai bas.'
 
Sanjana frowned. Nupur? And quiet? Nope! Something was definately wrong.
 
'Mujhe nahi batayegi?'
 
Nupur sighed.
 
'Sanju...maine kaha na? Kuch nahi hua hai mujhe. Tu bata. Tu itni excited kyun lag rahi hai?'
 
Sanjana looked at her, still unconvinced but said,
 
'Actually, baat yeh ahi ke, kal mera bhai london se waapis aaya tha. Aur woh Excell join karne waala hai! Oh Nupur! U have just got to see him! He's the coolest big bro in the world!'
 
Nupur smiled. Hmmm. A new boy in college eh? Sounded interesting!
 
'Woh library me hoga. Chal maiin tujhe usse milwaa deti hooon.'
 
Nupur nodded. Cool! They raced over to the library, both of them talking excitedly. When they reached, Nupur set eyes on the most handsome man. Only...there was one small problem. She couldn't see him properly. His back was facing her.
 
'Bhaiyaa!'
 
Sanjana called.
 
He turned... . Nupur dropped the purse that she'd been holding. Her mouth was wide open in shock. It was the same man that she had bumped into that morning!!
 
He stared right back at her, anger filling his eyes.
 
'Tum!!!???'
 
He asked.
 
Nupur was too surprised to reply. Sanjana noticed the uneasy silence and spoke up,
 
'Kya ho raha hai yahaan? Tum dono ek dusre ko pehle se hi jaante ho kya?'
 
The man nodded.
 
'haan...par kaash me isse nahi jaanta!'
 
'Kya matlab?'
 
 Then, Nupur asked softly.
 
'Sanju...plz tell me ke yeh tumhaara bhai nahi hai.'
 
Sanjana stared at her confused.
 
'Haan! Yeh mera bhai hai!'
 
Then he spoke up.
 
'Sanju...plz tell me ke yeh tumhaari dost nahi hai.'
 
Sanjana was more confused than she had ever been in her life.
 
'Haan! Yeh meri  dost hai!'
 
'Ok guys. Nupur? Yeh mera bhai Mayank hai. Aur Bhai, yeh hai meri sabse acchi dost, Nupur'
 
Nupur groaned.
 
'Sanju! Iss sadoo tumhaara bhai hai!!!?'
 
Mayank placed his hand on his hips.
 
'Excuse me! Kya bulaya mujhe?'
 
Nupur glared at him.
 
'Sadoo. S-a-d-o-o. Maine tumhe Sadoo bulaaya tha. Kya kar loge?'
 
Mayankalmost screamed.
 
'Apne aap ko samajhti kya ho??!! Tumhaari shakal aayne me kabhi dekha hai?! Bilkul bandar lagti ho!'
 
nupur gasped.
 
'Kam se kam tumse tho achchi dikhti hoon!! Tum to kachre ke dabbe ki tarha lag rahe ho!'
 
They would have murdered each other if it weren't for Sanjana.
 
'Ok! Ok! Stop it u guys! baxchpana band karo! Nupu, tum yahaan se challo. Bhai, main tumse baadme milti hoon.'
 
Saying that, they once again left to go their own seperate ways.
 
...
 
End.
 
I'm so so so so sorry guys! my planned update was longer than this! But a sudden emergency came up and I gotta go! Plz forgive me! I'll try to write more later! until then, plz do read and comment on this! Thx! gtg!


Edited by dreamer2305 - 17 January 2010 at 11:41am

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