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Originally posted by mina_18secret

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Will do Mina! When I update, I will be sure to PM u! Thx for reading it!
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Sure, I will be happy to PM u! Thx so much for reading the character sketch! Will update the part very soon!
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Hey nice one plz pm me when u continue.............
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PLS CONTINUE SOON.......

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Of course! will be sure to pm u when I continue! Thx for reading it!
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PLS CONTINUE SOON.......

 
Sure! will continue immediately! Plz do read and comment!
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Posted: 16 January 2010 at 3:04pm | IP Logged
Ok guys! I've updated the next part in 'When Strangers Meet'! Plz do read it and comment! Thx!
 
Chapter 1: Pehli mulaqaat:
 
Nupur Bhusahan plopped down on her bed in frustration. she had been reefing through her closet for the past hour, trying to fish out something half decent to wear. So far, she'd found zilch. She eyed the turquoise mini skirt and white tank top that lay scattered on her bedspread in disgust. Ok. She really had to go shopping this weekend. She slipped into her outfit and groaned when she saw herself in the mirror. Could she look any worse. Nope. This was as bad as anyone could possibly look. She sighed and ran a brush through her dirty brown hair. This was as good as she was going to look today! She grabbed her purse off of her dressing table and picked up her cell. She raced out the door and into the street. She was late for the fifth time in a row.
 
'Aaj tho Shukla maar daalega tujhe'
 
she thought to herself. Suddenly, she bumped into someone hard, causing her cell phone to fly out of her hands and crash onto the ground.
 
'Oh, I'm sorry!'
 
The stranger apologized as he bent down to pick it up.
 
Now, before I continue on any furthur, I should probably inform u that our heroine, Nupur, had one bad habit. Anger. She could never control it! So don't be surprised when I tell u what she did next.
 
'U idiot!'
 
Nupur cried.
 
'Dekhke nahi chal sakte? Andhe ho kya? Mera cell gira diya!'
 
Our hero, on the other hand, also had a major anger problem which resulted in the arugument that followed.
 
'Oye! Miss India! Pehle tumne mujhse takraaya tha, aur ab mujhe hi baatein sunna rahi ho!?'
 
Nupur gasped and placed her hand on her hips.
 
'Bathameez! Ek ladki pe, aur woh bhi mujhe jaise khoobsurat ladki pe, chilaate ho!? Tumhe sharam nahi aati? Aur waise bhi, tum mujhe nahi jaante!'
 
The man sneered.
 
'Thank god ke main tumhe nahi jaanta. Warna tum tho mera jeena haraam kar detI!'
 
He turned to leave but Nupur stopped him.
 
'Oye! Mere phone ke paise diye bina kahaan jaa rahe ho!?'
 
He bit back his lip, trying to clear hi anger. He reached in his pocket and pulled out the cash.
 
'Ye lo. Aur bhagwaan kare ke main tumse dubaara kabhi na miloon!'
 
He was leaving once again when Nupur called behind him.
 
'Mujhe bhi tum jaise sadoo se milne ke liye koi shauk nahi hai!'
 
They both turned and left to go their own ways. But little did they know that fate would have something entirely different in store for them. Something that was beyond their imagination.
 
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That's about it for now guys! Just a small intro to represent the situation! i hope u liked it! If u did, plz press the like button! Thx a bunch!

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